Akamatsuverse [Negima] It's Always the Quiet Ones

[Ryogas_BF]

This is based one my musing in the idea section of giving Zazie more screentime, in this concept Negi is moved to Zazie's room fairly early in the Negima Canon (before the library arc). Expect much Zazie as well as many changes in how things move along.

It begins now!
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Shizune Minamoto looked up from her paperwork as the door cracked open. In peeked a middle school girl with short-cropped white hair. It contrasted with her darkened skin and the mixed brought attention to the pair of colored tattoos across her face. The guidance councilor smiled softly. "Ah, Rainyday-san. Please come in," she said, motioning to the girl. Zazie slipped in smoothly and shut the door behind her silently. Her hands clasped behind her back. She looked over to a calendar to the side with a blank expression. Shizune could see that her eyes held a puzzled note. "No, you didn't miss an appointment. This is a separate matter to our usual sessions." She told the girl, seeing her silent question. "Please, take a seat."

Zazie gave a curt nod and moved to sit in the offered chair. She folded her hands onto her lap before regarding the older woman with a blank look.

Shizune read that as an indication to speak. "Well, as you know Springfield-sensei has recently come here in hopes of becoming a teacher. He was meant to bunk with your classmates Asuna-san and Konoka-san, as I'm sure you may have heard. But this arrangement hasnÆt turned out as well as we wouldÆve hoped. Asuna-san has requested that we find him another place to stay. Though, I'm sure you've heard all of that through your classmates."

"Yes." Zazie's voice was soft but easily heard... likely due to how little she spoke to begin with.

"Well, I think this is merely an overreaction, but it has already happened twice in the scant few weeks he has been here.ö She sighed and started tapping a pen against the desk. ôI feel it may be best to move him. There has been some interest from your classmates to give him board but both rooms already have three residents, and I would rather not crowd you girls any more than neccessary." Shizune explained. Though the ulterior motive to deny their offers was for NegiÆs protection from possible advances. "I called you because you are one of the few students who does not have a roommate at all." She could see the girl's eyes widen a fraction as the issue was revealed. The guidance counselor couldn't help but be a little worried by the otherwise lack of reaction. Zazie always seemed to distance herself from others. "This is purely voluntary, of course, but I want to ask you if you wouldn't mind taking Negi in."

"I... see." The girl had a rare pause in her reply. To ShizuneÆs tuned senses, it seemed that Zazie was as shocked as she would allow herself to show.

"I know this is a little unorthodox but, teacher or not, he's simply too young to be living on his own." Shizune said allowing her maternal side to show through her voice. She received a distracted nod from Zazie. "That aside, consider this a personal request." At that, Zazie blinked with a small amount of puzzlement in her eyes. "Zazie, I'm worried about you. You keep distancing yourself from the other girls, it's not healthy."

"I'm fine." Her soft voice came out a little firmer. Shizune sighed.

"I'm not asking you to change who you are, I know you can speak Japanese just fine... and I know you have a beautiful smile when you perform with the acrobatic club." The girl looked downward slightly, cheeks a little red. "You have to let some people in; you don't have to be alone with your animals. So please, will you give it a try? If it's too much, I'm sure Asuna-san will calm down in a few weeks. What do you say?" Shizune quietly observed the stoic girl's little gestures. Fingers twitching in her lap, her deep contemplative gaze as she mulled the whole situation over before she slowly raised her head to hold the counselorÆs gaze. She didnÆt utter a word instead give a steady nod. "I'm glad. I'll make arrangements for the change. How soon do you think you can have the room ready?" she pressed as Zazie stood.

"Morning." Her reply was simple and to the point, like always. Shizune nodded and smiled to the girl.

"Thank you, Rainyday-san. I'll inform Negi that he'll be moving in with you tomorrow morning.ö The girl bowed before ghosting out of the room with only the light click of the door betraying her presence. Shizune leaned back in her chair with a sigh. "I'm sorry to use you like this, Negi-kun, but I think you could do that girl a lot of good," she murmured with a shade of guilt. Hopefully, this could work out well for both of them. Negi would have a place to stay and perhaps one of her more worrisome cases could solve itself...

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Negi sighed as he stared into his cup of tea. He wasn't feeling like much of a person or a mage right now. It seemed his foul-ups finally caught up with him and Asuna's patience had worn out. It hadn't been a long stay, but it had been fun. Asuna was actually quite a nice girl and Konoka made it a point to cook breakfast in the morning. He had much to improve about himself, that much was true. He would just have to do better... Just like Asuna had told him, he needed to stop relying on his magic for everything and try and solve problems on his own. Asuna-san...

"Now, what did I say about keeping that long face?" Takahata's amused voice brought the boy from his musings with a light blush.

"Sorry, Takamichi, just hard not to." He replied taking a sip of his tea.

"We all make mistakes Negi-kun. Try not to let it get you down. Asuna's a fiery girl, but she is quick to forgive. Give her some time to cool off and you'll be fine," the elder teacher said with a smile.

"I suppose your right... Well, thank you for putting me up for the night. I'll try and find someplace to stay tomorrow."

"No need. Shizune called me up a little while ago. You'll be going back to the dorms tomorrow."

"The dorms? But I thought-"

"Not Asuna's room. Another girl volunteered to take you in."

