Naruto Fateless (Naruto/Blood Omen crossover)

Fosfor

Well-Known Member
#1
Oh now THIS is... old. Hell, it's damn ANCIENT. I came upon this by sheer accident while getting ready to write the Full Circle sequel. I cleaned it up a little and thought I'd post it. Why, I have no idea. Though Griever might, since it has been, at the time, shamelessly inspired by a certain Blood Omen: Legacy of Kain/Ranma crossover. B) <whistles innocently>.

Anyway, enjoy this little side trip. Or not. Whatever.

Don't worry, it isn't a start of the new fic, not unless I finish my other projects, at least. Though I might write a snippet or two when the mood strikes me. We'll see.

Full Circle: The Wheel of Fire should be out sometime today or, at worst, tomorrow. Though no promisses.

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Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. I don't own Blood Omen games either. Shame, I know.

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Fateless. (since I had NO idea what to name it)

A Naruto/Blood Omen series crossover. (Yes. I know it is not supposed to be crossed.)


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It took nearly a minute to recognize the feeling, the subtle, electric tingle of the small device. No shifting of the plates, not yet anyway.

But he could feel his mental 'hackles' rising already.

Doubtful that the ripple itself had been directed at him since he was not even a pawn. There were far more potent figures on the board to play with.

But with the Old Man you NEVER knew.

He threw a longing, regretfull glance, commiting the ancient hall to memory. He had spent long, interesting hours in this Keep, time filled with knowledge, learning and, most importantly, peace from machinations and paradox.

Propably his most peaceful time since comming to Nosgoth.

The past was perilious, the future dark and each round of the game played on the chessboard called 'fate' only made it darker still. Like a maze that complicated itself on itÆs own.

'Well, maybe not on itÆs own entirely...' The young 'man' scowled darkly.

'Both Kain and Moebius... Swinging carelessly around, uncaring and unheeding of the damages they caused and things they destroyed in their machinations...'

Although he would have taken Kain over the old sorcerer any day.

'To think that a day would come that I would take side of arrogant fiend, a blood drinking monster who personfis all the faults of a haughty aristocrat with close to none of their redeeming qualities over a supposed guardian of the land.' He shook his head. 'Signum temporis.' he though with a rueful chuckle, nearly choking with laughter at the irony of the saying.

'Besides, I should be cautious who did I call a fiend, being who I am.' He growled. The rage, the old, potent rage raised it's head yet again.

The medalion tingled again and he laid his hand on it, seeking so much as to calm the agitated device as to draw the comfort from itÆs presence.

The device had nothing on MoebiusÆ Hourglass or even KainÆs Chronoplast in terms of power... In fact, until he had claimed it, it didnÆt even have a NAME. Comparing to itÆs more powerful 'cousins', it was weak and crude. But at the same time, itÆs crudeness and simplicity gave it uncexpected benefit. The subtelity of stealth.

A benefit that had, apparently, ended as he noticed the chronodiscs starting to shift like mad. Spinning so fast the internal circles, usually the hardest to turn, moved so fast they became a blur.

And since there was no ripple strong enough in his current 'present' to cause such a rapid shift, there was only one explanation.

"Time Ssssstreamerrrrr..." He hissed venomously, releasing the air through clenched teeth

The Old Man knew he was here.

The Chronodiscs of the Shifter were spinning wildly, unheeding of his will. The Eye was blind to the streams of time, providing no convulted path to follow.

There would be no escape from the hourgalss gaze of the old mage this time.

But he still had cards left to play. Even if he wasn't able to kill the mage, he would make sure the esteemed Guardain of the Pillar of Time would curse his memory for a long time to come.

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Reaching his home at leisurly palce took over two hours, but it was time well spent.The old spells were dusted off and checked, new ones commited to memory. Several interesting goodies were brought out from their hiding place. He went so far as to discreetely check his claws for grime.

Since he had his 'snack' in the morning he didnÆt need to feed, which was always a plus. Stalking humans in the middle of a city, expecially in daylight was not exactly his most favourite activity. Feeding on blood creeped him out, even after so many years.

Still there was one human he wouldnÆt mind hunting this afternoon.

As he pushed the door to his abode open, he didnÆt need the mournfull whine of the Chronodisc to tell him of the old mageÆs presence.

The Flay was out of his hand the second the mage shifted his staff.

The spinning magical projectile almost touched the mage before it angled back to the young wraith's hand.

'Repelling spells? Magic Shell? No...' The yellow eyes, already showing hints of the ethereal blue, narrowed.

The Flay made mince meat out of static magical barriers and flesh alike, one of the reasons it was so damn dangerous.

'Something else then.' He decided finally

"You really didnÆt think a vampire weapon could have harmed me, did you, little shadow?" The mage mocked. "There are ways to netralise your wretched powers."

'Ahh. Some sort of a Sarafan relic or spell, most propably. The old man was heavily involved with them in the old days, after all. And with his ability to scour the time stream for what he needs...' The man-wraith smirked, his eyes glimmering with barely restrained power of Ether.

"Just had to try. I have a few other tricks I want to try as well." He said with a false cheerfulness, the smile wide, sunny and more fake than the illusionary arts of his youth.

"Obstinant, to the last." The mage sighed shaking his head. "Why do you persist, little shadow? "

"IÆm just obnoxious this way, old man. Especially when someone ruins my life." He said, all pretense of good cheer gone, the malevolent energy dancing on his fingertips

"So little you know, so little you understand, little shadow." The mage made a lazy gesture with his staff, the energy dying, the glyphs drained of power. "You canÆt harm me. I, on the other hand," His smile grew malicious as the staff lit up. "Can harm you, little fledgling."

