Akamatsuverse [Negima] A Matter of Timing

TenguPhule

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A Matter of Timing
by Shade

Disclaimer: KA writes MSN. D product of C. FUAIE!

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Little Negi Springfield knew that he wasn't supposed to be out at night.
While the village and the surrounding hills in this remote region of Wales
had been peaceful for many years, it was still no place for a seven year
old child to be wandering around all by himself with only the light of
the full moon and the stars in the clear sky overhead to see by.

But Negi was on a mission.

His childhood friend Anya had told him about the legend of the water spirit
that lived in the lake near here who she said she had heard from a villager
who had known someone who knew someone who knew someone that had seen her
before. On the night of a full moon such as tonight, the spirit would appear
to swim in the waters of the lake and the person who managed to find and take
her garments hidden somewhere on the shore would be able to trade them back
for a boon from the magical being.

To the young boy this meant only one thing. A chance to find his long lost father.

And so he had forced himself out of his warm bed and still clad in his long pajamas, started
on the simple trodden path to the lake. The walk seemed to last forever in the darkness,
but in reality was probably only about an hour and a half. But when dark shadows turned
the familiar reassuring trees into looming monsters ready to leap out, the little boy
could be forgiven for not being able to tell the difference.

When he finally saw the lake ahead the sight of it seemed to take his breath away.
It seemed to have turned into pure liquid silver in the moonlight, so beautiful
and magical that the sight alone seemed to be enough to justify his sneaking out.

But as he got closer, he saw that there was someone in the water. From the distance
it was hard to make out but it seemed to be a woman. Negi started to run, panting
as he pumped his short legs as hard as they would go to get to the edge of the lake.

His breath came out in little pale puffs of mist in the cold night air as he finally
reached the dense undergrowth that seperated the thin forest from the thick grass
that lined the banks of the inland lake. He had once almost drowned in those waters,
determined to get his father to show up and save him at the last minute and only
receiving a long stay in bed and a tearful scolding from Nekane for his troubles.

He shivered slightly at the memory before looking for the person he had seen earlier.

And then he heard a soft splash of movement in the rippling water and turned to see her.

Time seemed to slow to a crawl as Negi Springfield stared at the most beautiful woman
he had ever seen in his life. Long thick tresses the color of the the finest emeralds
swept down the milky smoothness of her flawless naked back as the little beads of water
clinging to her form shone like little diamonds. Her face was the essence of Woman,
and even the innocent child could feel the draw of her innate feminine power as he stared
at her.

For the first time in his life, Negi forgot about his father. He forgot about Anya, Nekane,
Old Stan and the cold gnawing at his shivering hands and feet. He forgot about everything
except that captivating vision before him. It was only when she dived under the water that
the spell was broken and Negi came back to himself.

Blood rushed to his cheeks as awareness returned. He was supposed to be a gentleman, Nekane
had made sure to drill that into his head and here he had gone and just gaped at that woman
when she wasn't wearing any clothes...clothes...clothes!!

The boy started looking around on the ground for any sign of the Water Spirit's clothes,
because what else could she be but the legendary magical creature? But no matter how hard
he looked, Negi couldn't find any sign of garments on the grass. Determined to look even harder,
he failed to watch where his feet were going and stepped on a dry twig that cracked under
his weight like a gunshot.

"Who's there?"

The woman was standing up where the water only came up to her finely toned hips. Trickles
of shining silver ran down her glorious form as she looked right at where Negi was. Had he
been somewhat older, the sight of her exposed breasts would have instigated an embarrassing
physical reaction from him, provided he didn't simply have a heart attack from the raw sensuality
that radiated from her like light from the Sun.

Hesitantly, he stepped out of the underbrush in his blue pajamas, eyes wide with fear
at having been caught peeping. Negi wasn't sure what the punishment was, but Anya had
always said really bad things happened to boys who peeped on girls.

She studied him thoughtfully, an amused smile forming on her perfect strawberry lips.

"A child? Come here, boy. Let me look at you."

His feet seeming to develop a will of their own, Negi found himself moving closer
to this enchanting creature. When she suddenly narrowed her eyes, he thought it
was his fault and he found himself holding his breath in fear. But she wasn't
looking at him any longer, she was looking above-

Something massive erupted from the trees.

