I can't believe the complaints that the fic is bad b/c it doesn't portray the GAang in a 'good enough light'. Newsflash - it's Zuko's POV. He doesn't HAVE to like the GAang just b/c the readers do, and he doesn't HAVE to know Aang and the GAang as well as the readers do. He's a suspicious * and HIS PEOPLEÆS LIVES depend on him making the right choice, cautious judgments and trusting the right people. HeÆs not Ty Lee; he canÆt read auras and automatically know everything there is to know about a person. Geez, the GAang don't know all about Zuko, how's he supposed to know all about THEM?
Exept it hasn't shown Zuko or Iroh to be _wrong_ about anything in their judgment. Look if it actually shows that Iroh and Zuko were wrong (even somewhat) and judging too harshly Rabe and I will cease any objections. But the fic seems to acts as if it's the objective truth.
Now, my two cents on Katara ^^ For those fed up with her behaviour - understandable, but we're the READER, so we're not seeing from her pov. She needs a little slack.
'Cos really, whenÆs she going to act nice to ZUKO? Yeah, sheÆs NOT, and the Crystal Caves scene in canon doesnÆt count b/c she got him and Iroh captured in the first place by AZULA who (though Katara didnÆt know THEN how dangerous she really WAS) has DONE something to Suki, something prolly pretty horrible, and it's obvious Azula doesn't like Zuko either, and the thought of something happening to Zuko that might be like whatever happened to Suki...
1. "Knocked around"? a little yelling is "knocking around".
2. Zuko isn't nice to Katara until that scene either, their last encounter was him ordering her to go away and fireing a blast at her. Don't pretend this was one sided.
3. Given Katara's first thought was "it's a trap" I don't think Azula' presence influence her later decision.
PLUS she knocked him around all over the place until she had a chance to calm down, AND she didnÆt start sympathising until they starting mourning their dead (or not-so-dead) mothers together. And this WAS IN CANON, AFTER she offered to heal Iroh at their last meeting. And considering this fic is Zuko- focused, there's NO NICE KATARA until they figure out how to get along. Which won't happen yet.
Wow twisting Katara's healing around. In canon Katara healed without any real reason to. Yes, temporary team up against Azula, but Zuko was in a three way fight against Aang not a moment earlier, if anything this shows how twisted she is in this fic.
Furthermore Iroh explicitly mentions Zuko's mom and his son and Katara still acts nasty. And that's the problem.
Why WOULD she act nice to Zuko? Why SHOULD she? If I were her - well, okay, I'd probably be terrified and try not to do anything to provoke a dangerous firebender in my vicinity, which just goes to show why I admire her - I'm just saying when you're on your own and stuck with your enemy - and when you don't have your friends backing you up and THEREÆS MORE OF THEM - it's a lot harder to be nice to people; with no one watching your back you have to be extra paranoid and mistrustful to make up for it. SheÆs not Toph, and she has history with Zuko. There's no collapsed wounded old man who helped out at the North Pole here either, thereÆs a healthy old man TAKING ZUKOÆS SIDE.
And now Aang's HURT, it was ZUKO'S sister who did it because she's a murderous * just like the rest of her murdering family, she has to heal Aang, she HAS TO MAKE IT BETTER, and Iroh's THERE with them on their bison with his JERK OF A NEPHEW, politely asking for a drop off? I'd be *ed too, if only because I was terrified of Aang dying.
So wait. Now Azula acting evil means she shouldn't trust Zuko? Granted no fighting,but the two arn't near each other, and as I already pointed out, she thought they might be working together in canon, and still formed empathy. Katara's an absolute pansy for anyone with a sob story.
And I'd be a bit too worried over Aang to give a * about Zuko right now, esp. b/c a) he's an enemy, and B) if only she'd BELIEVED Iroh about Azula Aang wouldn't have had to rescue her and get hurt and IT'S ALL HER FAULT, if she'd been faster, if she'd seen it coming, if she'd blocked the lightning with ice or SOMETHING, or if she'd used the spirit water straight away, or...
So the author has Iroh proven right once, and but then has Katara ignore him. Honestly if Katara was "to worried to give a * about Zuko" we wouldn't be having this discussion.
Also, ignore the person going on about Nazi slaughters and stuff - THEY were saying how Aang and the Ocean's wipe out of the Fire Nation navy was justified û which, yeah, it was, but that doesn't mean it was okay, or ærightÆ. Because guess what? Technically Hiroshima and Nagasaki were justified too, but I don't know many people who feel OKAY about it. I don't, and I don't think 'good riddance' or anything like that, even though I KNOW (some) of what the Japanese army did.
Bullshit. The two are blatantly not compatible. If Aang had used the ocean spirit to wipe out Fire Nation cities, they would but.
1. It was a purely defensible war, they were being invaded, not invading.
2. It went after military craft and people. Note that people who did not fight in the ocean spirits presence were explicitly spare. (and don't say it's all FN either, Zuko was spared). Unlike a nuke, it was targeted and capable of judgment.
3. A nuke isn't alive, the ocean spirit it. Zhao had killed it's mate and was literally one the verge of destroying it's people, only then did it intervene. At this is the big point. Keeping balance between spirit and Human does not mean "favor humans every time". Zhao had already interfered wtih the spirits, so any bullshit about the "spirit should interfere with humans" is meaningless.
Comparing what the ocean spirit did to a nuke in any sense but power is moronic.
Just one of those moral ambiguities of war, unfortunately û my history class debated this for ages, and our only conclusion at the end was æwar sucks, it has to end asap, canÆt figure out who the bad guys are here unless they rape and pillage and go for civilians while they're at itÆ.
Or, you know, genocide.
Hey, Rabe. I see no GAang-bashing here. The authorÆs offering an alternate perspective and trying to make characters 3D, not any less bad or good than they really are. Azula can be mentally unstable and an evil psycho too, you know - being a bad person tends to invite all sorts of mental complexes, which generally occur AFTER the nasty personality sets in. Katara can be a good person and still hate Fire Nation. Yeah, the 'Water Tribe cultureÆ threw me off, but I'm happy to go with it just for this fic. There is no blind support here, TYVM. Please donÆt insult your fellow readersÆ intelligence û if you really disagree with them, duke it out in a forum or something. Don't belittle or twist the reasons behind why we enjoy the fic. And donÆt go around slamming æpro-HitlerÆ views on people you disagree with, itÆs offensive and makes you seem uninformed and half-cocked.
The problem is that "water tribe culture" is explicitly the opposite of every encounter with Katara, like ever. The two big ones are "Jet" and "puppetmaster".
If that culture worked like that, the Katara should have sided with Hama. She was a member of her tribe with a grievance against the enemy. By "Water Tribe culture" she should have sided with Hama. Which means the "culture" is bunk, or Katara doesn't care about it.
Nor can this be kept to season three. "Jet" in season one wanted to flood a Fire nation village. She was still horrified, even though it would have benefited the Tribe to see the enemy weakened.