Akamatsuverse [Love Hina]Miscellaneous ideas topic.

GenocideHeart

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#1
Kekeke, one more.

Starting idea, as usual: Love Hina/JoJo, or 'what if Keitaro's immortality was actually a Stand protecting him from the worst of the attacks'?

And yes, I'll admit it's just an excuse to see him go MUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDA at least once.

Naru: "NARU PUNCH!"
Motoko: "ROCK SPLITTING SWORD!"
Keitaro: "Aaagh! THE WORLD!" *flees while the two girls are frozen*

:snigger: :rofl:

Moderator edit: added '[Love Hina]' to the topic title. -chronodekar
 

Mighty Bob

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That post makes me laugh at the mental imagery...and yet I have zero knowledge about Jojo. Apparently I need to find a source for it ASAP.
 

EagleCeres

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#3
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I'm very sorry... but i have to do this

ZAAA WARUDO!!! *Kei stops time and drops a steamroller on Naru and Motoko*
WRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
 

GenocideHeart

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EagleCeres said:
I'm very sorry... but i have to do this

ZAAA WARUDO!!! *Kei stops time and drops a steamroller on Naru and Motoko*
WRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
Wins.

That is all.

:yay:
 

FH_Meta

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#5
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I may write this. It appeals to me as a JoJo fan.

Also this place has most of JoJo's scanlated and better than the commercial version.
 

GenocideHeart

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FH_Meta said:
I may write this. It appeals to me as a JoJo fan.

Also this place has most of JoJo's scanlated and better than the commercial version.
I hereby order you to write it. :snigger:

Just kidding, but if you DO write it and put it up on FF.Net, it'll instantly end up in my favorites list. JoJo fics deserve this. There's precious few of them.
 

cilrais

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#7
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I'll go ahead and toss something out since this topic died a horrible death and I'm in a necromantic mood.

Ever since I started reading Love Hina fanfiction, for some reason my mind replaces 'Urashima' with 'Urameshi'. Obviously my mind subconsciously wants a crossover fic with Yusuke as the dorm's manager.
 

cilrais

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I was thinking either after Sensui or Toguro, as a vacation Yusuke decides to go visit his grandma's inn.
 

GenocideHeart

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cilrais said:
I was thinking either after Sensui or Toguro, as a vacation Yusuke decides to go visit his grandma's inn.
I'd find it more ammusing if TOGURO was the landlord. Specifically Toguro Outoto. :snigger:

That or someone like Shishiwakamaru. :p Or Raizen himself, having grown bored of living in the Makai.
 
#11
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Or: after Keitaro's run out of the Hinata Sou by it's tenants, Haruka calls up an old friend... Sgt. Hartman of the United States Marine Corps (for the layman... R. Lee Ermey's character from Full Metal Jacket).
 

Mighty Bob

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I'm assuming that in this reality he didn't take one to the chest point blank thanks to Private Pyles (yes I know that wasn't his real name, but I liked the nicknames they got :p )

Alternatively, you could have Love Hina starting off with a Keitaro thats been raised/spent lots of time around everybodies favorite Gunny Sgt.
 
#13
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Yeah, Pyle's Major Malfunction in that continuuity would end with him only shooting himself. Leaves lots of scare-fodder for Gunny to tell sheltered little girls right there.

And I've seen a Marine Keitaro fic before, where Keitaro was studying at the University of California and joined the USMC after Mutsumi was killed on 9/11. Pretty good, but hasn't been updated in forever.
 

