Akamatsuverse [Negima] A Matter of Timing: Chapter 1

TenguPhule

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Chao clamped her hands together to keep them from shaking.

It was impossible. Utterly, completely impossible!

He could not be here! Not like this!! She'd planned her jump back in time specifically to ensure that she would meet
him while he was still a child, before his natural power over women started to bloom in earnest. She of all people knew
the dangerous temptation her ancestor would present to everyone after hitting puberty.

Dear Darwin, the holograms had not come close to capturing the life in those beautiful eyes, she could feel herself
being irresistably sucked into those shimmering depths. Her mission seemed so distant and unimportant at that moment,
all that mattered was to feel the touch of his hands on her skin and the heat of his-

"Lingshen-san? Lingshen-san!"

She blinked and the world suddenly swam back into focus.

He was taking attendance.
 

Ranma Uzumaki

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It alive!
 

shiki

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You're EVIL Shade. :snigger:

This tasty morsal shall have to suffice until the next chuck.

Question: IS the reality that Chao comes from the canon future reality or the future reality of this fic?
 

holyknight

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shiki said:
You're EVIL Shade. :snigger:

This tasty morsal shall have to suffice until the next chuck.

Question: IS the reality that Chao comes from the canon future reality or the future reality of this fic?
From what we suspect, she either comes from a sort of Canon Negi-Verse, or she jumped from this verse'ís future...but ironically, the very act of her jump, altered casualty into the point where Negi met Morrigan Aensland on that Scottish lake years ago.... :evil2:

Although, from the comments of Eva about "Nagi, that insufferable, handsome, sexy Bastard", i'm suspecting that ALSO, there may be an element on the Springfield bloodline, that makes them lady magnets once they reach puberty.

However, its more than likely, that the Soul Shard of Morrigan on Negi, accelerated his puberty and growth SEVERAL years previous to the original timeline, likely activating that special part of the Springfield bloodline, being also boosted and mixed with the gifts of a Royal Succubus's soul from Morrigan, bringing this nice SNAFU to watch...

And Chao its the poor fool that has brought all onto herself.......


......Although she ain't complaining, no siree.... :evil2: :angel:
 
#55
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Moar? Here's hoping we see moar again before next February.

Chao's going to have prooooblems.

Hm. Especially if his abilities affect Chachamaru. Not that he needs them to charm her, but that extra push might...
 
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Me likes this story very much. I can't wait for the inevitable in-class Negima zerg swarm to take place.
 

TenguPhule

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"Eh, present!"

She flushed bright strawberry red as titters of laughter went around the classroom.

"She may have sold her soul to science, but her hormones still seem to be in perfect working order!" crowed Yuna Akashi
as the Narutaki twins hooted their approval of the jest.

For the rest of class, Chao found the top of her desk to be perfectly fascinating,
so much so that she didn't look up once until the bell rang to signal lunch.

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It wasn't him.

That thought infuriated and pained her at the same time. Not the one who had cursed her into this prison and
whom she had sworn bitter revenge on. Just a doppelganger who shared his face and bloodline. Nagi had had a son,
and obviously fathered it well before he'd met her. Goddamn that man!

He'd had a son. Her hands clenched into fists so tight that the nails were cutting into the palm of her hands.

He had loved a woman and she had given him what Evangeline McDowell had always wished she could.

Gods and Demons, he was the spitting image of his father. Just looking at that face made her heart ache
with all the old memories that stirred. The only difference was the lack of arrogance that Nagi had always
possessed about him. This Negi Springfield looked about as confident as a newborn fawn thrown to the wolves.

She could almost feel her inner sadist licking her lips. Oh she could hardly wait to mold him into a fitting puppet,
not only as revenge against his father, but to give her that which she had craved most in these long years of imprisonment.

He would not love her. But he would want her. Yes, when she was done he would desire her with every fiber of his being.

And that would be enough. She would be content with the illusion of affection. For a monster like her, it was all she could ever hope for.

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MWkillkenny84

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TenguPhule said:
And that would be enough. She would be content with the illusion of affection. For a monster like her, it was all she could ever hope for.

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Do not delude yourself Evangeline!
When the Springfield-effect will have taken FULL FORCE, you will love and be loved so much who will not even funny to speack.
 
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Is this what they call setting a trap for yourself? :snigger:
 
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So, this is 10-years-old Negi looking like a 17-years-old? Or is it just that Evangeline lost notion of time upon seeing him?
 

ringlhach

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Scygnus Darkhawk said:
Is this what they call setting a trap for yourself? :snigger:
Not so much "for herself," I don't think. She's used to being the big fish, after all.
 
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Naw, I meant more she's setting a trap that will end up with her caught by it.
 

ringlhach

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Oh, that is definitely happening.

^_^ And we'll all be there to watch. <s>Well, if Shade ever gets that far.</s>
 
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TenguPhule said:
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Chao clamped her hands together to keep them from shaking.

