Akamatsuverse Love Hina Loops

Lord Raa

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#26
zeebee1 said:
Raa, by it's very definition you wouldn't like that loop. It involves the two fandoms that you whine about the most.
It's not to do with the series involved.

While it is true that if the creators of those two series were publicly flogged with razor-wire, I would shed no tears, teachers and people in various supervisory roles loudly proclaiming the "power of youth" is not a good thing.

If I was a parent, it would make me feel uncomfortable.
 

Innortal

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#27
Keitaro blinked as the light from the sun hit his face, waking him.

What the hell happened? he asked himself, trying to twist his body away from the accursed light that sought to steal him from the Land of Nod.

It would have been easier had there not been a weight on his chest.

A feminine moan gave him a big hint as to what the weight was.

He tried to recall his last conscious thoughts.

After forcing his body not to send blood gushing from his nose from perverted thoughts, he went back farther.

The Loop had restarted, but unlike it normally did, he started deeper into it. The last thing he recalled before à the happy times à was Motoko drying her hair, wearing one of his shirts.

She was only wearing one of his shirts.

Then it hit him: time and history had played out normally until he æenteredÆ the time stream. In addition, because he had been busy trying to orient himself in the Loop, he had failed to grab the clothespins and put them on his face.

As such, when Motoko had grabbed him, asking for guidanceà

Well, this Loop will be short, but what a way to go, ht thought, trying not to do anything to awaken the former Aoyama heir. If he was lucky, he might survive the rest of the month.

He considered his luck and decided a second romp was probably not in his future at the moment. He seriously doubted MotokoÆs personality had changed enough so that when she awoke, she wouldnÆt try to un-man him.

At least his workout routine was paying off. HeÆd barely been able to keep up with her. Yes, he was going to have to keep that up, it would be best should he ever get another shot at her.

Or her sisterà

NO! Blood shooting out, bad!

ôMmm, Keitaro-sama,ö murmured Motoko, nuzzling into his chest.

Okay, would it be wrong to see if I can get an excellent start to the morning?

Well, no matter how the Loop endedùconsidering it would likely be painful and involve sharp objects, blunt objects, and his crotchùthis had to be one of the best starts ever!
 

shiki

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#28
^ I also have wanted to read a fic about that scene. Too bad this is in the loop section...
 

Innortal

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#29
I've seen one good one, but it was a little angsty and hasn't been updated in years.
 

DhampyrX2

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#30
My first thought it Motoko is looping too and Keitaro's morning will be much happier than he expected. Especially as she defends him from Naru when she inevitably comes to kill him.
 

Innortal

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#31
Wasn't meant to be, but to each their own. I just wanted a Loop setup where Keitaro couldn't keep Motoko away and thus, things happened how a few of us were hoping when we watched the episode.

Much like the same way in the anime when a naked Mutsumi stumbled into Keitaro showering at her place.
 

PCHeintz72

The Sentient Fanfic Search Engine mk II
#32
One thing... the blood does not make sense if this is a continuous Keitaro... While no where near the experience of Ranma and the others, it was mentioned in the other loop he had bedded them all at least once in various loops... thus such things should have desensitized him.

If this is a different keitaro, then carry on.
 

Crusader

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#33
Being trapped in the time loop for the time being, didn't seem to affect his mental health yet. At least now hiding as he was in a comic book store filled with manga, translated Korean manwha and western comic books he could kill time by reading through all of it.

Now he just had to wait until time reset itself considering that the police, Narusegawa and Kitsune was after him for cutting the brakes of Seta's van and loosening one of the wheels...

(Maybe I should try to learn Hangul and how to speak Korean so that I can read Unbalance X Unbalance in it's native language). Keitaro Urashima thought.

He then remembered something that was better left unread

Yog-Sothoth

Yog-Sothoth knows the gate.
Yog-Sothoth is the gate.
Yog-Sothoth is the key and guardian of the gate.
Past, present, future, all are one in Yog-Sothoth


Maybe he shouldn't have read that transcripted spell from the Greek Necronomicon, it certianly would have saved him from ending up in his personal Groundhog Day timeloop scenario.
 

Prince Charon

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#34
Lord Raa said:
zeebee1 said:
Raa, by it's very definition you wouldn't like that loop. It involves the two fandoms that you whine about the most.
It's not to do with the series involved.

While it is true that if the creators of those two series were publicly flogged with razor-wire, I would shed no tears, teachers and people in various supervisory roles loudly proclaiming the "power of youth" is not a good thing.

If I was a parent, it would make me feel uncomfortable.
Especially given that the word that gets translated as 'youth' can also mean, IIRC, 'puberty'. Being 'youthful' would thus alternatively translate as 'pubescent'.

