Akamatsuverse [Love Hina]Miscellaneous ideas topic.

HotelKatz

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That might be a better idea, but it kind of implies that Su meant for Naru or someone else to eat the food.

Which is still better than being hit with a missile, though.

unless Su's target was her older self when the red moon appears. Like if Adult Su to eat the food during the red moon, she'd become regular Su until the red moon ends, at which point she becomes Adult Su until the food's effect wears off.
 

chronodekar

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You'll need to change the mechanics a bit to use that, since my suggestion was about transferring energy between two people. Doesn't make sense, if the energy is transferred between the same person.

And does Su really need to be the initiator? Have Mutsumi bring in a gift for her old mother (a birthday gift or something). Make up some story - her Mom really wants to go to the amusement park or something, so the daughter decided to offer a bit of her youth for the day.

Being the lovable Mutsumi that we know, she leaves the gift lying around. Su gets curious, attempts to open the package (assuming its gift-wrapped) Motoko comes in to explain that its 'bad manners', Keitaro comes in with the usual hyjinks and in the end, the stuff gets spilled over Naru and Shinobu swapping their ages for a day.

Hmm... I seem to have gone a bit off track there, but you get the idea. ;)

-chronodekar
 

HotelKatz

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Could make some weird claim like the gift is something that Mutsumi got from her paternal grandmother who somehow had an ancestor or two who either claimed or was from the Turtle Civilization on Pararakelse Island.

And why did Mutsumi not tell anyone about the ancestor? No one asked her.
 
Oooh, the shenanigans that Mutsumi could have; especially if her mother Natsumi gets involved- remember, Natsumi looks as young as Mutsumi, and she 'has it going on' like woah!
 

HotelKatz

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What about a slight crossover of Love hina and Omamori Himari? Then again, is putting a single character from one series into another series a crossover?

Pretty much plotwise Himari is Keitaro's servant/pet/childhood friend. Because of that, Keitaro knows that Mutsumi is the childhood friend that made the promise to go to Tokyo University because Himari made sure to never let Keitaro forget because the promise seemed very important to Keitaro, even though Himari wants Keitaro for herself.

However, he feels betrayed once Mutsumi lets him know that she switched the promise over to Naru. So before Mutsumi reveals the switch, I see Himari grudgingly being friendly with Mutsumi. Afterwords, really frosty.

I kinda see Himari having fun with Motoko. Motoko tries a few times to exorcise//get rid of Himari, but Himari is able to dodge and weave Motoko's attacks because of her own swordtraining and cat senses. It's doubtful it happen, but who'd want to see Keitaro wind up with both Himari and Motoko?

Kitsune might be able to fluster Himari a few times, but Himari would eventually be able to get back at Kitsune by getting her flustered, probably by pointing out that Kitsune desires Keitaro or something.

I don't see Himari and Naru getting along well at all. Himari would tease Naru by getting close and flirty with Keitaro in front of her and Himari would block any attacks Naru tries to pull... Until Keitaro tells Himari to knock it off.

Dunno how Su and Himari would be. Kinda want to say that they'd get along well enough that Motoko would get jealous.

Kinda want to say that Shinobu and Himari wouldn't get past being friendly acquaintances without some event happening.

Kanako and Himari... That's a tricky one. If Kuro exists, then I see Kanako viewing Himari as a dangerous rival. If Kuro doesn't exist, then I somehow see Kanako and Himari getting along well. Dunno why. Maybe the latter has them being partners in crime or something.

I kinda see Haruka either getting really annoyed with Himari fairly fast or getting along great.
 

PCHeintz72

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HotelKatz said:
What about a slight crossover of Love hina and Omamori Himari? Then again, is putting a single character from one series into another series a crossover?

Pretty much plotwise Himari is Keitaro's servant/pet/childhood friend. Because of that, Keitaro knows that Mutsumi is the childhood friend that made the promise to go to Tokyo University because Himari made sure to never let Keitaro forget because the promise seemed very important to Keitaro, even though Himari wants Keitaro for herself.

However, he feels betrayed once Mutsumi lets him know that she switched the promise over to Naru. So before Mutsumi reveals the switch, I see Himari grudgingly being friendly with Mutsumi. Afterwords, really frosty.

