Seriously. This story is written by an author. It is the authors. It is not the reader's story. If you want it to go a certain way, write it yourself. If an author only wrote what reader's wanted, then it wouldn't be the author's story. It wouldn't be good either. criticism with plot development, holes, or lack of flow is one thing. Complaining about the progression of events and choice of characterization is something only an author should choose for themselves. No one, not even readers, even if we feel that it doesn't fit, should decide for the author.
So stop whining. As many others have said, don't like, then don't read. Troublesome thread bumpers... I actually thought there was an update.á :rip1: