Naruto Reimu's Writer Notes
- Thread starter Daneel Rush
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I just started reading Daneel's story today, and I do like the concept. But I am confused as to where this Hinata becomes this wandering uberwarrior concept came from. I like it, I am just curious where this is coming from, storywise.
Is it the idea that many people over the years have contributed to chipping away Hinata's personality but it was Naruto not accepting her as a mate and her love for him that drove her over the edge? I like the idea of Hinata becoming the 'Crimson Goddess of Hourai' and the 'Bloody Sun', but I'd like to know how that happens.
Also, where does the Gods and Goddesses play into this fic? I'm confused. And how does Naruto define overkill with his powers. It's implied from some of the snippets that he becomes some kind of ninja WMD with his powers. Where does this come from?
Please answer these important questions, Daneel!
Is it the idea that many people over the years have contributed to chipping away Hinata's personality but it was Naruto not accepting her as a mate and her love for him that drove her over the edge? I like the idea of Hinata becoming the 'Crimson Goddess of Hourai' and the 'Bloody Sun', but I'd like to know how that happens.
Also, where does the Gods and Goddesses play into this fic? I'm confused. And how does Naruto define overkill with his powers. It's implied from some of the snippets that he becomes some kind of ninja WMD with his powers. Where does this come from?
Please answer these important questions, Daneel!
Morikawa Ayaka
- She considers the First Hokage her father, and every single person born in Konoha her child. Despite her own child-like looks, she's as mature as her mother, having inherited her power, knowledge and memories.
- She doesn't like it that the pseudo-religion that allows her to "feed" on the faith of the people of Konoha is called the "Will of Fire." She also doesn't like that the beautiful region they live in is called "Fire Country." Not only is it because of the use of that word anathema to her, but because it impedes her from fully exploiting the power of faith and human belief.
If the country changed its name to something like "Forest Country," and she could spread the "Will of the Forest" beyond the walls of Konoha, she could easily flood the entire country with greenery and raise her rank at least one level, if not straight to A-rank.
- While she cares for every Konoha-born citizen with the love of a mother, she has a special spot for those who actually carry her divine blood in their veins, especially if they have unknowingly embraced her blessings and dogma.
It breaks her heart to see what Tsunade has become.
- She has engaged in sexual intercourse with all four Hokages. It has pretty much become a Hokage Initiation Ritual. She has also birthed the children of three of them.
Not even she knows what she would do should a female Hokage pop out.
- On a side note, while she does consider Senju Hashirama her father, that in no way stopped her from having sex with him.
Goddesses are beyond such moral burdens.
Danzou
- Most unfortunately for him, his ambitions were never meant to flourish, not in a place like Konoha. He could not be blamed for this, though. He could not be blamed for being ignorant.
How could he possibly know that, even if he had somehow managed to reach the seat of Hokage, Morikawa Ayaka would have smote him on the spot?
- Since the very beginning, Danzou knew he'd regret allowing the Third to leave the vessel of the Nine Tails under the care of Houraisan. At first, he thought it would be because the immense potential of a Jinchuuriki would be wasted with the boy permanently blinded and taken care off like an invalid.
By the time Uzumaki Naruto was a Jounin, Danzou was wishing that would have been the case.
- All in all, Danzou was a brilliant man, a cunning strategist and a very skilled ninja in his prime.
His only fault was being born in the wrong village.
Irye Kohaku
- Around 1100 years ago, there was a Celestial who sought to end her boredom. Her name was Houraisan Kaguya. Using her powers, she transformed herself into a newborn infant and descended to Earth. Found and raised by a bamboo cutter and his wife, she grew and lived to become an astoundingly beautiful woman, to the point that tales of her beauty reached very distant lands.
Men from all eight directions arrived to the humble bamboo forest to seek Kaguya's hand, but the mischievous, merciless Celestial contemptuously sent them to their deaths by challenging them to her Impossible Requests.
- On the slopes of that same mountain, adjacent to the bamboo forest where Kaguya lived, there was a small, humble village. In the outskirts of that village lived a young mother and her very beautiful child. This little girl, with her wondrous smile, proper manners and bright, lively eyes, was well loved by all the villagers.
While her mother worked hard every day for their daily sustenance, doing laundry and other chores for several families, her daughter was a good girl and patiently waited for her return at sundown.
