Harry Potter Earl of the North

Leonite

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#76
Lord Raine said:
Neville Longbottom deliberately took his time to put away his supplies after six-year NEWT level Potions. He watched from the corner of his eye and Ron and Hermione quickly cleaned up and left.

Harry Potter had not returned from the Christmas holidays and Neville was worried. Harry's best friends and teachers did not seem to know why he had not returned, nor did they really care. Neville had a sneaking suspicion that something was up. Snape was his last hope. All of the other teachers had put him off.

Gathering his courage, Neville made his way to the front to address Snape. "Sir, I was wondering if I could ask you a question."

The professor looked up from the stack of Potions essays that he was sorting. "What?"

"I was wondering if you could tell me why Harry didn't come back from the holidays, sir."

Neville observed as Snape carefully considered his answer. "Mr. Potter has been sent to Azkaban on a life sentence." he finally responded.
This is another thing that I don't see happening, realistically. There's no way they could put The Boy Who Lived away for life in Azkaban for the mass murder of muggles, and keep it a secret.

This would be big. Bigger than big. There's no way they could keep this quiet. This would be as big as Voldemort getting defeated by Harry as an infant. Everybody would hear about it. Wizards in the UK would know about it overnight. It would get talked about internationally.

It would be interesting to see what reactions might be in other places where Harry is known. I'd be willing to bet money that Krum and Fleur would defend him. Fudge's insistence on railroading Harry may have implications on an international level. Krum is a superstar. Fleur is a genius, canonically considered one of the best students in Beaubaxtons, and generally portrayed in fanon as being related to people who are politically important in France. Both of them could easily sway a lot of people who don't live in Britain just by speaking out and saying they don't believe it.
Not just interntionally, if I remember correctly, Wood was part of one of the big Quidditch teams, and its likely that any journalist who gets info that Wood was Harry's Quidditch captain might try to use him as a source.
 

Lord Raine

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#78
"That's preposterous!" Neville said vehemently. "Harry would never do that! If he was practicing the Dark Arts, it was only to help educate himself and the members of the DA."
I consider this notable, primarily because this seems to be the point where Silvere forgets that Harry never actually practiced the Dark Arts, and that Ron and Hermione just made that up. From this point forwards, Harry is spoken about with the assumption that he was in fact studying the Dark Arts, and when it later comes up in his presence, he never objects to it or claims that he was not, instead making excuses that he was using it to help build course material for the DA.

This has no real bearing on the rebuild: I just wanted to make the observation.
 

Lord Raine

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#79
The more Neville thought about the situation, the more outraged he was. "Ron got up at our first meeting and announced that, apparently, Harry was not going to return to Hogwarts and that we needed a new president for the DA. He nominated himself on the grounds that he was Harry's best friend. Hermione backed him up."

"Isn't that interesting?" Snape mused.
I would have gone with 'sad' or 'disappointing,' myself.

Again. As a fan of Ron being kind-of-a-dick, I have to say: you're laying it on far too thickly.

"Yes, there is." Snape said, looking around his classroom to make sure no one was listening in. "Some of us are trying to put together a movement in Potter's favor. There's no way that You-Know-Who is going to be brought down unless it is Potter that does it. You can discreetly get some other students in on it."
Dumbledore. Just saying.

Also, this is getting bogged down. I'm going to speed this up, and start making notes only where I feel a desire to change things. Pointing out flaws in a non-MST setting and making fun of them is rude, and does not serve the point of this thread.
 

Lord Raine

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#80
On the afternoon of the day before Valentines, Bellatrix Black found herself watching Harry Potter's sleeping form in their cell. Five weeks of extensive training and meditation had done a lot for Harry. In a matter of seconds, he could now draw in an amount of power that would require days of meditation by any other wizard or witch.
This is actually a pretty interesting idea. Credit goes where credit is due. It is possible that meditation can temporarily heighten or improve magic, and this may very well be a necessary part of the animagus transformation.
 

fitzgerald

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#81
Raine on the whole Sirius is jailed alongside Harry front I had an idea at work.