I kinda see Himari having fun with Motoko. Motoko tries a few times to exorcise//get rid of Himari, but Himari is able to dodge and weave Motoko's attacks because of her own swordtraining and cat senses. It's doubtful it happen, but who'd want to see Keitaro wind up with both Himari and Motoko?

Kitsune might be able to fluster Himari a few times, but Himari would eventually be able to get back at Kitsune by getting her flustered, probably by pointing out that Kitsune desires Keitaro or something.

I don't see Himari and Naru getting along well at all. Himari would tease Naru by getting close and flirty with Keitaro in front of her and Himari would block any attacks Naru tries to pull... Until Keitaro tells Himari to knock it off.

Dunno how Su and Himari would be. Kinda want to say that they'd get along well enough that Motoko would get jealous.

Kinda want to say that Shinobu and Himari wouldn't get past being friendly acquaintances without some event happening.

Kanako and Himari... That's a tricky one. If Kuro exists, then I see Kanako viewing Himari as a dangerous rival. If Kuro doesn't exist, then I somehow see Kanako and Himari getting along well. Dunno why. Maybe the latter has them being partners in crime or something.

I kinda see Haruka either getting really annoyed with Himari fairly fast or getting along great.
I had to look her up... never heard of her.

One interesting thought occurred to me is could she negate the effect of promises made in the annex.

If so, that kills the bindings on his soul for both the childhood promise, and the promise with Kanako to dual run the inn/dorm.

Wonder if she could affect the manipulations of Granny Hina.

Then there is also the doll Moe... wonder if she could release the spirit and free it to move on.
 

HotelKatz

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If Himari can negate the effect of promises made in the annex and/or let Moe pass, on, then I kinda see Motoko having a crisis of faith in her abilities. Mainly from Motoko's eyes, a cat youkai might be seemingly better at exorcisms than her, who has been trained since childhood and is a member of a long family line of demon slayers and exorcists.

Though in all fairness, if she were aware of the bindings on Keitaro's soul and of Moe, Motoko most likely would have done just as well as Himari. It was only that Himari noticed them first. The fact that both issues are so near to what Motoko considers home probably would be a reason to hate herself even more, though home is where one is supposed to relax and let down one's guard.

But on the other hand, Himari and Motoko could become friendly rivals from either event you described happening, PCHeintz72.

I do really like the 'Himari negates the effect of promises made in the annex' thing, though there is a slight worry that it might make Himari into a slight Mary Sue.
 

Ordo

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Then let's limit her options. She can see the binds on his soul, but can not remove them without the consent of all involved. That means Keitaro, Mutsumi AND Naru both must agree to remove the binding. Keitaro is so stubborn when it comes to wishes that this will be a problem. To make matters worse, Naru was a sickly child but that moved to Mutsumi because of this promise (unless I am misunderstanding things again) So Keitaro wants to make sure that neither Naru or Mutsumi has to suffer when the binding is broken and is thus actively looking for a way to transfer that lack of health to himself. This will cause Himari some concern since Keitaro's 'Defenses' will be severely weakened, even if he will be otherwise fine.

Just some thoughts
 

PCHeintz72

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Ordo said:
Then let's limit her options. She can see the binds on his soul, but can not remove them without the consent of all involved. That means Keitaro, Mutsumi AND Naru both must agree to remove the binding. Keitaro is so stubborn when it comes to wishes that this will be a problem. To make matters worse, Naru was a sickly child but that moved to Mutsumi because of this promise (unless I am misunderstanding things again) So Keitaro wants to make sure that neither Naru or Mutsumi has to suffer when the binding is broken and is thus actively looking for a way to transfer that lack of health to himself. This will cause Himari some concern since Keitaro's 'Defenses' will be severely weakened, even if he will be otherwise fine.

Just some thoughts
If you wanted to limit it, I would not do so in that way... I would make the abilities specific to 3rd party enforcings (aka annex)... That would allow for detecting and correcting annex created issues, but only allow for detecting the Moe one, as that technically was not a 3rd party binding. Even just detecting the nature of it would be helpful, as people though Kei was going nuts at first.

The problem is Kei/Naru/Mutsuki did not really know what was done, and even if Kei had, only Mutsuki knew about the dreadfully done handover.
 

