Naruto Funny Naruto Pics
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I said maybe. 
And yes, Thats the one. I've already got a planning page for it and part of the first chapter. (Which I derped on and wrote before starting the planning page. Will likely need revision.) I've gotten up to the Main exams in the plans, and I'm refining it further.
And did I happen to mention that the elemental powers work a wee bit more like Logia? :evil2:
And yes, Thats the one. I've already got a planning page for it and part of the first chapter. (Which I derped on and wrote before starting the planning page. Will likely need revision.) I've gotten up to the Main exams in the plans, and I'm refining it further.
And did I happen to mention that the elemental powers work a wee bit more like Logia? :evil2:
The Archfiend of Lightning said:
I said maybe.
And yes, Thats the one. I've already got a planning page for it and part of the first chapter. (Which I derped on and wrote before starting the planning page. Will likely need revision.) I've gotten up to the Main exams in the plans, and I'm refining it further.
And did I happen to mention that the elemental powers work a wee bit more like Logia? :evil2:
And yes, Thats the one. I've already got a planning page for it and part of the first chapter. (Which I derped on and wrote before starting the planning page. Will likely need revision.) I've gotten up to the Main exams in the plans, and I'm refining it further.
And did I happen to mention that the elemental powers work a wee bit more like Logia? :evil2:
Now, plan/write away.
knight504 said:
The Archfiend of Lightning said:
I said maybe.
And yes, Thats the one. I've already got a planning page for it and part of the first chapter. (Which I derped on and wrote before starting the planning page. Will likely need revision.) I've gotten up to the Main exams in the plans, and I'm refining it further.
And did I happen to mention that the elemental powers work a wee bit more like Logia? :evil2:
And yes, Thats the one. I've already got a planning page for it and part of the first chapter. (Which I derped on and wrote before starting the planning page. Will likely need revision.) I've gotten up to the Main exams in the plans, and I'm refining it further.
And did I happen to mention that the elemental powers work a wee bit more like Logia? :evil2:
Now, plan/write away.
The reason I think it may be a tad suspension of disbelief breaking is the ages. Naruto needs to hit Sasuke with some armor-piercing questions before the hatred has really had a chance to take full hold, so the fic actually begins only a few months post massacre. But because of that, I feel like Naruto would be a tad to young/inexperienced to really get the point across without it feeling like I have his older self in his younger body. (No, no time travel.)
I also feel like I wrote him too much like a jackass. I mean, it was necessary, but I feel like I might have gone a bit too far with it.
For a Naruto/Sasuke friendship, one of the earliest starting points could be that scene where Sasuke's sitting at the pier, Naruto walks by, they frown at each other but smile about it after. This time around, Naruto actually heads down to introduce himself and go from there.
Just make a thread in the ideas section, anyway. This fic's already got my interest so I'll help out where I can, after I get some sleep.
Just make a thread in the ideas section, anyway. This fic's already got my interest so I'll help out where I can, after I get some sleep.
The Archfiend of Lightning said:
knight504 said:
The Archfiend of Lightning said:
I said maybe.
And yes, Thats the one. I've already got a planning page for it and part of the first chapter. (Which I derped on and wrote before starting the planning page. Will likely need revision.) I've gotten up to the Main exams in the plans, and I'm refining it further.
And did I happen to mention that the elemental powers work a wee bit more like Logia? :evil2:
And yes, Thats the one. I've already got a planning page for it and part of the first chapter. (Which I derped on and wrote before starting the planning page. Will likely need revision.) I've gotten up to the Main exams in the plans, and I'm refining it further.
And did I happen to mention that the elemental powers work a wee bit more like Logia? :evil2:
Now, plan/write away.
The reason I think it may be a tad suspension of disbelief breaking is the ages. Naruto needs to hit Sasuke with some armor-piercing questions before the hatred has really had a chance to take full hold, so the fic actually begins only a few months post massacre. But because of that, I feel like Naruto would be a tad to young/inexperienced to really get the point across without it feeling like I have his older self in his younger body. (No, no time travel.)
I also feel like I wrote him too much like a jackass. I mean, it was necessary, but I feel like I might have gone a bit too far with it.
Well, without knowing the questions, I've got two ideas/options.
1) Emphisis on Naruto himself having just recently lost his own hate boner, and has successfully come out of the "I hate you all and frequently dream of genocide" phase of his feelings for Konoha, so he has at least knows abit of what he's talking about when it comes to Hate.
or 2) try to add some innocence/childishness to the questions. Meaning, keep the general idea of the questions, but make them softer/asked in a much more stupid way.
In no particular order:
1. Naruto is the jackass in the scene. It wasn't his intention in the beginning. He honestly wanted to get to know Sasuke, and we he hated everything so much, but when he heard the reason, he thought it was ridiculous how Sasuke was going about it, and then his rather abrasive young personality kinda escalated into insults with armor piercing questions thrown in.
2. It IS the pier scene, literally right after the newest young scene we got where Naruto sees Sasuke looking through him with hatred.
3. I'd rather keep it to PMs for now.
4. I'm pretty sure that the :sick: was the reason he said Koharu.
1. Naruto is the jackass in the scene. It wasn't his intention in the beginning. He honestly wanted to get to know Sasuke, and we he hated everything so much, but when he heard the reason, he thought it was ridiculous how Sasuke was going about it, and then his rather abrasive young personality kinda escalated into insults with armor piercing questions thrown in.
2. It IS the pier scene, literally right after the newest young scene we got where Naruto sees Sasuke looking through him with hatred.
3. I'd rather keep it to PMs for now.
4. I'm pretty sure that the :sick: was the reason he said Koharu.
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