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verifiaman

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<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8032469/5/The_Humans_Strike_Back' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8032469/5/The_Humans_Strike_Back</a> updated.
 

CatOnFire

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verifiaman said:
I do like the points he raises though about the rosario to vampire fanfiction.
That's pretty much all it has going for it though. Honestly the story is a terrible human wank fest, like the exact opposite of the multitude of vampire wank fics. I honestly couldn't read past the first hollow encounter.
 

verifiaman

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Yeah, but it's the one of the few that uses the most real world weapons and puts them in believable applications. At least the plot's starting to pick up, now that soul society and hueco mundo is aware of them now.
 

Steel

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The only problem is that he's way, way underpowering Bleach. Now, I fucking love humanitywank, and I'm not going to deny it. One of the stories I look forward to most is stuff that involves our transhuman selves passing vampires and other worthless supernatural creatures.

BLEACH IS FAST. People are almost certainly fast than jets, their bullets, etc. They are strong enough to wreck entire tank divisions. There is some ludicrous bullshit here.
 

verifiaman

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He probably should've just made it a rosario vampire story only.
 

WizardOne

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I got as far as the bit where in the first chapter the humans start bragging about how their augmentations will allow them to snap the neck of any vampire.


Then I red exed it and moved on.


Vampires? We've seen that they're able to throw upwards of 5-10 tonnes really, really fast, and also kick rocks that weigh the same into kibble sized chunks.

What the FUCK kind of 'augments' would allow a human to easily beat that?

Really?


Anyway, massive pass.
 

nintendokid

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Steel said:
The only problem is that he's way, way underpowering Bleach. Now, I fucking love humanitywank, and I'm not going to deny it. One of the stories I look forward to most is stuff that involves our transhuman selves passing vampires and other worthless supernatural creatures.

BLEACH IS FAST. People are almost certainly fast than jets, their bullets, etc. They are strong enough to wreck entire tank divisions. There is some ludicrous bullshit here.
Then he'd be underpowering vampires too, since they've been able to do shit at that level too in Rosario. Hell, not just vampires, there's a lot of Youkai able to do shit like that.

Granted, I haven't read the fic in question, but unless the humans are doing something like Ishida and the Quincy, there's no way at all for them to keep up with/harm Youkai or Shinigami.



I got as far as the bit where in the first chapter the humans start bragging about how their augmentations will allow them to snap the neck of any vampire.


Then I red exed it and moved on.


Vampires? We've seen that they're able to throw upwards of 5-10 tonnes really, really fast, and also kick rocks that weigh the same into kibble sized chunks.

What the FUCK kind of 'augments' would allow a human to easily beat that?

Really?
This. So much this. The monsters in Rosario (not even just the vampires, but especially the vampires) are unbelievably powerful and nearly impossible to kill. And don't even get me started on the Shinso and shit like the Jigen-tou.
 

zeebee1

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And the story started by having augmented humans in power suits take down the legendary vampire.
 

elric

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The premise could be good, but not by having straight up fights against monsters. Humans should be cheating bastards who exploit their advantages of tools, numbers, and coordination. The way to kill vampires is not powered armor, it's a Firetruck.

A direct fight against monsters is what the monsters are best at. So cheat. Use mines, bombs, toxins, snipers, etc. . . That's the way to beat the monsters, not by simply getting stronger than them.
 

Shadowseraph

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Why do humans need to fight monsters at all? Human's already won, they're not the ones hiding in the fringes of the world and training their children to imitate the dominant species.
 

theunderbolt

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Shadowseraph said:
Why do humans need to fight monsters at all? Human's already won, they're not the ones hiding in the fringes of the world and training their children to imitate the dominant species.
Because we tend to hate/fear that which is different than us. Also the fact that any of the higher tier being in those Universes could solo us if they wanted.
 

Shadowseraph

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And yet they don't. Why should that matter anyway, we all deal with people more powerful than us every day, its just not physical power in most cases.
 

Seed00

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Kisuke Uahara offered his services and is providing intel and technical advice. I guess that counts for something.
 

verifiaman

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elric said:
The premise could be good, but not by having straight up fights against monsters. Humans should be cheating bastards who exploit their advantages of tools, numbers, and coordination. The way to kill vampires is not powered armor, it's a Firetruck.

A direct fight against monsters is what the monsters are best at. So cheat. Use mines, bombs, toxins, snipers, etc. . . That's the way to beat the monsters, not by simply getting stronger than them.
And right you are. If they managed to hold back VAMPIRES of all things with primitive weapons, then even minor infantry weapons could kill them via headshot.
 

zeebee1

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If they need the help of former humans then they've already lost the race of human supremacy.
 

theunderbolt

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Shadowseraph said:
And yet they don't. Why should that matter anyway, we all deal with people more powerful than us every day, its just not physical power in most cases.
Fear makes people do stupid things <_<
 

CatOnFire

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theunderbolt said:
Fear makes people do stupid things? <_<
This message was brought to you by 'The Voice of Angsty Realism'. Parroting the emo culture one quote at a time.
 

verifiaman

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<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8032469/6/The_Humans_Strike_Back#' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8032469/6/The_...ns_Strike_Back#</a> The HOLLOWS strike back.
 

zeebee1

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Could you just admit that you are the only one whom likes that and stop talking about its updates?
 
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zeebee1 said:
Could you just admit that you are the only one whom likes that and stop talking about its updates?
Oh snap, someone call the police! Verifiaman is being oppressed!
 

verifiaman

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shit_happens23 said:
zeebee1 said:
Could you just admit that you are the only one whom likes that and stop talking about its updates?
Oh snap, someone call the police! Verifiaman is being oppressed!
I just tend to ignore him, based from what i've seen in his past posts.
 

zeebee1

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So you're going to ignore all the other people who said you're promoting shit and listen to the one person who likes it. By the way, that one person is you.
 

WizardOne

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I hate to agree with zeebee.

Like seriously, I do. But in this case he's not just being a sarcastic prick, he's right.
 

Mordart

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You call is Sarcasm, I call it Charm. It's a unique Flavor to the shitstorm here.
 

verifiaman

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I hate stories like these: <a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7618952/1/Dragon_Ball_Universal_Tour' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7618952/1/Drag..._Universal_Tour</a> Interesting premise, okay read, but the grammar mistakes are so goddamn distracting.

Edit:Wrong topic.
 
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