- One young and greedy man, the son of the feudal lord of a distant land, when confronted by Kaguya's challenge, spat at the woman in disgust and tried to take her by force. Kaguya used her powers to take her human parents and escape. Outraged, the prince and his entourage of soldiers fell upon the village, not willing to leave without reaping any reward after the very long trip to meet Kaguya. The lovely girl was forced to watch in horror how her mother was brutally raped by a group of about ten soldiers, the lustful, berserk ravagers taking turns to penetrate her.
Even after that, the valiant woman stood against them when the unsatisfied assailants attempted to do the same to her eight-year-old daughter.
- Two nights later, the bleeding, dirtied and aching little girl was struggling her way up the mountain. The orgy of lustful savagery continued behind her, as the arrogant prince and his soldiers killed men for sport and raped women for mindless pleasure. Her mother was killed for her insolence, and her loins hurt after suffering hours of unwilling debauchery.
So, the girl climbed up the mountain, driven by no other reason than a primal necessity to get away from the village she had once called home.
- At the top of the mountain, she had an encounter that changed her life forever.
- Twenty-four hours later, there was no human being alive in that mountain anymore. When Kaguya's adoptive parents returned to their humble home a year later, carrying with them a child of their own, they found everything burned to ashes.
There was no bamboo forest anymore. There was no village anymore. There was nothing but endless plains of black ash.
Curiously enough, the blackened land turned out surprisingly fertile.
- She considers the First Hokage her father, and every single person born in Konoha her child. Despite her own child-like looks, she's as mature as her mother, having inherited her power, knowledge and memories.
- She doesn't like it that the pseudo-religion that allows her to "feed" on the faith of the people of Konoha is called the "Will of Fire." She also doesn't like that the beautiful region they live in is called "Fire Country." Not only is it because of the use of that word anathema to her, but because it impedes her from fully exploiting the power of faith and human belief.
If the country changed its name to something like "Forest Country," and she could spread the "Will of the Forest" beyond the walls of Konoha, she could easily flood the entire country with greenery and raise her rank at least one level, if not straight to A-rank.
- While she cares for every Konoha-born citizen with the love of a mother, she has a special spot for those who actually carry her divine blood in their veins, especially if they have unknowingly embraced her blessings and dogma.
It breaks her heart to see what Tsunade has become.
- She has engaged in sexual intercourse with all four Hokages. It has pretty much become a Hokage Initiation Ritual. She has also birthed the children of three of them.
Not even she knows what she would do should a female Hokage pop out.
- On a side note, while she does consider Senju Hashirama her father, that in no way stopped her from having sex with him.
Goddesses are beyond such moral burdens.
Danzou
- Most unfortunately for him, his ambitions were never meant to flourish, not in a place like Konoha. He could not be blamed for this, though. He could not be blamed for being ignorant.
How could he possibly know that, even if he had somehow managed to reach the seat of Hokage, Morikawa Ayaka would have smote him on the spot?
- Since the very beginning, Danzou knew he'd regret allowing the Third to leave the vessel of the Nine Tails under the care of Houraisan. At first, he thought it would be because the immense potential of a Jinchuuriki would be wasted with the boy permanently blinded and taken care off like an invalid.
By the time Uzumaki Naruto was a Jounin, Danzou was wishing that would have been the case.
- All in all, Danzou was a brilliant man, a cunning strategist and a very skilled ninja in his prime.
His only fault was being born in the wrong village.
Irye Kohaku
- Around 1100 years ago, there was a Celestial who sought to end her boredom. Her name was Houraisan Kaguya. Using her powers, she transformed herself into a newborn infant and descended to Earth. Found and raised by a bamboo cutter and his wife, she grew and lived to become an astoundingly beautiful woman, to the point that tales of her beauty reached very distant lands.
Men from all eight directions arrived to the humble bamboo forest to seek Kaguya's hand, but the mischievous, merciless Celestial contemptuously sent them to their deaths by challenging them to her Impossible Requests.
- On the slopes of that same mountain, adjacent to the bamboo forest where Kaguya lived, there was a small, humble village. In the outskirts of that village lived a young mother and her very beautiful child. This little girl, with her wondrous smile, proper manners and bright, lively eyes, was well loved by all the villagers.
