Naruto Fateless (Naruto/Blood Omen crossover)
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Huge, isn't it? Took me probably 8 or 9 hours to spellcheck. I never really thought about how Fosfor has improved, but towards the end there was usually just half a dozen or so error per page. Sometimes less. You could try copypasting the first few snippets and spellcheck to get an idea of it. 
Yeah, copypasted every snippet he had posted, fit them together, and then a little spellchecking... I'll send him the word-file now, while I still remember.
Edit; Fosfor, I need an e-mail address to send the file to. The built in function here at the forum only allows Subject and Message, and keeps the address private.
Yeah, copypasted every snippet he had posted, fit them together, and then a little spellchecking... I'll send him the word-file now, while I still remember.
Edit; Fosfor, I need an e-mail address to send the file to. The built in function here at the forum only allows Subject and Message, and keeps the address private.
Catching up with this one, and had a couple ideas.
If Sakura's tree (Beniyuki?) is being passed off as a mokuton derivative and herself as a distant relation to the Shodai would she call Tsunade (who if memory serves is a relative of the Shodai) 'Auntie' to 'keep up her cover'?
As for Fateless Team 7, the dynamics for Wave almost seem to have Ami taking canon Sakura's place (Stand in front of the client holding a kunai Meatshield), with Sakura taking Naruto's place partially.
Not that she'd need long to kick butt at tree walking, not only does she have control, but you had her and Ino learn it via Naruto and Kurenai while still in the Academy. However if she spent the same time fooling with her 'Mokuton' and makes the same rescue of Inari as in canon.
If Sakura's tree (Beniyuki?) is being passed off as a mokuton derivative and herself as a distant relation to the Shodai would she call Tsunade (who if memory serves is a relative of the Shodai) 'Auntie' to 'keep up her cover'?
As for Fateless Team 7, the dynamics for Wave almost seem to have Ami taking canon Sakura's place (Stand in front of the client holding a kunai Meatshield), with Sakura taking Naruto's place partially.
Not that she'd need long to kick butt at tree walking, not only does she have control, but you had her and Ino learn it via Naruto and Kurenai while still in the Academy. However if she spent the same time fooling with her 'Mokuton' and makes the same rescue of Inari as in canon.
Fosfor, I am a longtime fan of this story and several others you've put out there.
But something that has never been answered to my satisfaction was why and how Naruto was displaced in the first place from his own world to the Underworld and later to Nosgoth. Presumably I can guess that an assassination attempt happened and just at the moment that Naruto would have died, he was somehow called across and made bodiless and stuck as a wraith in the Underworld.
There is also the argument at the beginning of the fic between Moebius and wraith-Naruto. Did the sorcerer's schemes or experiments cause Naruto to be pulled away from his world in the first place? I can only guess that probably the Kyuubi was like one big spiritual signal of a powerful entity that could have been exploited. Moebius trued to call it across, but failed due to the seal preventing movement of the fox's spirit. Nonetheless, the effort killed the fox but left it's power, while Naruto's spirit was thrown into the Underworld, where it took him nearly an eternity to survive and thrive.
How close to the money am I on this? And how far are you from updating past fics, such as the sequel to 'Full Circle', or a new chapter of 'Shadows of the Sun'?
But something that has never been answered to my satisfaction was why and how Naruto was displaced in the first place from his own world to the Underworld and later to Nosgoth. Presumably I can guess that an assassination attempt happened and just at the moment that Naruto would have died, he was somehow called across and made bodiless and stuck as a wraith in the Underworld.
There is also the argument at the beginning of the fic between Moebius and wraith-Naruto. Did the sorcerer's schemes or experiments cause Naruto to be pulled away from his world in the first place? I can only guess that probably the Kyuubi was like one big spiritual signal of a powerful entity that could have been exploited. Moebius trued to call it across, but failed due to the seal preventing movement of the fox's spirit. Nonetheless, the effort killed the fox but left it's power, while Naruto's spirit was thrown into the Underworld, where it took him nearly an eternity to survive and thrive.