The Wraith stood there for a minute, before buffing his nails disinterstedly.

MoebiusÆ eyes bluged in a most comical way.

"Y-you... How?" He sputtered in shock.

"Yes?" The wraith raised an eyebrow in most annoyingly Kainish fasion he could. Calmly he wrestled the staff from mage's hands and dispassionately slammed the balled end to the old head.

"You and Kain." The Shadow spat throwing the anti vampiric artifact away. "Both so sure in your own superiority, so sure of your own damn importance in the 'grand scheme of things'. So above the little pawns you play in your gambits against 'fate'. Well, here is one pawn that doesnÆt appreciate being played." He grabbed the time mage by the throat, lifting him from the ground. "You ruined my LIFE, old man." The self-dubbed wraith growled.

"You tore me from everything I knew, robbed me of life and left me a wraith! Do you know how that feels?! My life might have not been the best, I admit."

His eyes were fully blue now, instead of the vampiric yelow of the undead body he now inhabited. An ironic reflection of the past. The hard earned control unraveled, his body already letting loose the streams of ethereal power.

"My life might have even sucked... But it was MINE! MINE! MY own body, my own blood, my own LIFE! Not this MOCKERY!"

He roared, before calming down abruptly.

"But that I might me able to forgive..." He said with a strange calm. "Casually trying to erase me from the Time Stream and blaming me for that, on the other hand... I wonÆt." He bared his fangs, glaring at the Guardian of Time hatefully.

"Do you know just what I had to endure during my time in the
Underwrold, bastard?" The Wraith squeezeed his claws tighter on the sorcererÆs neck.

"They use two-bits like me for a snack there. My soul, bereft of magic and unnatural to this Plane, was barely worth that much. I had been on the run for YEARS in this damnable limbo. Moving, escaping, plotting... It took a long time to gain some measure of power, enough to either run from or overpower my would-be captors. The things I had to do... The vile, unspeakable things that became so common to me I donÆt even have nightmares anymore... All. Because. Of. YOU." He spat the last few words, ethereal energy lashing all around.

"But you propably donÆt care." He said bitterly. "Asking you to take responsibility for your games for once in your life would be too much, wouldnÆt it? You never did so before, why should you now?"

"Responsibility...? RESPONSIBILITY?!" The mage growled and suddenly an explosion left the wraith on the ground, Moebius towering over him.

"What do you know of the responsibility, little wraith?! I had to watch my fellow guardians MURDERED by the vile creatures like vampires!" He spat.

"Murdered simply because they needeed to become monsters to be worthy in their eyes. I oversaw MILENNIA, I guarded entire ERAS! I sacrificed everything and everyone I held dear on the altar of Time... DonÆt you DARE to preach to me about RESPONSIBILITY fiend!"

He snorted.

"Look at you... A soul sucking wraith... A parasite forced to drain others to survive even without the... courtesy of draining their blood." He sneered." Forced to inhabit corpses to gain even a small resemblance of life... You are an abomination even worse than the vampire body you inhabit!

"I am an abomination that YOU created!" The young man snarled.

"True." Sorcere's eyes hardened. "And I can unmake you just as easily."

"You may try." The wraith bared his fangs at the mage in a mirthless grimace.

"Strike me down now, and all you kill will be a shell. I will just shift to spectral realm, back ot the Underworld. I escaped once, I can do so again. Protected by that paradox of your creation you might be, but I swear to you, you will never know peace!" He hissed. "If it takes rest of that wretched existence, I will find a way to torment you and ruin all your plans in any way possible!"

The mage looked at the wraith, his face expresionless for a minute.

"I believe you just might." he said thoughtfully after a period of silence "You are much like Kain... Or Raziel. Tenacious. But you still have a lot to learn, little wraith."

He smiled thinly and the Wraith could feel the ever-shiftng chronodiscs slow down, to finally stop. The Eye of Time in the center going dim, light fading to nothingness.

His whole body felt strangely numb, as if he shifted to the Wraith form... But he was still corporeal. He tried to grab Moebius again, only for his hand to pass through the mage.

"What have you done now, old man?" The wraith asked suspiciously

The Chronodisc shouldnÆt be able to stop. Ever. As long as it kept him anchored to that era, the wheels turned...

He could feel his eyes widening as the understanding dawned.

"As I said, my little wraith, I saw millenia, I forgot more about time and the nature of Paradox than you will ever learn. I can cause it. I can repair it... And I can dismiss it." The mage smiled mockingly, retrieving his staff. "You have no place here, little wraith. Your very existence is an anomaly. I can not allow that. I might not me able to kill you, wraith of the Underwold that you are, but I can erase the very root of your presence and unmake all of your petty accomplishments. Soon nor I, or anybody else, will even remeber you. The very time will forget you." He turned, walking away before stopping and throwing his opponent the last, mocking look.

"After all..." He laughed. "You were never here to begin with!"

The Wraith howled, feeling the first slips of the streams that held him anchored to Nosgoth fade.

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Ba-bum.
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Ba-bum.
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"Reputed to have been torn from the chest of the gretest vampire that ever existed..."
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Ba-BUM.
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"...Janos Audron..."
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Ba-BUM.
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"...The Heart of Darkness restores vampiric unlife..."
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Ba-BUM. BA-BUM.
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"Life is precious, Janos discovered..."
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BA-BUM. BA-BUM!
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"As it was torn, throbbing and bleeding, from his own body."
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BABUMBABUMBABUM!
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And through the veil of unexistance shrouded over his very being, aided by the
very lifeblood of last, true ancient vampire, first guardian of the Soul Reaver, a weapon that defied fate, he screamed.