"Volunteered?" Negi blinked. Several girls passed through his mind. Each image made him more and more nervous. "Um, who volunteered?" he asked with a tremor of unease. Takahata smirked lightly.

"Zazie Rainyday."

Negi blinked, confused. The name rang a bell, but a face wasn't coming to mind. He reached for his bag. After a little rummaging, he pulled out the class register. It took some searching, but he spotted the name and the rather unique looking girl. "Zazie Rainyday, student number 31... She volunteered? But she's hardly spoken a word to me before... even in class."

"Ah, Rainyday-san is what you would call the 'strong silent type'. She doesn't talk much at all to anyone. She'll sometimes even prefer to mime over speaking."

"Really? Hm..." The child teacher looked over the picture once more. "The magic club?" He looked to Takahata with a raised eyebrow.

"I think it's stage magic, but I don't know for sure. She's the only member of the magic club."

"The only member... curious," Negi noted as he looked to the other club listed. "The Nightmare Circus?"

"Yeah, that's one of the acrobatics clubs on campus. She's the youngest member, but I hear she's quite good. Shizune swears that their performances are quite impressive, though I'm shamed to admit I've never seen one." Takahata said chuckling a little. Negi nodded before looking back at the picture once more, regarding the blank look of his future roommate.

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EDIT - Ikari666 betaed

 

[arhand]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Seems good, I have never read a Zazie centric fic before. Its promising.

 

[Spaz]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Kinda reminds me of a book called "Cut"... Well the intro did at least. It's good to see some air time for the usually quiet, yet 'flexible' girl. Anyone know of her ethnicity? SHe doesn't look japanese, but then again, it's all always the quiet ones...

 

[Ryogas_BF]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

theories range everywhere from Middle east area to the Romani gypsies. I'm personally from the camp that she's from somewhere in Magic Country. You'll see one of my opinions of her origins... I have like twenty different ones 6-_- I really wish Akamatsu would clarify her some...

 

[Ikari666]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Cool, I'd have been working on a Zazie-centered fic myself, if I hadn't been working on a Ranma?/Negima crossover and my Training series. That, and general laziness... :sweat:


I have some corrections to suggest, if you'd like to accept them. Check your PM box. I wouldn't take them as strictly correct, but I think it reads better. Normally, I wouldn't presume, but I really want to see this take off.

 

[Ryogas_BF]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Cool, I'd have been working on a Zazie-centered fic myself, if I hadn't been working on a Ranma?/Negima crossover and my Training series. That, and general laziness... :sweat:


I have some corrections to suggest, if you'd like to accept them. Check your PM box. I wouldn't take them as strictly correct, but I think it reads better. Normally, I wouldn't presume, but I really want to see this take off.

Mm, your corrections make this come out much more polished I definitely think your write up is a smoother read. If you really don't mind I think I'll use it. Glad you like it, I'm a Zazie fan myself and since her part in my Ranma cross is still a little ways off I thought up this idea to work on...

several things I'm am really excited to be writing in this idea. 1. Zazie/Negi Vs Eva/Chachamaru 2. Negi helping out or performing in the nightmare circus. 3. Negi getting so used to Zazie that he's carrying conversations with her even though the other girls don't see her talking. 4. Expanding on one of my Zazie backstory ideas

 

[marthf1]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

I must agree, this is quite good. Heh, in stories I have seen, pretty much only the "emo" type or Squalls have such personalities. Now switching it around and with those ideas listed - this could be something exceptional. I would offer something else, but I have read like one chapter of the manga...

I just hope you can keep your muse focused...

 

[Ryogas_BF]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

marthf1 - Glad you like the ideas. Well if I can keep a steady supply of cream puffs she should keep her mind on the story maybe I should move her away from the window seat though.

snippet

A new day had risen to find Negi standing once more in front of the dorms. It was Sunday so at least he would have the day to get settled with this new situation. Granted he was just moving to a different hallway but it would still feel like a world away. He paused on the stairway, releasing a sigh a she turned out to the quad. His hands went unconsciously to his lips as the memory replayed much like it had through his fitful night's sleep. Asuna with her hair down looking in his eyes with that determined gaze. Negi shook his head to clear the image.

"It was my first kiss too..." he muttered frowning a little as he started back up the stairs. He did his best to put the memory aside for the moment as he opened the door to the lobby. The child teacher blinked as he noted that Zazie as already waiting in the lobby, leaning against the wall balancing a spinning coin on her finger before rolling it across her knuckles. It was the first time he'd seen the girl out of uniform. Though even in casual dress of jeans and a t-shirt her exotic features shined through. She looked up from her little dexterity drill regarding him with a blank look identical to her class picture.

"Um Rainyday-san correct?" He spoke up receiving a small nod in return. She moved away from the wall and casually pocketed the coin meeting the boy as he made his way over. He gave her a deep bow, "Thank you for taking me in on such short notice. I hope this wasn't too much of an inconvenience." he said straightening back up. Zazie waved her hands in a dismissive manner with a small shake of the head but little changed in her face. Being at the end of the blank stare got somewhat unnerving as time passed. Negi did his best not to show his discomfort and broke the silence. "Perhaps we could go up to the room so I can drop my things off?"

