Thanks go to Mr. Mysterious, for letting me use the intro he wrote for Naruto as Byakuya. Hope you guys enjoy.
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Trying a different way. Let me know what you guys think.
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ôDamn it!ö Naruto growled, as the jutsu the scroll detailed failed again.
ôI'm so close, so why can't I do this right?!ö
ôNARUTO!!!ö Iruka's yell caused the academy student to flinch.
ôDAMN IT!!! I WAS SO CLOSE TOO!!!ö
ôWhat the hell are you talking about? Were you really trying to escape?ö
ôWhat are you talking about Iruka-sensei? I was just doing my extra credit.ö
ôExtra credit?ö
ôYeah! Mizuki-sensei said that if I could learn one of these jutsu, I could become a ninja! If I had just ten more minutes, I know I could pull this off!ö
ôMizuki?!ö
Before Naruto could reply, Iruka tackled him, intercepting the shuriken Mizuki had thrown.
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Iruka had ordered him to run, and Naruto, for once in his life, listened to him. He ran through the forest, though no matter how fast he ran he could still hear his teachers behind him.
He heard Mizuki attack Iruka.
He heard Mizuki taunting him.
he heard about the monster inside of him.
And Finally, he heard his teacher defend him, revealing how important Naruto was to him.
ôIruka-sensei...ö Naruto murmured to himself, stunned at his teacher's true feelings. Despite everything, Iruka had still cared about him... Clenching his fist, Naruto stood up, prepared to do anything to save his teacher's life. He was still the student who had failed the exam, he had even failed th extra credit assignment, but Naruto would fight anyway. He felt something stirring in his body, something he had never felt before. His will set, Naruto seized the unknown feeling, and everything changed.
Mizuki's attack was halted when both chunin felt an explosion of strange power nearby. Their uncertain expressions turned to shock, as Naruto emerged from the fading nexus.
Naruto's body was almost the same, maybe a little leaner and taller, but his outfit was completely different. His orange jumpsuit was gone, instead, he wore a white kosode underneath a black kimono and hakama, and a white obi sash held his clothes in place. At his side, a long, sheathed katana hovered, almost screaming to be used. Naruto held his head, fighting off a sudden headache, but steeled himself and drew his blade.
ôI won't let you hurt Iruka-sensei!ö
Mizuki grinned, ôLike you can do anything! I'll kill you myself!ö
Shuriken whirling, Mizuki charged at the young blonde, intent on killing the monster before him.
Imagine his surprise when Naruto raised his still sheathed blade to counter his strike, almost without effort.
ôFeh, lucky shot!ö Mizuki sneered, drawing a pair of kunai, ôYou may have more range with that blade, but there's no way a failure like you can fight a chunin!!!ö
Naruto snarled, and instead of countering with his blade, he opened his mouth, and chanted a short phrase/
"Bakudo Number One: Sai!" With a quick slash of Naruto's hand, Mizuki felt him arm constrict and lock behind his body. Shock fille his mind, as his helpless body continued to fly at Naruto, only to be stopped by a merciless fist to the face.
ôN-Naruto?ö
The threat neutralized, Naruto turned to smile at his teacher, but froze, sensing something coming.
Almost immediately, there was laughter as a gigantic demonic looking thing that reeked of more power than Naruto had ever felt faded into existence, smiling evilly at him for a moment. Without warning, it plunged its hand into his body's stomach and ripped out a snarling demonic fox, Naruto absently noting that the whisker marks on his face faded. The fox fought tooth and nail to avoid its fate, as well, but its fate was sealed. No one could escape death forever.
After it swallowed the demon, the huge Shinigami-thing then turned to Naruto.
"That was my price, Little Death God, for allowing you to impinge on my domain... despite the fact that it will quite literally be the death of me." At Naruto's shocked look, it laughed. "You suffered through my actions. Now I suffer through yours. We are even." The thing's eyes flashed blood red for a moment, before it laughed darkly. "The Death of the Shi no Kami. Hah! Ironic, isn't it." His eyes flashed red again, then. Again, and again, and faster, and faster... until there was a compression of energy that felt as though it were crushing the young blonde. Then the self-proclaimed Shi no Kami exploded... sort of. Black lights erupted from his body, shooting away from him. "Goodbye, Little Death God. This world is yours now. Do with it what you will." Then finally one last black light erupted from its body, followed by an enormous red light and an equally enormous white light... and it was gone.
