Akamatsuverse Story: Fallout

Terdwilicker

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I wrote a few pages so far but more and more of a story is forming in my head to deal with some of those loose ends in my omakes. I'm calling it Fallout, although I suppose I could call it Fertility though it would kind of ruin the fun of it. Assuming readers have read the omakes, the joke is on Keitaro, of course.

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ôKeitaro, we got some mail. Its from Granny Hina," announced Kitsune, wandering down the hall in her matronÆs smock. She was pregnant again, seven months, so she sort of waddled.

ôHuh, I wonder what thatÆs about?ö asked Keitaro, putting down the sticky spoon covered in curry. HeÆd been working with Su on her family recipes over the years, getting better at cooking. HeÆd never be as good as Shinobu, more popular than ever with her TV show rebroadcast via worldwide satellite TV on the Food Network. The scandals which occasionally broke about her personal life were troubling and Keitaro worried from time to time about his friend. She never answered his letters and heÆd stopped sending them after a couple years.

Their youngest, Maya, fretted in the baby carrier on his back. She liked to watch what he was doing all the time, cute little slitted eyes and big grin in her toothless mouth. It wouldnÆt be long before she sprouted those too and started running around like her older sister. He rinsed and dried his hands before opening it, reading the contents.

ôWow, hey Kitsune Dear, weÆve been invited to the family reunion in a month,ö he yelled back up the stairs. This royal apartments had no servants, preferring a more traditional Japanese lifestyle and the implied privacy which would allow them to be a proper family. He didnÆt want his kids to be treated differently, though KaollaÆs children seemed to be just fine, if not preternaturally observant from time to time. AmallaÆs three children, all boys, were little terrors despite still being so small. Their nannies were some of the most tireless people Keitaro had ever known. Raising his own two girls had been hair raising enough. They tended to play little pranks on him sometimes.

ôReally?ö she asked, coming down to look at it with him in the kitchen.

ôGranny is holding it at the Hinata Inn,ö he said. ôItÆll be nice to see Sis again,ö he admitted. He missed KitsuneÆs grimace at the mention of Kanako. SheÆs found the young woman trying to steal into his bed more times than she cared to remember. Keitaro remained guileless even after four years of marriage. It was one of the things she loved about him.

ôWell, Professor,ö she emphasized, ôAre you ready to return to life in Japan? WeÆre almost packed. Todai wants its most famous professor to start teaching classes this fall.ö

ôSure, I guess. Its kinda intimidating after having the run of the site.ö

ôAre you going to miss the Royal treatment?ö she teased. Keitaro rubbed the back of his head. His daughter Maya grabbed his hand and fussed his hair with her sticky little hands, cooing.

ôYeah, itÆll be weird driving again,ö he admitted.

ôUh-uh. IÆm driving. YouÆre still almost as bad as Seta,ö she shook her finger at him.

ôI love you,ö he said, sliding close and dipping his wife into a passion-filled kiss. She shivered in his touch, dazed when he finally lifted her back to her feet.

ôWhew. YouÆve sure gotten good at that, hero,ö she murmured. It was times like this that she was glad sheÆd won his heart. The last four years together had been busy, but wonderful. He was good to his word, keeping her happy. The times he spent with Kaolla Su were harder but she tried not to think about it. And she really tried not to think about the secret visits from Motoko. Part of her ached in jealousy over that, but some of that was pity for her friend.

ôIÆm still a little worried,ö he said, changing the subject back to their move from Molmol to Japan.

ôDonÆt be. Professor Mumiya will do a fine job managing the site with the Royal Tourism Board. And Haruka found us that cute little house with the patio in the district. You can even see the Hinata Sou. Taking the train just like old times,ö she reminded him. ôAnd itÆs a good place for the children to grow up.ö

ôSpeaking of which, whereÆs Kimiko?ö he asked. Their eldest was two and when she wasnÆt throwing temper tantrums she was a little angel.

ôPlaying with her picture diary. I gave her some crayons and sheÆs telling stories to herself. I left the camera on her in case she says anything cute,ö she smiled. It was KeitaroÆs turn to frown. What Kitsune called cute, he found disturbing. If he didnÆt know better, heÆd say their firstborn child was psychic. WhatÆs worse he did know better which meant that she almost certainly was.

ôShe say anything about the trip?ö he asked.

ôNah, something about a sandbox and a playground and meeting all her brothers and sisters,ö said Kitsune, smiling.

ôWell, its time to get dressed and finish up the final packing. Remember to clean all that up before you put it away. I donÆt even want to think what those dishes would look like with two week old curry growing in them,ö she teased.

They finished dressing up and Kitsune packed Bentos for the family.

ôAnd then Keiwana said æI wanna play with that,ö chirped Kimiko musically. ôNo, I want to,Æ said Meikoto. And Na-chan stamped her foot and yelled æKei, you baka!Æ TEE-HEE,ö she laughed. She was a bright little girl with daunting blue eyes and her motherÆs light brown/blonde hair. She looked up at her motherÆs approach. All these brown boxes left her confused and frightened. She couldnÆt play with all her toys and there were more and more of them all the time.

ôMama? Are we going away today?ö she said in her trembling little voice, suddenly sad. Kitsune scooped her up, grunting at the weight of her daughter.

ôYes sweetie. Molmol is home to you, but weÆre going back to Japan, not just for a visit but to live there near Auntie Haruka. Mommy and Daddy have many friends there,ö explained Kitsune yet again.

ôBut Auntie Kaolla is here, and big brothers,ö she complained.

ôYes yes. TheyÆll come for visits, and weÆll visit here sometimes too,ö assured her mother.