Zazie regarded him for a long moment before nodding and motioning for him to follow. With that her hands clasp behind her back and she casually glided over to the stairwell, Negi following shortly behind her. She was a curious girl, that much he had figured from what little he had seen of her. He could hardly believe he had somehow missed her... she possessed such a peculiar way about her that just made her stand out. But some how she managed to blend in and go unnoticed all this time. Some teacher I am... he had a lot of work to do if he was going to be a great teacher, that much is for sure.

Zazie glanced back as Negi who was following head down, gloomy cloud over his head almost visible. She cocked her head curiously before turning and walking backwards, maintaining the smoothness in her stride. She had never paid the young teacher much attention before, considering her was overstocked with it to begin with. She looked the boy over slowly, listening to his light steps accompanying her own soundless movements. She glided to a stop and raised her hand jutting a single finger out and waiting. He continued unaware of his companions movement and was rewarded with a nail light poking his drooped forehead.

"Ow!" he stopped and rubbed the spot his puzzled eyes meeting the blank stare once more. She motioned to her right toward her door. "Oh... we're here?" he stated with a small flush of embarrassment. The performer gave a single nod in reply before she moved to unlock the door. Negi adjusted the straps on his backpack feeling a small tremor of nervousness, he really wished Takamichi was around more then he wouldn't have to share rooms with his students.

Well he hadn't had any real expectations about what the room would look like but he still had to admit he was a little surprised. It was actually quite... homey. It was about the same size as the old room but with only one person that left a lot more open space. There was a single bed perched under the window, made and draped with an aged but colorful quilt. Across the other side was a rather spacious desk with a few small tools and a set of paints kept across the back, right next to that was a large cage filled with at least a dozen birds of different species, all twittering happily at their arrival. The messiest area was by the closet which seemed to overflow with all manner of outfits, several definitely didn't look like they could be worn outside, others sparkled well some were adorned with feathers. Mixed along were several boxes marked neatly reading 'props'.

When he finally managed to tear his eyes away from that they found a bookcase filled with figurines and models of all sorts, mostly of leaning toward a fantasy theme. He moved closer to get a better look, barely noticing the door click behind him. He couldn't get a good look at the upper shelves settling with one more his eye level. A noble looking dragon stood protectively over regal looking woman set across from a pair of large two headed lions. "Wow these look really nice, it's like a picture out of a storybook." Negi enthused, he turned to his student who sat on her bed watching him Curiously. "You have a wonderful collection Rainyday-san." she blinked and gave a nod as he moved over to another dragon figurine, this a healthy bronze in color perched on a bit of rock.

"...Thank you." The soft voice brought Negi's attention back to the girl at the bed. Her gaze held a note of puzzlement at his surprise. After a moment she gave a slight shrug and stood moving over to her bird cage. I think that's the first time I've ever heard speak Negi wondered a little at that. It was soft but clear she bore a slight accent but he couldn't quite place the origin with such a small sampling. He kept an eye as she tended to the birds, she carefully measured seed into their dishes, checked their water and all the while the birds never made an attempt to leave the cage. Finishing she gave a nod and took a step back, she gave a nod and two of the birds flew out, on taking a rest on her shoulder another on an outstretched finger. All the while her expression never changed but Negi couldn't help but think she was smiling at least a little.

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Writing Zazie is hard sometimes, I'm so tempted to give her an inner monolouge but I think that would take away from how she acts. She will talk more to Negi once she warms up to him but for now she's in canon mime mode... it will be easier to write once Negi has gotten more in tune with Zazie's 'expressions' like Shizune is. Until he does all her can see is her blank stare. It will be slow to get started as Negi and Zazie have a day away from class to start.

and I gave a bit of a look to where the divergence happened from canon. Thanks to windfalcon for helping me work it out... You'll here more about it once the rest of the class shows up again.

 

[arhand]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Nice. I really like how your portraying Zazie so far.

 

[marthf1]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Mmmm, this continues to impress. And I agree, a monologue would detract from the uniqueness she has. I think it will allow some of us to learn Zazie's expressions along with Negi. In any case, she should definitely prove to be fun to learn about, judging from what her dorm is like.

Keep it up!

 

[Ryogas_BF]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

snippet

Negi caught himself before his watching turned to staring and turned to his backpack. "I better get to unpacking, I hope you don't mind Rainyday-san?" he asked making sure to look her way so he could catch the nod or head shake. He wasn't disappointed catch the subtle gesture before he set to work.

Zazie gently placed the bird back inside the cage, it hopped up to the closest feeder and began to eat, the second flying back in on it's own before she shut the cage once more. She contented herself to watch them hop and twitter to one another.

"Um is there some place I can put my things?" the child teacher spoke up catching her attention once more. She looked to the boys nervous smile with a slight tilt of her head. She moved over to the closet and slide the other side of the sliding door open revealing a size about equal to her own having been cleared out. "Oh, Thank you. I hope it wasnÆt too much work to move, you seem to have a lot of things to store. Sorry." he apologized with a small note of guilt. The performer shook her head but couldn't help noting the slight slump in his posture and slight dim in his gaze. She took a seat on her bed silently watched him work.

