Author's Notes -
Bold û Speaking in English or another language, often noted after speaking.
When I started writing 'My Immortal' I had a totally different vision for this fic. It started out as a nice, light crossover and turned into a readable RanmaxNaru fic. And then I tried to expand it to cover more of Akamatsu's works, namely Negima, but then life happened. The plot's taken a dramatic twist, and previous elements have been ignored or pushed aside to take into account the new direction of this fic. I hope you that those of you who still enjoy reading this fic will continue to do so. And for those of you who don't for various reasons, well, I can't please you all, so you're free to write what you want to, but if you do use some plot elements, well, I don't even care if you acknowledge me or not because I'm sure that there are many who have had similar ideas but just haven't put them down on paper (or cyberspace).
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The off-white paint gave the room a cold, but clean feeling that unsettled Ranma Saotome's nerves. Logically he understood why the room was painted the way it was, but he couldn't help but feel that the color, or lack thereof, did little to sooth the nerves of those either staying in or visiting the room.
"You should go back to your rooms," he suggested as he looked at the ragged group of girls. "You're going to dirty up the room."
His lame attempt at humor fell on deaf ears as the gathered girls looked down on the tiny figure in the clean bed.
Tears streamed down the faces of his students, some current, one former, as they fought to contain their emotions.
"What happened?"
Everyone turned towards the door at the towering international student as he and Tenma entered the room.
"We were sparring," Shinobu explained, "and then suddenly he fell over. We thought he was just playing around at first, but thenà"
Tenma glanced at the girls, noting their appearance before turning to his brother.
"The doctor says that it's cancer," an edge to his voice as he accepted the man's diagnosis. "Brain tumor, but it's also shot off a clot that got into his lungs."
Tenma's blue eyes focused on Hiro, his artificial eyes taking in everything. "There's nothing we can do," he deduced, his tone cold and even.
"How can you say that?" Asuna snapped, a hint of anger and frustration in her eyes. "Isn't there anything"
"Magic won't work," Luke interrupted. "While magic can suppress cancer, it can't cure it. Only dark magic can truly cure it, but that would require something like another person's life or their soul."
"There are limits to what magic can do," Ranma added.
Only the gentle hiss from the respirator and a few sniffles kept the room from being completely silent as the occupants were at a loss for words.
"Isn't there anything we can do?" Maki finally ventured to ask.
"There's a spell that could wake him up for a bit," Ranma stated. "The doctor's gathering mana for it, but won't be able to perform it for another hour. Naru's gone to the house to get some things for me, and Takahata's taking care of Saffron and Negi.
"Tenma, Luke, take the girls back to their rooms, they look like they could use a bath," he ordered. "I'm sure that you and Luke haven't eaten yet, so get some food while you're out as well.
"Haruna, call your parents, let them know what's happened."
Reluctantly they left, leaving him alone with his youngest son.
He didn't know why, but something about the entire situation bothered him. True, he didn't know who Hiro's biological mother was, and what her family history was, but surely Dr. Tofu would have checked her family's history for cancer. A critical illness like this would have worked against his plan to use the children to fight against their father.
It didn't make sense. Something was wrongà but what? What did he miss?
Straining his already exhausted mind, he struggled to make sense of everything. His normally keen mind failed to register the sound of the gentle knocking at the door or of it opening.
"Ranma?"
Glancing up, he felt his unease lighten slightly. "Motoko, what are you doing here?"
"I was told that Naru was in the hospital," the Shinmei-ryu heir replied.
Ranma blinked at the news, "She was, she was here visiting Hiro, but she's gone now."
It was the kendoka's turn to blink as she processed his words. "But Keitaro called and told me that Naru was in the hospital."
The immortal opened his mouth to correct her, only to realize that he hadn't informed Keitaro or anyone from the Hinata Sou about Tenma's condition. "She was admitted for exhaustion, but she was released just before Hiro was admitted."
The more he thought about it, the more his head hurt, as though someone was blocking his memories. If Keitaro and Mutsumi had been here to visit Naru, why hadn't they stopped to visit Hiro?
Straining his mind, he momentarily forgot about Motoko, allowing her to slam her hand against his forehead. The feel of cool metal pressed against his suddenly hot skin sent a soothing wave of relief throughout his body.
"You've been enchanted," she muttered. "It's powerful."
"Damn," the immortal cursed. "What's going on here."
"I'll get a nurse."
"No. I don't trust them."
The kendoka gave him an amused look.
"I'm not in good standing here, you know that. To them I'm still an outsider regardless of what the Dean says."