ôSooner than you think,ö said the Other Voice Kimiko used sometimes. Kitsune froze, trying not to panic again. She hugged her daughter, fear and worry eating at her. Again, she blamed herself for how her daughter behaved at times. It scared her and Kitsune wondered if sheÆd pushed herself too hard when she was pregnant. Keitaro had needed her, it was true, but stillà.

ôI love you mommy,ö said her cute voice again, little arms gripping her.

The movers worked with quiet efficiency and in a couple hours the truck was loaded with their belongings. She looked around at the empty furniture turning the room back over to the seneschal, who bowed low to the family before leaving them to their trip out of the palace.

Kaolla greeted them politely, nannies minding her children.

ôIÆll miss you Keitaro. ItÆs been wonderful to have you here with me. I am glad to have been allowed this privilege,ö she said formally. Keitaro hugged her and kissed her cheek.

ôIÆll miss you too, Kaolla-chan,ö he agreed.

ôIÆll see you in August at the Reunion,ö she said, waving the invitation he recognized.

ôWell, you are family,ö he chuckled, scratching the back of his head. The children waved goodbye to their father with help from their mom. Kitsune saw a tear grace his eye before he turned away.

A short ride to the airport followed, the city even more busy than before. It was crawling with electric cars and scooters blaring Molmolian folk songs and what sounded like an antique Brazlian Jazz tune Keitaro recognized from HarukaÆs collection. Kitsune raised an eyebrow at it as well. The airport was busy but four carts loaded with brown paper boxes each labelled with their new place in Tokyo they entered the terminal. With far less fanfare than their arrival had been, they finally reached the single JAL flight 1 of the day, crowded with Japanese workers, various Polynesians, and a few Europeans scattered in the press. Holding tight to their children, a porter checked in their luggage and the boxes of belongings, far fewer than theyÆd have thought for four years of living in an exotic foreign country. Keitaro paid the high fee for air freight, wincing at the cost. HeÆd gotten far too used to the unlimited Su wealth. It was time to scale back his life and slow down a little. Spend more time with his family and more time with his kids. He hoped a life more ordinary would agree with him.

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More later.
 

Terdwilicker

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#2
And the second half of chapter 1

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ôThat should be the last of it,ö sighed Keitaro. Seta and he had emptied the back of the rented truck. Haruka waved from the driver seat and putted away for the rental lot, leaving the two men to sweat in the summer heat. Like all places in the Hinata District, the local grid couldnÆt support air conditioning without causing a blackout, and electricity was so much more expensive than it used to be. JapanÆs efforts to conserve were considerable and Keitaro saw signs of it everywhere. The economy in Japan wasnÆt that good, even now with the growth of solar power technology. He did spot a billboard for the Su-Chan electronics store in Akihabara, the familiar three-eyed symbol on everything she made.

ôWell, Part Timer, looks like you just gotta unpack and get settled in,ö announced Seta. ôIÆll be next door if you need me. IÆm gonna check on the kids. Saki tends to fight with Naomi if theyÆre left alone too long.ö

ôThank you, Seta. See you later, then,ö agreed Keitaro. He finished carrying in boxes, observing his wife bent over a box working hard in the heat.

ôI keep forgetting how its wet heat here and makes you slow down. I got spoiled by the desert air in Molmol,ö she admitted, rising up to rest her back, clearly hurting.

ôWe really need to get a chair,ö he agreed. She lay down on the tatami in the living room. It was a tiny place, barely enough room for them but itÆs what theyÆd agreed upon. Kitsune was going to stay home with the children and Keitaro was going to teach at Todai. It wouldnÆt pay that well, but it was more important to be with his family.

Kimiko was playing with her toys in the nursery, where her sister was sleeping in a crib. The heat was making her itchy with rash. It would fade with time and attention but she was miserable. Maya was teething, which didnÆt help. Keitaro was glad theyÆd opened that box first, and that Seta and Haruka had prepped their furniture for them. Very grateful. It was 11 PM Molmol time but the sun was still up in Japan, far to the West and quite a ways North. Keitaro thought wistfully of Kaolla and their children, resolving to put up their pictures soon.

After a short rest Kitsune rose and the two exhausted parents unpacked enough boxes so they could sleep and called it a night as soon as it got dark. Drifting off to sleep beside his wife, both sweating, he resolved to visit the Hinata Hot Springs the next day for a good soak.



ôAmalla, you have some mail from Japan,ö offered one of her maids from a finely carved wooden tray. She nodded, opening the letter and reading the contents. She paled briefly, then smiled. ôSo, the cat is out of the bag, eh?ö She told her maid to set aside those weeks for their trip to Japan.

ôYour Highness, will you be journeying with Princess Kaolla?ö asked the maid after a brief phone conversation. Amalla twitched, then nodded.

ôSo, itÆs like that, is it?ö she muttered to herself. ôThis WILL be interesting indeed.ö



Tsuruko opened the letter from Urashima Hina, studying the contents before nodding approval. ôItÆs about time.ö It was raining in Kyoto and the sounds of her students chanting out kata was pleasing to her ear. She marked her calendar and checked ticket prices online from a discreet computer terminal in the Dojo business office. She wondered what her younger sister would do, faced with this meeting.




