Akamatsuverse [Negima] A Matter of Timing
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A Matter of Timing
"Why hello there!"
Negi turned to see that three rather pretty teenage girls had come up to him. The leader had
long dark hair and held her nose high in the air as she addressed him in a voice that drizzled
velvet and honey.
The young man gulped.
Her equally attractive companions, a long haired blonde with hungry eyes and a chestnut haired girl
with long straight bangs in the front but the rear trimmed short to taper off at the base of her neck,
had quietly slid in on either side to box him in among the three of them.
"Um..."
"I haven't seen you around before, are you new to the campus?"
There were suddenly hands boldly roaming where they had no business roaming. It was almost absurd
how these girls could continue to talk in a calm fashion even as their bodies took shockingly forward
liberties with him.
"I'm Eiko!"
"Vivi! Pleased to meet you!"
"Call me Shii. Let's get to know one another better."
This last one was punctuated by a brazen grab of his right arm that slipped his hand under the skirt
of the girl's school uniform. Negi desperately fought to avoid contact with anything and failed miserably.
"Girls! Please!!"
They had him backed up against the glass window of the train now. The dress shirt that he had decided
to wear in order to make a good first impression with the school administration had two buttons undone
at the top and the battle to defend the rest of it was going poorly.
But a brief respite from the onslaught came a most unexpected place.
"Unfair!!"
For a moment Negi actually thought he was going to be saved. Of course that illusion only lasted
as long as it took for one of the girls in the crowd currently surrounding them to speak up again.
"Don't just hog him all to yourselves! Share the wealth!!"
Negi whimpered softly as the human tide moved in.
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"Why hello there!"
Negi turned to see that three rather pretty teenage girls had come up to him. The leader had
long dark hair and held her nose high in the air as she addressed him in a voice that drizzled
velvet and honey.
The young man gulped.
Her equally attractive companions, a long haired blonde with hungry eyes and a chestnut haired girl
with long straight bangs in the front but the rear trimmed short to taper off at the base of her neck,
had quietly slid in on either side to box him in among the three of them.
"Um..."
"I haven't seen you around before, are you new to the campus?"
There were suddenly hands boldly roaming where they had no business roaming. It was almost absurd
how these girls could continue to talk in a calm fashion even as their bodies took shockingly forward
liberties with him.
"I'm Eiko!"
"Vivi! Pleased to meet you!"
"Call me Shii. Let's get to know one another better."
This last one was punctuated by a brazen grab of his right arm that slipped his hand under the skirt
of the girl's school uniform. Negi desperately fought to avoid contact with anything and failed miserably.
"Girls! Please!!"
They had him backed up against the glass window of the train now. The dress shirt that he had decided
to wear in order to make a good first impression with the school administration had two buttons undone
at the top and the battle to defend the rest of it was going poorly.
But a brief respite from the onslaught came a most unexpected place.
"Unfair!!"
For a moment Negi actually thought he was going to be saved. Of course that illusion only lasted
as long as it took for one of the girls in the crowd currently surrounding them to speak up again.
"Don't just hog him all to yourselves! Share the wealth!!"
Negi whimpered softly as the human tide moved in.
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Actually, i would suggest the opposite.
Negi after all, it's now part Succubi. If anything, get raped would HYPER-Charge his Mana reserves and life energy. It would be odd, but likely, that he would be the only one walking straight from that trolley, while a LOT of sated, energy-deprived, and smiling girls are on the floor of the trolley..... :hmm: :hmm:
Actually, i would suggest the opposite.
Negi after all, it's now part Succubi. If anything, get raped would HYPER-Charge his Mana reserves and life energy. It would be odd, but likely, that he would be the only one walking straight from that trolley, while a LOT of sated, energy-deprived, and smiling girls are on the floor of the trolley..... :hmm: :hmm:
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Now that you mention it, that is a great idea HolyKnight. After leaving a bunch of sated, tired and satisfied girls even more refreshed and energized, the legend of Negi the stamina demon not to mention great in the sack goes far and wide with scores of females coming to see if the tales are true, going home and spreading the word. Thus resulting in even more women. And throughout all this, Negi is clueless as to why all these women are yanno... Heheheheheheh I retract my previous statement. Negi you lucky bastard!
Now that you mention it, that is a great idea HolyKnight. After leaving a bunch of sated, tired and satisfied girls even more refreshed and energized, the legend of Negi the stamina demon not to mention great in the sack goes far and wide with scores of females coming to see if the tales are true, going home and spreading the word. Thus resulting in even more women. And throughout all this, Negi is clueless as to why all these women are yanno... Heheheheheheh I retract my previous statement. Negi you lucky bastard!
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"Gesundheit, Asuna!"