His backpack seemed large considering his size but her really didn't have too much in the way of possessions. A couple of suits, a small collection of casual clothes but still all professional in style, defying his age. He kept things neat and organized his clothes only taking up less then a third of the space she had cleared for him. She leaned her head on one of her hands as Negi worked on with a small smile on his face, totally focused on his task. Her lip twitched downward slightly as she watched the smile as if something was just out of reach. Two sharp beeps caused her to blinked and break her gaze. Negi turned to see Zazie reach and tap an alarm by her bed before standing. She headed to the door but paused just before and turned to Negi's curious face. Pointing once to herself and then to the door. It took a moment for the boy to but things to a logical conclusion.

"Oh, you have to go." he got a nod in response. "I suppose you will be gone for a bit then?"

Zazie's expression didnÆt finch but she seemed to be thinking before she raised two fingers. "Two... hours?" he ventured getting a negative. "Two 'o clock?" a nod. "Okay, but I have a staff meeting around One, I'll probably be back around Six. Takahata-san wanted to meet for an early dinner." he explained. His student gave a small nod, "I guess I'll see you then, have a good afternoon okay?" she tilted her head slightly but nodded before slipping outside leaving Negi to slump over.

"This is going to make things complicated," he muttered. The child teacher was well aware of shy students, he had a few in his class mixed in with the rabble but Zazie... she wasn't shy exactly, she just was. Well...

Quiet. Very quiet.

Negi shook his head, "I'll have to work on that." he decided as he stood. Something catching his eye seated on the desk. "A photo?" curious he made his way over to get a better look. "Huh?" It was of Zazie and another person... it was hard to say who or even what exactly as they wore a rather colorful mask coupled with an androgynous frame. Both were dressed in elaborate costumes. Hers a rather risquÚ pink leotard while the other wore a red surcoat with tails and black pants. Both were posed back to back tipping a plumed hat to the camera.

"She's... smiling?"

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"Ah, Zazie-san please take a seat. Your a little late but that's okay." Shizuna said motioning to the chair. Zazie slipping into the seat and placed her hands in her lap "So I trust things went well with Negi-sensei this morning?" she started off recieving a small nod in response. She carefully eyed the girl's posture and gestures noting she was a little tense. "No problems?" she pushed carefully.

Her trained eyes caught a subtle frown and tilt downward. Zazie looked fully into the guidance counselor's gaze, casting a look of uncertainty. Shizuna contemplated what it could be and began to press further.

"Your not used to someone being in your space?" she ventured noting a slight nod but it seemed that wasn't the heart of the matter. She settled for the issue she had singled out first. "Well it's only natural I suppose, You've had your own room all though elementary school as well. But I think having someone to interact with you will help. Negi is a nice boy so you have nothing to worry about." she said with a small smile. Her curiosity peaked at the puzzled frown she received but the girl nodded along anyway. It wasn't the first time her guesses had been wrong but she had a good feel for the girl. Whatever was bothering her was something new entirely.

"Shizuna-sensei?" The performer held her counselor's eyes, a wave of confusion passing over the girl's unearthly yellow.

"yes Zazie?"

"...How." she seemed to work the words out carefully. "How can Sensei smile... and look so sad?" Zazie's soft question hung heavily in the air leaving Shizuna caught off guard unsure how to reply.

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This one is a little rough so I apologize.

 

[midorigreen]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Nicely Done
I like the character interaction between the two, and how Zazie is able to read Negi's emotional state so well. I look forward to more of the fic in the future.

 

[windfalcon]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

*claps* As ever, brilliantly done. I tip my nonexistant hat...

Hmm.. I wonder if the masked person in the photo will have any real big part in this... after all, if she has a picture of her smiling with him, then it may be important later on...

or I'm reading into things. Can't wait for the next bit!

 

[Ryogas_BF]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Comments
Midorigreen - Thanks, glad you like the POV
Windfalcon - heh, like you don't know who that is I was going to credit you when the character made their enterance in the story.

Snippet

Shizuna collected herself and gained a thoughtful look trying to find the best way to answer the question. For someone with as little emotional experience as Zazie this was not just posed in concern but also logically. To someone with only base level understanding Negi's emotions were to complex to define. "Most likely I would say that Negi trying not to worry you. He tends to try and remain positive about things though he got in some kind of fight with Asuna-san, so he likely feels bad about it still. It's only been two days since it happened after all, it's not uncommon for these things to take time to calm down." the guidance counselor explained careful. Zazie tilted her head eyes turned upward win a thoughtful work.

"So... It's Asuna Kagurazaka's fault?" Zazie asked calmly.

"No the answer isn't as simple I'd figure. Few conflicts are ever that straightforward but I don't know what happened exactly so I couldn't say." Shizuna clarified noting as the girl gave a slight confused frown. "Zazie, People's emotions and how they deal with them are unique from person to person. What makes one person happy could make another sad and Negi is trying to work through his emotions without making you worry," she chuckled a little. "Though it seems he was unsuccessful in that regard." she smiled as the girl's eyes veered off to the side so not to make direct contact, somewhat embarrassed. "If you really want to find out you'll have to speak with either your sensei or Asuna-san,ö she suggested with a slight smile.

Zazie responded with the hint of a frown. Unsatisfied with either the answer or the concept of starting up a dialog with someone she wasn't familiar with, it was hard to say which exactly.

"Well we'll set that aside for now." Shizuna coolly changed the subject to keep tings moving, it seemed Zazie was particularly talkative today so best thing would e to take advantage of it. "How has practice been? I heard there's suppose to be a performance coming up in a couple of months?" she asked and was rewarded with the ghost of a smile on the girls face

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Despite the good weather Asuna didn't feel like going much of anywhere, after finishing her paper routes she had returned to her bed and laid there, unopened book at her side as she stared to the ceiling. The room had been quieter then usual, after a short screaming match the day before she'd kicked the boy wizard from the room and immediately called up the office. She hadn't seen him since... well at least not in person. The bags under her eyes attested to how well she'd slept and even now sleeping seemed a far off memory.

The door clicked open and Konoka came in with a small bag of groceries. Asuna didn't move but that didn't mean Konoka couldn't see her. "Your STILL up there? Its already afternoon. You could have at least 'sulked' outside and got some fresh air."

"There no class, I don't have to get out if I don't want to." Asuna replied curtly and then adding after a moment. "I am not sulking." her voice was adamant but did little to sway her friend. Konoka crouched by the small fridge putting away her purchases. Noting the untouched contents she frowned and looked back up to the top bunk.

"You didn't eat?"

"Not Hungry." came the muttered reply, Konoka crossed her arms and gave a rare frown.

"Asuna get down here and eat something, don't make me come up there." it was an idle threat considering who was giving it but nonetheless the red head poked her head out over the edge, hair undone and disheveled.

"Fine..." she sat up and steadied herself against the wall... apparently not sleeping or eating left her a little dizzy. But getting her equilibrium she slowly made her way down the ladder. She was still dressed in the t-shirt she'd worn for her paper route but had never bothered to shift to pajama bottoms. She took a seat at the table not caring about her bare legs and pantied bottom Not like HE'S here after all she noted annoyed, though not clear who she was annoyed at.

Asuna propped her head on her arm and watched Konoka as she put on an apron to prepare a late lunch. Without turning she spoke once more. "You know, if I'd known you would have been so uncomfortable having him around I would have refused grandfather." Asuna narrowed her eyes; she could see the real purpose of that question.

"That brat was a little perv and this change will be for the best. He shouldnÆt be staying here in the first place."

"Says the girl who is sulking.

"I am NOT sulking!" Konoka turned with her small frown back in place looking down to her seated friend.

"If not then youÆre just blowing this out of proportion and are too stubborn to change your mind. You didn't go this far before, what could have happened that was so bad?!" she snapped out, "I didn't want Negi-kun to leave." she added in a softer tone. Asuna had her face tilted downward.

"He... he just went too far okay?" she replied softly. Konoka giving a confused frown before turning back to the stove the room falling into silence. Asuna lightly touched her lips, "Too far..." he voice had no heat behind it as her mind drifted back.

"I love you... sensei" Practicing, he had agreed to help. He stood cheeks slightly flushed as I projected Takahata's over his youthful features. "I've loved you for a long time... is that troublesome for you?" my voice is earnest but seeing him stutter and swallow the image is broken, some help he is.

"No, ah um..." he can't even reply properly. Well at the very least I could tease the brat. I turn and clutch my chest.

"I guess it could never work between someone like you and me." I have a sharp intake of breath if only to hold in the laughter. Though a strong hand on my shoulder caught me off guard.

"No don't!" He's much stronger then he looks. He tugs to turn me around and we end up eye to eye once more, nearly having tumbled. I'll admit he has nice eyes... full of determination and confusion. I can't help but wonder why Takahata-sensei would never look at me like that. His eyes could never be so wide and innocent. I grasp his face lightly, feeling all his muscles tense. This would be the grand finale before I rub it in the kids face... at least it cheered me up.

"Close your eyes." I say in a low soft voice, he slowly complies waiting for the kiss that will never come. Cute but still a brat. Though the situation changed, whether it was my foot on his or his on mine I'm not sure but the next thing I'm falling, my bodyÆs fall is broken by his small frame... and my lips were broken by his own... I... I'm really not sure what happened but my first kiss... it wasnÆt unpleasant. It might have been nice if I had meant to do it but we were both two shocked to move.

There was the flash of a camera and my heart shattered. My first kiss gone and now thereÆs a picture of me lying across a ten-year-old brat making out. I didnÆt stop the tears when they came, I couldn't even see the faces or hear the voices of who saw me. I just ran...

Asuna's world blurred back into focus looking to the fingers that had rested on her lips a moment before. "Things had gone too far..." she amended softly closing the fingers in a ball and putting it against her chest.

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AN - This one lends focus on the third lead of this story. Yes Asuna... and this also reveals that this is a divergance fic. the diverage takes place in chapter 1 page 67 of the manga *smirks* and from ther things spiraled out to here. I also made the flashback in a dynamic style from asuna's POV. a stylistic choice I hope it was cool and not to out there.

Edit - Name fix!

 

[marthf1]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Wow, both snippets were very nice. I think your description are very evocative and interesting. This makes me want to read the manga, but Zazie is apparently minimal so far.

I look forward to more introspections (I think that word is suitable...) and you unveil (heh, that is probably very apt) in the future.

 

[windfalcon]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Brilliantly done as always ^^ I already told you the few minor things to fix, so aside from those things I can't see anything else ^^

Looking forward to more of your stories.

 

[Ryogas_BF]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Marth1 - yes Zazie has had not backstory explained, several girls have had minimal but Zazie has gotten zip heh. But it's a good manga series nonetheless I recommend it.

