I'm doing some serious work on the chapter updates that remain partially unfinished, and I decided to make this one of my active projects.
I'm going to ask Silvere for permission to do a rewrite. If he says yes, I'll go for it. If he says no, I'm still going to do it, but the premise is different enough that I can still do it, provided I don't use Earl of the North specific terms, like Nair-whatever the castle is called. If Silvere gives a thumbs down, it'll be "King of the North," or something along those lines. His disapproval would also kill a lot of minor details like the Warlock Mark, but that's not necessarily a bad thing.
I might do one more skim to see if there are things I want to change, but for now, I think I've got enough on this idea. I do want to state, though, just for the record, that regardless of what Silvere says, my snowbitches are not going to be Silvere's "Snow People." He just had them as being weird elf things, and I'm not a fan of that. Since the theme is mythology and the old world, I'm actually thinking that they are what's left of the Frost Giants from Norse mythology.