The terrified young boy started to shout a warning to the Water Spirit, but she was already moving.

He gaped as the strange woman leaped straight out of the water as if it wasn't even there,
revealing herself completely to his gaze for a long priceless moment. And then a swarm of
bats appeared and swarmed over her body before glowing and changing into a tight fitting bodysuit
that seemed to reveal even more of her then simple nudity had only moments earlier.

Large Batwings erupted from her back and a smaller pair on the top of her head as the green haired figure
met the monstrous creature in midair and began to attack it. The larger wings on her back shifted into
spears of shadowy black that struck at the beast from all sides and forced it to bat them away with
the huge twisted clawed hands that belonged to no natural creature.

Mesmorized by the violent spectacle taking place above, Negi almost missed the sound of the second figure
moving to get a better angle on the pair dueling in the sky. It might have passed for a man were it not
for the being's animalistic features and the scales that served it as skin. It paid the boy no attention,
focused entirely on the battle taking place.

And then the little wizard saw it was aiming the staff in its hands at the woman fighting its fellow monster.

Negi Springfield didn't even stop to think, the little practice wand Nekane had given to him
and he always carried around was simply in his hand and pointed at the creature standing before
him.

"Practe Bigi Nar! Ardescat!!"

It was only a very tiny flame, but it was able to distract the assassin's attention just enough.
The ugly green shot from its staff only grazed a single wing instead of the heart it had been
initially aimed for and the element of surprise was now gone.

"Stupid Human Brat!"

Something hard and sharp hit Springfield in his middle and he went down hard on his back.

Then the awful gutwrenching pain began. It hurt worse then anything Negi could have imagined,
tears were running down his face as he moaned and tried to keep from screaming because moving
even a little made the pain that much worse.

He didn't see the enormous fireball of magical energy that shimmered like a diamond trapped in
the heart of flame that completely vaporized the creature that had struck him down, nor did he
witness the sudden and complete dismemberment of the large hulking attacker by the woman's
transformed bladed wings. All the dying boy saw was the stars in the sky, twinkling eternally
beyond the concerns of mortal men.

And then there was a face looking down into his own. The face of an angel.

It was her, the Water Spirit. One tiny trembling hand reached up and touched the softness of her cheek.

"Good. You're okay."

Negi tasted iron saltiness in his mouth as he said those words, his voice barely more then a whisper now.
Everything was getting blurry and becoming harder to see now. But at least she wasn't hurt and that
was all that really mattered to him now.

Her hypnotic gaze never left his face, it almost seemed as if she was struggling to come to a decision.

"I wanted to see you...father...."

It didn't hurt so much anymore. It felt almost peaceful now. The Spirit's face was getting larger,
was this what dying was like? Was she going to be the last thing he saw? That didn't seem so bad-

And then she kissed him.

Her mouth was sweet on his and he felt something hot and pulsing flowing into his body, there were no
words that he knew of which could truly capture the essence of it. It was as if he was both expanding
into a giant and squeezing together like light through a magnifying glass.

He could hear her voice in his head even though their lips remained joined.

'A piece of myself to you, for House Aensland always repays their debts.'

Then Negi Springfield knew nothing more.

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"Negi! Wake up you idiot!!"

It was Anya, his childhood friend, yelling in his ear. The little girl looked
furiously at him. He stared back at her blankly, trying to remember who he was
and what he was doing there.

"How long do you think you're just going to sleeping in your bed like that?"

He looked down to see what she was talking about and stared.

This was his bedroom and this was his bed. There were no marks on him, had he dreamed it all?

But if he had, then where had his pajama top gone?

Then Anya started yelling at him again and seven year old was soon too busy trying to avoid
the embarrassing spectacle of being forced to take a bath to recall the fading memory of
what seemed to be more and more of a dream.

But sometimes at night, that woman's face would still appear in his dreams.
 

jwolf0

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You know, I actually spent a couple of minutes trying to figure out the last part of the disclaimer too. Still didn't get the AIE at the end. :huh.:

My first thought (besides HAWT! and MOAR!) was to wonder how Eva will play into this later. You just KNOW she is, maybe connected to Dmitri somehow?