Prophet Headline: "Stubby Boardman sent to Azkaban"

"Stubby Boardman" aka Sirius gets himself deliberately throw into jail (along with the proper bribes) as Harry's cell mate.

The Ministry still believes Sirius is at large, when in reality he's back in Azkaban under an assumed name to break Harry out ASAP.



Ciao
 

Lord Raine

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#82
That. . . is a very interesting idea. It would be a crowning moment of heartwarming daww and sheer badassery for Sirius to get thrown into Harry's cell, for Harry to incredulously ask what the hell he's doing there, and for him to say "because you're here. I told you I'd always protect you, didn't I?"

I am seriously considering that as a viable option to the "Fudge never gives his paper to Sirius" idea. Of course, then I'd have to explain why Sirius is alive in a post-DoM world, but that shouldn't be too hard. Maybe Dumbledore showed up a minute sooner, or something.
 

ArchfiendRai

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#83
Lord Raine said:
That. . . is a very interesting idea. It would be a crowning moment of heartwarming daww and sheer badassery for Sirius to get thrown into Harry's cell, for Harry to incredulously ask what the hell he's doing there, and for him to say "because you're here. I told you I'd always protect you, didn't I?"

I am seriously considering that as a viable option to the "Fudge never gives his paper to Sirius" idea. Of course, then I'd have to explain why Sirius is alive in a post-DoM world, but that shouldn't be too hard. Maybe Dumbledore showed up a minute sooner, or something.
Uhhh....That....sounds a bit more contrived, but only due to the whole Stubby Boardman thing. I mean, do people not know what Sirius looks like despite all the wanted posters of him or something? And am I to assume a disguise would stay on during the transition from getting caught to Azkaban?
 

Lord Raine

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#84
That is the other big problem. There were wanted posters of Sirius everywhere. Even if people didn't know what he looked like before third year, they do by know. Especially since Sirius was getting blamed for all of the shit Voldemort was causing up through OotP.

The only thing we know of that could get him through security and into Azkaban without being identified as Sirius Black is the Polyjuice. And that only lasts an hour.

I suppose. . . maybe. . . hmm. It would be difficult, but. . . just a second. I'll be right back. I want to check something from Chamber of Secrets real quick. I have an idea, and I think an important bit of information was mentioned there.
 

Lord Raine

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#85
Found what I needed. And my idea is plausible. Not necessarily canonically compliant, but it's possible given what little we know.

Polyjuice normally only lasts an hour, but according to both Chamber of Secrets, Half-Blood Prince, and Deathly Hallows, varying the dose up and down can increase or decrease the duration of the effect.

Goblet of Fire showed us that it is possible to maintain a continuous transformation that exceeds the normal limits of the potion. If you take another dose of the potion before the first wears off, you remain transformed.

So for a sustained transformation, you would have to take repeated doses at set intervals, but if you do, you can remain transformed indefinately.

So how do you take the doses if you're being processed and sentenced to jailtime? Obviously they wouldn't let you keep a hip flask or drinking container on you. So if you were to do it, the doses would have to already be inside you. Is that possible?



Yes. It is. If you could store doses in time released pill capsules that were made to dissolve at staggered intervals, you could maintain a long-term Polyjuice without ever having to drink the potion itself. All of the potion necessary would be ingested at once, and it would be released into your system at overlapping intervals.

Of course, Sirius probably couldn't come up with that on his own. But no one says he has to be the sole person involved in the plan. Lupin could be an accomplice, and since he spends most of his time in the muggle world anyway due to his condition, it makes sense as something he might think up.

Of course, that's incredibly complicated, and not nearly as simple as "Fudge didn't give Sirius the paper," but it does make the idea much more possible. Assuming that route was taken, Sirius taking three or four pills with near-hour doses in them could explain away what a single hour long dose could not.

What do you guys think?
 
#86
That could definetly work, but I have another idea that could be possible to fit around cannon.

Why not have Remus in jail and have it take place during 5th year. Sirius is still alive but because of Umbridge she got Remus sent to jail for endagering students. Gives Harry learning the Patronus charm and Sirius waiting at his home trying to figure a way to free not only his godson but his best friend. Remus could easily guide Harry throgh the animagus training in Azkaban and after Harry escapes his cell he then helps Remus get out.