Mighty Bob

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This idea just kinda popped into my head (for no reason whatsoever that I can think of) while leaving work today; and just won't leave me alone so I'm dumping it here. Anyways, I know plenty of people here are KoF fans. I also know that there's a glut of Ranma/KoF crossovers and fusions out there. So the idea that popped into my head (and it's a pretty tiny idea) was what if someone wrote Keitaro as an Orochi. No clue if it's ever been done or what kinda plot you could cook up around this. But do with it what you will. Or have it be one of the other girls (Shinobu strikes me as even more an unlikely recipient. OR you could go with Su)
 

GenocideHeart

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Mighty Bob said:
This idea just kinda popped into my head (for no reason whatsoever that I can think of) while leaving work today; and just won't leave me alone so I'm dumping it here. Anyways, I know plenty of people here are KoF fans. I also know that there's a glut of Ranma/KoF crossovers and fusions out there. So the idea that popped into my head (and it's a pretty tiny idea) was what if someone wrote Keitaro as an Orochi. No clue if it's ever been done or what kinda plot you could cook up around this. But do with it what you will. Or have it be one of the other girls (Shinobu strikes me as even more an unlikely recipient. OR you could go with Su)
Actually, I'm working on exactly such a fic.

The gist of it is that Keitaro's father was actually Leopold Goenitz of the Divine Wind - when Keitaro's mom had a tryst with him he knocked her up (although since he's dead already, no one will ever know if it was intentional or not).

Keitaro generally grew up normally, until an unpleasant day when, while out with his mom and Kanako, he went postal on a group of men that were harassing the women and accidentally cut Kanako up pretty bad in the process.

Keitaro doesn't remember what happened, he just remember 'waking up' bloodied, with Kanako holding on to him despite her own wound, and his mom staring at him with a mix of horror, concern and understanding.

Following that, the Urashima family (not clan - unlike most other fics, I have them be too small to even be a clan, let alone have a martial art their own) contacts the Kusanagi clan, with whom they had relations in the past.

There, everything comes together: Keitaro's nature as a half-Orochi and the reasonb why he snapped - while there's no more Orochi around, Oroochi-blooded individuals till react with extreme violence if they feel they are threatened in any way.

Unfortunately, there's not much the Kusanagi elder Saisyu can do besides teach Keitaro meditation. The Yagami probably know more, but they'd refuse to help simply because Keitaro asked a Kusanagi first.

Cue years later, when Keitaro's still trying for Tokyo U, despite having mostly failing grades because he's still too nervous around people to relax and concentrate. Coming to Hinatasou in hopes of relaxing, he instead crosses Naru in the bath... kekeke.

Anyway, this idea is one I'm still ironing out. Feel free to suggest changes. After all, until I'm done with my other ideas, it'll go nowhere...
 
#16
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:blink: Say goodbye to Naru.

Wait, would he freak out after his first encounter with the inhabitants of Hinata Sou, or would it come after a couple weeks of the girls constantly trying to make him a human pinball?

Oh, and how old is Keitaro when this happens? 15? 13? 8?
 
#17
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Keitaro as an Orochi smells like some premium-grade awesome.
 

GenocideHeart

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Revanant Dragoon said:
:blink: Say goodbye to Naru.

Wait, would he freak out after his first encounter with the inhabitants of Hinata Sou, or would it come after a couple weeks of the girls constantly trying to make him a human pinball?

Oh, and how old is Keitaro when this happens? 15? 13? 8?
When he first freaked out and squished the stuffings out of the hoodlums harassing his family he was around 9, meaning it happened around 1986 (I assume Keitaro, who is 21 when the series starts, was born in 1977 - correct me if I'm wrong - and that LH starts in 1998).

Also, while he learned control through meditation, that control starts to break wen hes under heavy stress, and the repeated attacks he's subjected to as soon as he gets to Hinatasou manage to break it enough for him to flip. The only reason why ANYone in Hinata doesn't get broken in a million pieces is because:

1) He pauses instead of attacking Shinobu;

2) Haruka shows up just in time to calm him down completely.

Out of all the LH girls, the only ones who can calm him when he's rioting are Shinobu, Kanako and, to a lesser extent, Haruka. He's very violent towards anyone else, especially those who attack him, although he generally tends to ignore Mutsumi.
 

PCHeintz72

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1986 (I assume Keitaro, who is 21 when the series starts, was born in 1977 - correct me if I'm wrong - and
Actually, in Manga he is 19 at series start. However, i'm pretty sure he was 20 in the Anime.
 

