Naruto Draft of "Looking Forwards, Seeing Backwards"
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S-someone revived this topic?! *Steps away nervously*
But to answer your question... not really. I have around 4000 words of disconnected scenes of chapter two, but most of it is likely to be scrapped. While the first chapter of this flowed rather smoothly, I did it as an experiment on how far I could take myself without my usual work of planning ahead. It worked out well, but from this point I've little idea of where I want to take the fic, so it's stalled. That I now hate canon Naruto doesn't help my muse.
Basically, it's probably not going anywhere anytime soon. There ARE plenty of ideas, but I lack motivation, and a real baseline to follow.
But to answer your question... not really. I have around 4000 words of disconnected scenes of chapter two, but most of it is likely to be scrapped. While the first chapter of this flowed rather smoothly, I did it as an experiment on how far I could take myself without my usual work of planning ahead. It worked out well, but from this point I've little idea of where I want to take the fic, so it's stalled. That I now hate canon Naruto doesn't help my muse.
Basically, it's probably not going anywhere anytime soon. There ARE plenty of ideas, but I lack motivation, and a real baseline to follow.
Well F-1 the story IS good (much shit is out there, thats why we are here @ TFF), so I, personally, would really like to see this story continued. the starting plot is thight, logic (more than the creator of the series) and damn funny.
I don't know what to do beyond reply, review, and throw ideas in Your direction we (the readers) can do to help you to get motivated.
So please don't "scrap" it. if you can't continue ask Hawk to move the topic over to ideas, as it's simply to good to let die.
Cheers.
I don't know what to do beyond reply, review, and throw ideas in Your direction we (the readers) can do to help you to get motivated.
So please don't "scrap" it. if you can't continue ask Hawk to move the topic over to ideas, as it's simply to good to let die.
Cheers.
Err?
Well, thank you for the compliment. ^^ I don't really have any plans to abandon this fic (I'm actually quite proud of it, in a way), I was talking about scrapping the scenes I had written for the second chapter (as I'm rather unsatisfied with them), not the whole story.
In regards to story, I'm getting stuck on WHAT exactly I want to happen. I'm sort of tempted just to say 'fuck it' and shoot everything to hell. Literally. ^^;;
We'll see. I'm not dropping it, but it's... going to be a while. <_<
Well, thank you for the compliment. ^^ I don't really have any plans to abandon this fic (I'm actually quite proud of it, in a way), I was talking about scrapping the scenes I had written for the second chapter (as I'm rather unsatisfied with them), not the whole story.
In regards to story, I'm getting stuck on WHAT exactly I want to happen. I'm sort of tempted just to say 'fuck it' and shoot everything to hell. Literally. ^^;;
We'll see. I'm not dropping it, but it's... going to be a while. <_<
I started planning out a scary Hinata story a few months ago and last month decided to work on it more and decided to have her trained by Anko, and later Tsunade. Adding Anko's craziness with Tsunade's strength. Now that is scary.
Originally I just meant for mine to be like an omake or something. I have to decide if I want to write all the scenes that don't change much. I skipped ahead and wrote one scene that is HC era. Mine will be quite different since I'm killing off a few of the gennin. Mine won't really have all that much in common with this one. My Hinata will be quite different from the get go, and will only use the training as an excuse to stop hiding her true self. Those popsicle dildos look interesting. Did you ever find out what they are called? Those I might use.
Originally I just meant for mine to be like an omake or something. I have to decide if I want to write all the scenes that don't change much. I skipped ahead and wrote one scene that is HC era. Mine will be quite different since I'm killing off a few of the gennin. Mine won't really have all that much in common with this one. My Hinata will be quite different from the get go, and will only use the training as an excuse to stop hiding her true self. Those popsicle dildos look interesting. Did you ever find out what they are called? Those I might use.