e39042 said:
Lord Raine said:
I've been mulling over the opening plot and how I want this to lay out, and one idea I just had that I thought I'd put out there for discussion is the idea that maybe it gets out that Harry used the Cruciatus on Bellatrix.
Even if she deserves it, he still used an Unforgivable on another human being. You know what that means. Mandatory Life Sentence.
That could even explain why Harry ends up in the same cell as Sirius. Harry is sent to the same wing that Sirius is, i.e. the area of Azkaban for 'lifers' who will never get out.
What do you guys think? I think it could work. I actually think it could work really well. The only question is how to get that out there that he's done it.
Maybe. . . maybe Fudge drags Harry to court for breaking and entering into the Department of Mysteries. Harry has to give an account. Somewhere along the way, he's forced to take Veritiserum, and one of the questions leads to the revelation that Harry dueled Bellatrix and used the Cruciatus on her.
This naturally causes a huge uproar. On the one hand, Unforgivables constitute a mandatory life sentence to Azakban. On the other hand, it's a confirmation that there were Death Eaters involved, and that Harry used the Unforgivable against an infamous Death Eater that everybody hates. Barty Crouch's revisions to the laws during the first war approved the use of Unforgivables against Death Eaters, but that law isn't actually in effect anymore, because the Death Eaters are assumed to be disbanded.
So there's this big issue of whether or not Harry could legally get away with Crucioing Bellatrix. Naturally, Fudge hates Harry at this point and wants to do whatever he can to destroy him, so he pulls all of his weight to shut the debate down and get Harry convicted.
Cue Azkaban.
What do you guys think?
Sounds good, but I would use the Priori Incantatem to reveal Harry's usage of the Cruciatus. After that you can bring the Veritiserum into the mix to confirm that it was indeed Harry who cast it.
Edit: Actually, pondering it further, why would Harry use the curse if Sirius had not died?
Maybe someone else did. Or maybe his friends just got really hurt. Maybe Neville tried to fight her alone or something to avenge his parents, and Harry saw her take him apart, Crucio him, and then cripple him (take an arm off or something).
Harry is pretty hardcore about his friends. If he saw someone like Neville or Luna get killed or nearly killed while trying to help him, I'm fairly confident he would go to his Blind Fury Place.
The part that I'm concerned about is my characterization of Harry, Dumbledore, the current magical world, and to a lesser extent, Hermione and Ron. A big part about what I want to do involves it being obvious that what is being done to Harry is, in fact, a massive miscarriage of justice. A clear weighing of the system in favor of the whim of the Minister. That sets up Harry to hate everything about the current magical society and government, provides the Old World vs New World dynamic between Harry and Dumbledore (who may not agree with Fudge in any way but still wants to keep the magical government mostly the way it is), and gives Hermione and Ron the schism that I want to happen.
If, however, Harry actually uses an Unforgivable, all of the above falls apart, because like it or not, Harry would
actually deserve to go to Azkaban in that particular scenario. It wouldn't be a massive and obvious miscarriage of justice to sentence Harry to a life term in Azkaban. Even if it's karmically appealing to nail Bellatrix with a Crucio, it's still not
just. The law has to protect everyone equally, Bellatrix included, so Harry's imprisonment would just be a tragic but sadly deserved punishment, as opposed to a horrific abuse of power and a clear indicator that the current regime and everything about it is corrupt.
The problem is, the accusation of
using an Unforgivable works in the sense that it explains why Harry and Sirius could potentially end up in the same cell (they're both lifers), but if Harry
actually uses one, then the necessary massive miscarriage of justice angle disappears.
Unless. . .
What if Fudge
accuses Harry of using an Unforgivable, and Harry didn't actually do one?
Eh. That could work, but I'm struggling to come up with a believable way it could. Fudge can get away with shoddy arguments and blustering, because that's all he did in OotP, and he still almost railroaded Harry into Azkaban just for an underage magic charge. But it can't be a totally retarded argument, because otherwise it just won't fly at all. Fudge can cheat, but he can't look like a total imbecile, because that destroys the realism.