Twin bells jingled as reddish orange pigtails suddenly changed direction.
"That wasn't me, Konoka," said the blue and green eyed girl in a puzzled tone.
"Are you sure," Her long dark haired companion asked her teasingly. That noise had
been rather loud and she simply couldn't resist the temptation.
"Quite-Oooo! Takahata-sensei!!"
"Honestly, that girl..."
Konoka Konoe shook her head ruefully as she watched her best friend Asuna Kagurazaka run
off in pursuit of their rough faced former homeroom teacher further down the mad scramble
of student bodies trying to avoid being late on the first day of the new term. That girl
simply had horrible taste in men old enough to be her father.
The schoolgirl looked around again, hoping to see one of her other friends around in the morning rush.
Perhaps Nodoka or Yue from the Library Exploration Club, or maybe Setsuna would finally talk to her
again this year. She really missed being able to spend time with her childhood friend that wasn't full
of awkward silences and hurried retreating from her company with some excuse or another.
And if her grandfather had another one of those marriage meetings scheduled-
And then she saw him.
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"Gesundheit, Asuna!"
Twin bells jingled as reddish orange pigtails suddenly changed direction.
"That wasn't me, Konoka," said the blue and green eyed girl in a puzzled tone.
"Are you sure," Her long dark haired companion asked her teasingly. That noise had
been rather loud and she simply couldn't resist the temptation.
"Quite-Oooo! Takahata-sensei!!"
"Honestly, that girl..."
Konoka Konoe shook her head ruefully as she watched her best friend Asuna Kagurazaka run
off in pursuit of their rough faced former homeroom teacher further down the mad scramble
of student bodies trying to avoid being late on the first day of the new term. That girl
simply had horrible taste in men old enough to be her father.
The schoolgirl looked around again, hoping to see one of her other friends around in the morning rush.
Perhaps Nodoka or Yue from the Library Exploration Club, or maybe Setsuna would finally talk to her
again this year. She really missed being able to spend time with her childhood friend that wasn't full
of awkward silences and hurried retreating from her company with some excuse or another.
And if her grandfather had another one of those marriage meetings scheduled-
And then she saw him.
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So, if Negi, for whatever reason, had to borrow some clothes from one of the girls for a short time, would they fight over who it belonged to? (Fangirls rubbing themselves with the item, or wearing it themselves, imagining that Negi was indirectly touching that part of their body?)
Can everyone see situations where there will be conflicts on being Honor Students for his approval and being those that need Negi's personal tutoring or failing?
So, if Negi, for whatever reason, had to borrow some clothes from one of the girls for a short time, would they fight over who it belonged to? (Fangirls rubbing themselves with the item, or wearing it themselves, imagining that Negi was indirectly touching that part of their body?)
Can everyone see situations where there will be conflicts on being Honor Students for his approval and being those that need Negi's personal tutoring or failing?
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Ah... Negi's reaction to being molested? Sneeze the clothes off the molesters. Heheheh I wonder what the reaction of the molesters when they find themselves sans clothes? :evil2: I can't wait to see it even if the image is running through my head.
*mental picture*
"AHHHHCHOOOO!" Negi sneezed. Immediately, the clothes of the girls surrounding him shredded. The girls' at first wanted to hide their state of undress infront of the gorgeous piece of grade AAA beef before realising that if they were naked, then there was nothing wrong if said piece of meat was naked too. It was only fair right?. As if by some mental telepathy, the girls reached the same conclusion and renewed their effort to remedy the situation.
*End mental picture*
Reminds me of an H comic where a young boy accidentally rides the female only section of the train only to be taken advantage of the women in there. Heheh
MO4R please.
Ah... Negi's reaction to being molested? Sneeze the clothes off the molesters. Heheheh I wonder what the reaction of the molesters when they find themselves sans clothes? :evil2: I can't wait to see it even if the image is running through my head.
*mental picture*
"AHHHHCHOOOO!" Negi sneezed. Immediately, the clothes of the girls surrounding him shredded. The girls' at first wanted to hide their state of undress infront of the gorgeous piece of grade AAA beef before realising that if they were naked, then there was nothing wrong if said piece of meat was naked too. It was only fair right?. As if by some mental telepathy, the girls reached the same conclusion and renewed their effort to remedy the situation.
*End mental picture*
Reminds me of an H comic where a young boy accidentally rides the female only section of the train only to be taken advantage of the women in there. Heheh
MO4R please.
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lol XD now this sounds like fun. I mean seriously >_> i wonder what happens to the people who break the illusion/ spell... namely a magic canceller? Or what happens when eva decides to see what he REALLY is like (I mean she doesn't like suprises, she just has to know everything)
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Evangeline had cornered Negi, pulling him into her humble abode so no foolish female would end up interupting her.