Creepy, no?
 

Amaretto

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#35
Keitaro slid into the warm waters of the Hinata Inn's springs and smiled. He smiled because for the next four years he would be cursed. Any awkward misunderstanding that could go wrong would go wrong. There was nothing he could do about it but that was alright. The next twenty seven seconds were his to enjoy and cherish.
He smiled lounging with his eyes closed as Naru moved into the spring.

"Ah, This hot spring is great." Naru cheerfully commented in her half blind state.

Keitaro remained silent waiting for the perfect moment.

"Bathing at noon is the best! It's so relaxing." She moved closer, "Don't you think my breasts have gotten bigger recently? Here take a look."

The ronnin waited just a moment then scooped the woman up into his arms gently caressing her breasts like she asked, "Yes, you have matured magnificently."

The cram student blinked several times. Silence reigned waiting for the chaos to strike. She opened her mouth to scream only to find Don Juan attempting to massage her tonsils.

Naru shrieked as he came up for air and the loop was on. Keitaro just shrugged, she did come on to him after all.
 

Innortal

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#36
Keitaro slowly crept along the corridor, avoiding the floorboards that while not loose, did make enough noise from the dreaded Molmol Loli to locate him. It wasnÆt as if he had a red moon to use to distract her.

After the one Loop where he allowed Amalla to make some progress, he knew better than to try to tame the Molmol females.

Still didnÆt mean he was going to survive the next few days.

Because once again, Lamba had tricked the girls into thinking the tanned prince was Keitaro, meaning once again the Looping Todai-hopeful was being carted off to Molmol for a quickie marriage to Amalla.

No thank you, heÆd rather not see how much it takes to receive a crushed pelvis à again.

This was why he was running now. If not Amalla and her need to sex, it was Kaolla wanting to play. He was quite certain now she knew the truth, but had said nothing to continue æplayingÆ with Keitaro.

ôCome to me, my love!ö he heard Amalla call out, forcing him to quickly dive into a nearby room, his mind cycling through pairs to the Molmol deities in hopes no one was in there, waiting to ambush him.

ôDid you see him?ö he heard from behind the door.

ôI fear not, Princess,ö stated a nameless guard.

ôContinue to search for him,ö Amalla declared. ôFather has prepared the ceremony. He must be made ready for us to be married.ö

ôAs you command, Princess.ö

He heard several footsteps walking away, but dared not open the door. He had no doubt one guard had been left behind in case he came back this way, a guard who would not take pity of KeitaroÆs poor soul and help him escape.

Damn loyalty to the monarchyà

Standing tall, he nodded to himself. He was Keitaro Urashima! HadnÆt he faced Tsuroko over a dozen times? Had he not experienced the horrors of Naru during her period? Had he not survived over a century the tortures of working inside the Hinatasou? Had he not faced his Aunt after a bad date where Seta called her the wrong name during sex?

Surely, such a man of those tests and caliber could escape one measly little country.

Yes, he couldùnoùhe would succeed and make it safely back to Japan!

<hr>

ôI now present, the new Prince and Princess of Molmol!ö yelled the priest as the crowd cheered.

Keitaro paled under the bindings, more so than whatever the Mecha-tama surrounding him could ever entice.

When she finds outà Well, I better get to work on that suicide pill.

Molmol wives that were upset with their husbands was not a pleasant thought. Sure, he didnÆt know what would happen, but it was best to be safe than sorry.

Besides, that white croc looked hungry.
 

zeebee1

Well-Known Member
#37
What's the pain of losing your limbs to a crocodile when compared to freedom?
 

DhampyrX2

Well-Known Member
#38
continuing where Innortal left off...


"Oh relax Keitaro-kun. There are far worse fates than being married to me, after all," Amalla commented as she leaned in and delivered a soul searing kiss to her new husband.

Keitaro's eyes widened comically as he realized Amalla was well aware of just what she had been getting into and still went through with it. Did Su tell her? Had someone else tried to rescue him this loop and spilled the beans? Had-

"After the last time were were wed I find that Lamba just can't quite measure up. Oh he means well, of course, but his mind is far too often on other matters and not the task at hand. Your academic focus when directed toward other matters is exhilarating," Amalla added with a seductive leer as she pulled back from inspecting his tonsils.

Or she's looping too and knew exactly what she was up to, Ketairo added with a mental sigh of resignation. This would not end well for him.
 

Crusader

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#39
In the Heiney Institue of Monster Research up in the mountains somewhere...

"Professor Heiney! A monster is attacking!"

"I love this job!" Keitaro laughed in glee as he pulled the lever as Professor Heiney gave the word to fire.