Mere seconds after the massive upheaval, Naruto's headache surged to the forefront, and he collapsed.
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When Naruto returned to consciousness, he wasn't in his room. He wasn't in class or ion the hospital either.
In fact, he had no idea where he was.
ôSo, the young shinigami finally awakens.ö
ôHuh? Who's there!ö Naruto shouted, springing to his feet.
ôbehind you boy.ö
Naruto spun around, and found himself face to face with a horrifying monster.
ôAh!ö Naruto leapt away, trying to get away.
ôThere's no point in running. If you took the time to look around, you'd know that.ö
ôHuh?!ö Naruto gaped. As he looked around, he noticed that this wasn't Konoha at all.
It wasn't even a world, just a sea of endless darkness.
ôWhere the hell am I?!ö Naruto demanded.
ôYou are at the beginning.ö
ôWhat is that supposed to mean?'
ôYou're quite an interesting person. You ended an era that had no beginning, and didn't even realize you were doing it...ö
ôDamn it! Answer me!!!ö
The monster chuckled, ôTwelve years ago, a mortal summoned me from my domain to seal away a demon, the Kyuubi no Kitsune. The beast was locked away inside of an infant, who would hold the monster's power, as well as a slight portion of my own. Just a few hours ago, you managed to force my powers to manifest, and became the second shinigami.ö
ôWh-what?ö
The Shinigami continued, ôHowever, the laws that govern all things only allowed for one God of Death. With your ascension, the rules have changed. Even as we speak, I am slowly fading away.ö
ôSo what does that mean for me?ö
ôThough I am fading, my power will remain. It will saturate the earth, and a select few will gain a portion of it, becoming the new shinigami to guide the dead. As for you... your duty is to lead the shinigami and maintain the balance of life and death.ö
The Shinigami stared at the stunned Naruto.
ôAre you ready to begin?ö
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Trying a different way. Let me know what you guys think.
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ôDamn it!ö Naruto growled, as the jutsu the scroll detailed failed again.
ôI'm so close, so why can't I do this right?!ö
ôNARUTO!!!ö Iruka's yell caused the academy student to flinch.
ôDAMN IT!!! I WAS SO CLOSE TOO!!!ö
ôWhat the hell are you talking about? Were you really trying to escape?ö
ôWhat are you talking about Iruka-sensei? I was just doing my extra credit.ö
ôExtra credit?ö
ôYeah! Mizuki-sensei said that if I could learn one of these jutsu, I could become a ninja! If I had just ten more minutes, I know I could pull this off!ö
ôMizuki?!ö
Before Naruto could reply, Iruka tackled him, intercepting the shuriken Mizuki had thrown.
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Iruka had ordered him to run, and Naruto, for once in his life, listened to him. He ran through the forest, though no matter how fast he ran he could still hear his teachers behind him.
He heard Mizuki attack Iruka.
He heard Mizuki taunting him.
he heard about the monster inside of him.
And Finally, he heard his teacher defend him, revealing how important Naruto was to him.
ôIruka-sensei...ö Naruto murmured to himself, stunned at his teacher's true feelings. Despite everything, Iruka had still cared about him... Clenching his fist, Naruto stood up, prepared to do anything to save his teacher's life. He was still the student who had failed the exam, he had even failed th extra credit assignment, but Naruto would fight anyway. He felt something stirring in his body, something he had never felt before. His will set, Naruto seized the unknown feeling, and everything changed.
Mizuki's attack was halted when both chunin felt an explosion of strange power nearby. Their uncertain expressions turned to shock, as Naruto emerged from the fading nexus.
Naruto's body was almost the same, maybe a little leaner and taller, but his outfit was completely different. His orange jumpsuit was gone, instead, he wore a white kosode underneath a black kimono and hakama, and a white obi sash held his clothes in place. At his side, a long, sheathed katana hovered, almost screaming to be used. Naruto held his head, fighting off a sudden headache, but steeled himself and drew his blade.
