Miscellanious Nanoha Ideas

bissek

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Well, Canal and Lina do have the same VA.

Of course, the important thing is to find a way to marginalize the absolute worst thing about LU: Milly Nocturne. She's just a petty, self-centered twit, without the skills to justify her ego.
 
Nanya said:
I really hate retelling seasons, not a lot can be changed too often.? =/
I've been working on a Nanoha AU where among other things Nanoha is obsessed with comic book superheroes and patterns her barrier jacket off a combination of the RX-78 Gundam and Captain America, Lindy nearly gets the TSAB expedition fried when they accidentally jump into a space battle between the US Navy and the Sectoids, Yuuno is convinced Nanoha has been brainwashed by an Orwellian nightmare dictatorship that exists largely only in his mind and Precia pulls a Horatio Caine with a pair of Kamina shades at one point. And that's all in season 1 alone.

You can change all sorts of shit if you want to. It's your fic.
 

ringlhach

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Epsilon said:
ringlhach said:
Nanya said:
"Or the Chaos magic will drive her insane and cause her to go on a violent rampage, killing thousands of people before she calms down."
And now we know where Material-S came from.
She's not insane. She's actually the most polite mass murderer ever next to Sailor Saturn.
Didn't say she wasn't... but you can be polite without being sane.

Nanya said:
The thought was slightly worrisome, since those were two of the strongest fire spells around, only the Blast Bomb was worse, and no human could cast that without magic amplification.
Isn't that what Devices do? :sweat:
 

holyknight

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ringlhach said:
Epsilon said:
ringlhach said:
Nanya said:
"Or the Chaos magic will drive her insane and cause her to go on a violent rampage, killing thousands of people before she calms down."
And now we know where Material-S came from.
She's not insane. She's actually the most polite mass murderer ever next to Sailor Saturn.
Didn't say she wasn't... but you can be polite without being sane.

Nanya said:
The thought was slightly worrisome, since those were two of the strongest fire spells around, only the Blast Bomb was worse, and no human could cast that without magic amplification.
Isn't that what Devices do? :sweat:
Yeah, but NOT to THAT scale, and the Intelligent Device mainly works with the energy channelling potential of the user in question. Nanoha here, its proving to be way beyond any known standards even for TSAB, and even slightly above Lina's own.....something that its product of factors to the moment of Nanoha's conception and birth.......
 

Nanya

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Here's some more.

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Fate sighed as she looked out into the ocean. "We only have six Jewel Seeds..." What she was planning on doing was stupid, insane and a little bit crazy. At this point, she didn't really care. "Mother..." She whispered to herself. All she wanted was her mother's love again. Closing her eyes, she thought back to the past week. While it wasn't easy with the Bureau there, she managed to still get up to six Jewel Seeds. Opening her eyes, a scene of that girl in white and her mother flashed before her eyes. "Nngh..." Why did such a scene leave her feeling so cold inside?

Oh well, she was going to deal with the Jewel Seeds, get back her mother's love and then figure out what she wanted in life.

She was sure of it.

(---)

Lina blinked as she finished up shop for the day. There was a pretty large spike of magical power just outside of the city. She idly wondered just what it was that could cause such a power spike. It was larger than anything that she had felt in years.

Despite the fact that she wanted to look into it, her first priority at the moment was to finish cleaning up the shop and closing down for the night.

"Mother always said, unless the whole world is doomed in this moment, you should never leave your business unattended." Lina muttered to herself, smirking lightly. Idly, she wondered just what her friends would say about her actually settling down a bit and opening up a bakery.

"Knowing them, they'd freak out." Oh well, it was a trait that ran in the family, her father had been a traveling mercenary, her mother was a sorceress and they ran a grocery store now. "Maybe they retired?" She shook her head. "Nah, Luna would never take over that business." Besides, it had only been fifteen years, she was sure her parents hadn't quit business yet.

Lina sighed as she felt the magic hang there for a bit longer before finally abating. As much as she had wanted to go take care of it herself, well, she had to trust her daughter, otherwise the girl would never be able to deal with threats that came up on her own later.

Shiro blinked as he walked into the room, it wasn't often he saw his wife banging her head on the counter. "What's wrong?"