He just couldn't get enough of zapping monsters into smoking disoriented atomic matter. He practically replayed this time loop too many times to count.
 

hiraishin

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#40
Crusader said:
In the Heiney Institue of Monster Research up in the mountains somewhere...

"Professor Heiney! A monster is attacking!"

"I love this job!" Keitaro laughed in glee as he pulled the lever as Professor Heiney gave the word to fire.

He just couldn't get enough of zapping monsters into smoking disoriented atomic matter. He practically replayed this time loop too many times to count.
Been watching Freakazoid have ya?
 

Crusader

Well-Known Member
#41
hiraishin said:
Been watching Freakazoid have ya?
Nah, it's just that I enjoyed watching Freakazoid in the past due to the hilarious insanity in almost every episode and that sometimes some scenes can pop up in my head.

What can I say, I just loved that scene with trigger happy scientists.
 

DhampyrX2

Well-Known Member
#42
The loop started in an odd place for Keitaro, namely it started as he was making his way up the first step on the path to the Hinata-sou. More importantly, Keitaro seemed to have a travel bag with him and was dressed in the outfit he had worn...

"My first day," Keitaro realized with a sense of wonder. "It's my first day. I've never met the girls. Except for Haruka none of them would recognize me from Adam at this point," he whispered to himself.

It took all of four seconds for that to sink in as Keitaro's face blossomed into the biggest smile he had let reach his face in centuries. He was free. No damage control. No emotional drama. The girls couldn't fight with him or over him if they didn't know him.

With that happy thought in mind Urashima Keitaro turned 180 degrees and headed back toward the street. It was time to find a new path in life. Maybe a nice relaxing time in a monastery?

*****

Meanwhile, back at the Hinata-sou Narusegawa Naru was starting to prune a bit in the hot spring as she folded her arms under her breasts and scowled. Where the hell is he? He should have been here like twenty minutes ago, she thought to herself.

*****

As she thought that, one Konno "Kitsune" Mitsune was waiting in the changing room without her towel for the inevitable shriek of a certain manager that should be running from Naru at any moment.

*****

Both girls would be surprised to see Motoko waiting patiently in the common room to greet their "new" kanrinin once he arrived.

*****

While all this was going on, Shinobu was talking with Su over a bunch of bananas meant to persuade the foreign princess to help her find a certain heir to the Urashima family.

"I told yas already, Shinomu, without a genetic sample I can't gets my Keitaro tracker together. We need to just wait for him to show up," Su responded as she slowly peeled a banana. That, more than anything, was a testament to her agitation.

"Auuu, but sempai should have been here ages ago Su-chan. What if something happened to him?

Su seemed to think about it for a moment before eating the banana in her hand in a single enthusiastic bite before she smiled and replied, "Then we'll just find him the old fashioned way."

*****

Keitaro did his best to ignore the multiple chills going up his spine as he increased his pace a bit with each in a series of unexplained sneezes. Maybe he should look into something a little more distant than a monastery. The French Foreign Legion was always hiring and he'd never tired being a soldier before. That might be fun. It couldn't be any more dangerous than his usual lives.
 

Crusader

Well-Known Member
#43
My reply to DhampyrX2's latest post here which I found to be funny.

Brave Sir Robin ran away
Bravely, ran away...away...
When danger reared its ugly head
He bravely turned his tail and fled
Yes, brave Sir Robin turned about
And gallantly he chickened out
Bravely talking to his feet
He beat a very brave retreat
Bravest of the brave, Sir Robin

:lol:
 

TerraBull

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#45
Can he make up stories?

Perhaps say when he awoke, he was in the middle of the road, got hit by a van, was sent flying into the back of a passing truck, when he next awoke, he learned he was in the hold of a freighter at Sea? Now being 'forced' to work for a secretive group in the search for .... ? They were vauge really.

When he gets found?
 

Innortal

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#46
His luck, he'd take the first cruise he could find, only to discover their first stop is Molmol, and after getting off the boat, run into Nyamo.
 
#47
Innortal said:
His luck, he'd take the first cruise he could find, only to discover their first stop is Molmol, and after getting off the boat, run into Nyamo.
Molmol has Amala, Nyamo is from Pararakelse.
 

Innortal

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#48
Nyamo travels around a lot. She might be there with Seta at that moment getting supplies, as well as the tween terror, Sara.
 
#49
Innortal said:
Nyamo travels around a lot. She might be there with Seta at that moment getting supplies, as well as the tween terror, Sara.
So Keitaro is gonna be chased by a Quiet loli, a tsundere loli, and a Nympho tropical princess.
 

Innortal

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#50
:evil2: And he thought he would be safe. :crazy:
 
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