I have one at Shinji's of my WiP. But, not to leave you guys that don't go there out of it as well, here is my short preview of Chapter 3!
ShinjiÆs and MisatoÆs Residence
Sunlight entered the middle of the main room, causing the current occupant, Misato, to stir lightly under the blanket that was covering her. It was following a long late nightshift, followed by heavy drinking at the end. æMan. What a headache. I need to cut back on the drinking! I mean, ShinjiÆs might be weirdo, but he isnÆt that bad is it?Æ Misato made a loud yawn. ôWell another day has come. And today is the day that Shinji goes to school. Maybe things will be better once he gets there.ö
Suddenly a certain fragrance entered her nostrils.
ôWhy does this room smell like a pine forest?ö Misato asked to no one in particular as she slowly removed the covers. ôDid someone spill a bunch ofàö Her eyes shot open and nearly bulged out of her sockets at the sight in front of her. ôWHAT THE (expletive deleted) HAPPENED HERE?!ö
At that moment, Shinji walked in to the room, in a æstifflyÆ manner. ôDo not be concerned Misato for I simply did a little cleaning of the place when I woke up this morning.ö
ôAàlittleàcleaning?ö Misato said slowly as she examined the room that used to be her living room. Everything was sparkling clean. Even stuff that would normally not sparkle in any circumstances were sparkling. The glow from the hardwood floor alone was nearly blinding her. Heck, she didnÆt even know that she had hardwood floors!
ôThat is correct Misato.ö Shinji said in a matter of fact tone. ôAll I did was pick up your laundry, picked up all the empty food boxes and beer cans and placed them in the appropriate trash reciprocals, dusted the counters, wiped the counters with a towel, polished the surface of the counters, wiped the windows clean, vacuumed the carpets, used a broom to sweep all the dust away, then used a pan to pick up all the dust, then I polished the hardwood floors, wiped the tiled surfaces clean, cleaned every surface of the toilet, cleaned off all the scum from the bathtub, wiped the walls with a damp towel to get some of the spots off, replaced all the light bulb in the living roomàö
ôOkay! You can stop now! I get it!ö Misato said, her mouth was quivering from the complete shock she was in. ôUm, about my laundryàö
ôDonÆt worry!ö Shinji said in a stern voice. ôI have a deep respect for your privacy and so, I did not enter your personal room. As for the clothes that I found outside here, I apologize if you did not want me to touch them. However I needed to move them in order to continue with my cleaning. But I did not do anything major with them, and I simply placed them all in a separate pile. Since I have no intentions of ruining them with my inferior skills, and I wasnÆt sure how you like to separate them, I placed them in piles ranging for color and type. So in one pile I put all of your red bras there. In another pile, I placed all your white bras there. In another pileàö
ôUM, THATÆS ENOUGH! THANKS SHINJI!ö Misato yelled to stop Shinji from continuing. Her face now completely flushed. ôUm, when did you do all this?ö
ôRight when I woke up at five in the morning.ö Shinji replied as he straightened up his shirt as he held his book bag.
ôFive?ö Misato raised an eyebrow. ôYouÆreàawake that early?!ö
ôThat is correct Misato!ö Shinji answered without wavering his voice. ôI believe that every hour should not be wasted by erroneous sleep for life that is insufficiently brief.ö
Misato kept blinking at the strange boy in front of her. æIs he for real?Æ ôUm, okay. I understand. I thinkàö
At that moment, Pen-Pen exited his refrigerator. He rubbed his eye, only to be blinded ultra shiny sink in the kitchen. Pen-Pen raised his wing in front of his eyes as he waddled from side to side. Suddenly, a loud THUMP echoed through the apartment as Pen-Pen slammed his head into the tableÆs leg. After a few seconds of stunned silence, Pen-Pen collapses to the floor creating another loud THUD.
Misato and Shinji both eyed the kitchen doorway for a few seconds, before returning their attention to each other.