Second thought was to wonder what Morrigan gave him exactly. Negi-bozu, you found someone SO much better than a piddly Water Spirit who grants boons. :snigger:

My third thought was to rage at how evil you are for posting such a short snippet of awesome. So please see comments in parenthesis above. :hail: :hail:
 

TenguPhule

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jwolf0 said:
You know, I actually spent a couple of minutes trying to figure out the last part of the disclaimer too.? Still didn't get the AIE at the end.? :huh.:

My first thought (besides HAWT! and MOAR!) was to wonder how Eva will play into this later.? You just KNOW she is, maybe connected to Dmitri somehow?

Second thought was to wonder what Morrigan gave him exactly.? Negi-bozu, you found someone SO much better than a piddly Water Spirit who grants boons.? :snigger:

My third thought was to rage at how evil you are for posting such a short snippet of awesome.? So please see comments in parenthesis above.? :hail:? :hail:
1. Fair Use Act In Effect

2. Since I consider Demetri as most of the TFF considers Sasuke, that would be a no.

3. That would be telling.

4. I know.
 

Shiakou

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#4
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Morrigan works as well. :wub:
 

TenguPhule

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Chapter 0: I've got Sexy Back
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In hindsight, the goodbye hug and kiss from Nekane should have warned him of what was to come.

Yes, they had embraced before, but not like this. Negi could feel parts of her he was pretty sure
he wasn't even supposed to know the words for yet. Then there was the kiss. She'd always kissed him
on the cheek or a few times on the forehead. This time it was lip to lip and for some reason there
was a tongue in his mouth that didn't belong to the young wizard.

He didn't remember much after that since Anya had done something violent and explosive
and he'd woken up later on the plane with a large bruise on his head.

It had been a pretty uneventful flight, though for some reason the stewardesses insisted on
slipping folded pieces of paper into the pockets of his robes when they thought he wasn't looking.

Upon arriving in Japan Negi had wasted little time in using the great train system to make his
way to his new job.

Unfortunately, this meant he was now currently trapped in an enclosed space with what seemed
to be nothing but high school girls. All of whom were covertly studying him with an unnerving glint
in their eyes.

'Oh Bugger.'

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Mercsenary

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#7
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Oh dear.. someone is about to get mobbed. :lol:
 

Xaosite

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#8
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So what we've got here is a Negi that is going to be molested even more often than in canon? :blink: Such a thing is a mighty undertaking indeed. I wish you luck in your noble endevor!
 
#9
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I fear what Ayaka, and the other, more.... expressive, Negi Admirers will do to this Negi...

Ayaka: :drool: :wub:

Negi: :huh!: :unsure!: :help:
 

Prince Charon

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David Alan Abramczyk said:
I fear what Ayaka, and the other, more.... expressive, Negi Admirers will do to this Negi...

Ayaka: :drool: :wub:

Negi: :huh!: :unsure!: :help:
I wonder if Asuna and Konoka will have the willpower to resist. For that matter, what about Honya?
 

Lord Raa

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More when you can, good sir.
 

Shiakou

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Prince Charon said:
David Alan Abramczyk said:
I fear what Ayaka, and the other, more.... expressive, Negi Admirers will do to this Negi...

Ayaka:? :drool:? :wub:

Negi: :huh!:? :unsure!:? :help:
I wonder if Asuna and Konoka will have the willpower to resist. For that matter, what about Honya?
I'm all for the Slime Trio trying to attack Negi only to fall into puppy love one after the other. :D
 
#13
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Ye gods, she gave him the incubus effect...

Negi... you gonna get raped.
 

TenguPhule

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Eiko Eiken, leader of the undefeated Mahora dodgeball team known as the Black Lilies, had not been
able to believe it at first. This was a females only car, a response to the recent upswing in train molesters.
Men were not supposed to be allowed inside. But bold as brass, this one had just strided on in
as if he belonged here. She'd had half a mind to grab him and report him to the authorities until
he'd turned slightly and she saw his features for the very first time.