And the Void screamed with him, shattering into pieces.


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The air burned, filling his weak lungs and throat sore from the howl. And it never felt sweeter to him.

He lived.

Or, more accurately, he survived.

Again.

And it was all thanks to Moebius. And little aid from Heart of Darkness.

He almost choked, laughing hysterically.

'I wonder how would the old mage feel knowing that I used his very energy to feed the lifeblood I had drawn from the Heart in my vampiric guise with enough power to survive my 'erasure'?' He thought, laughing like a madman.

'Using his temporal magics as a battery for one of the most potent vampiric artifacts in existence...' The young man smirked, before laughing again.

'Now THAT is an irony!'

Chuckling, he instinctively concentrated on the Path of Blood û a little vampiric trick he jad learned after aquiring the Heart, trying to 'boil blood' to heal the weakness that he felt, only to feel nothing.

'Oh. Right.' He alost felt like slapping himself. 'Time Stream erasure.'

Everything was gone, back to itÆs original place in NosgothÆs time stream.

Even the energy patterns burned into his mind as he learned to manipulate NosgothÆs magics were blank, bereft of energy. Only the minor ones, those requiring his own power instead of drawing on NosgothÆs arcane aura remained.

He would miss his small collection, especially the Chronodisc and the Flay.

And not having the necromantic engine like the Heart of Darkness in his chest anymore was a sour lemon to swallow, even if it meant his survival.

'Speaking of chests...' He frowned.

He stubbornly overcame the weakness, rising hand to check his body, only to freeze.

The hand was... small. As in very.

And it wasnÆt the size, but the general feel, a slightly chubby, smooth look that could only belong to a small child.

And it was... famliar.

His eyes widened.

Slowly, his palms shaking, he touched his cheeks.

His unsteady fingers traced the gouge-like lines that had accompanied him long, long time ago. Long before the world went crazy and dark.

Back when things still made some sense.

There were six of them, three each on his cheeks.

Numbly, he looked around. There was a prevalent presence of white. The bed, the walls... Even the small chair next to his bed.

'My?' He thought dazedly. 'No... I'm sure I never...' He stopped. 'No. One thing at a time. Like with the Sarafan. Slow and steady.' His cerulean eyes focused, searching the room with renewed sense of purpose.

'No, no, no... Not this either.' His eyes swept over the window and his legs itched to get out of bed and check with his own eyes but... 'Calm. Focus. Priorities, remember?' He smiled thinly as he spied a small, shiny bowl. He took it from the nightstand next to his bed. It was metal. Poor quality, but polished more than enough.

Forcing his hands to hold it steady he looked into it... And almost forgot how to breathe.

The air came out with long hiss a long moment later.

Large ceruelean orbs, fair, but not deathly pale skin, six whisker-like marks and hair that could put the sun to shame.

'I'm... me. I'm ME again...!' He thought, his eyes widening.

He sucked in the air greedily, feeling it burn and caress at the same time.

He didn't need to touch his chest ot know that his heart beat and pumped blood. HIS OWN blood.

The face looking at him was slightly deformed because of the poor quality of the bowl, but it had shown him enough.

He looked at his face in wonder.

Judging by the body and the face, he was six, seven years old at most.

And he would BET he was seven. He could feel it in his guts. HIS guts.

He took in the scent of air, almost gleefuly remarking just how weaker, but how REAL his senses felt without resorting to using the undead walking corpse.

He put the bowl away and threw the covers off. He got out of bed, unheeding of the early autumn chill in the air.

With purpose and determination, he stalked to the bed, only to stop mid-way.

"Ah... Right." He muttered sheepishly. He stalked back, grabbing a chair.

He didn't know if to scowl or laugh gleefuly as he felt it's weight.

He dragged the cahir tot he window and climbed on it. There were blinders on, but he could see the light seeping through the cracks.

The lock on the window was simple. Not that it would stop him, really. If he couldn't open it, he would smash it.

The glare of the sun almost blinded him, but he didn't care.

Greedily, he took in the familiar, yet unfamilar sight of cramped village, buildings seemingly growing on their own haphazardly.

His sight, despite the years away from the image, unerringly drew itself to the sandy mountain side and the large visages looking over the village with their stony, yet kind, eyes.

He threw his head back, laughing wildly.

'Meobius, you FOOL!' He almost choked in his mad cackle. 'You sought to destroy me... And you only helped me to accomplish what I couldn't do for YEARS!'

He was home.

Uzumaki Naruto was finally home.


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Comments?
 

kuopiofi

Well-Known Member
#2
My oh my...
Interesting. :sisi:
 

trevelyan1983

Well-Known Member
#3
Oro...

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...a Naruto/LoK crossover? That's positively twisted. I loved every second of it! ^_^

Yeah, it showed that it wasn't written quite as recently as some of your Naruto fics, but it was still of a high enough standard that I'd be quite prepared to read it anyway. (And it's still better than 95% of the sewage on FF.net!)

I wonder how Kyuubi will react to his Host now possessing the ability to perform minor LoK magic? (Presuming Kyuubi wasn't flayed from existence by Moebius' meddling, of course.)

What kind of minor magic are we talking about? Telekinesis? Mist? (Now that I think about it, a lot of the LoK abilities can be replicated by Ninja.) Presumably he'd be pretty decent with a sword, or now capable of shredding Chunin into strips with chakra-enhanced nails. (Kyuubi-Naruto is going to be insanely lethal with those things!)

Kain is a badass who makes Itachi look like a toddler throwing a tantrum, so Naruto delivering lines with even a fraction of his dark, sarcastic wit, is something I must beg for Moar of, Fosfor.
 