It was impossible. Utterly, completely impossible!

He could not be here! Not like this!! She'd planned her jump back in time specifically to ensure that she would meet
him while he was still a child, before his natural power over women started to bloom in earnest. She of all people knew
the dangerous temptation her ancestor would present to everyone after hitting puberty.

Dear Darwin, the holograms had not come close to capturing the life in those beautiful eyes, she could feel herself
being irresistably sucked into those shimmering depths. Her mission seemed so distant and unimportant at that moment,
all that mattered was to feel the touch of his hands on her skin and the heat of his-

"Lingshen-san? Lingshen-san!"

She blinked and the world suddenly swam back into focus.

He was taking attendance.
We got Negi, now with unbelievable super charisma that literally makes almost every girl fall for him.

Negi, who eventually gains an super mode (Manga), being forced into perverted situations while helping his female students with their problems and sad past.

An time traveler that came to prevent an dire future, who isn't immune to his charms.

I can't stop comparing this fic with DNA?.

I keep expecting an 2nd Chao to pull out an gun and try to shoot Negi, to spare the world from the threat of overpopulation.

I mean the war between the old world and the magic world started because the magic world was going to be annihilated and the refugees need a place to live (CH: 298 pg 11) Just think what the situation would be if Negi became an Mega Playboy.
 

zeebee1

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The war was because even after colonizing Jupiter they didn't have enough room for Negi's grandkids.
 

TenguPhule

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Negi chewed his meal thoughtfully as he collected his thoughts in the teacher's break room.

His first class as a teacher had been almost as educational as when he'd been a student in Wales.

Despite the unfortunate first encounter earlier that morning with some of them it appeared that they really were a good class.
Perhaps a touch too excited and eager when it came to trying to get him to call on them, but he was pretty sure that
the thrown bra had been a completely unintentional accident. Though he was a little concerned about Miss Miyazaki.
Even with the girl's hair obscuring her face it was fairly noticeable that she seemed to shy away from him whenever he
moved around the room. Takahata had warned him that she was a bit shy towards men, but he'd hoped that she would have felt
more at ease with his presence. But aside from that minor concern the rest of the session had gone quite smoothly, though
he could have sworn someone was moving the chalkboard erasers around when he wasn't looking. But of couse none of the thirty one
students had been anywhere close to the board at the time. Probably just first day jitters, something he was perfectly justified
having considering the problems he'd had on arrival.

Still, the new teacher had decided *not* to dine in the main lunch hall with the various classes
as he'd originally planned. Nobody had connected him to the mass stripping event in the Mahora Train car
yet and while it might be a bit cowardly, he'd rather not risk being suddenly and loudly identified
in the middle of such a large and public area.

And he was definitely *not* trying to hide from all those girls who had expressed a strong interest in eating lunch together with him!

"Ah, Negi-sensei. What a wonderful surprise to meet you here."

He perked up slightly.

"Hello Minamoto-sensei."
 

Elvarein

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MILF on the prowl! She has experience on her side ^_^

Will anyone save him?
 
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Elvarein said:
MILF on the prowl! She has experience on her side ^_^

Will anyone save him?
Only AFTER we see what kind of moves she has ;)
 

holyknight

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Elite Hunter 02 said:
Elvarein said:
MILF on the prowl! She has experience on her side ^_^

Will anyone save him?
Only AFTER we see what kind of moves she has ;)
And think that there its the entire 3-A to sabota.....err....i mean, to ensure that Negi Sensei finds her ideal partner on a age range more closer to his own...... :evil2:
 

TenguPhule

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Her answering warm smile reminded him of Nekane.

He was especially grateful that she had not taken offense when he'd accidently gotten buried in her chest earlier
in the principal's office. She had merely blushed slightly and given him that same smile she was giving him now
while making no move to seperate the two of them.

Then Principal Konoe had gone for a daring squeeze with a wrinkled hand and the next thing Negi
knew there was the imprint of a body in the office's far wall. Yes, he was decidedly grateful that
Miss Shizuna (and she had been quite clear to stress that to him) had not taken offense to his misstep.

"Having lunch by yourself?"

He blinked at the question before recalling what the manners of a well brought up Wales gentleman required.

"Would you care to join me?"

"I would love to."
 

ringlhach

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Why "Miss Shizuna" here and "Minamoto-sensei" in the last one? She seems like the kind of person that would insist on one or the other, depending on what she wants from you...
 

TenguPhule

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ringlhach said:
Why "Miss Shizuna" here and "Minamoto-sensei" in the last one? She seems like the kind of person that would insist on one or the other, depending on what she wants from you...
She's stressing to him that she's a "Miss" and wants first name, but he refers to her when addressing her directly by the standard last name.

Hooray for Japanese/Welsh manners & ettiquite!
 
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Notice the bold print of her reply. She's definitely thinking of something very inappropriate. :p
 
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