Naruto A Bad Boy and His Punishment [Snippet]

biigoh

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#51
The look on Sasuke-kun's face showed the panic and fear as he was ushered into Sakura's bedroom, and a moment later, the shame that he felt said panic and fear.

Shame. Fear. Pleasure. Those are the key to the boy.

Sakura tried to keep the words in mind that her mother had spoken, instead of just taking advantage of her Voice to... have her way with Sasuke. That was the easy way, and likely one that would just disappoint her mother.

"We're going to talk, Sasuke-kun," She was proud of the way she managed to keep her voice steady. "And then I'm going to let you decide on what you want to do."

Choices. Or an illusion of such would be vital in retaining long term control.

"But first," the pink haired kunoichi sat down on the edge of her bed, with a bottle of medical lotion. Patting her lap, it was clear what she wanted. "Bend over, we'll have that looked after."

As Sasuke lay down on her lap, Sakura sighed with a small measure of contentment as she stroked the warm bottom of her team mate. The redness from the earlier spanks still felt warm against her cool hand. A little indulgence never hurt anyone... right?

You must be hard. Never ever second guess yourself. Not while you're using the Voice.

With care and a gentleness, that she didn't know she possess, Sakura rubbed the lotion on the warm redness of Sasuke's skin. She was also surprised that her hand hadn't 'accidentally' slipped down there, guided by the curvature of Sasuke's rear, to the hardness that she knew was there as it bumped against her thigh. She could feel the erection as Sasuke squirmed in her lap as she applied the medical lotion to the blistered bottom.

"Is it really that bad? Here in Konoha that you have to run away?" Sakura's voice was normal now as she continued to apply the lotion. She wanted him to listen to her and think. "To trust that whoever you were running to... that snake nin, right? Wasn't lying to you? That he'd give you what you wanted?"

That low growl and followed by that contemplative hnnn was evidence enough to Sakura that he was paying attention to what she was saying. Somewhat distracted by their relative positions and likely how nice it felt to have soothing creme applied to the rather crimson rear, but paying attention.

"I think you're not that gullible... I think that you like being told what to do," The shock from Sasuke was palpable to Sakura as he stiffened at what she said. "Implied like your brother telling you to kill him or be killed. Or not so implied when that snake nin got into your head and offered you things."

"Th... that's not true," The heat in Sasuke's response after he recovered from his shock.

"Isn't it," She murmured back softly, a single finger upon the small of his back. "You haven't tried to escape since I caught you."

"You... you made me. That... that voice of yours," He snarled, but no attempt was made to escape her laughable hold with a single finger.

"Yes. I made you. And you liked it. Just like I made you lie down on my lap, and you liked it," now her other hand slipped ever slightly to cup the one body part that the last Uchiha had to prize almost as great as his eyes. "Say what you will, if you didn't like it. You would have escaped."

"Before you go 'sit' on me again?" There was a whining undertone now to Sasuke's voice as if he were mentally decrying about how unfair things were.

"Let's assume I didn't do that, and you do run away. How far do you think you'll get before being caught by the ANBU? Do you honestly think that the Hokage wouldn't send a recovery team after you?" Sakura sighed as her retreated upwards to a 'safe' area in its application of lotion. "And if you do get away... what do you honestly think an enemy village would do to a bloodline limit user like the last Uchiha. I honestly don't want to think of you ending up blind, crippled and milked for your seed."

The hiss of denial from him didn't get far. Dying down in the face of her words.

"Wouldn't it be better to stay in Konoha. We're a team, right? Naruto, you and me. And Kakashi-sensei. And if you can't bring yourself to trust us. To work together towards a goal. Then... what kind of a team would we be?" Sakura hoped. Really, she did hope that this would convince him. That she wouldn't need to use the Voice on him.

"And if you need directions. If you really prefer that someone control you. To not feel guilty about things you do, because you're being made to do things. Being forced." Her voice slipped, for the slightest bit. To emphasis her last word and intent with the echo of the Voice of Command. "Controlled."

"I can do that. So, what will it be, Sasuke-kun? Will you run away to have your eyes harvested by some freak? I'll let you go, no attempts from me to stop you. Or... you can stay here. It'll be your choice."