ôI won't let you hurt Iruka-sensei!ö
Mizuki grinned, ôLike you can do anything! I'll kill you myself!ö
Shuriken whirling, Mizuki charged at the young blonde, intent on killing the monster before him.
Imagine his surprise when Naruto raised his still sheathed blade to counter his strike, almost without effort.
ôFeh, lucky shot!ö Mizuki sneered, drawing a pair of kunai, ôYou may have more range with that blade, but there's no way a failure like you can fight a chunin!!!ö
Naruto snarled, and instead of countering with his blade, he opened his mouth, and chanted a short phrase/
"Bakudo Number One: Sai!" With a quick slash of Naruto's hand, Mizuki felt him arm constrict and lock behind his body. Shock fille his mind, as his helpless body continued to fly at Naruto, only to be stopped by a merciless fist to the face.
ôN-Naruto?ö
The threat neutralized, Naruto turned to smile at his teacher, but froze, sensing something coming.
Almost immediately, there was laughter as a gigantic demonic looking thing that reeked of more power than Naruto had ever felt faded into existence, smiling evilly at him for a moment. Without warning, it plunged its hand into his body's stomach and ripped out a snarling demonic fox, Naruto absently noting that the whisker marks on his face faded. The fox fought tooth and nail to avoid its fate, as well, but its fate was sealed. No one could escape death forever.
After it swallowed the demon, the huge Shinigami-thing then turned to Naruto.
"That was my price, Little Death God, for allowing you to impinge on my domain... despite the fact that it will quite literally be the death of me." At Naruto's shocked look, it laughed. "You suffered through my actions. Now I suffer through yours. We are even." The thing's eyes flashed blood red for a moment, before it laughed darkly. "The Death of the Shi no Kami. Hah! Ironic, isn't it." His eyes flashed red again, then. Again, and again, and faster, and faster... until there was a compression of energy that felt as though it were crushing the young blonde. Then the self-proclaimed Shi no Kami exploded... sort of. Black lights erupted from his body, shooting away from him. "Goodbye, Little Death God. This world is yours now. Do with it what you will." Then finally one last black light erupted from its body, followed by an enormous red light and an equally enormous white light... and it was gone.
Mere seconds after the massive upheaval, Naruto's headache surged to the forefront, and he collapsed.
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When Naruto returned to consciousness, he wasn't in his room. He wasn't in class or ion the hospital either.
In fact, he had no idea where he was.
ôSo, the young shinigami finally awakens.ö
ôHuh? Who's there!ö Naruto shouted, springing to his feet.
ôbehind you boy.ö
Naruto spun around, and found himself face to face with a horrifying monster.
ôAh!ö Naruto leapt away, trying to get away.
ôThere's no point in running. If you took the time to look around, you'd know that.ö
ôHuh?!ö Naruto gaped. As he looked around, he noticed that this wasn't Konoha at all.
It wasn't even a world, just a sea of endless darkness.
ôWhere the hell am I?!ö Naruto demanded.
ôYou are at the beginning.ö
ôWhat is that supposed to mean?'
ôYou're quite an interesting person. You ended an era that had no beginning, and didn't even realize you were doing it...ö
ôDamn it! Answer me!!!ö
The monster chuckled, ôTwelve years ago, a mortal summoned me from my domain to seal away a demon, the Kyuubi no Kitsune. The beast was locked away inside of an infant, who would hold the monster's power, as well as a slight portion of my own. Just a few hours ago, you managed to force my powers to manifest, and became the second shinigami.ö
ôWh-what?ö
The Shinigami continued, ôHowever, the laws that govern all things only allowed for one God of Death. With your ascension, the rules have changed. Even as we speak, I am slowly fading away.ö
ôSo what does that mean for me?ö
ôThough I am fading, my power will remain. It will saturate the earth, and a select few will gain a portion of it, becoming the new shinigami to guide the dead. As for you... your duty is to lead the shinigami and maintain the balance of life and death.ö
The Shinigami stared at the stunned Naruto.
ôAre you ready to begin?ö