Hashasheen said:
kelenas said:
Personally, I'm more curious why Iruka beat Naruto over the head that his mission was top-secret and abso-fucking-lutely no one could know that he was leaving... yet so far every single character seems to know about it.
- Kelenas
- Kelenas
Not a bad update. Naruto's operating as well as I expected, though a bit more detail on his handling of the bandits would have been nice. And as much as I dislike Moegi, her character here's taken a bit more rounding out that I like. She's broken, in her own way. Though Iruka saying he'd kill her was a bit ... out there?
Also, DhampyrX2 makes a good point. Moegi not realizing that though, gives her a touch of fallibility.
ôDo something like this behind my back again, and there will be consequences. Do you understand?ö