***
Writer's notes - it lives!!!

I am now a practitioner of Thread Necromancy!
 
#52
This made me crack up quite effectively. Like Lord Raine I thought this involved sacred beads but this is much more interesting. I always thought a dash of Dune would make Naruto significantly better, and it seems I was right. And necroing your own thread is no crime. Trust me, I know.
 

biigoh

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#54
Thanks... I take it that I'm still doing fine skirting the edges of porn/not-porn? :p

And yes, the Dune Voice is an amazing ability when you think about it. And would totally make for a scary Bloodline limit if used... properly.

Not everything is about blasting chakra and black fire until the other side is dead.
 

biigoh

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#55
Reminded of fic...
Uncertain of path to take.
Choice left to readers~.

Pick One
[X] Sasuke agrees to stay.
[X] Sasuke doesn't agree to stay, and makes a run for it without his pants or underwear~
- - [X] Nah... Sakura would lend him a pair of spats [click for definition].
[X] Some brilliant and ingenious option beyond my thinking brainards power~
 

biigoh

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#58
violinmana from TFF said:
Sasuke runs, but Sakura's mother spanks him some moar.
MrGazzer from QQ said:
[X] Sasuke agrees to stay.
Xicree from QQ said:
[X] Sasuke remains unconvinced... but finds himself... undeniably intrigued. (Interpret tries to run for the hills... falls flat on his face cause legs don't wanna.)
 

biigoh

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#59
"I can do that. So, what will it be, Sasuke-kun? Will you run away to have your eyes harvested by some freak? I'll let you go, no attempts from me to stop you. Or... you can stay here. It'll be your choice."

There was a sense of flutter inside Sasuke's chest at the word choice. "I..."

It certainly didn't come from the way her hand was rubbing on his far too warm rear. Or how... possessive that cool hand felt as if declaring that his bottom belonged to it, that he belonged to it.

His mind shied away from what her hand had cupped exactly. Of how cool it felt against the warmth there. Of how it made him want... needed... no.

And wasn't it nice to have someone just tell him what to do?

To make him obey?

No. It wasn't. That was for someone who was weak.

And he, he was the Last Uchiha. He was strong.

He had to be the strongest. He had to become stronger, strong enough to deal with Itachi. Couldn't she and the others see that if he stayed here, he would only become weak.

"I..."

"I..."

"Shhhhhh...." With that, she lightly stroked his back like a stray cat.

"I... I can't sta... stay. N... not here." The stammered out response only brought a sigh of disappointment from the kunoichi.

"Really? Very well," With that, he was allowed to stand up once more, no longer pinned lying on her lap by a gentle hand.

The look of disappointment on Sakura's face as she looked at him was almost enough to make him shrivel and step back. It was his 'pride' as it stood tall and firm in the face of Sakura's disappointment that made him realize that he wasn't in the wrong, that she held no inherent authority over him.

That he shouldn't cower before her disappointed look, even if he was currently disadvantaged against her.

Despite this, the cool air from the open window was enough to cause his balls to pull in and up against his groin. There was a blush from Sakura as she looked up and down his body. "If you wish to leave, you can. I won't stop you, Sasuke. But... before you go...."

She raised a finger before he could say a thing. "I'll get you something to replace your pants."

That brought a pause to his thoughts as she looked into her dresser before she turned to look at him once more in consideration. That cool look directed at him wasn't quite enough to make him flee in terror out the window, but it was almost enough.

She said [something], a single word or perhaps a phrase, and...

He had to shake his head, there had been something...

Something...

He blinked at the soft fabric in his hands that he had been handed.

Soft, white... cottony?

That moment stretched on as he kept looking at the simple triangle fabric in his hands.

He looked back up at Sakura in mortification. "I... I can't wear this!"

"Well, you can't just go out there... showing off your Uchiha pride, right?" She looked at him before nodding as she continued on. "And it only make sense for you to wear some kind of underwear. Besides, it's not like anyone will know what you're wearing underneath."

He swallowed. It wasn't as if he had any choice here. "F.... fine."