"Someone sealed and altered your memories, but why?"
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Tenma Saotome was not curious by nature. The cyborg tended to simply accept the facts presented to him, but something about this entire situation with his brother was off. The facts just weren't adding up.
"You say that you were sparring," he remarked aloud, surprising himself as he heard his own voice.
"Yes, we were sparring," the buxom blunette stated as she glanced curiously at the cyborg.
"Yeah, we were sparring," Asuna reaffirmed.
"Where?" Luke asked.
"In the forest outside of town," Haruna answered. "Why?"
"You don't look like you've been sparring in the forest." Again Tenma scanned the girls. "There are no grass or mud stains on any of you."
"Did you clean up afterwards?" the more tactful of the two boys asked.
"No, we rushed to the hospital," Ayaka replied.
"Why don't you girls go back to the dorms," Luke suggested. "I'm sure that if we take you back to the dorms and try to get some stuff back at the dojo we won't make it back in time."
"That's a good idea," Shinobu agreed quickly. "Besides, you don't even know where I live now. Why don't we just meet back up at the hospital."
Before Tenma could even protest, Luke placed his firm hand on his friend's shoulder, drawing him away from the girls.
"What are you doing?" the cyborg asked, his English far better than what anyone expected.
"You're basically calling the girls liars," Luke replied once they were out of earshot. "That's never a good thing to do. If things aren't adding up, it's possible that they don't know what's going on either. And with Asuna and Ayaka's temper, calling them liars would probably result in a fight."
There was no denying the werewolf's logic. "So, what do we do?"
"I've got their scent, so we back track it from the hospital, alright?"
"Fine."
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It was wrong, it was all wrong.
Naru Narusegawa was smiling, happy even, but she knew she shouldn't be. Not when Ranma was in such misery; not when Hiro was diagnosed with terminal cancer.
Yet she couldn't help but be happy.
That was why she'd excused herself from the hospital, why she'd jumped at the chance to leave his side even when he probably needed her support; support that he was far too proud to admit he needed.
She couldn't explain it, but somehow it felt as though she now had a new lease on life.
'Maybe Hiro's mortality that reminded me how short my own life is,' she pondered as she tried to put a different spin on things. 'Not everyone's going to live as long as Ranma, and it's probably tearing him up inside to have to watch Hiro dying before his eyes. He truly is cursed.'
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"Where have you been?"
Shinobu Maehara had expected such an outburst upon returning to Evangeline's cabin. The temperamental vampire was prone to such fits, forcing the young university student to deal with her master's mood before getting down to business.
"There was an emergency," she replied as she offered the tiny blond a polite, yet rushed bow. "But I believe my memories have been tampered with."
Temper tantrum abated, she looked into the lavender eyes of the vampire, allowing her master to peer into her mind.
"Yes, they have," Evangeline scowled as she pulled away from the buxom young woman. "It's powerful, but I could undo it."
Reassured, Shinobu offered a weak smile.
"But do I want to?"
She froze at her master's words.
"It's probably better that you don't know the truth," Eva teased. "I gain nothing from restoring your memory, but I risk much. You've a bond with your former peers and my fellow classmates, and you all share the same memory block, though perhaps it's best to not share too much with them."
Her mind raced, catching the subtle hints that the immortal before her dropped. "I wasn't sparring with them, I was actually fighting them."
"Ah, see, you're beginning to piece things together already," taunted the vampire. "You don't need me for this."
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Following Luke's keen nose, it didn't take too long for the duo to find just where the girls' had claimed to be sparring. The now empty glade appeared to have seen better days, but not because there'd been a fight. To an untrained eye it might have appeared that way, but to Tenma Saotome it was clear something else had moved things around to hide what had truly happened.
"Magic," the blond stated as he sniffed the air. "Powerful magic, probably at least on the level of a major demon. They're just beyond the city's wards so it's possible.
"It doesn't make any sense; why would they come here to spar?"
"They didn't," the cyborg concluded. "Most magical students spar in secluded areas throughout the city and campus, they never leave the protection of the wards just for a spar."
"Then they were really fighting?"
Tenma shook his head. "Perhaps, but not here. The footprints don't suggest a fight or sparring, but the injuries that the girls' had suggest more than just light sparring." He pointed to the ground and the light dirt tracks. "They were knocked out by a powerful spell, that's what pushed things around."
With no further clues around, the pair reluctantly followed the girls' trail back into the city, making their way swiftly over the roof tops.
"This is where they fought," Tenma declared.