ôA reunion for former Hinata dorm residents? It would be nice to see them all again. We had such good times,ö she admitted from her law office high up a tower in downtown Tokyo. Even as a junior member of the firm, her high dollar international business law agreements and expertise in Molmolese law had made her rise fast, though having ties in the Royal family had something to do with it. She stared at the picture of Tsuruko and her husband, their children grinning before her knees. Her children. It was hard not to see them as much as she wanted, to be called Mama only in secret within the Aoyama family home and nowhere else. Her career demanded this of her, though her samurai virtue demanded her apartment be as traditional as she could muster a refuge in a forest of steel and glass. Sometimes she wished she could move back to Hinata Sou and live more simply, dedicating her professional life to the art of the sword, and her personal life to her children. Suu needed her, and her family needed her here. But it was so hard to be alone. From time to time, she would slip away to Molmol and meet in secret with Keitaro. Their time together restored her faith, bit by bit, but it ached to leave him, and it hurt that she couldnÆt see him openly, that sheÆd lost him to her friend Kitsune. Then again, how must the others feel? At least she had four beautiful children.



ôMutsumi-chan!ö called Natsuki. Her daughter was staring out to sea, cradling her son as he slept against her shoulder. Mutsumi had more solemn moments since returning from Hinata Sou four years ago. She doted on her son and was defending her PhD thesis on Macroeconomics. Her masterÆs thesis had made the rounds in publishing, finding a small following and minor publicity. NatsukiÆs next eldest children were attending university on Okinawa, the younger ones home schooling with the other families on the small island they inhabited together.

ôYes Momma?ö asked Mutsumi, noticing her mother finally. Natsuki held out a letter from Hinata City, Kanagawa Prefecture, Japan. Mutsumi smiled in recognition and opened it careful not to disturb her sleeping boy. She read a few moments. Her eyes opened wide and she fainted. Natsuki smiled, waiting for her girl to wake up. A moment later she stirred.

ôAny news?ö asked her mother.

ôThereÆs a reunion at Hinata Sou. Granny Hina asked me to bring Kei-kun. I didnÆt know she knew about Kei-kun,ö she admitted.

ôGranny Hina has always been clever. IÆm sure she has her ways. How soon?ö asked Natsuki, grinning in spite of herself.

ôThe twenty-second. That leaves enough time to start back to school,ö she said, thinking. Keitaro, her son, wriggled against her, waking.

ôMomma? Are we going somewhere?ö he asked in his piping voice.

ôYes, honey, and youÆre coming with me. You get to meet Daddy.ö

ôREALLY? YAY!ö he cheered and hugged her before running around the yard.

ôI hope you wonÆt be disappointed. HeÆs got a family of his own. Two of them if what you say is true.ö

ôOh, it might be quite a bit more than two, Momma. ThatÆs why IÆm going,ö said Mutsumi grinning with certainty.



ôMomma!ö cried Mihoshi as Naru stumbled in the door. The elementary school where she taught exhausted her every day, but she never lost her temper. Having a child of her own finally took away her mean streak. While she cried sometimes from loneliness, it helped having her sister Mei looking after her some of the time, and Tina acted as a Nanny the rest of the time. The rowdy American was recovering from a heartache of her own and despite a strange habit of groping womenÆs breasts her good cheer reminded her of Kitsune back in the old days.

ôAnd how is my little Miracle? Have you been a good girl or are you driving Nanny Tina crazy?ö asked Naru, bending down to examine her three year old.

ôTina-chan is sleeping. She cries,ö she said solemnly. Naru sighed at the news. TinaÆs moaning over her lost lover, Kaoru, reminded her far too much of her own situation.

ôWell, lets let her sleep. Momma wants to sit down. Will you tell me about your day, honey?ö she asked her little girl. The child grinned widely and scratched the back of her head with her left arm, suddenly reminding Naru of her former love.

ôAww, MommyÆs crying? What did Mihoshi do? Is Mihoshi bad?ö asked the little girl, confused at the sudden tears from her mother. Mommies always cry. She knew that. Naru grasped the girl and held her tightly.

ôPromise youÆll never leave me, sweetheart?ö she demanded, holding too tightly. Mihoshi was scared of momma when she was like this.

ôYes Momma. Always stay with you,ö she promised, knowing the words her Momma wanted to hear. NaruÆs grip loosened and she stroked her girlÆs head, sobbing more quietly now. Tina found them that way a short time later, Mihoshi asleep in her motherÆs arms.

ôHey, you got some mail from someone called Urashima,ö she said, extending to the letter to Naru. Naru froze in panic and Tina looked up to see real terror in the womanÆs eyes.

ôWhatÆs wrong?ö asked Tina.





ôMiss Maehara, you have some mail,ö said her personal assistant.

ôSo deal with it. I have to see to Kei-kun,ö dismissed the pensive brunette cooking star. The show that night had been a disaster. She was ready to throw in the towel. She needed a vacation, and soon.

ôIts from your old home, in Hinata district, from someone named Urashima,ö said Kiko.

ôWhich Urashima?ö asked Shinobu, suddenly interested. She snatched it out of the hands of her assistant, who waited anxiously for orders.

ôReally? Granny Hina wants to have a reunion huh? And she wants me to bring Kei-kun too? I wonder how she found out? Schedule it.ö

ôUh, but the show? Your producer will be angryà,ö reminded the girl. Shinobu bit back the snarl, forcing herself to calm down.

ôIÆll talk to him. WeÆll run some re-runs for the duration,ö she ordered.

ôVery well,ö said the girl, bowing then left.

ôSo, a family reunion, eh?ö muttered Shinobu. No amount of success had fixed the burning ache of rejection in her heart. HeÆd left her for Kitsune and her best friend, Kaolla. How could she compete with a princess? That she understood, but the house drunk? Why would he choose her over someone sweet and innocent like Shinobu had been back then? Her aggressive ride up the TV career ladder had made her rich. She was a princess now, a princess for TV addicted wives all over the world. She was their world for 30 minutes a day. Translated into 15 different languages. SheÆd cooked for the Emperor and his family. SheÆd cooked for kings and queens. Shinobu released the crumpled invitation, surprised at herself.

