ll Met by Starlight parts 1-10 by Susan Doenime and Mike Loader
Am I supposed to be cheering for the villain? Because, hesitantly, guiltily, I am. This curious allegiance likely arises from my own perversity, but I prefer to blame Doenime's and Loader's art. For the authors have crafted a Ranma who clearly has much evil in his soul. But he is sufficiently conflicted to inspire some sympathy, and more importantly, he is so consistently fascinating that I will miss him greatly after his final defeat, if there is one. Weak moments in Ranma's characterization are rare. In fact, despite its extravagantly suspenseful story and its wealth of gee-whiz alternate reality features, IMBS succeeds most notably as a character drama starring the redefined Ranma, Akane, Nabiki, Shampoo, and Ukyou. Supporting characters such as Kunou, the Hibikis, and Kasumi are richly textured, but definitely overshadowed by the five principals.
The "charming psychopath" in motion pictures, for me, has become tiresome; too many derivatives of Nicholson's Joker or Hopkins' Hannibal Lechter crowd the screens. Yet until IMBS, this stock character was not well exploited in Ranma fanfic. Doenime and Loader have given the devil more than his due with their remake of Saotome Ranma. Their deliciously wicked protagonist entertains me with the spirit, if not the intent, of dark humor. His flippant assault on Nabiki, his phenomenal ability to conceive the only threat that could intimidate Tsen Wu, his constructive ruthlessness in training Akane, his startling intrusion into the electronic chat session: such moments endear IMBS's Ranma to my own dark side.
Moreover, many of the things that make Ranma a most effective enemy mark him as much more interesting than the manga Saotome Ranma. Along with his honor and scruples, the IMBS authors excised from Takahashi's Ranma many of his more annoying shortcomings, replacing them with the strengths required for a most worthwhile villain. Forceful decisiveness displaces waffling ambivalence. A crafty economy with words supplants thoughtless bombast. And even though all his heartfelt disclosures may turn out to be deceptions, this Ranma's emotional candor far exceeds the original's. Evil shouldn't look this good.
I probably won't stop loving evil Ranma until Akane does. Preferring to believe that IMBS's Akane is not as deluded as she seems, I trust her judgment that something in Ranma is worth defending. Perhaps we're both wrong; perhaps Akane suffers some kind of 1990's codependency disorder. But in this milieu of killers and would-be killers, Akane gives us someone innocent to root for. While Ranma may not deserve Akane's affections, her attempts to cultivate a relationship with him warm the heart, even amid the chilling surroundings of IMBS. Always-impending violence and treachery fade away during the well-scripted tease scenes in which romantic progress seems imminent, until something - such as Ranma's as-yet-unexplained aversion to intimacy - ruins the moments. Their touching rapprochement in the hospital transforms IMBS, for an instant, into a genuine and beautiful romance.
Nabiki's best moments, on the other hand, transform the fic into a taut, suspenseful thriller. Like a chess player attempting to isolate the opposing king, Nabiki manipulates people and events to combat Ranma more effectively than his more physically intimidating enemies can. Supplementing her brains-over-brawn appeal, IMBS's Nabiki embodies intriguing paradoxes that delight over-analyzers like me. Contrast, for example, her outward aloofness from family against her emotional honesty with strangers. Another one to ponder: Is Nabiki guilty of the same sort of indecent possessiveness toward Akane ("No-one touches her without my permission.") that she despises in Ranma? That Nabiki's constitution inspires such reflection attests to the power of Doenime's and Loader's character development. The authors bring into play various and trenchant devices to portray Nabiki's enigmatic complex of motivations, emotions, and introspections. And I just eat it up.
Grim-warrior Shampoo has always held great appeal for me, as difficult as it is to reconcile the happy, vivacious Shampoo with a character of great depth. Doenime and Loader expand on this common fanfic interpretation of Shampoo with a most imaginative back story. An engrossing and believable modification of the Joketsuzoku ethic links her fate to Ranma's. The dual life-changing traumas resulting from her encounter with Ranma add both pathos and humorous potential to Shampoo's redefined character. Most importantly for me, Shampoo's background features the coolest Cologne I've ever read.
The IMBS Ukyou reminds me of her incarnation from Tales of Ranma & Nabiki. As the most reasonable and objective character in each fanfic, she has the ability to sympathize with all the major players, as well as the moral authority to tell them when they're wrong. So empowered, Ukyou becomes the Everyman, so her thoughts and reactions carry special weight. Moreover, she is armed with the knowledge of Ranma's tragic history beaten out of Genma. She also knows what it's like to be in love with the protagonist/villain. This combination of strengths qualifies Ukyou, more than any other character, to "cure" Ranma. Or to kill him.
IMBS boasts a mesmerizing plot, occasional innovations in staging, and superior - if uneven - writing style. But it is masterful character-craft that elevates the fanfic above most others and distinguishes its story as the most compelling alternate reality in Ranma fan fiction.
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Autumn and Spring by "Angus MacSpon"
What a ride. One of the smartest, most inventive and most riveting of all Ranma fics, A&S thrills and astonishes like no other story in the archive. MacSpon's enormously original plot would likely have been enough to hold my rapt attention, but to the eye-popping story he applies shrewd dramatic timing, expressive prose, and some interesting stylistic experimentation. The result is like riding a very long roller coaster blindfolded.
That A&S is a quest-type adventure story surprised me more than any secret Ukyou reveals up to the point when she uncovers the nature of her decade-long project. Ranma's melancholy introspection and Ukyou's secretiveness seem to set us up for a tale of emotional catharsis. Then, for the first time of many, MacSpon pulls the floor out from under us. While the Ranma-Ukyou romance is no red herring, it - and we - are suddenly overwhelmed by the brilliant and chilling revelation of the mystery surrounding Shampoo's fate.
I use the descriptor "chilling" very literally. Nothing in Ranma fanfic has unnerved me more than the review of Ukyou's video evidence. Ranma's horror in that scene is palpable, eliciting sympathetic tingles up my spine. MacSpon's tight prose establishes a suffocating atmosphere of growing dread, like the eerie soundtrack from a horror movie as the victim descends stairs to a dark cellar. Most remarkably, the goose bumps actually increased when I re-read A&S: knowing the destination made Ranma's hellish journey of discovery all the more macabre. Such staying power is rare, even in the best published fiction.
Like his plot, MacSpon's writing shines with professional lustre. Especially polished are the dialogues, internal and external, which are essential for clarifying the many complicated ideas underlying the story. Some of A&S's most complex passages depict Ranma's musings and deliberations: the results have uneven artistic success, but are consistently effective in sketching the contours of Ranma's character. At the peak of the fight scene, MacSpon employs an innovative combination of devices to convey the unimaginable disorientation of Ranma's "injury" while simultaneously showing - in a minimalist fashion - what is occurring outside Ranma's limited field of perception. While such experimentation is generally fruitful, the writing in A&S is best when the author uses his simplest prose, allowing his natural expressiveness to carry the story and to evoke genuine emotions. This richly modest composition gives life to the romance which holds the fic together and enables it to rise above the intellectual level of a mere thrill ride.
Unlike a typical roller coaster, which fails to match the heart-pounding intensity of that first big drop with subsequent maneuvers, A&S careens with even greater force as the quest portion of the story proceeds. I actually counted the number of amazing twists between Ranma's arrival at the enemy's lair and the denouement; I found ten. Each surprise staggered me anew, each one inspired wonder at MacSpon's resourcefulness. This unrelenting onslaught of ingenious developments - grisly, exciting, touching, or just-plain-cool - creates impact that would resonate with even a veteran thrill-seeker.
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