"Gah! I just realized how much like my sister I really am!!" Lina screamed in horror and looked at Shiro with teary eyes. "Please tell me that I'm not a horrible person that likes to torment her family just so that they grow as a person."

Mentally laughing, Shiro hugged Lina tightly. "You aren't. I'm sure that you have a very good reason for doing whatever your doing with Nanoha."

Sighing as she leaned her head against his chest, Lina nodded and hugged him back. "I think so... I felt a major source of magic flare up a bit ago. It didn't feel malicious... Not like that last time, so I just thought to let Nanoha deal with it."

Shiro nodded at her. "It's okay." He smiled softly. "Besides, it's good for her, to get such experiences now rather than when she's fourteen and acting like an airhead."

Lina rolled her eyes, pulled back and lightly punched Shiro in the chest. "I told you what I thought about magic girl animes and how stupid the characters were." Seriously, was it that hard to find a female magic girl anime character that wasn't a whiny crybaby?

"I know, you prefer mecha." Shiro chuckled as Lina crossed her arms.

"Hmph! Those guys all have the right idea! If you never give up and go forth with courage, even 1% can become 100%." It was, after all, how she beat that shard of Shabranigdo that time.

"Next you'll be saying you can pierce the heavens."

"Nah!" Lina laughed along with Shiro. "I can make a blade that can shatter them though."

Shiro stopped laughing and blinked a few times. "Oh yeah... Forgot about that."

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I always figured that Lina would make an AWESOME Mecha pilot, just from her attitude. XD
 
Nanya - Dang it now I have another thread on this board I have to check to read the good stuff.

Change Subject away from funny stories that need to continue.

So Momoko has blue eyes and red hair? Ranma has blue eyes and Nodoka has red hair. What if Momoko and Nodoka were related and when Nanoha gets injured between A's and StrikerS they get together and send Ranma to help Nanoha recover and protect her? If you don't want to add Ranma there is also Hikaru from MKR.
 

zeebee1

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Just how much magical amplification will Nanoha get from cartridges? Imagine bomb blast combined with starlight breaker.
 
Excellion Giga Slave?
 

WarChild

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zeebee1 said:
Two times the world breaker, no deities needed.
Useless unless we got bonafide Demon Lords on the level of Shabranigdo... or even worse, the Dark Star/Vorfeed combo... otherwise the Giga Slave is plain overkill on anything else.
 
She used it on Stephanie Meyer.
 

nick012000

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Nanya said:
"Mother always said, unless the whole world is doomed in this moment, you should never leave your business unattended." Lina muttered to herself, smirking lightly. Idly, she wondered just what her friends would say about her actually settling down a bit and opening up a bakery.

"Knowing them, they'd freak out." Oh well, it was a trait that ran in the family, her father had been a traveling mercenary, her mother was a sorceress and they ran a grocery store now. "Maybe they retired?" She shook her head. "Nah, Luna would never take over that business." Besides, it had only been fifteen years, she was sure her parents hadn't quit business yet.
Heh. Maybe the TSAB would be able to find her homeworld and reunite her with that side of her family? I'm sure Nanoha and her siblings would love to meet their maternal grandparents. :p
 
While it is true that the Dragon Slave might be uncastable in the Nanoha verse that doesn't mean Nanoha can't modify it to suite Mid-Childan needs as she already did it with Val Flare.

Dragon Slave if I recall correctly (it has been a while since I watched/read Slayers) calls upon the power of Shabranigdo to launch a magical equivalent of a nuke. Instead of evil Mazoku as a source, she could use the residual mana left in the air, like Starlight Breaker, give it a major boost in power the result is...

Starlight Slayer (based on the uncorrupted name of the Dragon Slave spell)

As for Nanoha's Blast Bomb derivative...Divine Bomber? Starlight Blast? Pink Nuke?
 

kuopiofi

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Nanya, do you plan to post this to FF.net at some point?

For that matter, I think your story would actually belong to previews more than here: just for how long it is...
 

Xon

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Nanya said:
Hmm...? I hadn't thought about using Resurrection on Alicia.? But, I thought there were limits, even in Slayers, to bringing someone back from the dead.
Xellos explains it sometime during season 2, during when they explain the pact of immortality IIRC that as long as a human isn't brain dead, they can be brought back. But even the Mazoku can't unscramble a human brain after it's died.