Snippet

The sun had dipped over the horizon by the time Takamichi had dropped Negi back off at the dorms. The boy gave a small yawn as he climbed the stairs, it was nice that the faculty had taken well to him, even though he was still on temporary status. But they tended to forget his age and the after meeting festivities had run a bit longer then he was prepared for. He managed to keep his tiredness to a few yawns as he trekked up to the second floor and headed down the hall. he paused at a door hand on the knob but look up. He colored as he noticed it was Asuna and Konoka's room. He reluctantly let go and went back down the hall and around the corner. This time at the proper door he tried the knob and the door swung open.

Even in his tired state he still paused in the doorway as he got a look at her roommate. Zazie was standing on her hands one leg out parallel to the floor the other straight up, a ball balanced on the end of it. She blinked starring right back at him the ball falling and bouncing before coming to rest near the door.

"Um... evening?" Negi managed to say after a moment picking up the ball and closing the door to the hallway. Zazie bent herself forward until her feet lightly touched the ground before pulling her upper body upright standing like nothing had happened. "I hope I wasn't interrupting," he said holding out the ball.

She plucked it from his hands and gave a small shake of her head. She looking over to the clock and back to the boy whose tired mid took a moment to process the movement.

"Oh right, is seems all the teachers went out after the meeting and invited me a along. Sorry I'm late." he said with a small bow. she watched him curiously before waving her hand, it wasn't that big a deal. He covered his mouth and let out a small yawn, but one that did not go unnoticed. Zazie cast a glance at him from the closet as she placed the ball in it's proper place, eliciting a light blush from the boy. The acrobat motioned to her bed.

"No no, I couldn't that's your bed. I'll do fine with a futon." he said with a small smile. He could almost detect a frown on her features as she shook her head. "You don't have one? Oh, well I guess you don't have company over that often huh?" He immediately covered his mouth, "I'm sorry I didn't mean it like that." he started but she waved it off just eying him curiously at his reaction. "I'll just make due with my sleeping bag for now and pick up a futon later." he offered going over to his part of the closet.

Zazie took a seat on her bed as he crouched and began unhooking his sleeping bag from the top of his pack. Her eyes narrowed slightly as she studied the boy. His eyes were already drooping, sluggish. even with a sleeping bag sleeping on the floor would no doubt be quite uncomfortable. Her eyes widened slightly before she patted the bed next to her. "Share?" she blinked as he stiffened and burned a deep red.

"N-No Rainyday-san. I'll be okay." he said with a slight shake in his voice. He was sure of it this time, a slight puzzled frown adorned her features. "Really. I just need a spare pillow if you have one." he added in hopes to pacify that look. He sweat a little as it didn't go away but at last she turned and took one of her pillows and tossed it to him. "Thank you Rainyday-san." he gave a small bow of his head. "I need to get some sleep for class tomorrow, I hope it won;t bother you." he moving to the closet for his night clothes. She shook her head and looked to the clock. it was getting late...

Negi, using the bare closet as an impromptu changing room donned his night clothes and took to his rest. "Goodnight." he said with a small yawn before snuggling into his sleeping bag.

Zazie watched his small form settle into a comfortable position and his breathing slow. Choosing to sleep on the floor, why with the bed so much more comfortable? With a slight shake of her head she slipped to her feet and silently walked across the room. The overhead light clicked off, the dim moonlight through the window casting shadows through the single. Her soundless glide kept the boy teacher fast asleep as she moved back to her bed, unaffected by the sudden darkness. She only sound in the room was the shifting of fabric as the acrobat disrobed and slipped into bed. It was a little early for her but it was close enough.

Light breathing, it was a sound she wasn't used to hearing. Even though he eyes were out to the night sky it was the boy that held her mind. "Why?" she whispered, unsure exactly what she was questioning. Negi was a mystery to her, he wore his emotion clear as day at all times, he spoke respectfully and not once had he sent more then a small questioning glance at her actions. Zazie may not be much of a talker but she was a good listener, she could hear what some girls said when she would practice in class... Juggling helped pass the time, its not like they didn't have they're own qu-

A rustle of fabric caught her ears. Negi was getting up, probably for the bathroom. Though the steps were coming closer not further away. Zazie rolled over to see the young boy at her bedside. She blinked, uncertainty sinking in as he crawled up and into her bed. Zazie gave a small smile, now she wouldn't have to worry about him being sore. She shifted to make sure he had plenty of room but he kept shifting closer. Confusion was replaced by a rare panic as she felt his arms go around her. Her body stiffened as he hugged her, his light breath on her chest as he rested his head against her. Her eyes were wide and heart was beating wildly. What was he doing? Why was he touching her?

"S-sensei?" she tried to summon more of a voice but she could barely bring herself to move. The she felt it... in the shadows a large white mask faded into existence, black empty eyes and a permanently etched smile the solid mass of shadow slinked over to her bedside eying the boy latched against her.

"..." It was eager and hungry, which though not unusual disturbed the young girl for some reason. she tentatively put one of her arms around the boy and her red eyes glowed in the darkness of the room.

"No."

"..." The mask somehow sighed and faded away to whence it came. The acrobat's eyes faded back to the normal spectrum and she let out a small sigh of her own. That could have gone worse. She looked to the reddish brown mop of hair pressed against her unsure what to do about this situation. Negi had a pretty good hold on the girl, it seemed she'd have to wake him up to get free. Though as she opened her mouth the words died in her lips as Negi murmured hugging her just a little tighter.