ôI get to be more and more like Naru every day,ö she sighed. Clearing her mind of anguish and regret she thought of her son, the star of her morning. Her one priceless souvenir from her years with Keitaro, the Idiot. Keitaro Junior was her big secret. Her staff knew all about him, or thought they did, but some aggressive non disclosure agreements kept them quiet. SheÆd learned her lesson from JK Rowlands example, protecting her son from the harm of the public life. Little Miss Maehara couldnÆt go on a drunken rampage in Akihabara, or assault a clerk in Kyoto, or drive drunk in Sapporo. Little Miss Maehara was a perfect princess, proper and demure in every way. All but her indiscreet love child, rumors of which won her another 8 percentage points of viewers. It was a bitter irony that when she finally fell from public favor someday, sheÆd get even richer. And she barely spoke to her mother, who held her daughter in disgrace for being an unwed teen mother, holding little regard for public and professional success. ôWhat does that matter when my daughter has no husband, no father for her child?ö That calm accusation burned deeply, turning the outwardly beautiful girl into a smoldering mask of hatred.

ôYes, IÆll be there, Granny. You can count on that,ö promised Shinobu.


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Yes, it's kinda darkish, but keep in mind, not all these women function well outside hinata house's support and they've suffered terrible regret. Its easy to say you'll have a love child, but quite something else to raise that child and suffer the sacrifices required to actually do it. I wanted to slap them with a little more reality, then gradually add comedy to this fiction bringing it back to a happy ending eventually.
 

Terdwilicker

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Btw, these, and my GWH:K are all 1st drafts, unedited. I write them in MS Word 97 which corrects most spelling errors. I don't need anything more fancy than that.

The double page breaks are from a line of ******** which somehow don't translate when I copy and paste. Maybe I'll figure something out eventually so its a little less confusing to read. Hopefully my readers have figured out the style, along with the lack of TABs, since browsers misread those its better to work without them.

So, what do you think? Will my fans like it?
 

Hawk

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> So, what do you think? Will my fans like it?

This particular one most certainly does, at any rate. :)
 

runestar

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#5
Not bad, although the summaries of how the various LH girls had been getting on in those 4 years seems a tad rushed, even for a summary. -_-

I wonder what Hina is up too...(don't tell me she plans to finally hook them all up with Keitaro? ^_^ )
 

AbyssalDaemon

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runestar said:
I wonder what Hina is up too...(don't tell me she plans to finally hook them all up with Keitaro? ^_^ )
She's probably hoping to get to play with all her great-grandchildren and cause trouble of Keitaro for her kicks; although I'm probably wrong about the last one, I just really detest most of the old folks that appear in most anime.
 

Terdwilicker

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As I write it now, the reunion is a chance to expand the family ledger. Just think about his particular section of the family tree. A wife and 5 concubines, and a whole slew of children, all her great-grandchildren. I can imagine her cackling with glee. She is a spry old woman, after all. And I haven't introduced his sister yet, but she's running the Hinata Inn again, while he's been away.

I'm thinking of having Hina offer them shelter in Hinata District and emotional support, but in a more discreet way. Naru and Shinobu need him most, but the other women, even the strong ones like Mutsumi, would benefit having him around. Then there's the question of jealousy, and the accusations of infidelity and Kitsune's feelings on the matter, which will be angsty.
 

Terdwilicker

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Here we go.

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Chapter 2
Reunion


Remembering well the total lack of parking for cars in Hinata District, Shinobu opted for a scarf, sunglasses, and an anonymous ride on the train with her son. Wearing the fake wedding ring she kept for camouflage purposes, Shinobu rode out from Akihabara, noticing a certain tall woman bearing a sword wrapped in a fine silk bag slung over her shoulder. Passengers automatically gave her additional space, sensing someone with power. Motoko walked right up to Shinobu and stood over her friend, smiling.

ôArenÆt you going to say hello?ö she asked.

ôHello,ö said Shinobu, trying to smile but not in the mood for it. It crumpled in the face of her friend of many years. She hadnÆt seen her for some time, years now. Motoko seemed happy.

ôI see IÆm not the only one. Does he know?ö Motoko asked, indicating the little boy, always direct with her friends. Shinobu supposed this was some kind of sign of respect, but it felt tiresome instead.

ôKeitaro is going to meet his father today, arenÆt you Kei-chan?ö prompted Shinobu. He giggled at the tall fashionable woman standing over them like a guard.

ôIÆm sorry he wonÆt meet mine today, if thatÆs the case,ö said Motoko quietly, noting the housewives listening for gossip. The train reached their stop and they left together, Shinobu carrying her son through the crush, though he was heavy. The morning was cool and damp, like any summer morning in Hinata District.

ôDonÆt you want to take the street car?ö asked Shinobu, seeing Motoko turning towards the narrow streets instead.

ôNah, I want to talk and we will have more privacy if we walk up the hill,ö she said, indirectly pointing at the snooping women eyeing the two of them suspiciously.

ôOOF!ö said Shinobu, putting the little boy down.

ôIÆll carry him when he gets tired. I donÆt mind,ö offered Motoko. Despite her hundred thousand yen suit, she was still a friend when it came down to it. Shinobu sighed.

ôYou look angry. WhatÆs on your mind?ö asked Motoko as they walked. The narrow whitewashed walls, the curved roof tiles and uneven pavement much as they remembered it from their years of living there.

ôHow can you forgive him so easily? Look what he did to us,ö complained Shinobu.