Not sure if you would want to do this but just giving you another option without having to worrying about how to fit things into the timeline.
 

Leonite

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#87
I can actually imagine Sirius coming up with the idea, and Dumbledore being the one to help him pull it off, getting Snape to help with the potion, all that sort of stuff.
 

Lord Raine

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#88
"Of course." she readily consented. "I have composed a list of certain things that you will find useful when escaping from this island and then after that, for the rest of your life. You'll be learning some wandless flying and hovering charms. These don't last very long, but can save a life. Occulmency and Legillimency naturally. Have you met my niece? I think her name is Nymphadora."

Harry answered affirmatively.

"Good. You'll be learning a simple equivalent to the talent that she possesses. This will help in disguising your appearance for short periods of time. We'll practice Scrying, a handy technique for spying. Shield charms are a must. A few simple wandless charms and spells and then some extremely valuable invisibility charms and last, but not least, I'll teach you the rare art of 'turning.'"

"Turning?"

"It's a similar spell to that of Apparition. You can only travel up to one hundred feet or so, but it can give you an instant advantage over an enemy in a fight."

"That all sounds useful." Harry said, now catching her excitement as well. "Let's get started then."
It irritates me that Azkaban is being treated like a classroom, as opposed to a horrific violation of all conceivable human rights. It also irritates me that a long, vauge amount of time passes here in this story without any real reference to how much time has elapsed, beyond the fact that school has started again and Harry is still there.

I'm thinking that, by this point, I'd like to have Harry out of Azkaban. Maybe have him settle into his island around the time school starts, as opposed to having school start while he's still in Azkaban. I think that's reasonable for two reasons:

1.) Sirius is only teaching Harry one thing, not an entire cirriculum of things.

2.) They are rushing to try and beat the monthly manual inspection of Azkaban by human guards and Aurors.

In the context of my original idea, the guards could potentially detect the training efforts for Harry to become an animagus, which would tip them off that an escape was being planned. In the context of fitzgerald's idea, the rush is obviously so that the Aurors don't look in and realize that they've got Sirius Black in a holding cell.
 

ArchfiendRai

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#89
Lord Raine said:
Found what I needed. And my idea is plausible. Not necessarily canonically compliant, but it's possible given what little we know.

Polyjuice normally only lasts an hour, but according to both Chamber of Secrets, Half-Blood Prince, and Deathly Hallows, varying the dose up and down can increase or decrease the duration of the effect.

Goblet of Fire showed us that it is possible to maintain a continuous transformation that exceeds the normal limits of the potion. If you take another dose of the potion before the first wears off, you remain transformed.

So for a sustained transformation, you would have to take repeated doses at set intervals, but if you do, you can remain transformed indefinately.

So how do you take the doses if you're being processed and sentenced to jailtime? Obviously they wouldn't let you keep a hip flask or drinking container on you. So if you were to do it, the doses would have to already be inside you. Is that possible?



Yes. It is. If you could store doses in time released pill capsules that were made to dissolve at staggered intervals, you could maintain a long-term Polyjuice without ever having to drink the potion itself. All of the potion necessary would be ingested at once, and it would be released into your system at overlapping intervals.

Of course, Sirius probably couldn't come up with that on his own. But no one says he has to be the sole person involved in the plan. Lupin could be an accomplice, and since he spends most of his time in the muggle world anyway due to his condition, it makes sense as something he might think up.

Of course, that's incredibly complicated, and not nearly as simple as "Fudge didn't give Sirius the paper," but it does make the idea much more possible. Assuming that route was taken, Sirius taking three or four pills with near-hour doses in them could explain away what a single hour long dose could not.

What do you guys think?
There is one thing that I'm still iffy on about the idea.

In story context, Harry is in a high security/max security cell, right? What the hell could Sirius, as Stubby Boardman, do to get himself tossed into this particular wing of Azkaban? Even if he wasn't guilty before, he'd sure as hell be guilty now.

Honestly, Sirius never getting the paper works better, because in this manner, Harry getting tossed into Sirius' cell could be explained as the ministry wanting to 'torture' him since Harry is a 'murdering bastard of a child who should be bloody burning in hell.'

