Akamatsuverse [Negima] It's Always the Quiet Ones

Ryogas_BF

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It's Always the Quiet Ones

Wow no comments yet. well I'll finish up this chapter then...

Snippet!

Practice had ended and after a small amount of chat with the ringmaster the pair had headed back to their room. It had certainly been an experience, and though she didn't show it Negi got the feeling Zazie was more comfortable with her sempais at the club as opposed to her own classmates. It was a little troublesome to find out but they all seemed friendly enough that it was understandable. Even Prosopeio had given him a free pass to visit the practice whenever he wanted to.

But club time turned back into real time and reality sank in leaving the pair to get to work for the next coming day. Zazie sat on her bed working on homework allowing Negi to use the desk for him study plans and grading. The light scraping of pencils and the occasional twitter of her birds were the only sounds that could be heard as they worked away. It was a pleasant silence but it did little to help his mind from wandering. This had been good for his mood and thus allowing to think a bit clearer... obviously just talking things out with Asuna was not working perhaps a show of good faith. She did want a love potion, if he wasn't mistaken then he still have some magic capsules from his grandfather, with a few of those he could replicate a love potion much easier. That was it, he'd make it before class and give it to her after lessons were over. Surely that would help smooth things over.

He gave a slight nod to himself that would be the plan. with that out of the way his mind turned to his quiet yet mysterious roomate and they day they had. His eyes turned once again to the picture on her desk. The young performer smiling to the camera in a goofy pose alongside the ringmaster.

Such a nice smile. the boy propped his head on a hand, Is it... Is it just for show?

"Sensei?"

"Hm?" shaking himself out of his wanderings to glance back. The performer had her eyes still focused on her studying.

"Do you feel better?"

"Huh?" Negi blinked unsure what she was speaking of. She looked up leveling her impassive gaze on him once more. "Do I feel better?"

She nodded, seemed to be mildly uncomfortable at his lack of reply. "You were... sad earlier. Even though you smiled." she spoke softly but the words hit hard. She'd noticed? had he really been that obvious?

"No, I wasn't sad or anything."

"You had sad eyes."

"I-"

"After class too."

"W-Well I mean things have been a little rough lately I guess." He admitted looking down. He hadn't expected her to be reading him so much... He blinked "Wait you mean... you invited me to your practice to cheer me up?" he ventured slowly getting a small nod in return. A genuine smile came to the child teacher's face touched by the effort. "Thank you Rainyday-san, I had a really good time."

Zazie relaxed a little at that, at least she had been successful... she had been unsure exactly what she could do but if practice made her feel good then it should work with others... it made enough sense to risk it. Though her sempais seemed to make a big deal of it...

"And your performance was beautiful. I really enjoyed it."

"Ah?" Zazie found that feeling returning to her from he smile and words. It was not nearly as strong as the very first time from that night but it was steady enough that she found a need to repress a slight reddening in her cheeks. "I am still practicing... I have much to learn."

"It was still amazing. I don't care what your Ringmaster says." Negi pressed with a firm nod. The girl found words harder to come by but managed a small nod of thank you before digging her nose into her study book. she could her a light chuckle from him before he turned back around. Silence befell them once more, only the twittering of the birds, soft scraping of a pencil and the rapid thumping of her heart.

What was this that he could do to her? Tsubame-sempai could occasionally get such feelings raised but it was usually through her teasing and hugging. Negi's seemed much more powerful as he could do it with but a glance and a smile. Maybe he was some sort of mage? perhaps... it would likely be better to just ask about it... Shizuna-sensei usually knows what was going on.

The night grew and sleep eventually came, after saying their goodnights Negi slipped into his sleeping bag for a restful night of sleep. Zazie lay awake suddenly grown anxious, anticipating her young sensei to wander over like he did the night before... Konoe-san had said he didn't do it every night but well... she wouldn't mind if he did. It was a nice feeling... Just thinking about it brought light red to her cheeks once more.