ôArenÆt you being unfair?ö accused Motoko.

ôWhy? DonÆt you know that the rumors about me being a vicious bitch are true? I throw temper tantrums and yell at my staff. I climbed up the ladder on the backs of others.ö Shinobu was defiant despite her shame. ôI would never have done that if I was a good person.ö

ôAnd yet, your little boy proves you are a good mother, doesnÆt he? You didnÆt have to keep him. You knew what would happen, or at least suspected. You must have read those books, same as I did, while you decided,ö pointed out Motoko.

Shinobu sighed. She could see the Hinata Inn above the trees in the distance. Sometimes the walk through Hinata District seemed so short, other times so very lengthy. She knew it was an illusion, but life there was illusive anyway. Things changed. People changed. You canÆt hold onto the past.

Keitaro Junior slowed down. Motoko easily lifted him up to her shoulders and gave him a ride. He cheered. Shinobu stared at the scene before her: a woman, a sword, and a boy smiling.

ôIÆm still surprised he didnÆt pick you,ö Shinobu said quietly. Motoko turned, eyes wise beyond her years.

ôYou should trust in him more. He had good reasons. She needed him most, and it was the right choice. When you see her youÆll see,ö said Motoko gently. ôDonÆt resent anyone for their love, or how they show it, little sister.ö

ôWhat do you mean? Have you seen them already?ö asked Shinobu, suspicious.

ôIn a manner of speaking. Su allowed me to visit him sometimes, in secret. We have some children, though neither he nor Kitsune knows of it. My sister is raising them as her own. This is my Big Secret, you see. A proper International Law Attorney should not write romance novels and should absolutely not have a child out of wedlock, much less children,ö she said, clearly mocking someone sheÆd known.

ôHe cheated on her?ö asked Shinobu, shocked.

Motoko thought carefully before answering. ôNot exactly. I begged and he gave. It was a hard time in my life and I donÆt think IÆd be the person I am today if not for what he did for me. When I was younger, when we first met, I never thought anything could be more disgusting than needing a Man. After the Twins were born, I realized how much I missed his cheer, his compassion. I never met another man who could make me feel complete the way he did in just a few minutes. HeÆs always himself, clumsiness and all.ö

ôTwins, huh? I wonder what Kitsune would think of that?ö pondered Shinobu out loud, wondering herself.

ôTwice. My third and fouth children were also twins. You know, if youÆd asked Su, she probably would have arranged something. It wouldnÆt have been frequent, or even often, but you could have spent time with him again. Why did you shut us all out of your life? We could see from the news you needed help, a moral compass. Your studios are a short train-ride from my offices. What stopped you?ö asked Motoko.

ôI thought youÆd feel like I do, angry and bitter. How can you be so calm? You canÆt even live with your own children,ö accused Shinobu. They finally reached the bottom of the stairs. The Inn sat stoically over the district like a lazy samurai whoÆd drunk too much sake. Shinobu grinned. ôI needed him more than once in a while. I wanted him around me always, like he was when we lived here. I loved him with all my heart for four wonderful years,ö she said.

ôAnd how does that make you feel?ö asked Motoko carefully. Climbing the stairs was slow and long.

ôHappy. Empty. Those memories and my son are all thatÆs sustained me. My success means nothing to me anymore,ö admitted Shinobu, breathing hard on the stairs. She was out of shape. Clearly she needed to spend more time on the stair climber.

ôThen I understand your pain and you have my pity. I hope seeing him now will help. Will you keep the peace?ö asked Motoko carefully as they reached the top of the stairs. Keitaro Junior wriggled, wanting to play with the boys and girls his own age. Motoko put him down and steadied him before releasing the boy to play.

Tsuruko and her husband Kenjou stepped out of the Hinata Sou entrance, bowing to the visitors politely. Shinobu followed MotokoÆs lead and they both returned the bow politely.

ôSister,ö stated Motoko gracefully. ôIt is good to see you.ö

ôWhee!ö yelled Grandma Hina, stubby legs moving quickly under her Kimono, her grandkids chasing after her giggling. More children spilled out of the entrance, a boy and girl in traditional dress, squealing at the sight of Motoko.

ôMaà Auntie Motoko!ö they remembered at the last moment.

ôItÆs okay. This is Auntie Shinobu, one of MommieÆs oldest friends. She knows all about my favorite babies,ö she teased, seizing up her twins and spinning them around.

ôSister, Shouja wants to say hello too,ö reminded Tsuruko. The two year old cautiously approached, peering from behind her auntÆs kimono hem.

ôMama?ö asked the little girl.

ôYes, darling. Come say hello,ö smiled Motoko, extending her arms, her twins holding to her legs, smiling at their little sister. She peered a moment longer, then ran as fast as her little legs could carry her. Motoko lifted her middle child into the air and burst into a brilliant smile.

Shinobu felt strangely embarrassed, unsure why.

ôGoodnessà you sure have many children, Motoko,ö exclaimed Mutsumi, who had just crested the stairs with a small boy holding her hand. He looked tired by happy.

ôIs there where Daddy lives, Mamma?ö asked the small boy.

ôHe used to live here, Kei-kun,ö she answered. One of the children ran over and stopped.

ôAre you my brother?ö asked the little girl.

ôMamma?ö he asked, and looked up at Mutsumi, who beamed before bending down to greet the little girl with dark hair in a childs gi.

ôWhatÆs your name?ö she asked of the adult in the green and white dress and the big hat.

ôIÆm Mutsumi. Is Motoko your mommy?ö she asked. The girl looked to Motoko, who smiled gently and nodded approval.

ôYes. Mommy is Motoko. But itÆs a secret,ö she stage whispered. Her twin brother came pelting over across the courtyard and looked at the boy who looked similar enough they could be related. Tsuruko and Kenjou, her husband, watched their children playing and meeting the others. It was surreal, to say the least.

ôAnd to think I used to tease them,ö murmured the swordswoman, idly counting the children and matching their ki signatures to their fatherÆs and its relationship to the children she and Kenjou had raised as their own. MotokoÆs womb was fertile enough to make up the fact of her own lack, and having provided the first son to the Aoyama name in over a century since the curse, her lack of marriage to the father was overlooked. It all worked out in the end, after all.

ôMy name is Keitaro,ö said the little boy holding onto Mutsumi. He had a big grin.

ôReally? My name is Naru-chan!ö said the little girl. ôThis is my brother Kenji. Do you want to play?ö

Little Keitaro Junior looked at his mother, hope in his eyes. ôCan I mama?ö he pleaded. Mutsumi nodded.

ôDonÆt go far. IÆm going to talk to the other mommies and daddies,ö she warned. The little kids ran around chasing one another.

ôCan I play too?ö asked ShinobuÆs son Keitaro, perturbed that there was another boy with the same name. He didnÆt question that they looked alike.

ôYes, go on and play. Go meet your brothers and sisters,ö she urged. Shinobu watched him race off, and then inside the inn briefly before being chased back out by a slender but very attractive woman, the innkeeper and KeitaroÆs adopted sister, Kanako. Her cat clambered onto one of the ornate beams and observed all the activity. Kanako gave him a look before slithering outside. She was tireless and eerie as ever, silently counting all the children.

ôHe had every one of them, by the look of things. All of them but not me,ö she sighed. ôWhy brother, why couldnÆt you keep it in your pants? Or take it out for me? Did I ask so much?ö Kanako muttered to herself.

A limo arrived at the side entrance. After a moment the side door was opened from the inside and out poured Kaolla Su, a whole slew of kids, then Amalla Su and Prince Lamba Lu joined them.

ôItÆs been a while since IÆve set foot here,ö admitted the Prince.

ôIt looks nicer. TheyÆve fixed it up a bit,ö decided Amalla turning from the building to her own and her sisterÆs children. The tide of darker skinned Su children surged to join the lighter pure Japanese kids and many greetings were heard.

ôGreetings and welcome to Hinata Inn, your Highnesses,ö offered Kanako formally bowing to the Prince and Princesses of Molmol.

ôIts good to have you back Kaolla,ö added Kanako. Kaolla squashed a scowl and plastered a polite smile as she returned the respectful greeting.

ôIt is nice to see you again, Kanako,ö lied Kaolla. Amalla eyed her sister but was more polite, as was the prince at her side.

ôThank you for your hospitality. May we greet Miss Hina?ö she asked, reminding Kaolla of that propriety. The limo retreated down the narrow drive to park below.

ôOf course. Please follow me,ö she offered, leading the way in her black dress, hips swaying in heels. Kaolla stuck out her tongue at the brother-loverÆs back. Amalla glared at her sister, wondering just what was up between them.

On spotting Shinobu and Motoko, however, Kaolla whooped with glee and bounded ahead to sling herself around her favorite human jungle gym. The kendoist caught the young woman and swung her around easily, still as strong as ever.

ôWow, Su, I see youÆre as spry as ever!ö grinned Motoko. ôSo, howÆs my favorite Princess these days?ö

Kaolla whispered into her ear.

ôAgain? Congratulations,ö offered Motoko. Mutsumi giggled, pretending she didnÆt understand.

ôAre all your kids here?ö asked Kaolla, looking around.

ôYep. Tsuruko has my youngest, Shouja, over there. I still donÆt see them as much as I want to, but theyÆve got a good life and they know who I am, which is more than I can say for many single mothers who have to give up their kids to adoption. At least mine are with family,ö she admitted.

ôLady Motoko,ö greeted Amalla. Motoko turned to regard the crown princess. They bowed to each other with respect, eyes measuring each otherÆs children and their mutual connection.

ôThere certainly are a lot of children, arenÆt there?ö murmured Shinobu, almost forgotten. Kaolla dodged in front of her friend and hugged her tight.

ôEEP!ö yelped Shinobu in surprise.

ôHeyas!ö greeted Sarah from the top of the stairs. The sixteen year old high school girl was followed by her stepparents Seta and Haruka, hand in hand in the summer heat. Haruka and Seta each turned to regard their daughters appearing at the top of the steps behind them, jaws dropping at the sight of so many 3 year olds.

ôWow. This is like daycare. Are they all related to us?ö asked Naomi of her mother.

ôYes. Go find Granny and tell her weÆre here,ö ordered Haruka of her daughter.

ôYes, Mom,ö grumped the five year old and flapped away in her sandals.

ôTheyÆll be getting hungry soon. WeÆve prepared food and a banquet table, including one suitable for the children,ö announced Kanako. ôIÆm sure its not up to Your Standards, Miss Maehara,ö stated Kanako. ShinobuÆs face hardened, matching KaollaÆs glare. Motoko stepped between them before an obvious catfight erupted.