"Let's see what that sexy body really looks like."
She seemed to visibly drool at the thought of sucking up the liquid from the hunk of meat before her. If there was any lingering attatchment to the boy's father Nagi, they were instantly shattered once she laid her eyes on him.
She had felt that there was something familiar about the air around him, he seemed to radiate a feeling that was all too distinct. If only she could remember where she had felt the exact same pull before. If she had, it would have saved her a great deal of emberassment that would soon be coming up.
The only thing that she was able to place was the subtle hint of an illusion being placed. So with her vast knowledge of the dark arts, she started casting a spell that she was sure would remove all attempts at deception. She would have nothing like that in front of HER eyes.
A ray that seemed to made of pure darkness appeared from her extended hand and flew towards Negi, who seemed to be trying to find an escape route.
The dark beam struck the nervous boy and seemed to literally suck at the air around his body. After a few seconds of a wavering, the vision of the godly man turned into that of a tiny boy, no older than twelve.
"Please don't rape me!" the terrified boy cried out. He had been nearly driven mad by the countless attempts by the females of the campus already.
"Huh?" Eva uttered intelligently. The look on her face was one that the world would most likely never see again. It was a look of pure confusion and horror that was plastered on the face of the queen of terror. 'Where did that beautiful body dissapear to!?' was the only thing she was thinking of at the time as she ignored Negi's whimpers.
Her brain working furiously, she quickly thought of what the illusion must of done.
'The illusion gave him an entirely new body, the clueless boy doesn't even seem to know what had happened to him! Where have I seen this magic before...'
Then it clicked. Suddenly, she thought back to a time where she had been in the company of another vampire, one that favored the use of illusions to get what she wanted done. Evangeline had actually only seen this very occurance happen once before, though the man that it had been casted on didn't even come close to the greatness that Negi's faux body did.
"Of course. She is the type of person who would do that sort of thing..." Evangeline muttered out.
She weighed the options that laid before her. She could either erase the power of the illusion placed on the boy and leave the him as he looked now and let everything be, or she could let it come back online after a short rest. She could even make sure that it was only around when they were alone! Genius! It wasn't that hard a decision.
With a smirk and a slight glance at his currently small body, she addressed Negi once more.
"Well boya, it seems like you'll have the pleasure of serving me, the great Evangeline, for the time being. I'll make sure that you only keep your... special form in front of me. And if you don't feel like listening to me, I guess that wiping your mind to obey my every command isn't so bad either."
Negi gulped. Either way he would end up giving himself over to the girl before him. He was stuck between a rock and a hard place.
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wow >_> I didn't think that would go on for so long.... first try at writing something and it drags on and on...
Anyways, hope you really continue this story and get the next chapter up soon
lol XD now this sounds like fun. I mean seriously >_> i wonder what happens to the people who break the illusion/ spell... namely a magic canceller? Or what happens when eva decides to see what he REALLY is like (I mean she doesn't like suprises, she just has to know everything)
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Evangeline had cornered Negi, pulling him into her humble abode so no foolish female would end up interupting her.
"Let's see what that sexy body really looks like."
She seemed to visibly drool at the thought of sucking up the liquid from the hunk of meat before her. If there was any lingering attatchment to the boy's father Nagi, they were instantly shattered once she laid her eyes on him.
She had felt that there was something familiar about the air around him, he seemed to radiate a feeling that was all too distinct. If only she could remember where she had felt the exact same pull before. If she had, it would have saved her a great deal of emberassment that would soon be coming up.
The only thing that she was able to place was the subtle hint of an illusion being placed. So with her vast knowledge of the dark arts, she started casting a spell that she was sure would remove all attempts at deception. She would have nothing like that in front of HER eyes.
A ray that seemed to made of pure darkness appeared from her extended hand and flew towards Negi, who seemed to be trying to find an escape route.
The dark beam struck the nervous boy and seemed to literally suck at the air around his body. After a few seconds of a wavering, the vision of the godly man turned into that of a tiny boy, no older than twelve.
"Please don't rape me!" the terrified boy cried out. He had been nearly driven mad by the countless attempts by the females of the campus already.
"Huh?" Eva uttered intelligently. The look on her face was one that the world would most likely never see again. It was a look of pure confusion and horror that was plastered on the face of the queen of terror. 'Where did that beautiful body dissapear to!?' was the only thing she was thinking of at the time as she ignored Negi's whimpers.
Her brain working furiously, she quickly thought of what the illusion must of done.
'The illusion gave him an entirely new body, the clueless boy doesn't even seem to know what had happened to him! Where have I seen this magic before...'
Then it clicked. Suddenly, she thought back to a time where she had been in the company of another vampire, one that favored the use of illusions to get what she wanted done. Evangeline had actually only seen this very occurance happen once before, though the man that it had been casted on didn't even come close to the greatness that Negi's faux body did.