How close to the money am I on this? And how far are you from updating past fics, such as the sequel to 'Full Circle', or a new chapter of 'Shadows of the Sun'?
Many thanks for the collection. It reminded me of some parts that I had forgotten. The omakes were very funny too. But there is something that I noticed on the second read of the last snippet:
From where exactly did Anko got this idea of offing some civilians witnesses? I thought they only had to kill a merchant and maybe some sound nin who would probably be protecting him? :hmm:
Other than that, a great fic so far, and I can't wait for more. :yay:
But there is something that I noticed on the second read of the last snippet:From where exactly did Anko got this idea of offing some civilians witnesses? I thought they only had to kill a merchant and maybe some sound nin who would probably be protecting him? :hmm:
Other than that, a great fic so far, and I can't wait for more. :yay:
folken77 said:
Many thanks for the collection. It reminded me of some parts that I had forgotten. The omakes were very funny too. But there is something that I noticed on the second read of the last snippet:
From where exactly did Anko got this idea of offing some civilians witnesses? I thought they only had to kill a merchant and maybe some sound nin who would probably be protecting him? :hmm:
Other than that, a great fic so far, and I can't wait for more. :yay:
But there is something that I noticed on the second read of the last snippet:From where exactly did Anko got this idea of offing some civilians witnesses? I thought they only had to kill a merchant and maybe some sound nin who would probably be protecting him? :hmm:
Other than that, a great fic so far, and I can't wait for more. :yay:
Glad to see more of this, I really enjoyed the dinner conversation.
Am I reading too much into things or did the Kazekage REALLY misinterpret Anko's status in the village and the reason why she's not a full Jounin? Because if her security clearance is higher than Kurenai's she can't be considered untrustworthy as the Kazekage believes.
Oh and Fosfor, about the "I work on all my stories." Does that include those you co-author with someone?
The Unicorn
Am I reading too much into things or did the Kazekage REALLY misinterpret Anko's status in the village and the reason why she's not a full Jounin? Because if her security clearance is higher than Kurenai's she can't be considered untrustworthy as the Kazekage believes.
Oh and Fosfor, about the "I work on all my stories." Does that include those you co-author with someone?
The Unicorn
All right, from the top.
The Kazekage actually was right on the money. The reasons why Anko has higher security celarance than Kurenai are as follows: at this point Kurenai is a chuunin, probationary tokubetsu jounin rating (that was the 'bait' Sarutobi used to get her to take Naruto as an apprentice - not just a student, but full-time apprentice). Anko is a walking library of kinjutsu - as Orochimaru's former student she knows more about forbidden and illegal jutsu than most jounin do - he can't restrict her acces at that point, since it is pointless.
Also, as Orochimaru's student she had an access to tons of vital, usually incredibly classified information. Nowadays it is donwgraded (that is why she complains about it) but it is still consderably higher than any other tokubetsu jounin simply because of ehr past. Not to mention the juuin she bears is still experimented with (to get her rid of it) when the opporutinuty comes and that's rather calssifeid as well at this point.
As an expert on kinjutsu (since she is - she actually knows more forbidden/high level stuff than normal jutsu) she is sometimes deployed in that capacity. That, and the fact those kind of missions are usually incredibly risky and sending a chuunin is suicidical, while sneding a high-levle jounin might be out of client's price range, or not in Konoha's financial interest. Solution? Send Anko.
Besides, ebcause of her problems, she's a plausible deniability nin and Saurotbi has no qualms about sending her on various errands in that capacity. Anko is a perfect operative for that and she doens't really mind as long as she has something to do.
The answer to the last question is yes. When I say all, I do mean all. The pace varies, but al sgtories are worked on. It might be a sentence or two, or an idea, or a small revision, a side story or an almost complete chapter - it varies, but they are being worked on.
The Kazekage actually was right on the money. The reasons why Anko has higher security celarance than Kurenai are as follows: at this point Kurenai is a chuunin, probationary tokubetsu jounin rating (that was the 'bait' Sarutobi used to get her to take Naruto as an apprentice - not just a student, but full-time apprentice). Anko is a walking library of kinjutsu - as Orochimaru's former student she knows more about forbidden and illegal jutsu than most jounin do - he can't restrict her acces at that point, since it is pointless.