ôIÆm sure itÆs wonderful,ö appeased Motoko. ôShall we lead the kids to the food?ö she asked. Kanako twitched once, then led the way as a hostess should. Granny Hina sighed. Her granddaughter really needed to set her sights on someone a little less hostile to her affections. Twice that week, sheÆd scared Keitaro out of the inn by unwanted advances. If Kitsune found out, sheÆd be on the war path, probably the only reason he hadnÆt told his wife what happened. The other girls were well aware of the implications this family gathering, and all the children present, meant, and what that jealousy would do to Kanako. The law we clear: no marriage between siblings, even adopted ones with no blood relations. And Keitaro wouldnÆt see her as more than his younger sister, and that was that. Grandma Hina sure liked seeing all the children though. After coming close to seeing the Urashima clan lose her own branch, Keitaro had come through and filled the family tree in a sudden burst ofà fertility she supposed. She was using this opportunity to record the names and birthdates of each of the children and their mothers.

ôGoodness, thereÆs enough little Keitaros around here to fill a dojo,ö admitted Mutsumi, giggling as more kids ran past her feet.

ôIndeed,ö agreed Motoko. Shinobu just stared, watching the surge of children rushing one way or another, like a flock of birds.

ôWhew. At least its easier this time,ö announced Kitsune, carrying her Maya in her arms. The toddler was too little to walk around without help but she looked cute in her little orange dress and matching sunhat. Kitsune looked over her shoulder down the steps. The adults of the group all stopped talking to watch. Keitaro appeared a moment later, Kimiko riding on his shoulders, cheering some song sheÆd made up.

ôHi everyone, did we miss anything?ö asked Keitaro, naively.



[que sound of faeces hitting rotating oscillator]
 

Alzrius

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#10
I have to admit that I didn't like GWH:K much when it first came out. After hearing so many good things about it, though, I went back and made myself read it. Much to my surprise, I actually grew to like it, and was enthralled by the end. As such, I'm quite happy to see a sequel fic in the works.

My only problem with Fallout so far is Kanako. Keitaro seems to be pretty well ignoring her obvious pain. He's willing to meet all the other women for trysts whenever they want to keep them at least somewhat happy, but he's not extending the same courtesy to Kanako? I can see him turning her down so that he can stay in a monogamous relationship with another woman, but when he's screwing all of the Hinata girls like this, it just doesn't seem fair (or in keeping with his character) for him to deny Kanako so completely, given that she's so obvious about her longing for him.
 

Terdwilicker

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#11
Well, I have to deal with Kanako in this story. Also, he's not screwing all the girls, just his wife, Motoko rarely (she's just VERY fertile with him) and Kaolla Su because he's semi-married to her under Molmol law. His wife doesn't know about anybody but Kaolla Su. He doesn't know about any of his other kids, but his grandma Hina does because she's clever that way. Chapter three is going to be a lot of shocks for Keitaro. This is why I stopped it where I did. All the other girls have his kid because he knocked them up in that first round of test runs, so to speak. They just opted to keep his child because they knew it was their only chance. I have to put it into more formal words though in Chapter 3.
 

Alzrius

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#12
Hm, true enough. I was over-characterizing about his relationship with the rest of the girls. That said, it still seems relatively true that he would have been with the rest of the girls if they'd ever asked; Motoko says as much to Shinobu when they're headed to Hinata Sou.

I hadn't realized that he was keeping his affair with Motoko a secret from Kitsune, though. I either misread, or it didn't say and I just assumed he'd told her.

I'm really looking forward to seeing how Keitaro, and the other girls, deal with the revelations revealed at the reunion, and especially to seeing how you deal with Kanako.
 

Terdwilicker

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#13
Keitaro is going to have a 1-2 punch in the next scene. First that these are ALL his kids. Second that Kitsune is deeply betrayed at his infidelity. She's going to suffer a lot in this, especially since Kei and Kits are a less fertile couple than he is with all of the other girls. Kitsune always felt unworthy until he picked her, which turned her world on its head. Now she's pregnant and married to him and she finds out he's got all these kids. Her first thought is he's cheated on her and that he didn't love her after all, that he's used her, that she's a joke. Then she sees that he's as surprised as she is and she feels embarrassed at the mess around her. And then she meets Motoko and sees the younger ones, connects the dots and gets furiously angry. And then the question of Amalla Su comes up, and why she's there at the reunion, and why Hina is recording their names in the Urashima records. Then you get accusations and more anger and storming off. She can't even drink because she's pregnant, she has to deal with it. I still need to write these scenes, but they matter.

Likewise, Kanako can see these are all her brother's children and she's going to assume he's been running around and will be angry and hurt that her desperate need to complete her desire for him has been ignored and denied all these years. Hina will have to get involved there, at least a bit. If I do give her an intimate moment with Keitaro in bed, she's instantly pregnant as she's built him up as the ultimate, and has to accept that he won't leave his wife for her, and he won't live up to her expectations either. Kanako acts and thinks like a stalker. Any relationship between Keitaro and Kanako is doomed. :p He just isn't going to be there for her. He hasn't been there for the others, and look what it's done to them. Mutsumi, Su, and Motoko are adjusted because they have big and supportive families to help them. Shinobu and Naru don't, and they're both pretty messed up. Su and Kitsune have had him around, at their discretion and he's been good for them, keeping them balanced and healthy too. Motoko's visits have helped her as well, despite her additional pregnancy. She's a mother of four who only gets to visit her children, and rarely visit her lover. That's gotta hurt but she's very strong, emotionally. Not perfect because she can't stay away, but strong nonetheless. It really should be Motoko that talks to Kitsune. Or maybe Tsuruko or even Kenjou, Tsuruko's husband. He'd have a unique perspective on things which might prove enlightening for Kitsune.
 

Terdwilicker

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#14
I now have 7 chapters planned for Fallout. More than I'd originally intended. And I don't have an ending yet. I'm getting closer to an idea for one.
 

toraneko

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#15
And to think, this all (IIRC) began as an omake concept.
 