Though the back street had seen plenty of traffic during the day, the wolf's keen nose and the cyborg's discerning eye picked up evidence of the fight between the girls.
"Shinobu picked them apart," Tenma stated.
"Smells like she knocked Asuna into the wall over here," Luke said as he sniffed the wall. "Maki was using her ribbon, and Ayaka and Asuna faced off against Maehara-sempai. Smells like before the girls got here it was just Hiro and Shinobu.
"She cased him from down there," he pointed down the street. "Caught up to him, then tried to get away only to have the girls come across them from over there" he pointed to the other intersection "and Hiro took off going that way" he pointed back where they had come.
"But why was he at the train station?"
Tenma snapped to attention, "He was trying to leave the city."
"But why?"
"We have to get back home," the cyborg declared. "Find what's missing in father's room û that'll tell us what kind of spell Hiro cast."
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Despite her earlier protests, Evangeline McDowell knew that she couldn't just let things lay as they were. Though Shinobu was her newest partner and minion, the vampire couldn't let the fact that someone had tampered with the girl's memories go.
The easiest route was of course a magic-canceling spell, but that wouldn't tell her who had altered the blunette's memories or why. True, there was the possibility that once Shinobu regained her real memories she could discover the source and cause, but it was no guarantee.
The other option was to simply overpower the existing spell, no simple feat considering her current predicament. Yes, the full moon would grant her more of her powers, but then they'd have to wait until nightfall. Though the immortal had the time to spare, it was clear from her young partner's pacing that Maehara lacked patience.
"Is there something bothering you?" ventured the vampire.
For a moment the blunette paused, reluctantly looking away. "What do you know about cancer?"
"There's no magical cure," she replied. "Why?"
Again the girl paused.
"Why do you look like you've been fighting?" she asked instead.
"I was sparring with Saotome sensei's students."
Keen eyes narrowed as the vampire eyed her mortal partner.
"I think I might have been fighting with them against whomever altered our memories."
"Really?" That was an interesting morsel. "A wide ranging memory wipeà Tell me everything that you remember about today from the time you woke up until the time you came back to the cabin."
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"He was definitely in here," Luke stated as he sniffed the air around Ranma's bedroom. "The door's warded against me though."
The cyborg nodded. Privacy was one of his father's major concerns. It didn't surprise him that he'd protected the room and barred most from entering. But if Hiro had gotten in then he could get in as well. There were only a few times when the cyborg had entered his father's room, usually to get something that the elder Saotome kept in his room. Trusting in the fact that the room wasn't warded against him, Tenma stepped through the threshold, his eyes scanning the room even as he accessed previous visual recordings of his time in the room.
"Shit," he found himself cursing. "Hiro took the staff."
Dashing out of the room, he looked up at his bewildered companion.
"The staff that father used to summon the demon who raised Hiro for the last few years."
Luke blinked at the implication. "Why would Hiro make a deal with a demon? Why would he want to get cancer?"
Tenma paused, running that very question through his processors. It didn't make sense. There was no logical reason why Hiro would do something like that. "I need to report this to father."
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The atmosphere of the Sakura Lane Girls' Dormitory was often described as energetic and jubilant by the residents, even during finals and exams as the young girls rarely let anything sour their moods. It was one of the reasons why Chao enjoyed living in the dorms. Not only were her classmates quick to pick up on each other's moods, they were quick to step in and try to brighten each other's day.
As the end of the summer break loomed on the horizon, the class genius had opted to simply enjoy the vibe of the dorm rather than straining to complete her long-term goals. With her resources spread so thin already she should have been trying to discover the reason for the power flare the other day, but with no concrete leads she knew that it was best to just let things go as they were. She'd be able to keep an eye out for any further developments, but for now she couldn't do anything more than push forward with her plans.
"Asuna!" the ever cheerful Konoka called out as she stood before the common room window and waved down to her roommate.
"It looks like they've had a hard day at the dojo," Ako remarked as she joined Konoka at the window.
Stealing a glance out the window, Chao eyed her future opponents. As a student of history, well, her present would be history, she knew which students to watch out for. It was no surprise that Asuna and Ayaka were two of the class' foremost figures, their reputations already spreading throughout the campus. Maki was at best a second tier threat to her plans, but her fervor and loyalty were unquestionable. Haruna was the most troublesome as her abilities and methods were unorthodox. The recent addition of Kaede though seemed to throw a wrench into her plans, though the kunoichi had always been a mystery as she kept everyone but the twins at a distance.
"Something's wrong," remarked the ever emotive Konoka.