Eiko had promptly forgotten what she was doing and even who she was for a few moments
as she simply stared, dumbstruck. Then she came back to herself and started to frantically
check her hair and makeup because it was obvious she couldn't risk looking anything less
then her very best at the moment.

He was gorgeous. The highschooler had never really believed that the word could be applied to a person
of the male gender in real life until now. That face could have stepped off of the cover of a teen idol
magazine or a shoujo manga. Just starting to imagine what that young man would look like in girl's clothes
threatened to send blood spurting out of Eiko's reddening nose. Her hands itched to run themselves through
that reddish brown hair to discover if it was really as soft and tempting as it looked.

An audible gulp alerted the girl to the fact that her companions Bibi and Shii had noticed where she
was looking and found him just as mesmorizing as Eiko did. With the finely meshed coordination of
countless hours of team practice the three girls began to move without having to say a word to each other.

They weren't the only ones.

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There were some who would have described the situation as comparable to a lost deer being unknowingly
stalked by a pride of lions. But that assumption was incorrect since the lions in this case had obviously been
wiped out by a pack of hungry velocoraptors who had just spotted the fresh catch of the day.
 

armedlord

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#15
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To say it in one word....ouch.

To possibly describe of what could happen in the future: The Dodgeball event is going to get REAL bloody as Negi is the prize...if it gets that far before a catfight decides to replace it instead.
 

bzzt3421

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#16
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Hey, Tengu, is this Negi canon age? Or slightly older?

Cause the way the girls are reacting, it seems to suggest that Negi is either older then a nine year old, or that he gives off something that makes him appear older. Cause I don't think nine year old kids appear on teen idol magazines. Then again, this is Japan. ^_^

EDIT:
Oh wait, stupid me. *smacks himself* :spank: I forgot to read the subtitle. :sweat:
 

knight_of_ni

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#17
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That is confusing me as well, but from the sound of things, he just looks older, or something.

I think it is like how Morrigan came across in the first snippet only in reverse.
 

TerraBull

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#18
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So they are seeing his potential?

What happens if Negi finds a way to look older on purpose? He takes a shower or bath and there are hordes willing to scrub/ serve him?

Can this Demonic origin of Male! be resisted by Eva?

Will Morrigan be back eventually?
 

runestar

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#19
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Ah, it works both ways... ^_^

Things will surely get very interesting. Girls being even more interested in Negi, and him being willing to reciprocate... :lol:
 

TenguPhule

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knight_of_ni said:
That is confusing me as well, but from the sound of things, he just looks older, or something.

I think it is like how Morrigan came across in the first snippet only in reverse.
You are correct.
 

Alzrius

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#21
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This sounds like that scene in the manga where Yue was frustrated with herself because she kept treating Negi like he was older than he was - it's not so much that the girls actually perceive him as being older than he is, but rather, they react to him as if he was.
 

Lord Raa

Exporter of Juice Tins
#22
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One thing: it's Velociraptor. Secondly, they're not as big as Jurassic Park led us to believe. Utahraptor is more intimidating.

Sorry to be the dinosaur nerd here, but in the interests of catching discrepancies before you get a barrage of abuse in your reviews, I thought that it might be nice.


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I'll get me coat.
 

OniGanon

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#23
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Shit. Raptors have feathers now?

Anyway, I'm quite looking forward to seeing where this will go. Especially Chachamaru's and maybe Asuna's response to everyone else's behaviour. Those two, and maybe Evangeline, would be the most likely immune, right?
 

Alzrius

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#24
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Sayo might be immune too, if dead girls aren't affected, though given how lonely she is, it might not make much of a difference.

The fun part will be seeing how girls who'd otherwise be his enemy will be affected. Will Chigusa fall for a Western wizard? Will Tsukuyomi pay attention to him over Setsuna? Will the slime girls (Suramui, Ameko, and Purin) melt at the sight of him? :D
 

TenguPhule

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#25
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Sorry to be the dinosaur nerd here, but in the interests of catching discrepancies before you get a barrage of abuse in your reviews, I thought that it might be nice.
Thanks, I was wondering if something was wrong. Replaced it with Deinonychus.
 
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