But in the OVA's it is a plot point that time-travel can be used to resurect a whole village :p
 

holyknight

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......
 

holyknight

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Xon said:
Nanya said:
Hmm...á I hadn't thought about using Resurrection on Alicia.á But, I thought there were limits, even in Slayers, to bringing someone back from the dead.
Xellos explains it sometime during season 2, during when they explain the pact of immortality IIRC that as long as a human isn't brain dead, they can be brought back. But even the Mazoku can't unscramble a human brain after it's died.

But in the OVA's it is a plot point that time-travel can be used to resurect a whole village :p
....That includes JUST dead, then put on Magical Stasis, bodies or not?

shadowzerover5 said:
While it is true that the Dragon Slave might be uncastable in the Nanoha verse that doesn't mean Nanoha can't modify it to suite Mid-Childan needs as she already did it with Val Flare.

Dragon Slave if I recall correctly (it has been a while since I watched/read Slayers) calls upon the power of Shabranigdo to launch a magical equivalent of a nuke. Instead of evil Mazoku as a source, she could use the residual mana left in the air, like Starlight Breaker, give it a major boost in power the result is...

Starlight Slayer (based on the uncorrupted name of the Dragon Slave spell)

As for Nanoha's Blast Bomb derivative...Divine Bomber? Starlight Blast? Pink Nuke?
Flare Nova. Simple and to the point. Think on how destructive its a Nova when it goes off...
 

bissek

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No. What Dragon Slave does is calls on Shaburanigdo's power to annihilate the Astral self of the target. All energy not needed to do so then bleeds out into the physical plane in the form of an explosion. The size of the explosion is not based on the strength of the spell, but on the ratio of the strength of the spell to the Astral strength of the target. If you get the power level just right, you could Dragon Slave a fly and not scorch the table it's resting on. The reason Lina usually gets big explosions is because she doesn't even try to balance the power levels - she just puts as much power into it that she can and hopes that it's enough. In the second, third and fourth movies, Lina casts a Dragon Slave that gets blocked (In the second movie by magical armor, the third because her casting medium drained off too much power, the fourth because of a powerful shielding spell). In all three cases there was no explosion at all. When Lina casts it against something with no Astral self at all (Such as when she cast it on the landscape in Slayers Return just to get the explosive shockwave), the explosion is even larger than normal.

If Precia could download Alicia's memories and upload them into Fate's head, than I'd say that Alicia isn't totally braindead just yet (or wasn't at the time of Fate's birth).
 

WarChild

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nick012000 said:
Heh. Maybe the TSAB would be able to find her homeworld and reunite her with that side of her family? I'm sure Nanoha and her siblings would love to meet their maternal grandparents. :p
I think this would eventually happen anyway. The TSAB would be crazy to not figure out that Lina isn't from Earth originally.
 

Nanya

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Here's some more...

...

Sorry about some copying from the anime.

Hope that there was enough changes though.

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Fate looked at the nine Jewel Seeds she had in her possession. "Not enough." Her mother wasn't giong to be happy with this.

"Fate..." Arf looked at her, causing the small blond to blink in surprise. "Do we need to do this? Do we really need this?" As smart as Fate was, she was being an idiot. "Why don't we run away?"

Fate smiled softly at her familiar. Such a good girl. "It's okay. You'll see." She just needed to find a way to... "Arf?"

"Yes?"

"Get in contact with that woman..." Fate closed her eyes as she thought about it. "Her daughter... I want to face her."

Arf blinked but nodded, wondering just what Fate had in mind.

(---)

"A challenge?" Nanoha blinked as she talked to the girl on the phone. "Um, sure, I don't mind." Honestly, it was more than she had thought that she'd get from the other girl.

"Good. I'll see you at the beach where the Bureau interrupted us the first time in an hour."

Nanoha blinked a few times as she looked at her phone after Fate hung up. "Mom, Yuuno-kun, I need to go somewhere, wanna help?"

(---)

Arf, in her wolf form, looked up as Nanoha, Yuuno and Lina came into the area. She tensed upon seeing Lina, but the redhead just smirked at her. "Fate, they're here."

The blond girl walked out from behind a large rock, pointing her device at Nanoha, her eyes were soft, but determined. "I want to face you, a one-on-one fight to the finish, winner gets all the Jewel Seeds."