While her mother worked hard every day for their daily sustenance, doing laundry and other chores for several families, her daughter was a good girl and patiently waited for her return at sundown.
- One young and greedy man, the son of the feudal lord of a distant land, when confronted by Kaguya's challenge, spat at the woman in disgust and tried to take her by force. Kaguya used her powers to take her human parents and escape. Outraged, the prince and his entourage of soldiers fell upon the village, not willing to leave without reaping any reward after the very long trip to meet Kaguya. The lovely girl was forced to watch in horror how her mother was brutally raped by a group of about ten soldiers, the lustful, berserk ravagers taking turns to penetrate her.
Even after that, the valiant woman stood against them when the unsatisfied assailants attempted to do the same to her eight-year-old daughter.
- Two nights later, the bleeding, dirtied and aching little girl was struggling her way up the mountain. The orgy of lustful savagery continued behind her, as the arrogant prince and his soldiers killed men for sport and raped women for mindless pleasure. Her mother was killed for her insolence, and her loins hurt after suffering hours of unwilling debauchery.
So, the girl climbed up the mountain, driven by no other reason than a primal necessity to get away from the village she had once called home.
- At the top of the mountain, she had an encounter that changed her life forever.
- Twenty-four hours later, there was no human being alive in that mountain anymore. When Kaguya's adoptive parents returned to their humble home a year later, carrying with them a child of their own, they found everything burned to ashes.
There was no bamboo forest anymore. There was no village anymore. There was nothing but endless plains of black ash.
Curiously enough, the blackened land turned out surprisingly fertile.
Daneel, what you've written here is amazing. Few people can characterize Supernatural beings in any degree of accuracy, but you've managed to come up with an entire cosmology of creatures who have their own culture as opposed to just expanding on humanity.
Really amazing stuff.
Thank you for writing.
Really amazing stuff.
Thank you for writing.
Damn, what the hell happened on the volcano? I'm pretty sure she meet either Princess Sakuya or her elder sister. I'm leaning to the second since she's a deity with power over the immortal and unchanging and with the number of years that passed.
So, what is she now? A second immortal created from the actions of Kaguya? A different Mokou?
So, what is she now? A second immortal created from the actions of Kaguya? A different Mokou?
Well, a lot of stuff will be copy-pasted to Kairyokuranshin, so I'm not particularly bothered. The problems with Fuujinrokz really got to me; I just couldn't write one more word.
If you're insistent on reviving this topic, though, go ahead. I'll do my best to try to give you a conclusion. Everything about the setting and the storyline remains unperturbed in my brain, after all.
If you're insistent on reviving this topic, though, go ahead. I'll do my best to try to give you a conclusion. Everything about the setting and the storyline remains unperturbed in my brain, after all.
Don't think too much of this; I just took a look at my old threads what with the forum move and all, and then noticed there were some requests I never answered to. I kind of felt like the proper thing would be to at least catch up with those.
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Sarutobi, set 2
- When it comes to talent, Sarutobi Hiruzen was not particularly above average. He made up for that with sheer dedication, countless sleepless nights and the privilege of being born in Konoha to partake of the best instruction an aspiring shinobi could ever hope to receive.
- He learned Taijutsu from Senju Tobirama and Houraisan Saya, and Ninjutsu and Genjutsu from Senju Hashirama. From Shiki he learned not only the art of seals, but also the skills of an administrator, a trader and a shrewd politician. Hiruzen was the greatest Hokage because he was nourished to become the best.
- Admittedly, of all the Hokages, Hiruzen was the one who connected the most with Morikawa Ayaka, at least as “friend and friend†and as “man and womanâ€. In the same way, of the Hokages, Hiruzen was by far Ayaka’s favorite.
- No matter how he looks at it, he finds the fact that Konohamaru and Tsunade are half-sisters hilarious.
Tsunade, Set 2
- The one good thing of being Hokage, Tsunade found, was that she did not have to do much in the way of fighting. She had never been particularly fond of it, so it felt good to send the likes of Hinata to take care of the messy stuff.
- Speaking of Hinata, Tsunade was not as surprised as she thought she should be when she actually managed to outlive the infamous Hyuuga leader. If anything, she just felt pity for the poor girl, so broken she was.