HotelKatz

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After having a lot of time to think about it, I don't haven any problems with Himari dealing with Moe and the various promises. It just has to be done in a way that doesn't have her outshine anyone else.

Though it'd be kinda funny in an odd way if Himari tried to free Moe, but wound u
 

Ordo

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“Why him?” the voice was male, and perhaps a touch tired. The scent of fresh roast spread throughout the air as the maker dinged its readiness. “I mean….he’s not particularly impressive….kind of plain in every way really?” the sound of coffee being poured into a cup, which is gratefully accepted by the rooms other occupant.

“He carries nothing into the drift.” Female voice this time, an inhalation of aroma followed by a pause as the speaker enjoyed their companions skill with a fresh morning brew. “That makes him perfect for our needs.”
The sound of a pot settling into its home, as the male considers. “You’re worried about your sister.”

A soft sigh followed by a slight chuckle “I knew I married you for more than your looks.” The woman began as she took another sip. “Motoko….is having issues with seeing what’s in my head….I think you’re….passionate performance during our honey moon shocked her.”

“She has been avoiding me….well more than usual….” The male admitted

“I…probably should’ve considered that before….well. Anyways between that and my upcoming maternity leave I felt it best to bring in someone who will not distract her during a fight.”

The sound of paper shuffling, the husband’s footfalls carrying him to his wife’s side as he thumbed through the folder. “I understand….but I’m really not sure, Keitaro Urashima is the best partner for her….I mean he won’t impair her…but aside from sharing the load is he worth much else?”

A slightly smug grin touched the woman’s face. “Trust me, I have an eye for talent.”

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“That was brutal.” Kitsune said as she lounged in the pilot’s lounge, sipping from a flask of the cook’s finest. Her ‘reward’ for a successful sortie. “And when the second one sprang from the water….” She took a swig this time. “I figured you and Keitaro were done for….heck I’ve NEVER seen Aeon Dragon take that kind of beating and get back up! How’d you and the Newbie do that Motoko?”

Motoko, dressed casually, fidgeted with her cup of tea, the liquid long since having grown cold, the fight having forced her to reassess her first impressions of her partner. “It….it was like…being clad in armor…made of confidence.” She raised the cup to her lips, made a face and set it back down. “It just felt like….nothing could keep us down.”

Kitsune and Naru shared a look, the sprong haired girl asking the question they were both thinking. “Keitaro…confidant?”

“Not in himself or in his abilities…..confidant in ME…” the young sword’s woman looked outside at the launch bay, watching as Kaolla su and her crew worked feverishly to repair the damage her Jaeger had sustained, the young girl cackling madly as she scrambled all over the mech without benefit of any scaffolds or safety lines, her team racing to keep pace with the Mad Engineer. “Confidant that I could do anything….” She turned and looked Naru in the eyes. “…Sister told me he carries nothing into the drift but she’s wrong. In there, with him I sensed support, warmth…and assurance that I would no fail….it’s hard to described.” She finally said.

“So…you believed in the him…that believed in you?” Kitsune teased, to which she received only a blank stare from her companions. “….Really? Neither of you have ever seen….you know what, never mind.”
Just a passing thought....
 
Sauron and Morgoth Gets teletransported to Akamatsu verse, they empowers the One Ring with their evil and let it on a street...

Unlucky the world are...Keichi or Keitaro finds it...and the Corruption begins...small temptations and truths...the Corruption stirs
 

Ordo

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João said:
Sauron and Morgoth Gets teletransported to Akamatsu verse, they empowers the One Ring with their evil and let it on a street...

Unlucky the world are...Keichi or Keitaro finds it...and the Corruption begins...small temptations and truths...the Corruption stirs
The one ring contains all of Sauron's power....I don't see him letting it out of his sight under normal circumstances. Someone would have to cut it from his fingers as was done on middle earth.
 
Um...maybe he's with Morgoth on some Void, needs someone on outside to be his power on Earth? Or he and his master just use The One Ring to bring suffering? (That two are specialists on this)...

Or forgetting the above thoughts of mine...Belldandy-sama? (She's unaware of That Ring's unique...destructive capacity...or some ancestor of Motoko?)
 

Ordo

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João said:
Um...maybe he's with Morgoth on some Void, needs someone on outside to be his power on Earth?
If they did need an outside agent he's unlikely to pick anyone from the Hina Inn....least of all Keitaro.