Fudge threw Veritiserum out in canon on the grounds that it was 'unnecessary' (plus, in canon, Veritiserum can be resisted and even thrown off if you have adequate time to prepare yourself mentally, so Harry's request for it could be denied based solely on the fact that Harry requested it), so any request for Veritiserum could be denied here as well. That just leaves the evidence itself up in the air. Last time it was Harry's word that was called into question (I was protecting myself from Dementors), so if we can just whittle it down to Harry's word
again, then Fudge can plausibly win and put him away.
Harry's wand is the dealbreaker. If they use his wand, then it'll show that Harry never cast an Unforgivable, and Fudge's argument falls apart. He could still get Harry in on the grounds of trespassing into the DoM, but it wouldn't be a life sentence, and that kills the Sirius angle.
So, if the wand is the problem. . . let's just remove it from the equation entirely. Harry was in a pitched battle against Death Eaters and, at one point, Voldemort.
At some point near the end, either when fighting Bellatrix or resisting Voldemort, Harry's wand breaks. Shatters. It gets destroyed. So the record of what spells he did and did not use is gone. It cannot be verified.
We know the Ministry has detection equipment in the building, and in the Atrium, even, and we know that, at least in the case of wands, it's specific enough that it can apparently tell magic apart from individual wands. There's the whole "wand weighing" thing when you first go in, after all. That has to be for something.
Voldemort and Harry have brother wands. If the Ministry can record or detect spells cast in the building, then they would pick up anything Voldemort and the Death Eaters used. If Voldemort used Unforgivables, and Harry's wand gets destroyed, then the recording might point towards it having been
Harry who cast the spells that Voldemort used.
The only way for Harry to get out of it would be to prove that Voldemort is alive and was present at the Ministry, but if Voldemort left before the Ministry arrived in time to see him, then all that's going to be there is Harry, a bunch of his friends, and Dumbledore. And since none of Harry's friends were actually present in the Atrium, that means, once
again, it is Harry and Dumbledore's word that Voldemort is alive and was there, and Fudge has been fighting and dismissing that for
years now.
So it comes down to; do you believe Harry, or not?
Fudge says no, accuses Harry of using the Unforgivables. Harry protests, Fudge counters with his record of going out of bounds and breaking the rules. Harry requests Veriterisum, Fudge throws Veriterisum out. Harry makes his case, which, without evidence, obviously sounds fantastic. The Wizengamot puts it to a vote. Harry loses, gets saddled with the full blame, and takes a life sentence to Azkaban.
Yes. I'm starting to see how this could work. The only missing piece to Fudge's argument is that just using the Unforgivables doesn't carry a penalty. You can Imperio the wall or chickens all you want. You have to use them
against another human to constitute the sentence.
So, what if Bellatrix fought Neville and used the Cruciatus on
him, and then did something to seriously cripple him and knock him into a coma or some other state where he can't give any sort of statement or testimony? That gives someone on the scene Cruciatus damage, and the magical signature or aura or whatever that matches the spell is a twin to Harry's now-destroyed wand.
So Fudge pins the whole thing on Harry, including Neville's condition.
It's an extreme accusation, but it could definitely work, especially if the recording equipment or whatever it is that the Ministry uses doesn't go into the DoM itself. That makes sense, since the research there is a secret, and it would mean that the vast majority of the episode would have no evidence of it actually happening. It's only Harry's word that there was a massive run-and-gun battle against a bunch of Death Eaters. All the detector would show is Harry's magic using the Cruciatus curse, and there's a battered, Crucio'd Neville Longbottom incapable of giving testimony.
Fudge might actually be able to do it, provided it was pitched correctly. Plus, the entire room is weighted against Harry anyway, because a fair few members of the Wizengamot are Death Eaters themselves. They'll
want to see Harry take the fall for this, and will do everything they can to pin it all on him, because the alternative is Voldemort being ousted. So the Death Eaters will be using their own influence and money to tilt the scales against Harry even while Fudge is doing the exact same thing. Fudge's argument isn't totally sound, but since the entire thing is put to a vote anyway, it doesn't necessarily have to be. A lot of the more inconvenient details of the event can be thrown out on the grounds of not being relevant to the trial of whether or not Harry actually did perform an Unforgivable on another human being, so it really, once again, boils down to Harry's word that he didn't do it.
What do you guys think about this? Comments, suggestions, ideas? I'm open for discussion on this.