"Of course. She is the type of person who would do that sort of thing..." Evangeline muttered out.
She weighed the options that laid before her. She could either erase the power of the illusion placed on the boy and leave the him as he looked now and let everything be, or she could let it come back online after a short rest. She could even make sure that it was only around when they were alone! Genius! It wasn't that hard a decision.
With a smirk and a slight glance at his currently small body, she addressed Negi once more.
"Well boya, it seems like you'll have the pleasure of serving me, the great Evangeline, for the time being. I'll make sure that you only keep your... special form in front of me. And if you don't feel like listening to me, I guess that wiping your mind to obey my every command isn't so bad either."
Negi gulped. Either way he would end up giving himself over to the girl before him. He was stuck between a rock and a hard place.
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wow >_> I didn't think that would go on for so long.... first try at writing something and it drags on and on...
Anyways, hope you really continue this story and get the next chapter up soon
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Mick....WHO said that it was a illusion spell?
Succubus are Shapeshifters, meaning that they can BECOME what they want.....even their basic form is naturally beautiful....
Negi got wounded lethally for helping Morrigan Aensland, and as she was on debt given his act, she gave to him a shard of her soul and power to allow him to survive. The transference however, left some "aftereffects" meaning that Negi grew quickly into a older body, 14-15-ish looking to when he goes to Mahora, and he's unconsciously blasting a seduction aura to anyone near him, something of that he doesn't has control, meaning that he's literally like a big and juicy cow for the horde of Uthahraptors that are the dear girls of Mahora Academy.....
Now..Evangeline would likely DIE for taking a drink of Negi once she smells him, as the aura of dark power underneath the surface would be like a siren's song for the Loli Vamp.... :hmm:
Mick....WHO said that it was a illusion spell?
Succubus are Shapeshifters, meaning that they can BECOME what they want.....even their basic form is naturally beautiful....
Negi got wounded lethally for helping Morrigan Aensland, and as she was on debt given his act, she gave to him a shard of her soul and power to allow him to survive. The transference however, left some "aftereffects" meaning that Negi grew quickly into a older body, 14-15-ish looking to when he goes to Mahora, and he's unconsciously blasting a seduction aura to anyone near him, something of that he doesn't has control, meaning that he's literally like a big and juicy cow for the horde of Uthahraptors that are the dear girls of Mahora Academy.....
Now..Evangeline would likely DIE for taking a drink of Negi once she smells him, as the aura of dark power underneath the surface would be like a siren's song for the Loli Vamp.... :hmm:
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Nope.......
The Succubus shard is NOW part of him, melded with his soul......the only likely way to turn him into normal would be to remove said part, what would likely damage his magic irreparably, if not outright killing him on the process....
Negi hasn't control over THAT part of his being, of that he hasn't even a clue. I don't know if Asuna will be immune to the seduction aura of Negi....Evangeline may resist it, and likely set Negi into the path of learning about that part of him, and to control said part, otherwise he's going to get raeped a LOT....
Nope.......
The Succubus shard is NOW part of him, melded with his soul......the only likely way to turn him into normal would be to remove said part, what would likely damage his magic irreparably, if not outright killing him on the process....
Negi hasn't control over THAT part of his being, of that he hasn't even a clue. I don't know if Asuna will be immune to the seduction aura of Negi....Evangeline may resist it, and likely set Negi into the path of learning about that part of him, and to control said part, otherwise he's going to get raeped a LOT....
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srry >_> I guess I misunderstood that phrase up there. I sorta assumed that looking older as in to others he seems more mature, but in fact he hasn't changed... I mean they didn't write up the reaction to the change in size, so I had no clue what really happened -__-
ya, well Eva prolly can't really tell who did it, but she WOULD still go bat crazy once she sees this Negi right? Jump his bones right there and then... I mean the alluring taste of his blood + his high magic level for sweetness + the underlying darkness + the automatic draw from his new form + him looking like Nagi + him being a god among men. I think that sums up to some akward situations with Eva.
You think this is ever gunna be updated though?
srry >_> I guess I misunderstood that phrase up there. I sorta assumed that looking older as in to others he seems more mature, but in fact he hasn't changed... I mean they didn't write up the reaction to the change in size, so I had no clue what really happened -__-
ya, well Eva prolly can't really tell who did it, but she WOULD still go bat crazy once she sees this Negi right? Jump his bones right there and then... I mean the alluring taste of his blood + his high magic level for sweetness + the underlying darkness + the automatic draw from his new form + him looking like Nagi + him being a god among men. I think that sums up to some akward situations with Eva.
You think this is ever gunna be updated though?