Mighty Bob

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#4
Blood Omen/LoK Cross with Naruto? Damn this is another work of yours that I must have more of, even if I know it'll be a long wait.

Not 100% certain from the story itself, but was Naruto torn from his own world/timeline and thrust into Nosgoth as part of some plot on Mobeiuss part, or are the events of that world just set in a very distant future/different area of the world?

Damn interested in seeing reactions to a Naruto that's bound to be worlds apart from who he was at age 7, both in personality and ability. And will elements of BO/LoK still rear their heads?
 

SoulGriever13

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#5
cleaned it up a little and thought I'd post it. Why, I have no idea. Though Griever might, since it has been, at the time, shamelessly inspired by a certain Blood Omen: Legacy of Kain/Ranma crossover.
Heh, makes me feel downright nostalgic, dontchaknow? Despite making me go 'ooops' when I realize just how long 'Crimson' has been on hiatus. -_-

Props for use of narrative and LoK - there's not enough stuff out there that makes use of that setting, which is a pity. Hell, you managed to 'write' the best part of the LoK series into that bit of text - I could almost hear the voice acting.

For magic, I'm assuming you're using the system from the first Soul Reaver combined with the Blood Omen one - for those who haven't played LoK:BO, that game had actual spells and mana, and both them and Soul Reaver's omnidirectional elemental abilities were something I've dearly missed in the later installments.

Plus, the assortment of nastynastyNASTY items you could use in the first Blood Omen ... pity they didn't have any of those in the later games, they rocked. Especially with the descriptive monologues Kain had on each and every one of them. Hehehe.

Good stuff, man. Good stuff.

-Griever
 
#6
Sweet sweet stuff here.

Though it pains me to say it I won't ask for more I know you'll work on it when/if you feel like it.
 

trevelyan1983

Well-Known Member
#7
BO:LoK had a fantastic, truly imaginative roster of magic and items. SR managed to mess with that by introducing Reaver-Magic and then took the idiocy a step further by introducing elemental affinity and imbuing at the Forges. :no:

[Hey that sounds strangely familiar...] :huh:

Although, Naruto screwing with the Oto-nin team by blasting them with the Sound spell could be...interesting... :snigger:
 

Fosfor

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#8
trevelyan1983 said:
What kind of minor magic are we talking about?? Telekinesis?? Mist? (Now that I think about it, a lot of the LoK abilities can be replicated by Ninja.)? Presumably he'd be pretty decent with a sword, or now capable of shredding Chunin into strips with chakra-enhanced nails.? (Kyuubi-Naruto is going to be insanely lethal with those things!)

Kain is a badass who makes Itachi look like a toddler throwing a tantrum, so Naruto delivering lines with even a fraction of his dark, sarcastic wit, is something I must beg for Moar of, Fosfor.
Naruto retains several minor things. Empathy, very minor telepathic abilities (only able tosend and recieve, not read minds, and only to sufficently 'open' minds) eye hypnotism trick (which is akin to a mild genjutsu or the sharingan thing) He can use his blood as a weapon (heh heh, Blood Gout). Summoning mist will come naturally to him now, he won't be needing any seals for the Kirigakure no Jutsu. General sensory skills are, quite simply through the roof, both mundane and more esoteric ones. His senses are duller than the vampire form, but he had become so used to them he will start using Kyuubi's without knowing it soon enough.

And once he identifies chakra, he will be able to feel any source of chakra in the vicinity - no matter if somebody is trying to hide it or not. He has an insane pain treshold, any Seal arts will come naturally to him after years of working with magical arrays and the Blood Script. He has a long experience in using variety of weapons, from halberds to swords, as well as making them in a pinch. He will learn even most advanced genjutsu almost unnaturally fast (long time of using illusions to hide his nature - vampiric or otherwise).

He can't change forms, turn to smoke or mist or do telekinesis - but he can manipulate shadows to a degree. It was his own 'trick' he had aquired when he inhabited the vampiric body.

As for non-combat skills, he had gottern stealthier, smarter and helluva lot more careful. He had to lest Kain or Moebius or any number of outrageously poweful threats like Malek squish him flat. He knows the value of a deception, though his character still remains the same. If twisted a little. Well, okay. More than a little.

This Naruto is a bit dark, kind of a 'cheerful-Kain'. He is sarcastic, has dark, morbid sense of humor but he isn't Kain's carbon copy. But he had done some really vile things to survive and stopped feeling most of the guilt a long time ago. He is not as amoral as Orochimaru - he has his own code of honor that he follows.

Most of the time, anyway.

If the Snake sannin and this Naruto met on netutral temrs, the two would have a fascinating and quite friendly chat. Problem is, Naruto is a rebel - he HATES the concept of 'fate', orders and people thikning themselves his betters. He's had enough of that from Kain and Moebius. He is his own man and will do as he please, consequences be damned.

And anybody mentioning 'unchangability of fate' around him is going to get shredded with Naruto's bare hands inch at a time.

Point is, Naruto isn't a nice guy here. If he had been, he would have died long ago. He has blood of hundreds on his hands, for one reasons or another. And he really doesn't give a damn.

He will have a hard time adapting, especially once he starts going to the Academy. When he fights, he fights to kill. Mission to Wave is going to be... different, to say the least.

On the other hand he is pretty mellow now. Happy as if stoned. He has his own body, his life and he is alive. He lost most of his magic, yeah. But, hello? What do we have here? Jutsu? How splendind!

And you can bet he will try to re-create the Flay, the useful little thing that it is.