æHow the heck did he do all this without waking me? Oh yeah thatÆs right, I was completely wasted.Æ ôUm, ANYWAYS, are youàready for school?ö Misato said nervously.
ôI am.ö Shinji said as he held up his book bag. ôI am ready to start another chapter of my life!ö
ôUhhhhàö Misato eyed from side to side. ôOkayàum, I guess you donÆt need help getting there right?ö
Shinji shook his head. ôI have memorized the location of the school and so I should have no problem getting there.ö
ôGood.ö Misato slowly said. ôIt wouldnÆt be good if youàcouldnÆt get there. HEY! Um, Shinji, I was wondering, about my stash ofàumàdrinks. You know, myàalcoholàö
ôI placed them all hard liquor in the cabinet over there.ö Shinji said pointing to one of the cabinets. ôThey beer I placed mostly in the refrigerator. ôThough, I do not believe that consuming a ton of alcohol is healthy for you. I apologize if I sound like IÆm dictating the way you should run your life, for that is not my intention. I am just concerned about your well being.ö
ôOh, um, yeah. IÆllàconsider that.ö Misato said waving at him. ôUm, thanks for the concern?ö
ôYou are welcome Misato.ö Shinji said bowing to her. ôNow, I should be on my way to school. IÆll see you later at NERV!ö
ôYeah!ö Misato said as she waved him goodbye. ôSee ya later!ö
After Shinji slammed the door shut, Misato quickly crawled over to the cabinet and took out the first thing she could get her hands on. Which was the bottle of rum that she was saving for just an occasion like this. ôIf this keeps up, think IÆm going to need to import some Everclear soon!ö Seeing that a glass was not necessarily, Misato popped open the bottle, and started to chug it down.
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Mind you, this is still a work in progress. I still have tons planned for this chapter! Mainly, this version of Shinji going to school (oh what fun we will have there!). Of course, until I get there, any comments and concerns that you have, tell me! Especially since, its going to be hard keeping up with the insanity I set up in the first two chapters for, who knows how long I will stick to this one! :lol:
ShinjiÆs and MisatoÆs Residence
Sunlight entered the middle of the main room, causing the current occupant, Misato, to stir lightly under the blanket that was covering her. It was following a long late nightshift, followed by heavy drinking at the end. æMan. What a headache. I need to cut back on the drinking! I mean, ShinjiÆs might be weirdo, but he isnÆt that bad is it?Æ Misato made a loud yawn. ôWell another day has come. And today is the day that Shinji goes to school. Maybe things will be better once he gets there.ö
Suddenly a certain fragrance entered her nostrils.
ôWhy does this room smell like a pine forest?ö Misato asked to no one in particular as she slowly removed the covers. ôDid someone spill a bunch ofàö Her eyes shot open and nearly bulged out of her sockets at the sight in front of her. ôWHAT THE (expletive deleted) HAPPENED HERE?!ö
At that moment, Shinji walked in to the room, in a æstifflyÆ manner. ôDo not be concerned Misato for I simply did a little cleaning of the place when I woke up this morning.ö
ôAàlittleàcleaning?ö Misato said slowly as she examined the room that used to be her living room. Everything was sparkling clean. Even stuff that would normally not sparkle in any circumstances were sparkling. The glow from the hardwood floor alone was nearly blinding her. Heck, she didnÆt even know that she had hardwood floors!