Sirius, as Boardman, getting tossed into Harry's cell, on the other had, is a much more contrived and unbelievable coincidence. Hell, I don't claim to be an expert on the penal system, but do prisoners even share cells anymore?

The former ends up as an 'oversight.' The latter is more :huh: :mellow:
 

pidl

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#90
Let him cast Imperius on another wizard, or just say that he did, that's Azkaban for life and I assume all prisoners who are sentenced for life are in the same area.
 

ArchfiendRai

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#92
pidl said:
Let him cast Imperius on another wizard, or just say that he did, that's Azkaban for life and I assume all prisoners who are sentenced for life are in the same area.
Same area, that doesn't mean same cell.

Either way, getting him into THAT cell is contrived, just as Robin said.
 

Deathwings

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#93
No, if we go with that then Sirius' plan would most likely be as follow.

Time his "crime" so that he is put into Azkabam the day of the monthly inspection so the guard see him in his proper cell still transformed. Once they're gone, turn into a dog, sneak out of his cell and then into Harry's. As long as he is in the same wing as Harry, it shouldn't be too difficult to pull off.
 

Lord Raine

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#94
She knelt next to him and took the arm with the Warlock rune on it. Before he knew it, her finger was on it and the strange feeling he had experienced the night before returned. "I want you to clear your mind. Don't necessarily ignore your concerns, simply set them aside for now. Focus on the rune and the sensations it is causing. Try to concentrate your power."

Harry closed his eyes and began meditating. Eventually, Harry was able to cast his worry, anger, and fear out of his conscious mind and concentrate on the rune as Bellatrix had instructed him to. He could feel power seeping into his body at an appallingly slow rate. That was probably normal though.

This continued for what seemed to be both an eternity and a only a moment until a stray thought interrupted Harry. "Would he be able to perform this exercise if no one was touching his rune?" This caused him to worry and his concentration slipped. The power he had felt fled.

He opened his eyes and found his cell mate on the other side of the cell wolfing down what appeared to be breakfast. Apparently she had not been touching his rune for some time. Bellatrix looked up when he moved. "Two hours is amazing for a novice." she commented.
No explaination is given for why someone touching a Warlock Rune makes using the power it gives you easier. That doesn't even make sense logically.

Assuming I keep it in, and I might not, it will likely be purely symbolic in nature. Making it Instant Powersource Poke With Stick just seems odd, and unnessarily complicated. If the fic was based around the idea of Warlock Runes, who has them, and all of the myriad things that they might do, then going into it in-depth would be understandable. But this is Earl of the North, not Harry Potter and the Warlock Rising. The Rune is a sideshow to the main attraction that is Harry Potter as a magical overlord. You will note that no attention was given to the birthmarks Sauron may or may not have had.
 

ArchfiendRai

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#95
Hey Raine, do you remember which thread your original "moralistic vs idealistic" post is in? I wish to go through it again.
 

Lord Raine

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#96
The Archfiend of Lightning said:
Hey Raine, do you remember which thread your original "moralistic vs idealistic" post is in? I wish to go through it again.
That's not ringing any bells. What was that about, again?
 

fitzgerald

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#97
Christopher Robin said:
The whole Stubby Boardman plot sounds contrived to me.
It is however gold mine for comedy.

"Why the *bleep* do they think you're Stubby?"

"Because I'm Stubby Boardman. This is Stubby's hat you see, & I must be Stubby if I'm wearing the hat."

or insert other classic "Mistaken Identity" comedy references here.


Forget polyjuice, all Sirius needs is a shave, haircut, a tan & a nice new hat. Well that and the help of a few insiders aka Tonks and Shack.

Ciao
 

fitzgerald

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#99


Sirius walks into prison wearing these, and no one recognizes him.

Ciao
 

ArchfiendRai

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Lord Raine said:
The Archfiend of Lightning said:
Hey Raine, do you remember which thread your original "moralistic vs idealistic" post is in? I wish to go through it again.
That's not ringing any bells. What was that about, again?
Basically the conversation that sparked this thread's creation.
 
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