.hack//UNKNOWNS

H-Man

Random phantom.
#51
...you know, the creepiest thing is that my character would probably be the only guy willing to stick with armedlord's... although he'd ALSO annoy him enough that he doesn't want Alkist with him.

I mean, considering how he seems to have selective vision, he'd probably find it weird that someone keeps going ahead and smashing at the monsters before he does, much less go ahead and get all beaten up.
 

windfalcon

Well-Known Member
#52
.. why not make this into an RP instead of an RR?

.. it would make more sense.. yes?
 

armedlord

Well-Known Member
#53
meh, if that were to happen, then you'd likely not see my face in that topic.

I tend to avoid RPs nowadays. I already have enough things sucking my life away...that being games, this forum, reading/trying to make crackfics, college, Sundays volunteering of selling deep fried chicken and finding a job.

That and I just KNOW that I'll end up god-fucking-mod or try to control nearly everything I do if it DOES become a RP. Near always happens really.

Still, feel free to use and abuse my character in your plots and whatnot in anycase. I'm not really using it. -_-
 
#54
The trick to having Godmode sort of characters is to make sure they never win except against NPCs. No matter how you have to screw around with coincidence to make them lose. One of the reasons all of my characters are somewhat death-proof :p

But this is within an MMO that we're talking about here, so losing and limiting your powers by level is not a difficult thing. IRL(sort of), Cubey vs. Theon wouldn't take five minutes before Cubey would be looking like MCP 0.9

A Nerd Cookie to anyone who catches the reference.
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#55
i'll take a stab in the dark and say MCP= the Master Control Program from TRON?
 
#56
Here, have a Nerd Cookie!

Aren't semi-obscure references fun?
 
#58
Mom packs us a lunch and we're off to school
They call us nerds 'cause we're so uncool
They laugh at our clothes
They laugh at our hair
The girls walk by with their nose in the air

[Bridge] So go ahead, put us down
One of these days we'll turn it around
Won't be long mark my word
Time has come for revenge of the nerds

revenge of the nerds, revenge of the nerds

We wear horn-rimmed glasses
With a heavy duty lense
Button down shirts
And a pocket full of pens
Straight "A" students
Teachers pets
They call us nerds
But we don't regret

[Bridge]

Revenge of the nerds (nerds)
Revenge of the nerds (ha-ha-ha)
Revenge of the nerds (nerds)
Revenge of the nerds (chant: Nerd, nerds, nerds)

While the jocks work out
with the football team
We're trying to score
with the girl of our dreams
You know we ain't good looking
But here's the surprise (gasp)
Nerds are great lovers
In Disguise (aahhhh)

so go ahead put us down
One of these days we'll turn it around
Won't be long mark my word
Time has come for revenge of the nerds

Revenge of the nerds
Revenge of the nerds (nerds!)
Revenge of the nerds (nerds.)
Revenge of the nerds (ha-ha-ha)

So if they call you a dork
A spazz or a geek
Stand up and be proud
don't be meek (hey!)
Beautiful people
Haven't you heard
The joke's on you
It's revenge of the nerds

[Bridge]

Revenge of the nerds (nerds!)
Revenge of the nerds
Revenge of the nerds (who me?)
Revenge of the nerds
Revenge of the nerds (ha-ha-ha)
Revenge of the nerds (nerds)
Revenge of the nerds (nerds!)
Revenge of the nerds
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#59
"RUN GENOCIDEHEART, SAVE YOURSELF!"

somewhat obscure cartoon movie reference the only thing changed was the name, cookie for anyone who guesses correctly.
 

Ryogas_BF

Well-Known Member
#60
dude... that's not much of a referance. several cartoons have had time were someone shouts "run ___, save yourself" or something to that effect...
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#61
fine, fine whiner. here's another clue.

"No way, two can play! Sic' em!"

and it's a cartoon robot movie.
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#62
eh, sorry my fault after thinking it over i realized that one of my favorite scenes from "Transformers: the Movie" probably wouldn't have stuck what with the "Arise, Rodimus Prime." "Optimus... This is the end of the road Galvatron!"
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#63
Back on topic how would i go about writing this scene so that it has more depth and flows better?

Italics = thought

Alright, the deal is set! If I can beat this BlackRose in a duel she'll give me her net address, and should i lose... well, lets not dwell on that!

The fight goes on, the final strike! eh, where'd my sword go? "GRAAAUGH!!" "YOU DIED!!"

eh, back in town and she's waiting for me? crap, let's just hope she doesn't see me leave, that virus infected sector sounds pretty nice this time of day...

"HOLD IT!! You made a bet and lost, now perform your end of the deal."

"YES, MA'AM!!" having to change the color of my clothes to PINK of all the injustices, oh well, a deal's a deal...
hope you liked it.
 

GenocideHeart

Well-Known Member
#64
shout27 said:
Back on topic how would i go about writing this scene so that it has more depth and flows better?

Italics = thought

Alright, the deal is set! If I can beat this BlackRose in a duel she'll give me her net address, and should i lose... well, lets not dwell on that!

The fight goes on, the final strike! eh, where'd my sword go? "GRAAAUGH!!" "YOU DIED!!"

eh, back in town and she's waiting for me? crap, let's just hope she doesn't see me leave, that virus infected sector sounds pretty nice this time of day...