Bottom line is, for him it is like vacation. No insane sorcerers after his head, no Vampire Lords harrasing him, no Sarafan hunting him, no Soul Reaver tryinhg to 'eat' his soul... Damn, holiday! So people hate him. Big deal. Let them hate. He is better than them. He knows this. (Yes, modest he ain't). THey are idiots anyway. Besides, he gets a happy glow every time he plots 'little' revenge (like calling insects (one of the leftover powers from his vampiric guise) to inhabit a restaurant that turned him away....


And damn but I want to write it...

Eh...

Priorities, damn it!
 

Fosfor

Well-Known Member
#9
SoulGriever13 said:
cleaned it up a little and thought I'd post it. Why, I have no idea. Though Griever might, since it has been, at the time, shamelessly inspired by a certain Blood Omen: Legacy of Kain/Ranma crossover.
Heh, makes me feel downright nostalgic, dontchaknow? Despite making me go 'ooops' when I realize just how long 'Crimson' has been on hiatus. -_-
Heh. Then I'm happy you like it. And crimson... man, that was GOOD stuff. I'm getting all nostalgic just remembering it... Ehhh... Nice read, that was.
 

Mighty Bob

Well-Known Member
#10
Going by what you said, Naruto's introduction to Nosgoth and the goings on of Kain and Mobeius seems to have happened before Naruto became a genin or went very far through the Academy. Exactly why/how was Naruto embroiled into that mess? Or used even, since it sounds like both Kain and Mobeius used Naruto for their plots at some point or another.

And while I wanna demand more I'll just wait, not like everything else you write isn't worth reading. Suppose I can go replay the LoK games (none of the Blood Omen though, lost them ages ago) or go read this 'Crimson'...is it posted anywhere?
 

Eternity

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#11
This is nice ^^

and Damn, but this Naruto is going to tear a bloody stripe out of Neji when the first meet
Heh, can't wait to see more *much like Crimson (Eyes Griever)*
 

knight_of_ni

Well-Known Member
#12
Now this is a good anti-hero story; the character that is only out for his own ends, and in a twisted way finally found it, although, now he will have to "thank" Mobieus and Kain for their interference.

I have a theory about how Naruto survived, and it is basically this, the Kyuubi was sealed inside of him through a pact with the death god, so unless Mobieus destroyed the Kyuubi and the death god from the time stream, Naruto would still exist.
 

RGFJ

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#14
off topic, but areyou ever going to start back up on crimson SoulGriever13?
 

trevelyan1983

Well-Known Member
#15
Mission to Wave is going to be... different, to say the least.
I just had the (most amusing) image of a pack of Kage Bunshin shouldering Zabuza onto the Great Naruto Bridge, before the Lead!Naruto waves an arm negligently. Several clones stand off to the side, humming Ozar Midrashim.

"Cast him in!"

:rofl:

Damn, but the more you describe it, the more I want to see it, too - despite that also being the case for all of your other fics! :blue:

Well, whatever you write, I'll read it and enjoy it, so go with what flows. ^_^
 

Fosfor

Well-Known Member
#16
trevelyan1983 said:
Mission to Wave is going to be... different, to say the least.
I just had the (most amusing) image of a pack of Kage Bunshin shouldering Zabuza onto the Great Naruto Bridge, before the Lead!Naruto waves an arm negligently. Several clones stand off to the side, humming Ozar Midrashim.

"Cast him in!"

:rofl:

Damn, but the more you describe it, the more I want to see it, too - despite that also being the case for all of your other fics! :blue:

Well, whatever you write, I'll read it and enjoy it, so go with what flows. ^_^
Rejoyce. I hit a small snag with Burnout and the sequel to the Ful Circle can wait. That and Griever was kind enough to... inspire some of my creative processes.

I'm in the process of writing several snippets of this very fic right now. Damn, but I'm weak willed... THis was supposed to be a whim... Eh...

:sweat2:
 

trevelyan1983

Well-Known Member
#17
I do indeed rejoice! Woot! :mmm:

And, to quote myself from some years ago; "they finally cracked my iron resolve. Of course, by 'iron' I really mean 'flimsier than a paper bag'. But you get my point."

Heh. Also, giving Naruto his own Dark Gift is something that I like a lot - all of Kain's sons got their own, after all. B)
 

kuopiofi

Well-Known Member
#18
I think I'm going schizophrenic...
on the one hand:
more this :yay: :yay: :cumdrool: :wub: (anti-hero Naruto is always cool) tho' I'd get the same reaction for every fic from you.
on the other:
all those other fics I want to see more of aren't getting any more done. :help: :help: :headbanger: :blue: :no: :headbanger: :headbanger: :rant:
Eh, what ever. Do what ever you want or feel like doing. I'll read it. :angel:
 

Fosfor

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#19
kuopiofi said:
I think I'm going schizophrenic...
on the one hand:
more this :yay: :yay: :cumdrool: :wub: (anti-hero Naruto is always cool) tho' I'd get the same reaction for every fic from you.
on the other:
all those other fics I want to see more of aren't getting any more done. :help: :help: :headbanger: :blue: :no: :headbanger: :headbanger: :rant:
Eh, what ever. Do what ever you want or feel like doing. I'll read it. :angel:
It's just a brief diversion. And I write quite fast anyway.
 

Fosfor

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#20
Another small snippet. I'd write more but I'm too tired now. Enjoy and tell me what you think.


*

He flexed his palm slowly.

The lack of a slight, nearly unnoticeable numbness he was used to should be unsettling, only it wasn't.

'Well, it's only natural. It is my own body, after all.'

He frowned.