Also, as Orochimaru's student she had an access to tons of vital, usually incredibly classified information. Nowadays it is donwgraded (that is why she complains about it) but it is still consderably higher than any other tokubetsu jounin simply because of ehr past. Not to mention the juuin she bears is still experimented with (to get her rid of it) when the opporutinuty comes and that's rather calssifeid as well at this point.
As an expert on kinjutsu (since she is - she actually knows more forbidden/high level stuff than normal jutsu) she is sometimes deployed in that capacity. That, and the fact those kind of missions are usually incredibly risky and sending a chuunin is suicidical, while sneding a high-levle jounin might be out of client's price range, or not in Konoha's financial interest. Solution? Send Anko.
Besides, ebcause of her problems, she's a plausible deniability nin and Saurotbi has no qualms about sending her on various errands in that capacity. Anko is a perfect operative for that and she doens't really mind as long as she has something to do.
The answer to the last question is yes. When I say all, I do mean all. The pace varies, but al sgtories are worked on. It might be a sentence or two, or an idea, or a small revision, a side story or an almost complete chapter - it varies, but they are being worked on.
Thanks for answering my question, Fosfor. Now I have a couple more.
Seeing as how 'Fateless vs. Canon' seems to be an offshoot or glimpse into the future of this fic, and we know that Naruto will have at least 6 ladies, will anyone at any point in the Fateless AU universe ever know about Naruto's past experiences in the Underworld and in Nosgoth and the circumstances behind how his spirit was able to return to the real world?
Or will it be kind of 'the past is dead' kind of things? Having Naruto explain his past, which was highly traumatic and combative to anyone might complicate and fuck up things. Will it just stay dead, and the future and the present are all that matters? Naruto just developed his esoteric knowledge and skills due to the fact that he is a prodigy?
Please answer for my peace of mind.
Also, you didn't give any word on ny other question. There are 4-6 stories you put out there that interested me and I would like to have a word from you on.
-Shadows of the Sun Tsunade/asskicker!Naruto FTW!
-Templar
-The sequel to Full Circle, which was a Kyuubi/Naruto which is really Minato done right.
-Something in the future regarding Karma, maybe? The future adventures of Tsunade and Naruto, who is now a free agent. How did he and Yugito hook up? I've rarely seen a good Yugito/Naruto pairing. The battle between Sasori and Tsunade where Tsunade squashed the puppet master like a bug would be sweet.
That's all for now. I like your Naruto stories and crossovers better than your Bleach ones, but Bleach was never my style anyway.
Seeing as how 'Fateless vs. Canon' seems to be an offshoot or glimpse into the future of this fic, and we know that Naruto will have at least 6 ladies, will anyone at any point in the Fateless AU universe ever know about Naruto's past experiences in the Underworld and in Nosgoth and the circumstances behind how his spirit was able to return to the real world?
Or will it be kind of 'the past is dead' kind of things? Having Naruto explain his past, which was highly traumatic and combative to anyone might complicate and fuck up things. Will it just stay dead, and the future and the present are all that matters? Naruto just developed his esoteric knowledge and skills due to the fact that he is a prodigy?
Please answer for my peace of mind.
Also, you didn't give any word on ny other question. There are 4-6 stories you put out there that interested me and I would like to have a word from you on.
-Shadows of the Sun Tsunade/asskicker!Naruto FTW!
-Templar
-The sequel to Full Circle, which was a Kyuubi/Naruto which is really Minato done right.
-Something in the future regarding Karma, maybe? The future adventures of Tsunade and Naruto, who is now a free agent. How did he and Yugito hook up? I've rarely seen a good Yugito/Naruto pairing. The battle between Sasori and Tsunade where Tsunade squashed the puppet master like a bug would be sweet.
That's all for now. I like your Naruto stories and crossovers better than your Bleach ones, but Bleach was never my style anyway.