As if answering her thoughts the light shuffle of cloth and footsteps could be heard. She grasped the blanket tightly on reflex... he really was coming. Her heartbeat increased and she had to calm her breathing as she could feel a light weight on the bed. The acrobat turned to open the sheets up catching sight of Negi's darkened silhouette... though instead of a face there was a white mask. The girl stared, unsure what had happened, until the mask began to bob up and down in some manner of silent laughter. ZazieÆs mouth twisted downward slightly, eyes glowing red.

"Not funny..." she muttered as the silhouette lost it's form, melting into the amorphous shadow she was more familiar with. It gave a little bow as if to apologize but a few more bobbing masks in the corner left such an apology in doubt. Allowing herself a small pout she opened her mouth to speak but a shuffle caught the attention of all beings in the room. Negi had indeed gotten up and was stumbling over to the bed. She past a glance to the closest shadow who moved aside and no shadows made any move to the boy... they seemed more curious then hungry this time. Zazie raised the sheet so the half sleep Negi could slip in easily and tried to relax as the boy embraced her. She looked down to the boy with a small smile. He didn't say anything this night but just the warmth of his boy alongside her filled her with the mysterious, yet pleasant feeling that she'd gotten small tastes off all day. Her arms slowly snaked around him and she pulled him close.

The watchers slowly melded away to give them privacy and Zazie allowed herself to fall into a comfortable sleep once more. Both Teacher and student finding it easier to sleep with the other's warmth at their side.

End Chapter 2

and we end much like we did in chapter one... the chapters won;t always end with the night but I feel it works well for this first few chapters as things get rolling. A small bit of talk and a little veiw from Zazie. I gave ehr shadow friends a bit of personality but as of yet only Zazie can understand them so they remain mute.
 

Reader458

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#52
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I really liked the last snippet, you managed to catch the feelings of both of them very well.
 

arhand

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This is turning out very good.
Looking forward to more.
 

~NGD OMEGA~

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Well, I was a little iffy at first with a fic going over an uncovered character, but I tried it, and I can now declare this fic as being made of win and awesome. I'm a little iffy with the OC's, but that's mainly because I've met people like them, particularly the strong man and the fortuneteller, and for some reason they keep replacing themselves in my mind. :blink:

Overall I like the way you used Zazie so far, and it makes for a pretty interesting take on her. I now fell more miffed about Negi skipping out on the Nightmare Circus on the third day... even if it was perfectly understandable given the situation... -_-

In particular I liked this most recent one, with the masked thing trying to trick her. I assume the red eye thing is going to play an interesting role later on. Though I'm a bit iffy about the sudden jump in Zazie's mind to calling Negi a mage, but I can't figure out if she is aware of magic or not yet. :huh.:

Overall I liked it, and eagerly await more. Though I'm a tad new to this fandom, it's nice to see some really good ones using characters that aren't really covered yet. Now I must search for other good Negima fics! Talley Ho!
 

Ryogas_BF

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~NGD OMEGA~ said:
Well, I was a little iffy at first with a fic going over an uncovered character, but I tried it, and I can now declare this fic as being made of win and awesome. I'm a little iffy with the OC's, but that's mainly because I've met people like them, particularly the strong man and the fortuneteller, and for some reason they keep replacing themselves in my mind. :blink:

Overall I like the way you used Zazie so far, and it makes for a pretty interesting take on her. I now fell more miffed about Negi skipping out on the Nightmare Circus on the third day... even if it was perfectly understandable given the situation... -_-

In particular I liked this most recent one, with the masked thing trying to trick her. I assume the red eye thing is going to play an interesting role later on. Though I'm a bit iffy about the sudden jump in Zazie's mind to calling Negi a mage, but I can't figure out if she is aware of magic or not yet. :huh.:

Overall I liked it, and eagerly await more. Though I'm a tad new to this fandom, it's nice to see some really good ones using characters that aren't really covered yet. Now I must search for other good Negima fics! Talley Ho!
Well I'm glad you enjoyed it thus far. Zazie is tragically over looked due to the fact she is equally over looked in Canon but that leaves a lot open for interpretation. Though this fic is really just born from that wanting to give the girl some time as even when given an oppurtunity for some sceneage it gets overshadowed by chao... which was cool but I felt bad for Zazie because she's the only one that didn;t get to see him at all... she vanished totally during chaos attack.