'Though something does feel... odd.' He stretched his body, feeling each and every muscle, famliarising himself with it's workings. It wasn't anything physical... Not overtly, anyway. But something still felt odd. It took a hefty dose of his well practiced self restraint not to use some of the more... esoteric methods. But he decided not to. Home he might have been, but the need for privacy and the slight paranoia were almost second nature by now.

'Slight?' He quirked a smile. 'Well, it's not paranoia if they ARE out to get you.'

Which wasn't exactly true. About the only person out for his head was Moebius. At first, anyway.

'And the Sarafan. Damn those zealots!' He winced. 'Though the Soul Reaver...' He shuddered. That sword was a damn menace. And as much as he liked Raziel as a person, his... diet was too close to cannibalism for Naruto's tastes.

His hand went to his side instinctevely, only to grasp nothing.

He cursed.

He had carried the Thorn for so damn long he had forgotten where he had found it. Loss of the ancient vampiric artifact was as annoying as the loss of the Heart of Darkness. The sword wasn't very powerful, not like th Soul Reaver... Though there was nothing quite like that accursed thing.

Person.

'Whatever.' He grimaced. 'Temporal paradoxes. Feh.'

So, no Thorn. No Heart of Darkness. No Path of Blood to heal injuries faster either. And his spells felt dead. As if they weren't even there. Even the telekinesis didn't seem to work, no that he had been that good with it in the first place.

'On the other hand, no Sarafan. No Raziel, meaning no Soul Reaver.' He perked up, a blissful smile appearing on his face. 'No Kain... And best of all... NO. MOEBIUS.' He sighed happily. 'And that's the next best thing to carving him up with a Flay one inch at a time!'

So he was back to seven (or so), weak and nearly powerless. But he was home, alive, and Meobious, Kain and the rest of the outrageously powerful egomaniacs were out of the picture for good.

Naruto chuckled, mentally toasting the Time Mage.

'Fare thee the worst, you asshole! And choke on your damn staff while you're at it, or something. Though Kain gutting you with the Soul Reaver wouldn't be bad. Kind of poetic justice, I suppose.' He smirked. 'Hell, who CARES? Not my problem anymore.'

His smirk evolved into a full blown smile.

'Shame I don't have that Bloodwine anymore. It would be JUST the occasion to break that bottle open.' He sighed longingly. 'Well, I'll get myself a drink as fast as I can, I guess.'

He clenched his palm into a fist, enjoying the small discmofort as he pressed the fingers tighter.

Vampiric bodies felt pain, but it was just pain. There was no life in it.

He was still absorbed in the sensation when the doors opened.

The nurse, an average, brown haired woman in her late thirties looked at him dourly.

"So. You're awake." She said, her mouth tightening. "Then you don't need to be here anymore. Get up and go."

Naruto's eyebrow rose.

He was in a hospital, he deduced that rather quickly. But even in the poorest parts of Nosgoth one didn't discharge the patient without at least asking how he was feeling.

Still, it wasn't like he wanted to remain in this place.

There was one problem though.

"I would like to, but I seem to lack the proper clothes." He said to the woman.

The nurse glared at him.

"Your things are in the drawer to your left. Now pick it up and go. This isn't a hotel, brat." She snapped, her lips drawn in a thin line. "I don't want to see you in ten minutes. We have other patients waiting." She turned on the heel, walking away.

The blond cocked his head to the side.

'I'm having a distinct feeling I'm not liked... or wanted. Indeed, I think she would love to get rid of me.' He smiled. 'How nostalgic. I'm already feeling at home here.'


*

Naruto frowned.

The... clothes were his. A little bit fatigued, but they fit him well. Though they were creased and unwashed. Somebody obviously just threw them in the drawer haphazardly. Though that was a minor concern.

They were orange. Loud, eye blinding orange.

Naruto's eyebrow twitched.

While he had no dislike for the color itself, his years of hiding, of straining to remain unnoticed had taken their toll. All of his well honed instincts and carefuly bred paranoia started screaming bloody murder the moment he had put the enesemble on.

'Note to myself. No orange clothes in the future.' Naruto thought darkly. His hand went to his belt as he passed another darkly garbed man in a green vest. 'Minor note. Buy myself a weapon.'

He let himself relax as the man passed him, barely paying him any attention.

He sighed.

There were, it seemed, disadvantages to having a body. Involuntary tensing was one of them apparently.

'Ah, whatever.' He thought dismissing the issue for the emoment. 'Now, for a matter of more importance.' He frowned, looking at the street. 'Where was my home?'


*

He had not forgotten.

Much, anyway.

He clinged to the memories of home tightly. It was one of the few things that got him through the surreal horror of the Spectral Realm.

But he was alive for a long time. Or rather he existed for a long time. He had nothing on Kain and the less said about Moebius the better. But for a human, he was very old.

Even the most precious, the most treasured memories become bleak and fade with time. And his childhood had precious little of those. His will was strong, but not that strong.

He remembered places and names, but sometimes he had trouble associating the face with the name. And some things looked different than he rememberd.

'Though that might be my own perspective as much as my faulty memory.' He smiled wryly, entering his apartament.

It took a better part of the day for him to find it and he would propably fail to do so until now if not for that helpful girl.

'Ayame. From... Ichiraku...?' He frowned. 'Why is that name so... Ah, the ramen place.' He smiled. He might have been on the... liquid diet for a long time, but one never forgot the taste of ramen.

His stomach growled.

'Which reminds me. Food.' He cocked his head. "Now that is... going to take time getting used to again." He muttered.

But anything was better than sucking the life's blood out of people to survive.

Or ripping the life force from their bodies.

Not that he felt guilt for what he had done.

'Well, not that much, anyway.' He admitted.