"Onee-chan..."

Zazie looked to the boy, slowly light red tinge coming to her cheeks. The boy's face was calm and peaceful, a world away from his ill-hidden frown. Her stomach twittered oddly, she felt warm but not uncomfortably so. What was this feeling?

Her body started to relax and she closed her eyes. The boys calm breathing brought the picture of his peaceful face to her mind. The young yet Mature boy snuggled against her. As sleep finally began to take it toll a final thought passed through her mind.

And how could she experience it again?

end Chapter 1

and thus is begins. It just wouldn't be Negima without some manner of night time hijinx. The morning will be just as crazy for a whole new reason and then class begins once more. All sorts of fun to come. Stay tuned, or Zazie will cry... well not likely but she might!

 

[midorigreen]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Well it's obvious that Zazie doesn't seem to mind the sleeping arrangements, but Negi might do to his past experiences with Asuna. It seems that Zazie can't quite figure out Negi's contain optimism even when faced with constant adversity. Negi, also, appears to be treading lightly where Zazie is concerned, probably because he Knows so little about her and doesn't want to upset her. The biggest questions that comes to my mind is how long before Negi's secret gets out and how big of a role will Zazie play in the events leading up to the Eva/Chachamaru fight.

Anyway, Great post
Can't wait to read about the morning after.

 

[marthf1]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

midorigreen already typed many of my thoughts... Hmm, I so do wonder what Zazie will do to experience more of the affection she is feeling. And yup, that sly Negi, almost literally worming his way into her heart. If nothing else, it will be interesting to observe those otherworldly being she communicates with. Impressively, Negi is also seeming to understand her gestures a bit more easily now.

Unfortunately, like with your other update, this a quite a few spelling grammar errors. The first couple paragraphs had some awkward sentence structures as well. Now that I think of it though, I should give examples if I state such things. But though I am a beta for another story, I still have not gone through it after a month... I doubt I could do better here.

 

[Ryogas_BF]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Midorigreen - Pretty much on target there. I will be leaving that much a secret for now, don't want to ruin the fun

Chapter 2

Warmth. That was the first thing Negi noticed as consciousness started to return to him. The bed was comfy, the blanket pulled up nearly over his head made it a struggle for his brain to being running on all cylinders. The bed shifted his warmth switching positions. He held tightly to the feeling so not to let it stray to far away, he probably had plenty of time before cl-.

A bed his mind finally processed the information. Hadn't he gone to sleep on the floor? He swallowed as more awareness came bleed in. In his arms he could feel the soft rise and fall of breathing. He'd done it again. I must have crawled in while I was a sleep! O-okay she seems to be asleep, I'll just slip out carefully. he thought trying to calm himself. He slowly backed out but found one of his arms pinned. With a nervous whimper he tried to shimmy his trapped arm free, slip it out from his roommateÆs smooth skin... skin? His vision took that moment to give him a nice view of Zazie's bare chest.

She's naked?! he froze and immediately shut his eyes, trying his best to banish the images from his mind. What do I do? what do I do? What if someone sees? I can't get fired now I- I- his nose twitched before he could stop himself.

"Ah Choo!" a rush o wind filled the room Negi spilt out of the bed to the floor the blankets shot upward to the ceiling, shelves shook, the birds squawked loudly flapping about in a big panic. He got one good eyeful of a wide eyes Zazie sitting upright before he closed his eyes the blanket falling over on top of her.

Zazie awoke to total chaos, she tried to calm her breathing and pulled the quilt from over top of her. Her birds were flapping about the cage a few of her miniatures had toppled from their shelves. She turned to the window double-checking the lock, it was closed. The where had that wind come from? Her puzzled gaze fell upon the child teacher, sitting on the floor hands over his eyes. She shifted to kneeling at the edge of the bed noticing the slight shake in his shoulders and blazing red of his face.

"...Good Morning..." she greeted calmly as she slide to her feet and glided over to the bird cage. "Shhh," Placing her hands against the cage she looked over the birds, she begin to hum a soft unintelligible tune. Their panic slowly subsiding as that settled on perches closer to their owner.

Negi himself found his own beating heart slowing to a more manageable level. He uncovered her eyes peeking out only to see the situation had not changed. With a squeak he recovered his eyes listening but he could not hear her moving.
"R-Rainyday-san?"

"... Yes?" he voice sound much closer and he swallowed not daring to look.

"C-Could you please get dressed." he asked shakily, it was silent for a long moment before Zazie spoke once more, it was eerie how she could move with barely a sound.

"Early."

"N-not that. J-just an English gentleman shouldn't be looking at naked g-girls." he tried hard to use his most authoritative voice but it was ruined by his stammer.

Zazie crossed sat lightly on her bed puzzling the boy's odd behavior. Getting dressed so soon after waking, before even a morning soak. She tilted her head as she looked to the clearly embarrassed boy. She looked down to herself with a small frown before she slide up to her feet and padded softly over to her closet she grabbed a towel and wrapped it around her slim frame. Might as well prepare for her bath. Tucking the top securely she turned on the balls of her feet and couched smoothly to eye level with the boy. She watched silently as he squirmed hands over his eyes, bright cherry cheeks. This also was a more comforting expression then the solemn on last night, he had so many expressions.