Nanoha nodded as she called up her Barrier Jacket and both girls floated into the air.

Lina shook her head. "Kids..." She let loose a sigh. Oh well, she hadn't been much different when she was younger, who was she to judge?

(---)

Nanoha looked at Fate.

Fate looked at Nanoha.

It seemed like that was all that they were doing to those just watching with their eyes and no other senses.

To those looking with magical power, the two were crackling with magical energy that was barely being held back and on a hair trigger.

"Photon Lancer." Four yellow balls appeared around Fate's body.

Nanoha's eyes widened for a moment. "Raising Heart..."

"Alright." Her device swapped to shooting mode as she pointed the tip at Fate.

"Fire!" Fate yelled, her four spheres launching at Nanoha at high speeds. They were fast, strong, and powerful.

"Divine Flame Buster!" Nanoha yelled, a pink circle appearing under her as a shearing white-hot jet of magical fire blasted from the tip, engulfing the shots, making them detonate prematurely, before crashing against a shield that Fate hasitly threw up at the last moment.

On the ground, everyone had to flinch away and cover their eyes from the bright light that lit up the sky. It was like a second sun was in the sky.

'Wow, and people said I had a knack for overkill.' Lina chuckled to herself as the attack abated.

Fate lowered her arm and the shield as the attack finally ended. "What?" She trembled slightly, panting slightly, that had been a lot of effort to stop that attack, but even so, the heat was incredible, almost as if she was in a blast furnace. Heck, she could feel the heat on her skin directly.

...So why did she feel a draft? And why was that other girl blushing and looking away?

"Um, Fate-chan... Look down..." Nanoha pointed and Fate blinked, doing just that.

"Eeek!" Fate blushed and threw her hands over her now naked body as the remnants of her clothes turned to ash and faded away.

On the ground, Yuuno had to turn away, his face bright red. "I thought Barrier Jackets were stronger than that."

Lina rolled her eyes at him. "Probably, but something hot enough to be felt from fifty feet away is probably hot enough to turn clothes to ash." She then giggled while Fate used that moment to reform her Barrier Jacket. "Plus it's funny."

Yuuno would have said something about how Fate's hair and skin should have burned up before her clothing did, but he figured that it was just because Fate or Bardiche regulated more defensive magic to keeping her basically safe, well, other than her dignity. If he was a pervert, he would have enjoyed the sight of Fate naked in front of him, as short as it was.

Fate was blushing and trembling slightly in anger. "...You did that on purpose."

"Um, not really." Nanoha sweat-dropped heavily, before throwing up a shield as several lightning bolts crashed against it. "Sorry!"

"Scythe Form."

Nanoha's eyes widened as Fate materialized right in front of her, her scythe smashing into Nanoha's barrier, causing it to crackle. Grimacing and with one eye closed, Nanoha looked at Fate as a pink circle appeared under her feet. "Sorry, that won't work."

"Axel Bolt."

Fate's eyes widened as she was covered in pink lightning, sending her flying away with a loud crackle.

Nanoha smiled. "Good job, Raising Heart." It was just a Mono Volt that she had mixed into her own barriers if someone got close. She giggled at the way Fate's hair was all poofy now. "Sorry."

Fate closed her eyes as a yellow magic circle appeared under her feet. "Thunder... Rage!"

Nanoha's eyes widened as a smaller circle appeared in front of Fate before she punched her device through it, causing a powerful magic strike was launched, crashing into her barrier, before exploding and kicking up dust, though how that was possible, the girl wasn't sure. When the dust cleared, Nanoha gasped as she saw several golden orbs around her.

"Fire!" Fate yelled her command out.

Nanoha closed her eyes and tapped the red gem of Raising Heart. "Digger..." She flew backwards towards the ocean, a line of lightning crackling from the sphere to her finger tip. "BOLT!" She snapped her hand forward, the lightning crackling forward and around the bolts, causing them to detonate prematurely.

Fate grimaced, and from the way that the girl in white was going, it didn't look like she was going to stop anytime soon. "What is she?"

In truth, Nanoha felt a major headache while she was doing these spells. It wasn't that it was hard, it was the fact that she was running more massive calculations faster than she should have been able to. Even with Raising Heart there helping her out, she could feel her mind getting a bit foggy. She wished that she had more time to work on these spells than she had.