Or he and his master just use The One Ring to bring suffering? (That two are specialists on this)...
I don't see either character sending out a One Ring for the Lulz.

Or forgetting the above thoughts of mine...Belldandy-sama? (She's unaware of That Ring's unique...destructive capacity...or some ancestor of Motoko?)
Belldandy's a goddess linked to the world tree....the chances of her not seeing the one ring for what it is are remote indeed. An Ancestor of Motoko's cutting the ring from Sauron's finger is the most plausible thing here.....but the story still has a lot of problems.

Let me ask you this....why are you mixing Love Hina and LOTR? What story are you trying to tell that requires these two very different tales to be fused in any fashion? What can you do with the fusion of these two universes that would make for a good story?
 
Well...like you said, a Ancestor of Motoko cutting his finger is more plausible to begin a history...

About why attempt to make this crossover, it's because a friend of mine asked me a question who I...cannot answer him

The question he asked me

"How would be a Evil!Keitaro or a Evil!Keichii?"

So...after thinking...I reached on a conclusion, to answer him...it'll be needed a Outside-Context Problem (and that Ring turns every user evil)...now, If you have this answer of how a evil version of Keitaro and Keichii will be...I'm thankful
 

PCHeintz72

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Evil Keitaro... easy.

Have granny Hina train him from birth. Merely need something t happen to his parents early on to either remove them from the picture, or allow her to take him under her wing.

Note not simply raise him, but raise him as her successor, her protégé.
 
Um...origin created...what about his character? (Or like tv tropes says "His tropes") even if I'm seeing him like that kind of guy who lives for war...

Good...now Keiichi...someone has the answer?
 

Antimatter

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If you wanted it seriously,

Evil Keitaro could be as simple as Keitaro, except well aware of his charms and willing to ah, take advantage of the girls when the opportunity rises.

You know, like the guy in highschool we all knew who was a known womanizer, but for some reason, every girl still wanted to date him and he was never without a girlfriend of the moment.

He rolls in, gets together with one of the girls by basically making her think it was her idea, and when she finds out hes got some of the side, it creates a conflict between those girls rather then between the girls and him.
 
Manipulative bastard...

With a Lack of Empathy and Trollish tendencies... (the truth? Dangerous...creates conflicts just for giggles...
 

EagleCeres

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An Evil!Keitaro would be either a completely un-sympathetic bastard that looks for himself (maybe the few and far in-between friends he's made and barely kept) or a cold and calculating master planner/manipulator that uses any (and every) tool available to him (faking niceness, leveraging contacts, having a little black book of people that owe him favors, etc), thanks to being raised by granny.

If anything Haruka would be the only positive re-inforcement/attention he had growing up... and that would be limited since she wanted to be free/outgoing for most of her highschool and college life, Kei would have taken the brunt of granny's attention, more so as she would be raising him to be the Urashima Heir (unless Haruka borrowed her cousin once in a while and helped him unwind/have fun).
 

Antimatter

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João said:
Manipulative bastard...

With a Lack of Empathy and Trollish tendencies... (the truth? Dangerous...creates conflicts just for giggles...

How to keep them from noticing too much and ether moving away or demanding Hina replace him? He'd have to be subtle about it, or have some way of getting back on their good side when he goes a bit too far.
 
Well...if it are them all being on Urashima Inn...it'll become hard to write...now, if it are a AU verse, it becomes more easy (or it's just because I'm new on fanfiction, but maybe I'll attempt)

The insights you'll given to me will be helpful

Now if about Keiichi? He'll goes crasy if he discover what Heaven has done with his mind?
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I'm...How they dare to do that with me?! They're changing things on my mind! That bastards...and she'll knowed that all the time...from my infancy She seeing me...so they begin here changing my mind...maybe I just love her because I've being brainwashed.

Purity...I'm pure...courtesy of Heaven...Pure is good...so why not make all people pure? I'm right Bell will be happy!

I go home..smiling because it's what my love want...me to be pure...now I'll just make all people pure too...

(PURE IS NOT GOOD)
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Well...if you see Heaven's changings on his mind as a bad thing...accidents happen...if on one these changings they're take...love and kindness what he becomes?
 
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