Terdwilicker

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#16
True. It was the puppy begging reviews for "what happened to Keitaro after" which made me write it at all. I wanted to show that you can't have a harem without some dire emotional consequences.
 

toraneko

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#17
Terdwilicker said:
I wanted to show that you can't have a harem without some dire emotional consequences.
Well, I think it's possible, just not feasible.

The reasoning behind this is, everyone involved has to be very open to the idea, and everyone involved has to care deeply for everyone else. Also, there's not really any room for envy or jealousy in the group.

The bigger the "harem", the more likely a mutually supportive group dynamic will be to fail. And if it fails, trauma is all but guaranteed.

Anyway, that's obviosly not how it is re: Fallout. There's not much mutual support, if any. Keitaro obviously cares more about some than about others. There is quite a bit of envy and jealousy in the mix.
Not the ideal "harem", to be sure, but it's how it would have turned out in the situations given.
 

Alzrius

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#18
In all honesty, it's pushing it to call this a harem at all. A guy who sneaks around sleeping with different women, with few of them knowing about each other, isn't something that'd fit the usual description of the word.

Here, Keitaro has a wife, is very rarely screwing Motoko, and sometimes is with Kaolla (and Amalla to an unknown degree). So it's not a harem per se.
 

Terdwilicker

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#19
Well, the story is not over yet. I don't mean for it to become a harem either, though I do think the others would benefit from close proximity to each other and shared childcare and support. They got along well when living in the Hinata apartments. Whether than will still be the case in Hinata District is another question, but I want to explore the idea. Naru and Shinobu need to change their lives, and Motoko is unhappy with the dual lives she's living.
 

runestar

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#20
Yeah, now that the situation has reached such a critical juncture, I guess that's about the only thing that can be done now. They can't reverse the damage done, but they can still make the best of it and help ease their burden somewhat. :sisi:
 

Terdwilicker

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#21
Another update posted, for those of you who are reading my story. Its on mediaminer with the others.
 

Prince Charon

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#22
:D :D Just read it.

Nice, I like where I think its going.

More soon, please.
 

GaelicDragon

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#23
*looks aroud*

I didn't know you could do peel outs on the information superhighway :p

--

hmm...interesting points that you bring out. I thought Motoko's last remark about Keitaro was rather amusing.

I do find it interesting how despite their problems, all of the girls have done relatively well for themselves. Even Naru, who could be thought of to be in the worse case, does have a degree of success in her life.

I am a bit curious on how rich you are making Grandma Hina...She seems unusually wealthy for someone who had to change the Inn into a girls dormatory. Unless she planned on having Keitaro becoming manager for awhile.

Well, if you can't tell, I am not trying to add any spoilers to the fic. It is an interesting read though. Now I am going to have to wait for the next chapter.

-GaelicDragon
 

EagleCeres

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#24
Wow... Keitaro's taking the appearance of so many children he sired in quite a stride, even if Mitsune might be pissed. :sweat:

Seems like all the Hina girls miss their beloved ronin, not just physically but emotionally, indeed he DID do a number on them. His love and caring did change them and now as time has passed and lives have changed, they want a little of that comfort back.

Great job on the story. :yay:
I wonder what destiny has in store for the famous Archaeologist and his extended family.
 

Terdwilicker

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#25
What is in store for Keitaro? A good question. His main issue will be dealing with Kanako, who he hasn't and probably WONT sleep with, and with the fallout from the women who live secret lives: Shinobu the Iron Chef, and Motoko the Lawyer. What will happen when they become fodder of the paparazzi? 15 minutes of shame?

Oh yes: how rich is Hina? I think she's a multimillionaire who prefers to live less expensively, at least until she took her trip. Travelling like that is really expensive, probably $20K USD/month, maybe more. If she can afford to burn that kind of money she has a lot more.

I always thought she intentionally setup the Hinata apartments to dump Keitaro there so he could learn about women the hard way. Considering the outcome, which is almost inevitable, it worked. Hina has greatly expanded her line through Keitaro, linking the Urashima clan to Molmolian Royalty, the Shinmei Ryu (Aoyama Clan), back to the Otohimes (3rd cousins of the Urashimas), and three other girls of more ordinary heritage but clearly capable as mothers. Shinobu is a bit of a star, and Naru did that pop-idol bit, while Kitsune was his intended from the start. Not bad, considering.

Now, Hina will be focussed on getting all the girls within close distance of Keitaro, resettling them in the Hinata District, which ties back into my theory that she owns parts of it. Maybe not all, but parts which don't belong to the Hina gods (disgraced Kami) at least. Rather than set them up in the Hinata Inn, which would ruin things for Kanako and reek of uncreative though, I am opting to place them in townhomes (apartment over a shop) where they can run a business, raise their kids with Keitaro around. Will he sleep with them all again? Maybe. Probably. Motoko, Kaolla, and Amalla are all carrying his kids after all. Naru and Mutsumi would sure like one, as would Shinobu who would think having another kid to be the cat's meow and a fitting way to flip the bird to Japanese modesty. I still hold that Love Hina is actually a fairly serious Feminist tract, intentional or not. All the girls break traditional stereotypes of women, even Shinobu who is a Susie Homemaker if ever there was one. With more children, the Hinata district will ring with new life and maybe they can reopen the school again.

And Keitaro? Well, imagine him being interviewed by some investigative reporter, female, who wants to know why he's got all these kids and ends up having one too, the deepest irony. She can be my Outside Character, if you will.

Add 25 years and you get Ghost In Hinata District. Isn't Motoko Kusanagi going to be horrified when she learns just how many half siblings she has? *EG*
 
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