- Some of her detractors tried to lash at her by suggesting her having an unhealthy, physical interest in Houraisan Naruto. Such a thing was far from the truth, but she would not deny that being with that young lad made her feel so very much younger.
Hanabi, set 4
- When Naruto declared that, should he have a daughter, he’d name her “Reimu,†Hanabi was the only one who understood why. More like, she was the one who figured out the kanji Naruto was thinking of.
- Hanabi would have two dangerous fights even before she actually became a Kunoichi. The first would take place during the Sound-Sand invasion when she was eight years old. The second would take place during a trip to the Fire Country capital less than two years later, a few months before Naruto returned to Konoha. It could be said her career had an early start to match its early end.
- Hyuuga Hanabi experienced frightening amounts of pain in her life, both physical and emotional. She endured it because all those painful experiences were necessary to protect that most precious of all her bonds. She never regretted it, not even as her body wasted away and pulled her to an early demise. Everything was worth the joy that was living by that person’s side.
Pain
- It could be said that Nagato murdering the Dragon Queen was the event that triggered the end of the Age of Gods.
- Pain was powerful. Frighteningly so. Hinata had to run away in shame after challenging him so confidently. Saya would have perished had Naruto and Itachi not shown up in time to save her. In the end, he fell to betrayal. It was the most obvious, most suitable end for this pitiful person, undefeated in direct combat but utterly inept at understanding the world around him.
- Even if Pain was used as a tool by so many different people, it cannot be denied that his ruinous deeds indirectly were the cause behind much good. The secrets of Shiki Fuujin and the Death God’s succession, the fall of the heinous Elemental God of Fire and humanity’s awareness of the incoming Dragonwar; all these things were made possible because of him and, if looked in retrospective, allow those who remember Nagato to do so with a more positive light.
Konan
- Konan lived her entire life in the shadow of Yahiko’s charisma and Nagato’s power. She was a content woman, who in her heart of hearts prayed for the day they could just stop plotting and fighting and just leave peaceful lives together.
- Perhaps, only perhaps, Konan could have pulled her orphan friends out of the path of warfare before they stepped in too deep. Perhaps, only perhaps, they could have put behind their anger and disappointment at the world’s unfairness and lived simple lives in a plot of land somewhere. It’s impossible to tell how different the world would have been had this girl found the courage to voice her truest wish to her disheartened companions.
- In the end, Konan was a feeble woman who met a feeble end. She happened to stand in the way of the worst possible opponent, and she caught her in the worst possible mood. She never amounted to much of anything, and her pass through the world was forgotten as quickly as her ashes dispersed in the wind.
Kabuto
- Like a cockroach, Kabuto survived through everything, living to become a thorn in the Sixth Hokage’s side for many years. Naruto firmly believed Kabuto antagonized him just for the hell of it. In a way, Naruto was the person closest to understanding Yakushi Kabuto.
- Many people, even long after Kabuto’s death, wondered where his loyalties laid. The answer was “nowhereâ€. Yakushi Kabuto was loyal to nobody but himself. He simply reveled in the most dangerous of games, playing ally and enemy of all if only for the chance to strike at the right moment and delight in the sight of those who believed themselves great crushed beneath his feet.
- If there is a person Kabuto could be considered “loyal†to, it was precisely Naruto. The boy was never anything but honest in all his interactions with the bespectacled nin, and Kabuto acknowledged that. In gratitude towards the one person who acted sincerely and unreservedly towards him, Kabuto swore never to lie to Houraisan Naruto. Of course, that only meant showering the poor lad with obscure half-truths and misdirections.
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Sarutobi, set 2
- When it comes to talent, Sarutobi Hiruzen was not particularly above average. He made up for that with sheer dedication, countless sleepless nights and the privilege of being born in Konoha to partake of the best instruction an aspiring shinobi could ever hope to receive.
- He learned Taijutsu from Senju Tobirama and Houraisan Saya, and Ninjutsu and Genjutsu from Senju Hashirama. From Shiki he learned not only the art of seals, but also the skills of an administrator, a trader and a shrewd politician. Hiruzen was the greatest Hokage because he was nourished to become the best.