(---)

Lina frowned slightly. "...She's going to lose."

"Who? Nanoha or Fate?"

"Yes." Lina nodded, not answering Yuuno's question.

The boy looked at her in confusion before looking back up. From what he had seen, Nanoha was in the driver's seat.

...

So why did he feel like Nanoha was going to lose at the current way things were going?

(---)

Fate grimaced as she dodged more Divine Shooters, before finally being forced to block them. After they crashed into her barrier, she saw that Nanoha had more volleys ready. "Not this time... Photon Lancer!"

"Fire."

Several yellow bolts raced out, colliding with Nanoha's pink shots, causing them to detonate and create smoke between the two of them.

Nanoha grimaced as she felt her arms and legs get pulled to the sides as binds wrapped around her arms.

(---)

"Lightning binds?!" Arf gasped as she saw what was going on. "This isn't good!"

"Nanoha!" Yuuno looked like he was about to do something when he felt Lina's hand on his shoulder. "But..."

"This is her fight." Lina smiled softly. "Let's just trust her, okay?"

The two were silent, but they nodded before turning back to the fight.

(---)

"Photon Lancer... Full Power." Fate grimaced slightly, this was straining her magic to its limits, but she would do it, and win. "Fire!"

She watched, panting slightly as her full attack strength closed in before exploding. "Got her." She closed her eyes and tried to catch her breath. She made a mental note to get more training when this was over, she was burning through too much magic at once.

"Divine... Buster!"

Fate looked up, gasping as Nanoha fired a powerful energy beam.

"Defensor." Bardiche spoke up as Fate threw up her hand and a golden barrier blocked the shot, but like with the Flame Buster before, the effects were causing her clothes to tear and shred.

Grunting from exertion and grimacing as she was being slowly pushed back, Fate wondered just what Nanoha had done to get so good in such a short amount of time. After the attack ended, Fate panted heavily, before blinking as she was bound up.

"This is the end, Fate..." Nanoha said softly. "Raising Heart taught me this variation of Divine Buster... It glows with an awesome power! Full Power! STARLIGHT BREAKER!!!"

Everyone, even those on the ship off the planet stared, wide-eyed at the new attack as Nanoha fired down, blasting through Fate and causing a small tidal wave to be created in the process.

Lina chuckled after the attack ended. 'Definitely my little girl.' It might have been interesting to test that against a Dragon Slave, but she didn't think that the landscape around them would survive.

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couldn't help but slip in a little G-Gundam there.
 

zeebee1

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With cartridges and spell fusion demons aren't required to destroy the world.
 

bissek

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The only reason that the TSAB allowed that duel in canon is so that they could set up a barrier to prevent collateral damage - and so that they could put a trace on Fate in the event that she won or fled. The TSAB wasn't contacted in this fight, so things are going to be messy.
 
Precia is scheduled to interfere at the end, which will probably result in RAGNA BLADE TO TEH FAEC soon, fellow readers!
 

Nanya

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Dark Knight Gafgar said:
Precia is scheduled to interfere at the end, which will probably result in RAGNA BLADE TO TEH FAEC soon, fellow readers!
Close, but not quite...

I've got something else in mind for her...
 

windfalcon

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Oh lord.. like Mother like Daughter...

Yuuno and Nanoha were walking through the hallways of the Ashura when Yuuno suddenly tensed, his grip on Nanoha's hand tightening when he turned angrily towards the pair of TSAB crewmen that just passed them by.

"Yuuno? What's wrong?" Nanoha asked curiously.

"Those men... didn't you hear them? It's something I hear every time we pass some by, they always whisper it!"

"What do you mean?"

"I... didn't want to say it myself but... they've been calling you the White Devil since we got on here and... why are you smiling?"

"This is great! I didn;t know they watched Gundam! And to be given the title of the first pilot, Amuro Ray?! Mom will be SO jealous! Or proud! I can;t wait to tell her! Why would you keep this from me?!"

The entire time, Yuuno just looked on confused. This was.. a good thing?

The crew of the Asura didn't quite understand why the little girl smiled brightly at them, though when the Operation against Precia started and Nanoha called out 'White Devil, Engaging!', a majority of them felt a chill go down their spines... especially when they saw the sheer amount of damage she did when she was truly serious.
 
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