GenocideHeart

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PCHeintz72 said:
1986 (I assume Keitaro, who is 21 when the series starts, was born in 1977 - correct me if I'm wrong - and
Actually, in Manga he is 19 at series start. However, i'm pretty sure he was 20 in the Anime.
That can't be correct, since I recall him being stated to be older than all the girls minus Mitsune, and the same age as Mutsumi (who failed Toudai twice like him)... and since Naru was at most 19 at the beginning, that makes Keitaro either 20 or at the very least several months older than Naru.

It doesn't add up. -_-
 

Lumias

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I thought Naru was 17, and I don't rememer Keitaro being 19, but I could be wrong there.
 

PCHeintz72

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GenocideHeart said:
PCHeintz72 said:
1986 (I assume Keitaro, who is 21 when the series starts, was born in 1977 - correct me if I'm wrong - and
Actually, in Manga he is 19 at series start. However, i'm pretty sure he was 20 in the Anime.
That can't be correct, since I recall him being stated to be older than all the girls minus Mitsune, and the same age as Mutsumi (who failed Toudai twice like him)... and since Naru was at most 19 at the beginning, that makes Keitaro either 20 or at the very least several months older than Naru.

It doesn't add up. -_-
No...

The ages are listed in the manga. Though I'm at work, recalling from memory.

Keitaro - 19
Kitsune - 19
Haruka - ? (this is literal, I rember them have a question mark for the age)
Naru - 17
Motoko - 15

I honestly cannot remember the age listed next to Su and Shinobu in the manga.
 

GenocideHeart

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It's kinda amusing, because the manga directly contradicts itself in at least two occasions, then.

One, when Mutsumi is mentioned to be the same age as Keitaro early on (which is compounded by the fact she, like him, failed twice the entrance exams).

Two, when Shinobu's *14th* birthday is retconned into her 13th in the databook by Akamatsu.

Ken-san may not be as skilled at royally fucking up with plotholes as Bakamoto, but he's no newbie at it either. Those are only the two most glaring plotholes that emerged.
 

Mighty Bob

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Suppose I'm not all that surprised that you already had something of an idea for a fic like this GH; though I am surprised that I've yet to see anyone else with a story like this given how popular the idea of an unknown Orochi-blood running around seems to be.

Does he get to have purple fire power like other of Orochi-blood, or did that go bye-bye when Orochi did (I've got that wiki-link still, but I'm too lazy to go refresh my memory :p ) I can only imagine that the girls (with the exception of Shinobu and Su, perhaps Kitsune as well depending on how disturbed she is) will want to get ridda poor Keitaro even more after an incident like that. Or Motoko might believe it her duty to destroy him for the good of others (He's already an evil pervert in her eyes, this would just make him and evil, dangerously powerfull pervert)
 

PCHeintz72

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GenocideHeart said:
It's kinda amusing, because the manga directly contradicts itself in at least two occasions, then.

One, when Mutsumi is mentioned to be the same age as Keitaro early on (which is compounded by the fact she, like him, failed twice the entrance exams).

Two, when Shinobu's *14th* birthday is retconned into her 13th in the databook by Akamatsu.

Ken-san may not be as skilled at royally fucking up with plotholes as Bakamoto, but he's no newbie at it either. Those are only the two most glaring plotholes that emerged.
Ok, I'm now at home. In addition to the first page of Manga 1 listing Keitaro as 19, and 4 when the promise was made, here is Manga vol. 1, page 97:

Room 201 Shinobu Maehara, seventh grader(12)
LandLord's Room Keitaro Urashima(19)
Room 205 Kitsune-Mitsune Konno(19)

Room 301 That Foreign Girl-Kaolla Su(13)
Room 302 Kendo-Motoko Aoyama(15)
Room 304 That Girl-Naru Narusegawa(17)

Although not stated, the picture and positioning of the rooms makes it clear Keitaro's room is 204.

It was somewhere else that the aunt was listed, can't find her just now, but it was definately followed by a question mark, as when I looked originally some time back I was hoping to find a definitive age.

Finally, I agree, there are a couple points in the series that I thought there are gaffs on the ages and timeline. But it is better than many other canon universes out there. Look at Ranma for instance.
 
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