Shiakou said:
MOAR!!!
DEM GLORIUS IMAGES
THE MOE COMPELS YOU TO WRITE MOAR!!!
THAT IMAGE IS WHY I BEGAN THIS FIC.
@Elf:
The & usage is used when I try to indicate a title, "Busty & Nice", "Lithe & Cranky" etc.
It pleases me to please you, oh mistress. :hail:
@WizardOne:
Specifications plox, I'll work it out and try to make him better if you give criticism.
I'm assuming my stiff attempts at humor were the source of your dissatisfaction, it's the little pieces of humanity coming through from the cold and calculating exterior, awkwardly.
Gonna continue by the latest at weekend, if not by tomorrow. Dunno about my schedule, I have some stuff that needs attending, though I do have a plan for where I wanna take this fic now.
I could use someone to bounce ideas off of.
Plot Handwave:
Ilya realizes she's fucked, tries something desperate, uses the Dress of Heaven which allows her to use the Fifth Magic to take his leaving "soul" out, hold it from leaving long enough for his prana to recharged enough for him to survive a moment longer.
She used the 5th magic in the bad ending where Shirou gives in to Ilya and gets his soul transferred into some small doll.
I'm debating whether Ilya could recharge him while using the 5th Magic, or if she had one of the maids get frisky.