Still, he had done what he had to to survive. Nothing more, nothing less.

Morality and pretty words quickly lost their shine when one's soul was on the line, he had learned that lesson quickly.

It was one of the first lessons he had learned in the Spectral Realm. No matter how wretched it might be, life is worth living. He wanted to live.

It was that determination, coupled with his innate stubborness, that allowed him to escape and avoid ending as the food for one of the spectral predators.

His stomach growled again.

'Speaking of predators...' He thought with a smirk, before opening the small packet the kindly ramen girl gave him to cheer him up.

He didn't remember much of Ichiraku save the taste of their ramen, but Ayame, he decided, was worth her weight in gold.

Ravenous, he dug into his ramen.


*

The Glyphs, despite being some of the more versatile spell-like powers he managed to scrounge in his time in Spectral Realm, were a dissapointment. Cast on their own, they didn't even try to work, no matter the power he tried to use.

'Not that I have much of it.' He snorted mentally.

His telekinetic abilities were completely gone, not that they were very prominent in the first place.

The spells...

He scowled.

That the High Arts, the spells drawing on Nosgoth's innate arcane aura, didn't work was understandable. That he had lost the abilites of his vampiric shell was a given.

But why would the Minor Arts fail?

He growled.

He had spent a lot of time and effort learning the theories and collecting spells. That major part of his arsenal was useless was... rather annoying. And considering he lost all of his tools and weapons...

He gritted his teeth, forcing the anger under the reins of his will.

Throwing a tantrum would be pointless.

And it wasn't like he had exhausted all of the options avaliable.

'Speaking of which...'

He sat down comfortably, taking one of the empty sheets of paper he had found around the flat in hand.

He looked at the blank space thoughtfully, before taking a small knife and making a small incision on his finger.

Using the blood as ink, he started to draw elegant forms of Blood Script.

The ancient vampiric runes didn't have any innate power on their own, but as Janos told him so long ago, blood was power. And the runes formed a natural spell array for vampires. Being as outrageously powerful as he was, Kain never really bothered to explore the sublter magics.

Naruto, on the other hand, had learned everything and anything that might have given him even a hint of an edge.

Carefullly, he drew the final mark.

He put away the brush, frowning.

'All right. Now what? Should I...' He jumped back as the paper started to melt and twist, the runes seemingly melding, until no shred of white was left, leaving a twisting, crimson mass.

He watched on, careful but cruious, as the mass collpased on itslef, before suddenly expanding with a thriumphal screech.

He cocked an eyebrow.

'Hmm... Now this is unexpected.' He thought, looking at the large, dark red bird of prey. "Weren't you supposed to be a farsight spell?" Naruto said out loud.

The large bird schreeched again and suddenly Naruto had a unique sensation of being in two places at once. Both standing by the table and looking at himself from the height of said table.

He fought off the sudden feeling of vertigo. It was almost familiar, in a way. He felt exactly the same each time he had to change into a flock of bats.

Which was why he had never done it that much.

But unlike the transformation, the feeling of vertigo passed quickly. Though looking at himself was still odd.

He smiled.

'Farsight indeed. This might be useful. Buit how do I..?'

There was another feeling of vertigo and suddenly he had only one perspective. He blinked, before looking at the bird, only to see the Blood Script covered sheet of paper.

'Telepathic control?' He thought with amazement.'Now why did I never try that spell before?' He halted suddenly, before frowning.'And just WHY does the Blood Script work for me when I'm human? And if it does...'

He turned around until he saw a shadowed corner.

'Perfect. Now...' He walked to the edge, until his shadow merged with the darkness partially. He concentrated, extending his arm over the shade.

'Slowly... Slowly.... Like the first time.' He thought, forcing himself to relax. His Dark Gift never worked well when he forced it. 'Don't think... FEEL. Don't force, don't push...'

For a long moment, nothing happened, but then, he felt first touch of slight chill as his fingers seemed to submerge into the shadow as if going into a cold tar pit.

Moment later, his whole hand was in.

He took a breath, turning his head to the nearest chair, partially covered by the afternoon shade.

'Now...' He moved his hand into the shadow only to smile at the familiar feeling of the dark matter... twisting, for the lack of better word. The chair slowly sank into the shadow, to vanish almost completely.

Slowly, he squeezed his palm shut.

'Come on... Come on... Just a little bit more...'

He could almost feel it, the rough wood almost touching his fingertips, the chair almost THERE in his grasp.

He cursed, the litany of the foulest Blood Script and High Ancient rolling from his tongue when the shadow snapped back, leaving his hand visible again.

He looked at the chair, now again in the very same position, as if it never moved. And on some level, it never DID.

'No walks though the shadow any time soon.' He scowled. 'At least I can manipulate it for cover. The Cloak of Shadows is useful enough on it's own I suppose.'

It was his very own Dark Gift, the ability to manipulate shadows. While not as overt or powerful as some, it was tremendously versatile. The Cloak of Shadows hid him both from prying eyes of his enemies as well as from the divination of their spells. Even Sarafan's anti-vampire magics couldn't find him. Though Moebius or Kain somehow didn't seem to have that problem.

But the shadows could do more than just hide him. Hide, beffudle, inspire terror... And even manipulate the material world in some cases. Of course, he was powerless in full daylight or darkness. He needeed a shadow to work with - a price to pay for the power. There always was one, after all.

'Question is, just WHY does it work?' He scratched his chin thoughtully. 'The Dark Gifts are vampiric powers... Granted, mine is severly weakened now, but why does it work at all? By all rights it shouldn't. Strange... Just like the Blood Script. Another mystery.' He shook his head with dismay. 'There will be time for that later. Now I have another mystery to solve.'