"HOLD IT!! You made a bet and lost, now perform your end of the deal."

"YES, MA'AM!!" having to change the color of my clothes to PINK of all the injustices, oh well, a deal's a deal...
hope you liked it.
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :sweat:

Making bets with BlackRose? :snigger:
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#65
"Hey, kid! yes, you with the green hair, your name's Kite, right? how do i know that? unimportant, what is important is the fact that you've encountered Helba so if i stick with you i might meet her too. here's the terms: i'll flip a coin, heads, i get to join your group as spokesman when it comes to girls, tails, i'll give you 99 Yellow Candies."

Flip...

"What are the chances of a coin landing on it's side?"

Flip...

Flip...

Flip...

"This isn't funny!!!"

Flip...

Flip...

Flip...

Flip...

"Hey! where are you going?!! COOME BAAACK!!!"
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#66
I've been teleported to this wierd world where everyone is playing a game, and i'm the only "real" person around. I'd miss home but that girly boy Franz married Natasha, so I've got nothing better to do with my time other than wander around.

"HEY!! That treasure was mine!"

"Wanna bet again, BlackRose?"

On the plus side, I automatically know the names of any cute girls i come across and am rather fortunate to be born with a high sense of discernment, I escaped making the occasional bet with guys masquerading as girls by the hairs on the back of my neck.
 

lethum

Well-Known Member
#67
A few months ago said:
Now, in The World there are many wondrous, pretty, dangerous, funny, scary, creepy and bizarre stuff.

The "thing" in front of Lethalette was dangerous, scary, creepy and bizarre.

That earned the "thing" a mental "What the fuck!"

Now, as a male, the player who controlled Lethalette had never worried about meeting a monster like the on top of the hill, but he had expected a few things to weird him out, after choosing a female character to play the game.

The "thing", though lacking eyes, seemed to be staring intently at Lethalette, and the silence in the battle zone stretched. The "thing" shifted.

That earned it a loud "TENTACLE MONSTER!" and a female character played by a male running as fast as she could in the opposite direction. The monster followed easily, seemingly able to keep up, but suddenly the Wavemaster gained more speed, increasing the separation between her and the tentacle monster.

'I should have stayed out of this area! What kind of Game Master programs a tentacle monster in a MMORPG. And I swear those tentacles look horny, dammit!'

After gathering a lot of experience and leveling up, Lethalette was unwilling to waste 10 hours of monster battling in one fell swoop, but...WTF! Tentacle Monster! Female Character! Virtual Reality! You do the math!

Activating the especial effect of the suit she was wearing, and she recovered her ability to cast spells, and promptly began to hit the monster with them. Though they were effective, and the tentacle monster slowed down, it was not enough, and the monster got inside tentacle range.

'Shit! That happens when you don't save every so often! 10 hours of my life, wasted!' preparing to forcefully disconnect before going through THAT.

BOOM

And the tentacle monster grayed and died. Lethalette turned, and saw a Wavemaster lower his staff.

"Thank you. Stupid thing almost got me"

"You're welcome, but you should leave this area, modified monsters have been appearing, and the administrator are tracking the hackers right now," said the higher level player.

"And this monster was one of those?" asked Lethalette.

"Yes. But there's also been a few monsters from other games, so a few high level players came here to gain experience and fight them. We think it's a group of people, but I'm not sure about that"

"I see. What is you screen name?"

"Altagrave. And you should really leave this area unless you want a modified monster to kill you" answered the player now known as Altagrave.

"It's okay. I was leaving anyway, but I met an ugly complication on the way" said Lethalette.

The last thing Lethalette thought before saving was 'I Hate hackers'.
Well, since shout posted a snippet, I thought that so should I.
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#68
seriously, any advice for my writing?

Anyways, GH i know you must have figured out what game series he's from, right?


edit: it should be noted that i only got about half-way through the first .Hack, so if there are any storyline goodies past that point, i'll be unaware of them.
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#69
Anyways, since i was apparently waaaaay too vague and since i just told GH who it was supposed to be, here you are.

Joshua from Fire Emblem: The Sacred Stones

applause please?

someone?

anyone?

awwww. . .
 

armedlord

Well-Known Member
#70
shout27 said:
Anyways, since i was apparently waaaaay too vague and since i just told GH who it was supposed to be, here you are.

Joshua from Fire Emblem: The Sacred Stones

applause please?

someone?

anyone?

awwww. . .
mmmm....

*claps twice*

There. Good enough for now at least?

That and it has been too many new games I'm playing to remember FE:TSS correctly. I really need to play some of my older games once in a while or else I tend to get some odd games like Fallout: Brotherhood of Steel for the PS2 lying in my lap.

Almost makes me want to see Mario in a .hack world.
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#71
Fallout: BoS - I played that once and took it back, the top-down action interface irritates me as usual.

As for old games, that's what i usually play so i'll probably make many more referances to them in the future.
 

shout27

Well-Known Member
#72
"HEY!! Lethalette! Want to join up and take on the dungeon in . . . OH MY . . !! GOTTA RUN, SEE YA AROUND!! WHATEVER YOU DO PLEASE DON'T COME NEAR ME EVER!!!" Whereever she's been is a place I DON'T want to visit. It'd be just my luck if they have some kind of Gender Bender Shop available here. The very thought scares the bejeezus out of me. . .
 
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