Harry Potter A Hellish Imprint

Ice-Tea-1983

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If you can't write Hagrid's accent, just write it normally, and consider advice about how to alter it to fit better.

Personally, I find it enough just using "ter" instead of "to" - maybe drop the "h" in the beginning of some words and replace them with ' ...
 

Li Qin

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And of course don't forget that when Harry hears about what Voldie's after.

"Then he's a fool beyond redemption." Harry muttered as he started to show the tips of his teeth as he started smiling. His hair partially covered his faced as he stared at Dumbledore. "In this world immortality doesn't even exist."
 

SotF

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Li Qin said:
And of course don't forget that when Harry hears about what Voldie's after.

"Then he's a fool beyond redemption." Harry muttered as he started to show the tips of his teeth as he started smiling. His hair partially covered his faced as he stared at Dumbledore. "In this world immortality doesn't even exist."
Except that Harry has already obtained immortality thanks to Voldemort (Causing him to absorb the Philosophers Stone) which could be interesting.
 

Li Qin

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One of the good points about Alucard was that he proclaimed that immortality/eternity didn't exist and that everything died. Having Harry say he's/be immortal destroys a good part of his character.
 

SotF

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Which means that I have to either keep Harry in the dark as to that, or find a way to word it so he isn't actually lying.
 

Dubrichius

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SotF said:
Which means that I have to either keep Harry in the dark as to that, or find a way to word it so he isn't actually lying.
You could just have it that when Harry absorbed the Philosopher's Stone, it imbued him with an almost unlimited amount of life force. Kinda like with Jack Harkness in Doctor Who and Torchwood.
 

Li Qin

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Or just make it so that the stone makes him ageless rather then actual immortality.

After all Alucard can be killed, it's just bloody fucking hard to do. The same can be done with Harry.
 

SotF

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I'll have to think about how to pull it off correctly.
 

Ringmaster

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Li Qin said:
Or just make it so that the stone makes him ageless rather then actual immortality.

After all Alucard can be killed, it's just bloody fucking hard to do. The same can be done with Harry.
He's got a point. Nicholas Flammel isn't really immortal, just not capable of dying of old age. Assumably, the stone does help with wounds and such, but as it's not a part of him, like it now seem to be with Harry, it's not as effective for ol' Nick.

How to make it so he's not perfectly immortal and indestructable now... hmm...

How about the stone has a limit? Like, it's got a sheer overwhelming amount of power, but if the stone became exhausted, it becomes less effective, less able to piece Harry back together. It would then need time to restore it's power, leaving Harry (semi) defenseless.
 

Lagrange

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well, I'm not really sure how, but Alucard can be killed. He can also be bound into service or other things. He doesn't age, as he has complete control over his form...

metamorphmagus in a completely new direction?

Either way, Alucard is just as immortal as the Highlander, and only slightly more so than Volde.

Blast up Alucard, and he regenerates himself a few seconds later.

Blast up Volde, and his followers regenerate him a few years later.

with the horcruxes, Volde shouldn't be aging either, and we know that Alucard doesn't age.

Destroy Alucard on Blessed grounds with Blessed silver weapons and use seals to prevent him from regenerating, seal his power and launch the remains into the sun? I think that will kill him.
Destroy all Volde's horcruxes, then kill Volde. viola, dead volde.

When Alucard says that all things die, he means that anything that doesn't die on its own get killed by something else.
 

Revered

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Silly question, but isn't the Hermione troll scene reminiscent enough of Integra waking of Alucard to cause him to fixate on her? *coughs* less then 7 days isn't necroing is it?
 

Laniac67

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Yes, that would be awesome, and no, it isn't necro. Imagine what would happen if Malfoy called Hermione a Mudblood...

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Harry appeared between between Malfoy and Hermione, phasing through a wall in the process. "Mudblood? I don't think so. If anyone here has nasty tasting blood, it's you."

"I suppose you would know what the mu-, er, Granger's blood tastes like?"

"Yep. It was just going to waste when she was bleeding after that troll attack, so I helped myself. I even sealed the wound for her."

Ron decided this was a good time to pipe up. "I found out the painful way - don't say 'bite me' to Harry unless you really mean it."

Crabbe and Goyle, with all their usual intelligence, misunderstood him and covered their groins protectively.

----
 

WannabeKurt

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Laniac67 said:
Yes, that would be awesome, and no, it isn't necro. Imagine what would happen if Malfoy called Hermione a Mudblood...

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Harry appeared between between Malfoy and Hermione, phasing through a wall in the process. "Mudblood? I don't think so. If anyone here has nasty tasting blood, it's you."

"I suppose you would know what the mu-, er, Granger's blood tastes like?"

"Yep. It was just going to waste when she was bleeding after that troll attack, so I helped myself. I even sealed the wound for her."

Ron decided this was a good time to pipe up. "I found out the painful way - don't say 'bite me' to Harry unless you really mean it."

Crabbe and Goyle, with all their usual intelligence, misunderstood him and covered their groins protectively.

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Lol'd
 

Prince Charon

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WannabeKurt said:
Laniac67 said:
Yes, that would be awesome, and no, it isn't necro.? Imagine what would happen if Malfoy called Hermione a Mudblood...

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Harry appeared between between Malfoy and Hermione, phasing through a wall in the process.? "Mudblood?? I don't think so.? If anyone here has nasty tasting blood, it's you."

"I suppose you would know what the mu-, er, Granger's blood tastes like?"

"Yep.? It was just going to waste when she was bleeding after that troll attack, so I helped myself.? I even sealed the wound for her."

Ron decided this was a good time to pipe up.? "I found out the painful way - don't say 'bite me' to Harry unless you really mean it."

Crabbe and Goyle, with all their usual intelligence, misunderstood him and covered their groins protectively.