- Admittedly, of all the Hokages, Hiruzen was the one who connected the most with Morikawa Ayaka, at least as “friend and friend†and as “man and womanâ€. In the same way, of the Hokages, Hiruzen was by far Ayaka’s favorite.
- No matter how he looks at it, he finds the fact that Konohamaru and Tsunade are half-sisters hilarious.
Tsunade, Set 2
- The one good thing of being Hokage, Tsunade found, was that she did not have to do much in the way of fighting. She had never been particularly fond of it, so it felt good to send the likes of Hinata to take care of the messy stuff.
- Speaking of Hinata, Tsunade was not as surprised as she thought she should be when she actually managed to outlive the infamous Hyuuga leader. If anything, she just felt pity for the poor girl, so broken she was.
- Some of her detractors tried to lash at her by suggesting her having an unhealthy, physical interest in Houraisan Naruto. Such a thing was far from the truth, but she would not deny that being with that young lad made her feel so very much younger.
Hanabi, set 4
- When Naruto declared that, should he have a daughter, he’d name her “Reimu,†Hanabi was the only one who understood why. More like, she was the one who figured out the kanji Naruto was thinking of.
- Hanabi would have two dangerous fights even before she actually became a Kunoichi. The first would take place during the Sound-Sand invasion when she was eight years old. The second would take place during a trip to the Fire Country capital less than two years later, a few months before Naruto returned to Konoha. It could be said her career had an early start to match its early end.
- Hyuuga Hanabi experienced frightening amounts of pain in her life, both physical and emotional. She endured it because all those painful experiences were necessary to protect that most precious of all her bonds. She never regretted it, not even as her body wasted away and pulled her to an early demise. Everything was worth the joy that was living by that person’s side.
Pain
- It could be said that Nagato murdering the Dragon Queen was the event that triggered the end of the Age of Gods.
- Pain was powerful. Frighteningly so. Hinata had to run away in shame after challenging him so confidently. Saya would have perished had Naruto and Itachi not shown up in time to save her. In the end, he fell to betrayal. It was the most obvious, most suitable end for this pitiful person, undefeated in direct combat but utterly inept at understanding the world around him.
- Even if Pain was used as a tool by so many different people, it cannot be denied that his ruinous deeds indirectly were the cause behind much good. The secrets of Shiki Fuujin and the Death God’s succession, the fall of the heinous Elemental God of Fire and humanity’s awareness of the incoming Dragonwar; all these things were made possible because of him and, if looked in retrospective, allow those who remember Nagato to do so with a more positive light.
Konan
- Konan lived her entire life in the shadow of Yahiko’s charisma and Nagato’s power. She was a content woman, who in her heart of hearts prayed for the day they could just stop plotting and fighting and just leave peaceful lives together.
- Perhaps, only perhaps, Konan could have pulled her orphan friends out of the path of warfare before they stepped in too deep. Perhaps, only perhaps, they could have put behind their anger and disappointment at the world’s unfairness and lived simple lives in a plot of land somewhere. It’s impossible to tell how different the world would have been had this girl found the courage to voice her truest wish to her disheartened companions.
- In the end, Konan was a feeble woman who met a feeble end. She happened to stand in the way of the worst possible opponent, and she caught her in the worst possible mood. She never amounted to much of anything, and her pass through the world was forgotten as quickly as her ashes dispersed in the wind.
Kabuto
- Like a cockroach, Kabuto survived through everything, living to become a thorn in the Sixth Hokage’s side for many years. Naruto firmly believed Kabuto antagonized him just for the hell of it. In a way, Naruto was the person closest to understanding Yakushi Kabuto.
- Many people, even long after Kabuto’s death, wondered where his loyalties laid. The answer was “nowhereâ€. Yakushi Kabuto was loyal to nobody but himself. He simply reveled in the most dangerous of games, playing ally and enemy of all if only for the chance to strike at the right moment and delight in the sight of those who believed themselves great crushed beneath his feet.
- If there is a person Kabuto could be considered “loyal†to, it was precisely Naruto. The boy was never anything but honest in all his interactions with the bespectacled nin, and Kabuto acknowledged that. In gratitude towards the one person who acted sincerely and unreservedly towards him, Kabuto swore never to lie to Houraisan Naruto. Of course, that only meant showering the poor lad with obscure half-truths and misdirections.