With that he slipped on the soft fabric, trapping his hardness against him.

There was an approving smile from Sakura as she looked him over now before she handed him a pair of black spats to put on. This, at least, wasn't too bad... as it was an item that was somewhat unisex.

At least, before the discovery that it was somewhat... snug. But that was... better than a skirt or going without and flashing everyone. There were laws against such in Konoha.

The appreciative look directed at Sasuke was enough that he really didn't want to look down to see just how snug it really was.

Instead, he fled out the window and into the night.

***
Owari?
 

biigoh

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#61
violinmana said:
Did she give him whitey tighties or a diaper?
"Fuhuhuhuhuhu... Sasuke has already gotten into my panties, Ino-pig~"
 
#63
the only problem I have with this fic is... A big point of the whole Dom\Sub relationship is the Sub _CHOOSING_ his\her Dom by their own free will.

Sasuke already has been mind raped by Itachi in having REVENGE! as his most important goal in life. Twice.
Once he gets his wits back, if he still feels any effect of The Voice, Sasuke should either going to run for the hill(where the Sound 4 are) or murdering Sakura(and probably her parents, burning down the house then salting the ground) as reaction.

Basically, as long as The Voice has any(even minimal) effect on the mind and is not exclusively on the body, I think the story is not going to work. Unless you were actually going for a "Break Sasuke"-type fic.
 

biigoh

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#64
The hardest thing that she found herself doing that night wasn't catching Sasuke, nor was it taking him to her mother, or even controlling her urges while she had her hands on him.

No, it was something small and ludicrous. Also completely unexpected. But at the same time, the hardest thing ever that she had to struggle with. The twenty-fifth Shinobi rule; a shinobi must never show their tears. Or a variant of it... she had to struggle so very hard to hide her blush and just how she found Sasuke standing before her to be... cute.

Standing in front of her with his "little Sasuke" at attention.

Putting on her pristine white panties.

Oh, if only Ino had been here to see it. She would be so jealous and... why wouldn't she want to show this to Ino again? Weren't they friends again, after all? And didn't friends share?

Sakura breathed out again at the memory of the sight of the hardness trapped in her white panties, and then... ahhhh... when he had put on her spats, how his "Uchiha pride" had been confined by its all too tight stretchy fabric. How she could see everything outlined as if the spats were a second skin.

Even now as she watched Sasuke run back home, if the direction he was heading was any judge, she had to dab at her nose which had started to bleed at the memory she had of him leaping out her window, of how form fitting the spats had been.

There was a shake of head as she sighed at the memories there. She would need some... a lone time later. Yes, later.

For now, she had to speak to her mother.

- - -

A quick walk downstairs and she was treated to the sight of her mother preparing to head out. While, technically, she was a civilian or rather a retired kunochi, she was still consulted by certain parts of the Konoha shinobi hierarchy for unspecified things.

"Mother?"

"Mmmmm, I take it then that he left?" the question by her mot5her seemed almost unnecessary.

"Kind of? He was heading home the last I saw," Sakura looked down, disappointed that Sasuke had left.

The Haruno matriarch paused, tilted her head and looked at Sakura. "Well, I'm sure the ANBU will keep an eye on him and make sure he won't run for it."

"You did good," There was a gentle rustle of Sakura's hair by her mother. "But I really did wish you didn't have to do what you did there."

With that, Sakura watched her mother leave for work.

***
Owari?
 

biigoh

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#65
ankokudaishogun said:
Ish crack, man~

Also note that the Mind part is minimal and is very much body control... including the brain if you are really good at it.
 
#66
This is AWESOME borderline-crack/smut.

Oh dammit to hell, the last post on this thing was months ago. I'm not used to a forum with so many different subforums and the possibility that the "latest" post in any of them could have been made half a year ago.
 

biigoh

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#67
Sunder the Gold said:
This is AWESOME borderline-crack/smut.

Oh dammit to hell, the last post on this thing was months ago. I'm not used to a forum with so many different subforums and the possibility that the "latest" post in any of them could have been made half a year ago.
Is cool. Tanuki don't mind... erm... I don't mind. :3
 
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