----
Lol'd
:snigger: :lol: Agreed.
 

WannabeKurt

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Oh oh, I has an ideas!


"Can't sleep, Harry will eat me!"


make it a running gag, up to the point that Harry says "Yeah, I get that a lot"
 

Laniac67

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WannabeKurt said:
Oh oh, I has an ideas!


"Can't sleep, Harry will eat me!"


make it a running gag, up to the point that Harry says "Yeah, I get that a lot"
Better yet, have some of the Gryffindor girls start saying that.
 

Deadpan29

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Lagrange said:
well, I'm not really sure how, but Alucard can be killed. He can also be bound into service or other things. He doesn't age, as he has complete control over his form...

metamorphmagus in a completely new direction?

Either way, Alucard is just as immortal as the Highlander, and only slightly more so than Volde.

Blast up Alucard, and he regenerates himself a few seconds later.

Blast up Volde, and his followers regenerate him a few years later.

with the horcruxes, Volde shouldn't be aging either, and we know that Alucard doesn't age.

Destroy Alucard on Blessed grounds with Blessed silver weapons and use seals to prevent him from regenerating, seal his power and launch the remains into the sun? I think that will kill him.
Destroy all Volde's horcruxes, then kill Volde. viola, dead volde.

When Alucard says that all things die, he means that anything that doesn't die on its own get killed by something else.
From what I understand about Alucard is that his power level is related to the number of lives he's taken. Each of those beasts within him is a soul he has absorbed. The point being that regenerating like he does consumes some of those souls. So if you could blow him to bits enough times without letting him feed/recharge, that should do it.

Transferring this to Harry, the Stone has a limited amount of power. Maybe it recharges over time, maybe it needs something to recharge. Blood would be a very appropriate element for recharging, but it would need some back story to justify it beyond it fitting the vampire thing.
 

fitzgerald

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Laniac67 said:
WannabeKurt said:
Oh oh, I has an ideas!


"Can't sleep, Harry will eat me!"


make it a running gag, up to the point that Harry says "Yeah, I get that a lot"
Better yet, have some of the Gryffindor girls start saying that.
Of course at that point the girls get very, very big grins on their face.

And start arguing about whose turn it is next.

Ciao
 

Cypher3au

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fitzgerald said:
Laniac67 said:
WannabeKurt said:
Oh oh, I has an ideas!


"Can't sleep, Harry will eat me!"


make it a running gag, up to the point that Harry says "Yeah, I get that a lot"
Better yet, have some of the Gryffindor girls start saying that.
Of course at that point the girls get very, very big grins on their face.

And start arguing about whose turn it is next.

Ciao
I can see that. Starting from the very first episode of the original Hellsing animated series, it's plain for all to see that Alucard (and apparently every other vampire) has an extraordinarily large tongue, compared to the average human.
 

simpleviet

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Jeez does every thread eventually lead to perverse ideas? Oh wait.....nvm
 

cgobyd

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Of course it does simpleviet. And frankly I would be a little afraid if it didn't.

Also what house would this Harry be in?

I just can't see him fitting in any.
 

Xerxezz

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simpleviet said:
Jeez does every thread eventually lead to perverse ideas? Oh wait.....nvm
THIS. IS. TFF!

I think the idea about the stone needing time to recharge has its merit, as does the idea about Harry needing to drink blood. Just have the stone transform the life-force in the blood that Harry drinks to Harry's own lifeforce. Keep is as simple and plausible as possible without going into greater detail.
 

Laniac67

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cgobyd said:
Of course it does simpleviet. And frankly I would be a little afraid if it didn't.

Also what house would this Harry be in?

I just can't see him fitting in any.
He'd probably go in Gryffindor by default. His intelligence isn't changed from normal, and he certainly lacks the motivation to study that would suggest Ravenclaw. He's definitely not the hard-working Hufflepuff type. As to Slytherin, what's left for his ambition? He already has more power (or thinks he does) than any other student. His bloodlust, on the other hand, may be close enough to bravery for the Sorting Hat to fudge it.
 

SotF

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Harry grinned as he felt his power grow in the chamber as he faced the wraith before him.

The slow walk across the chamber with an insane grin growing wider across his lips.

The piece of the entity called Tom Riddle felt the icy darkness wash through the chamber in a way eerily reminiscent of a flash flood down a gully. The light of the magical torches growing dimmer to the point where he believed the blood toned eyes of the young Potter had eye shine in the way most predators do.

"So you claim to be the pathetic piece of wizarding trash who failed to kill an infant?" the fanged one stated with a glint of glee flashing across his pale features.

The grin widened, showing the long canines that overlapped his lower teeth.

"A fool and a petty tyrant with no hint as to what real power is," he laughed.

A step closer as the horocrux retreated.

"You can't kill me Potter," it stated with a dark laugh, taking up the wand of the fallen form he had been feeding off of.

"Oh," came the retort, "I've long since learned that anything can be slain."

A pause as their eyes met across the room.

"Let me let you in on a little secret," came an almost conspiratorial laugh, "I've already faced you and won, your current spirit fled like a dog with his tail between his legs."

The long tongue extended as the one who believed himself to be a vampire laughed, a hollow and somehow demonic chuckle that flooded the room.

"Call forth your ancestors monster," came the statement, "At least such a beast would be a challenge for a No Life King!"
 

Rift120

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Heh got to love Harry sneering at Voldie in the chamber. although a small omake..


although this omake popped into my head reading the snippet:

Harry (to weak Ginny): are you a virgin?..

Giny: o_O I'm ELEVEN YOU GIT!!!

(Would it help Ginny if you know vampirism resulted in a instant boob job? :D )

A thought... what will ALucard! Harry make of Veela's in year 4?
 
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