"They are back from training a bit early," Ako reaffirmed as she and Konoka turned away from the window and rushed towards their respective rooms.
Curious, Chao and Kazumi, as well as a few other girls followed.
"Maybe Asuna got shot down," speculated Misa.
Sakurako paused to reflect before replying, "I thought she wasn't going to do 'it' until the last day of the break."
"Maybe the found him with another girl?" interjected Madoka.
"Maybe they found out he's gay?" Misa added.
"No way!" exclaimed Sakurako.
"He does spend a lot of time with Luke," said Misa.
"But he's dating Ako," Madoka pouted.
"Well, he is pretty dreamy, and just because Luke can't return his feelings doesn't mean that Tenma might not swing that way," stated Misa. The other cheerleaders sighed, exasperated and defeated by their peer's skewed logic and conviction.
Chao had long ago learned to tune out the frivolous girls' chatter as their random ideas rarely held any relevant information. Kazumi was the best source for any pertinent information, at least anything that hadn't been covered in the various biographies and books about the past which was now her present.
"Asuna," Konoka called out as the usually fiery redhead and the others emerged from the stair well, "what's wrong?"
Never one to keep her emotions in check, it was painfully obvious that Asuna was putting on a strong face.
"It's Hiro," the usually calm and cool Ayaka replied unsteadily with hint of grief and sorrow.
Before anyone could say anything else Kaede stepped forward, shaking her head and immediately silencing everyone. In a rare display of support for her former rival, Asuna put her arm around Ayaka's trembling shoulders, leading the tall blond away from their classmates.
While the younger Saotome was actually just as old, if not older than the girls of 2-A, his appearance was that of someone a few years younger than them. It didn't help that he looked nothing like his older brother, or that Tenma appeared to be significantly older than Hiro despite the year or so difference in their ages û similar to how the twins appeared so young, especially compared to Kaede, despite being the same age as the rest of them. Few had them had met the newest Saotome as he'd only come to Mahora less than a month ago, but more and more had spotted him with Tenma and Luke.
Most knew that Ayaka had a thing for younger boys. But over the past few weeks she'd apparently become enamored with him, mentioning him often in the little time she and the others weren't training and were actually with the girls of 2-A. Evidently she'd latched onto the younger Saotome sibling in her slow progression away from younger boys.
Whatever was happening though had obviously shaken the usually unflappable Class Rep. Only Asuna was capable of getting Ayaka worked up, but for her former rival to offer her comfort and support led the remaining girls of 2-A to speculate on what was going on.
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The tiny hospital room was thick with tension as the raven haired immortal paced. Everyone who truly knew Ranma Saotome knew that he thought best while fighting, but it was clear that now was not the time for it. Forced to make do with simply pacing, the master martial artist walked back and forth before the foot of his son's bed.
For her part Motoko Aoyama knew better than to disrupt his train of thought. In the handful of years that she'd known him she'd only seen him thus once before. His keen mind stretched to the limit as it processed a multitude of facts allowed his highly trained body to move automatically around the room. For someone capable of avoiding physical attacks in his sleep, the act of taking a few steps and turning around was unbelievably simple.
"Aoyama-sama," she heard, her own mind too distracted by her friend's situation to pay attention to the world around her. Reflexively she snapped her head to the side, her eyes locked on the young man before her.
"Tenma," she replied, a smile to her lips. Though she knew what the boy actually was, she still accepted him for what his father wanted him to be. Ranma Saotome was a master illusionist. As such his life was full of lies such as Tenma. Despite the fact that that was not the truth, Ranma and Tenma, as well as those who knew both of them had come to accept it as the truth. "And you must be Luke."
The tall blond nodded, unsure what to say to the beautiful woman before him as he followed Tenma into the tiny room.
There was once a time when seeing a young boy blushing as he looked her over would have upset her, but Motoko had long ago matured past that point. In truth she'd gotten used to such looks as she'd accepted the fact that perhaps she wasn't as plain and ordinary as she'd once thought she was.
"She's Setsuna's sensei," Tenma stated as he closed the door to the room.
Her senses tingled as she noticed the cyborg perform a sweep of the room with his electronic sensors. "Father"
"What did you find?" the immortal asked as he glanced at his son.
She could feel Luke's eyes on her, this time looking past her physical beauty as he gauged her trustworthiness. Though she was a martial arts master herself as well as a close friend of his master's the werewolf knew little about her.
"Hiro used the Count's staff," the cyborg stated.
Ranma froze, his pacing halted at the discovery. "That's enough," the elder Saotome stated, ending the discussion.