He laid himself on the floor, closing his eyes.

He concentrated his thoughts, focusing his will and intent in a familiar way.

'I wonder if it will...'


*

"...work?"

He blinked.

It was dark, humid and almost disgustingly famliar.

"Sewer... Now why does it HAVE to be a sewer?" He said out loud with distaste.

He had enough of them after the time he traveled to the Second Rise of the Sarafan.

"I truly detest those places." He sneered, looking at the mess of pipes, drippig water and the dark walls.

He blinked.

"How... odd."

His voice was lower and calmer. Definetely not the high pitch of his body. But it was familiar...

He raised his hand only to smirk.

True to form it was covered in pale skin, short but sharp claws adorning each finger.

"Body of a human, self image of a vampire... Last time it was the other way around. Subconsciousnes is truly the most twisted of places." He chuckled.

He looked at the claws thoughtfully.

'Obviously, since the mental trick worked, and this is my mind, I wonder...'

The bright ball rose from his palm to hoover over is head.

'A paltry trick, but a useful one.' He smiled with satisfaction. 'At least here.'

He turned his attention away from the fake spell.

'Now, let's see...'

He stretched his senses beyond himself.

He wasn't the most powerful of sorcerers, but he had seen much and had learned plenty.

What he had found, though, baffled even him.

Frowning, he turned into a flock of bats, flying to the source of his surprise.

While one might think he was the lord and master of his mind, and could simply will himself where he wanted to 'be'. It was not so. Often times, mind could be the deadliest of traps, as he had found himself with a little bit of 'help' from the Nupraptor the Mentalist.

It was better to stick to things one was sure of than experiment. Self image, familiarity and practice were the best weapons here, right next to raw willpower.

'Well, maybe not too much familiarity.' Naruto winced, feeling the veritgo as he reformed. Still, he ignored it, looking at the large gate.

"Now what are you supposed to be...?" He cocked his head, noticing a large paper strip covered with a strange mark.

He exteneded his senses and almost recoiled at the sheer ammount of power he felt there.

'What in Audron's name?!'

This wasn't some minor dabbling, or even a major spell. This was Power. Major Power.

He had no idea what was it's purpose, but he knew one thing: whatever it was, it wasn't done by a human. Or a vampire.

'Or any being I know of, to be honest.' He frowned. 'And it doesn't bear even a shred of familiarity to any nosgothian Art. That means it had been done HERE. But why? What purpose would something like that serve inside a child?'

He narrowed his eyes.

Whatever it was, he really didn't like the implications.

Slowly, cautiously, he exteneded his senses beyond the gate, only to grab his head in pain.

There was something there, all right. Something old, far older than him. And far more powerful than him as well. It was old, mighty, malevolent and...

He blinked.

'...dead?'

He stood still for a moment, debating with himself before drawing a famliar sheet of paper from his belt.

It didn't matter that it was new. It was his creation, therefore he could use it as he willed.

He waited until the paper once again took on the form of the bird.

"Go. Look for the source." He ordered.

The animal took out without a sound, easily fitting in between the bars.
To avoid the confusion, he closed his eyes, lowering his head.

Soon enough, he could see through the eyes of the bird clearly.

What he saw surprised him, to say the least.

'And just why would anybody put a nine tailed fox that stinks of the spirit realm inside me?' He thought puzzled. 'More importantly why would anyone put a dead nine tailed fox inside me?'


*

Comments?
 

SoulGriever13

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#21
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

... looks like Naruto's soul had a little snack when he wasn't looking.

Groovy, man.

Can't help but look forward to more.

-Griever
 

trevelyan1983

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#23
Hm. Presumably his powers are offset by the loss of Kyuubi's chakra - unless his knowledge of Wraiths and the Spectral Realm gives him some kind of cheat sheet to play with Kyuubi's power - a Chakra version of the Path of Blood, perhaps, or a Kyuubified magical array.

Whatever. This was good stuff - although I suspect that the Nara clan are gonna be pissed when they find him with some kind of equivalent to their Hijutsu. All the more fun for us, as far as I'm concerned. :lol:
 

Fosfor

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#24
SoulGriever13 said:
:rofl:? :rofl:? :rofl:

... looks like Naruto's soul had a little snack when he wasn't looking.
Something like that, yeah. I truly and deeply pity some people that would try a genjutsu like Tsukuyomi or the Shintenshin on him. Naruto wasn't a powerhouse like Kain or Raziel, but he could hold his own and duke it out with the best of them. If somebody tries to break into his head... Pity the fool. B)
 

Fosfor

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#25
trevelyan1983 said:
Hm.? Presumably his powers are offset by the loss of Kyuubi's chakra - unless his knowledge of Wraiths and the Spectral Realm gives him some kind of cheat sheet to play with Kyuubi's power - a Chakra version of the Path of Blood, perhaps, or a Kyuubified magical array.?

Whatever.? This was good stuff - although I suspect that the Nara clan are gonna be pissed when they find him with some kind of equivalent to their Hijutsu.? All the more fun for us, as far as I'm concerned.? :lol:
He can't manipulate Kyuubi's chakra. It is there, but if he used it, it would fry hm. If he COULD - he can't. The seal won't let him. But he was a soul sucking wraith for quite a bit of time even if he inhabited vampiric shell he had took over. Take it as you will. B) But yeah, he will be forced to rely on his own abilities.

And the Nara hijutsu... heh. Naruto can't manipulate his dakr gift for now, because it is back to it's 'infancy'. It will regain it's potency slowly, over time. And Naruto can do things with the shadows Nara can only dream of.
 
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