"Rainyday-san?" he ventured but she remained silent creeping closer. Slowly he moved his fingers and peeked out though seeing another eye. He let out an eep and fell backwards, Zazie crouched over him with her usual unaffected look. His cheeks were still a bit pink, "Well that's a little better." he did his best not to let his eyes wander low where the towel fell a little short. "I'm so sorry about climbing into your bed, I-I can't help it sometimes" he admitted eyes turned to the floor. "I'll try not to do it again, I'll pick up a futon after class today." He could the girl's eyes on him but she remained silent. The rustle of cloth brought his eyes back up. she paused at the door.

"Bath."

"O-okay." she held his gaze for a moment, pointing to him. "No, I'm okay." he said quickly. She gave a slow nod before slipping out into the hall leaving Negi to collapse back with a sigh. "I'm already tired again..." he allowed himself a childish whine.

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Before class 2-A was set a buzz by the latest news. Asuna seemed to finally have enough of their young teacher and had kicked him out. No one seemed to know the exact details of what happened to either party, but it was the most exciting news of the semester.

"So Iincho did you manage to get custody of Negi-sensei?" Makie asked with a little bit of trepidation, her own offer had been turned down. Ayaka sighed.

"Unfortunately no, It was a great injustice to leave the boy on his own like that." the blond sighed.

"Yes, Shizuna-sensei said our room was already too crowded." Chizuru clarified with a smile though it was a little dim. "Have you heard any word?"

"No, You don't think he was given his own room do you?" Akira asked with a note of concern. He was so young after all; if Asuna's word was anything to go by he wasn't very good of taking care of himself. A few eyes turned to the table in question, Asuna steadfastly ignoring all attention.

"Leave her be." Ayaka commanded coolly. "I'm sure she had her reason."

"Iincho." It was a wonder that the blond had yet to tear into her rival, a curious note in it.

"But who could he be staying with? It would still be one of use right?" Haruna scanned hopping to spot some sort of tell, she couldn't stand being outside of the loop. The door opening caught all the girlsÆ attention. Zazie paused giving them an unblinking stare before they all turned away seemingly disappointed. The acrobat moved puzzled at what the commotion could be. These Japanese girls were very excitable types. She allowed her eyes to scan through the room.

Her first look always fell by the window, the white-hared girl floated despondently in the middle of the desk. She had always wondered about her, why did she keep coming if it only made her sad? Zazie never considered it her place to question the motives and actions of others just as no one ever questioned her. Her next was to the middle row two seats, she usually glossed over but today held more importance. To the left Konoka Konoe, she seemed rarely despondent today though it was under the surface. She was hiding it behind a small smile as she chatted with the petite librarian, Yue Ayase.

Zazie offered the slightest frown, why? Why do they smile? The second was far less clear. Asuna Kagurazaka, she looked focused on a textbook but... well even Zazie's trained eyes couldnÆt pierce the wall of jumbled emotions. She looked up and noticed her staring though Zazie seemed unconcerned.

"Yes?" she asked confused and frustrated, the acrobat merely shook her head and continued walking leaving her classmate blinking confused. "What was that about?"

"Rainyday-san?" Konoka queried looking to the girl's retreating back. "No one really knows what she's about, could be any number of things." The door opened once more and this time it was the real deal. The uproar was about to start when the bell rang, he must have timed his entrance.

"All rise.... Bow." Nodoka spoke her classmates following. Negi offered a simple smile.

"Okay everyone please turn to page 35 and we'll start there." He said, only slightly outside his normal enthusiasm. Seated in the back Zazie propped her head up on her hand analyzing the boy once more. It wasn't gone only buried. That boy was a mystery...

end snippet

Mm, that was fun. Zazie has a playful side, though Negi contiues to puzzle her. Yes Zazie can see Sayo just fine but has never approached her so the poor ghost has no idea anyone can see her.

 

[midorigreen]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Good!
So, Zazie sleeps in the nude. This will certainly cause Negi far more embarrassment than waking up in Asuna's bed, but I doubt he'll be as sore afterwards.
I can't wait to see the 2A girls trying to hassle Zazie, only to get frustrated by a blank stare and Zazie can't seem to understand what the problem is. Of course she does seem to be able to read emotional states better than most, I get this comes from her calm, silent and observant personality.
You suppose Sayo's ghost powers might be useful in the Nightmare Circus, if Zazie and Negi's relationship continues she might tell him about her white haired classmate, which will get Sayo into the story sooner. this idea is supported by the fact that Zazie is seen hanging out with Sayo in the manga, so perhaps she feels somewhat drawn to Sayo.

 

[Ringmaster]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

New snippet, very nice.

 

[marthf1]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

Fun interactions and interesting thoughts about some of the characters from Zazie's point of view. What else could we need? Though yeah, Negi is going to have fun sleeping. Maybe he will start to become immune to such things, eventually.

 

[Ikari666]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

So, Zazie sleeps in the nude.

Naturally.

This looks to be shaping up in an interesting way. I'd've done another spell and readability check and PMed it to you, but it's late and I have class in the morning.

 

[windfalcon]

It's Always the Quiet Ones

*cackles* Brilliant!

I am highly amused ^^ You deserve chibi Cat-girl versions of Negi's class.

Keep it up ^^