"But" Luke interjected.
"Not now," Motoko proclaimed. "The doctor will be here any minute now to revive Hiro."
As the head of the Shinmeiryu, she knew the implications. Dealing with demons was forbidden. In the past the Shinmeiryu had been called in to exterminate demons and those who had dealt with them. Only a handful of people knew that Ranma had previously made a deal with a demon, a secret that none of them dared share. As respected leaders of their own clans and schools they could not be associated with someone like Ranma should word ever get out.
Under Happosai the Musabetsu Kakut? Ry? had been little more than a small group of unstoppable dojo destroyers, thieves, and upstarts, but under Ryoga the Musabetsu Kakut? Ry? had become respectable. With Ranma now in position to become the next Grand Master the Musabetsu Kakut? Ry? was set to become a true power inside the martial arts and magical world. A scandal like this though would undo all credibility that both Ryoga and Ranma had established, forcing the others like the Kanto Magic Association and Kansai Magic Association to disavow and shun him. While the other MA's might accept half-demons and even lesser demons into their ranks, forming a contract with a greater demon was unacceptable.
This was serious dark magic and grounds for the other MA's to put a bounty on his head. Even she couldn't protect Hiro. Then again, he wouldn't need protecting, not for much longer anyways.
"Father," the boy called out weakly.
"Hiro." She could hear the tension in his voice as her friend and former lover rushed to his son's side.
"Tenma," the brown haired Saotome muttered as he turned to face his elder sibling.
"Hiro," Tenma returned as he pulled the mask off of his brother's face.
Motoko and Luke stood back, allowing the Saotome family to share the unscripted moment.
"Why?" the cyborg asked as he gripped the magical staff for his brother to see.
The younger Saotome licked his lips, "You'll understand someday."
X X X X X
All of the girls in class 2-A knew that doubt and concern rarely appeared on Konoka Konoe's face. The carefree girl was said to be unflinchingly optimistic even in the face of the most daunting of tasks. Yet something had clearly shaken her.
Tasked as she was to watch over her former childhood friend Setsuna Sakurazaki couldn't help but feel a bit flustered as she noted the furrowed brow on her classmate's face.
"You're worried about her," the class genius stated as she startled the kendoka from her reverie.
"Yes," the unofficial face of 2-A replied.
'Of course, no one really talks to me,' the kendoka thought in relief as she continued to watch from a distance.
"You've grown distant lately," Chao stated as she walked over towards Konoka. "I barely see you two together anymore. Asuna's always with Ayaka, Maki, Haruna, and now Kaede."
"Saotome-sensei pushes them hard," Konoka replied as she forced a smile.
"Sensei no want others to know his training secrets," Ku Fei interjected. "But this different û they no feel like they were training - something bad happen."
A chill ran down Setsuna's spine at the kung fu prodigy's proclamation. Had something happened to Hiro?
"We find out," the foreign born girl urged as she took Konoka's hand into hers, pulling the petite girl out of her seat.
"But," the ever proper Konoka protested.
"You come too," Ku Fei suggested as she turned to the kendoka. "Saotome-sensei should know Hiro have many friends."
The kung fu master's words erased any lingering doubts that Konoka had. Everyone knew that the empathetic girl always had a soft spot for other people's suffering and pain. Though she barely knew Hiro, the youngest Saotome sibling had been spending more and more time with the girls of 2-A over the past few weeks and he was Haruna's cousin. "Okay."
Though her face remained neutral, Setsuna couldn't help but feel concerned about the recent turn of events. Everyone in the Shinmeiryu knew of Ranma Saotome and respected his prowess, but that had not kept some of them from speaking of him behind his back. Not that he was around much, but his bond to the former acting head of the Shinmeiryu's husband and her predecessor made him a frequent target.
Speculation about his numerous children and the fact that none of them had the same mother, and why some had supposedly been raised by less than reputable martial arts masters or magi before being taken in by the Shinmeiryu or by the Grandmaster of the Musabetsu Kakut? Ry? tainted the young kendoka's view of the respected master. With as many children as he was said to have fathered, why was he only raising two? And why were they all the same age? Of the ones she'd heard of and met, only Tenma was older than she was, though the difference in their age was supposed to be less than a year. Ryoko, Hiro, and Akira were all her age, and their birthdays were only a few weeks apart.
No matter how she looked at things the facts just didn't seem to add up and it was all the things she didn't know about Saotome-sensei that urged her to be cautious around him. Still, if Konoka was going to investigate, then it was her duty to accompany her, to keep her safe of course.
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A/N
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