ôThat is correct Misato.ö Shinji said in a matter of fact tone. ôAll I did was pick up your laundry, picked up all the empty food boxes and beer cans and placed them in the appropriate trash reciprocals, dusted the counters, wiped the counters with a towel, polished the surface of the counters, wiped the windows clean, vacuumed the carpets, used a broom to sweep all the dust away, then used a pan to pick up all the dust, then I polished the hardwood floors, wiped the tiled surfaces clean, cleaned every surface of the toilet, cleaned off all the scum from the bathtub, wiped the walls with a damp towel to get some of the spots off, replaced all the light bulb in the living roomàö
ôOkay! You can stop now! I get it!ö Misato said, her mouth was quivering from the complete shock she was in. ôUm, about my laundryàö
ôDonÆt worry!ö Shinji said in a stern voice. ôI have a deep respect for your privacy and so, I did not enter your personal room. As for the clothes that I found outside here, I apologize if you did not want me to touch them. However I needed to move them in order to continue with my cleaning. But I did not do anything major with them, and I simply placed them all in a separate pile. Since I have no intentions of ruining them with my inferior skills, and I wasnÆt sure how you like to separate them, I placed them in piles ranging for color and type. So in one pile I put all of your red bras there. In another pile, I placed all your white bras there. In another pileàö
ôUM, THATÆS ENOUGH! THANKS SHINJI!ö Misato yelled to stop Shinji from continuing. Her face now completely flushed. ôUm, when did you do all this?ö
ôRight when I woke up at five in the morning.ö Shinji replied as he straightened up his shirt as he held his book bag.
ôFive?ö Misato raised an eyebrow. ôYouÆreàawake that early?!ö
ôThat is correct Misato!ö Shinji answered without wavering his voice. ôI believe that every hour should not be wasted by erroneous sleep for life that is insufficiently brief.ö
Misato kept blinking at the strange boy in front of her. æIs he for real?Æ ôUm, okay. I understand. I thinkàö
At that moment, Pen-Pen exited his refrigerator. He rubbed his eye, only to be blinded ultra shiny sink in the kitchen. Pen-Pen raised his wing in front of his eyes as he waddled from side to side. Suddenly, a loud THUMP echoed through the apartment as Pen-Pen slammed his head into the tableÆs leg. After a few seconds of stunned silence, Pen-Pen collapses to the floor creating another loud THUD.
Misato and Shinji both eyed the kitchen doorway for a few seconds, before returning their attention to each other.
æHow the heck did he do all this without waking me? Oh yeah thatÆs right, I was completely wasted.Æ ôUm, ANYWAYS, are youàready for school?ö Misato said nervously.
ôI am.ö Shinji said as he held up his book bag. ôI am ready to start another chapter of my life!ö
ôUhhhhàö Misato eyed from side to side. ôOkayàum, I guess you donÆt need help getting there right?ö
Shinji shook his head. ôI have memorized the location of the school and so I should have no problem getting there.ö
ôGood.ö Misato slowly said. ôIt wouldnÆt be good if youàcouldnÆt get there. HEY! Um, Shinji, I was wondering, about my stash ofàumàdrinks. You know, myàalcoholàö
ôI placed them all hard liquor in the cabinet over there.ö Shinji said pointing to one of the cabinets. ôThey beer I placed mostly in the refrigerator. ôThough, I do not believe that consuming a ton of alcohol is healthy for you. I apologize if I sound like IÆm dictating the way you should run your life, for that is not my intention. I am just concerned about your well being.ö
ôOh, um, yeah. IÆllàconsider that.ö Misato said waving at him. ôUm, thanks for the concern?ö
ôYou are welcome Misato.ö Shinji said bowing to her. ôNow, I should be on my way to school. IÆll see you later at NERV!ö
ôYeah!ö Misato said as she waved him goodbye. ôSee ya later!ö
After Shinji slammed the door shut, Misato quickly crawled over to the cabinet and took out the first thing she could get her hands on. Which was the bottle of rum that she was saving for just an occasion like this. ôIf this keeps up, think IÆm going to need to import some Everclear soon!ö Seeing that a glass was not necessarily, Misato popped open the bottle, and started to chug it down.
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Mind you, this is still a work in progress. I still have tons planned for this chapter! Mainly, this version of Shinji going to school (oh what fun we will have there!). Of course, until I get there, any comments and concerns that you have, tell me! Especially since, its going to be hard keeping up with the insanity I set up in the first two chapters for, who knows how long I will stick to this one! :lol:
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