This is an attempt at a cross-over and I need help in critiquing the base concepts, since cross-overs/merges with Type Moon tend to be troublesome. I do know that someone else has started a thread on this topic, but the basis of the cross is very different.
What if the Throne of Heroes is a Lost Logaia created by the civilisation of Al Hazard? The entire world and the system in place is an experiment at generating & storing imprints of Heroes which can be restored to create soldiers. Unfortunately, before anything meaningful can be done, Al Hazard was destroyed. Lacking any directions, the world they cultivated and the people they placed who have been genetically modified to be able to use Magic without devices continued on. The system is a semi sentient AI that has the prime directive of storing and creating imprints with Carte Blanche to how it achieves this.
Now the plot:
Sometime after Strikers, (4 years?) Nanoha and Co discover the planet and the Lost Logaia but decide not to do anything as the only way to shut down the system is to destroy the entire planet. Beside being morally wrong, this is not possible to do as the defenses of the system as stated in the infinity library (ie the Throne of Heroes and the Eirei) would destroy them utterly. However, while there, Nanoha and co save a few people from a natural disaster (could even be the aftermath of the Grail War). The Throne of Heroes records them due to their potential and power. No one is expected to summon them in anycase since you would need an item related to them, other than having personality compatible with them.
Sometime later, Nanoha and Fate are dying slowly. The magic usage is wracking Nanoha's body despite her becoming more disciplined in its usage, due to the abuse she put herself through when she was younger. As for Fate, there was a flaw in Project Fate as she was one of the initial proto types. Vivio, now a teenager, refuses to accept this, and remembers about the Throne of Heroes and the World... as well as the wish granted by the Holy Grail.
Timing: 5th Grail War. She replaces Shinji or/and she summons .... someone (see below)
or 4th Grail War. Not likely though, I'm hoping to write this... and am not so familiar with the 4th Grail War. Well, unless I want to write
Character Info (to be expanded as necessary):
Vivio Takamichi: Has the circuits, as she was created to be the Saint's Vessal and can use magic without any device. She will not be using any devices or any big rays of doom as she does not want to attract any untoward attention until she manages to save her Mamas.
For crack, she can be completely terrified by the thoughts of her mums finding out about it and grounding her. Or we can just remove the fact that Nanoha or Fate are dying (its just a misunderstanding!). With Vivio overreacting to a prank being played by Hayate's knights and her mums scouring the multi-verse looking for her.
Summons
True Assasin: Fate-chan! She'd probably agree to save Nanoha.
What if the Throne of Heroes is a Lost Logaia created by the civilisation of Al Hazard? The entire world and the system in place is an experiment at generating & storing imprints of Heroes which can be restored to create soldiers. Unfortunately, before anything meaningful can be done, Al Hazard was destroyed. Lacking any directions, the world they cultivated and the people they placed who have been genetically modified to be able to use Magic without devices continued on. The system is a semi sentient AI that has the prime directive of storing and creating imprints with Carte Blanche to how it achieves this.
Now the plot:
Sometime after Strikers, (4 years?) Nanoha and Co discover the planet and the Lost Logaia but decide not to do anything as the only way to shut down the system is to destroy the entire planet. Beside being morally wrong, this is not possible to do as the defenses of the system as stated in the infinity library (ie the Throne of Heroes and the Eirei) would destroy them utterly. However, while there, Nanoha and co save a few people from a natural disaster (could even be the aftermath of the Grail War). The Throne of Heroes records them due to their potential and power. No one is expected to summon them in anycase since you would need an item related to them, other than having personality compatible with them.
Sometime later, Nanoha and Fate are dying slowly. The magic usage is wracking Nanoha's body despite her becoming more disciplined in its usage, due to the abuse she put herself through when she was younger. As for Fate, there was a flaw in Project Fate as she was one of the initial proto types. Vivio, now a teenager, refuses to accept this, and remembers about the Throne of Heroes and the World... as well as the wish granted by the Holy Grail.
Timing: 5th Grail War. She replaces Shinji or/and she summons .... someone (see below)
or 4th Grail War. Not likely though, I'm hoping to write this... and am not so familiar with the 4th Grail War. Well, unless I want to write
Character Info (to be expanded as necessary):
Vivio Takamichi: Has the circuits, as she was created to be the Saint's Vessal and can use magic without any device. She will not be using any devices or any big rays of doom as she does not want to attract any untoward attention until she manages to save her Mamas.
For crack, she can be completely terrified by the thoughts of her mums finding out about it and grounding her. Or we can just remove the fact that Nanoha or Fate are dying (its just a misunderstanding!). With Vivio overreacting to a prank being played by Hayate's knights and her mums scouring the multi-verse looking for her.
Summons
True Assasin: Fate-chan! She'd probably agree to save Nanoha.