Laundry Files, The Apocalypse Codex.
It starts out well. People moving up, getting organizations prepared for the hell that they're pretty sure is coming in a few years time
But, sad to say, this feels like the least professional of them (in universe that is). I can't figure out why Howard doesn't make contact with superiors when it's incredibly clear that he can. His conversation with Pete feels forced (in fact Pete feels forced) and could have been handled in many different (safer) ways. When they know they have an imminent disaster they
don't do the smart thing and call for the OPG (Official People with Guns? ) ASAP.
A minor Lovecraft note, it's weird that people seem to be so freaked out about Nyarlathotep. Lovecraft and his successors depicted the thing as something that was already awake and walking about as the ultimate Lovecraftian troll. I could understand being freaked out about some of the others, but why did Stross insist on this one being the nightmare scenario?
And from the outside, no Mormon is exactly going to appreciate being called not really Christian. Persephone feels uncomfortably close to being a Sue. If more of the story were devoted to her I think she would cross that line. And I really have to note that Stross seems to go out of his way to make the Chamber and its Americans
evil. Mind giving an explanation for how the Laundry and its associates ended up so squeaky clean for the setting while the American counterpart makes the Abyss look into them and go
Jesus, Mr. Stross?
I'll try, but do the 'good' guys (e.g. Robb Stark) ever stop take suicidally stupid decisions just so the 'bad' guys can win?
It varies. And sometimes the stupidity is justified.
The series in general has a serious problem though. It's clear that the two big, world shaking things are going to be Dany and her dragons and the Walkers. Unfortunately it's written so that the majority of attention is given to the civil war and so the audience doesn't care as much about Dany or the Walkers. What we've got is the interesting story that has far less importance ultimately and two less interesting stories that
are going to be important but for now really are just people standing around, saying things and occasionally getting killed.