The OC's I wanted to be fun and interesting but they only show for Nightmare circus practice and perhaps little bits outside. Prosopeio does have a rather major role in Zazie's life (I thank windfalcon once more for allowing me to use him). Myself and windfalcon are actually working out much of the club just as a reference point for this fic as well as him wanting to use the nightmare circus OCs in a fic of his own. So other OC's might be mentioned or introduced but only a handful will have any real impact on the story (The ringmaster, the for performers introduced and a AS YET introduced kyon-esque backstage director) Several members of class 3-A will be joining the circus over time.

Zazie, just by her small scenes in canon HAS to be magically aware... being one of th only that can see Sayo cleanly, the white masked shadows she hangs around with, and giving Chao a baby dragon as a going away present... all point to clearly magic aware. The her referring to Negi as a mage was mostly a joke, as she's trying to rationalize the odd feelings of her developing crush so so power or spell seems like it would be most likely... to her at least 6-_-

I have worked out an interesting back story for the girl as well as interesting skills and abilities. in canon splash art she has been shown to grow wicked looking claws and make her eyes glow... that coupled with the shadow creatures that always ask if they can eat people gave me a fun idea for her linage... you'll just have to wait and see the details.
 

~NGD OMEGA~

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Zazie, just by her small scenes in canon HAS to be magically aware... being one of th only that can see Sayo cleanly, the white masked shadows she hangs around with, and giving Chao a baby dragon as a going away present... all point to clearly magic aware.
That part is iffy. Kaede was not magic aware before she met Negi in the woods, but she apparently shares a decent bond with Mana, and also with all of her techniques which she obviously learned beforehand obviously point to some really weird stuff. She was aware of some of the 'oddities' of the world, but not the existence of mages themselves or the hidden magic society, which was what I really meant to say. With Zazie it could easily be something similar, which was why I questioned it.
 

Ryogas_BF

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~NGD OMEGA~ said:
Zazie, just by her small scenes in canon HAS to be magically aware... being one of th only that can see Sayo cleanly, the white masked shadows she hangs around with, and giving Chao a baby dragon as a going away present... all point to clearly magic aware.
That part is iffy. Kaede was not magic aware before she met Negi in the woods, but she apparently shares a decent bond with Mana, and also with all of her techniques which she obviously learned beforehand obviously point to some really weird stuff. She was aware of some of the 'oddities' of the world, but not the existence of mages themselves or the hidden magic society, which was what I really meant to say. With Zazie it could easily be something similar, which was why I questioned it.
ah, you have a point.

Though for the purposes of my fic I have her originally born in magic country so she is magically aware. It's my personal theory that she was born in magic country so I'm using it for the fic. :)

the rest of her backstory is totally just having fun based of her presented powers and I would be totally shocked if I was even close to what Akamatsu plans to do for her. But I promise to do my best at making it interesting.
 

~NGD OMEGA~

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Alrighty. Just making sure there, as throwing such terms around randomly with characters who likely wouldn't know usually comes off as contrived. Things promise to be interesting in the future. I must log in a request for MO4R, as I try to slog through the fandom and find more fics worth reading. Keep up the good work :yay:.
 

mickl3

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dude... those were just awesome XD

Even more characters to have fun around :p Sure the serior girl is slightly annoying... but at least it made it so Zazie was opened up to spend more time with Negi ^^ I loved the blushing Zazie, it just seems so cute. I'm guessing that she'll eventually find out that her feelings would be emberassment, though for different reasons in each situation. That last part with the shadows was fun too. XD Mean, but funny.

A few things that I had questions on.

You are fortunate oh the amount of time we have for our next Performance

What does that mean? Cause I can't really seem to get it processed in my mind >.<

Also...

It gave a little bow as if you apologize

I think you meant "as if apologizing." Right? That seems to make more sense to me at least...

Anyways, once again, great snippets. ^^ hope more comes soon.
 

Ryogas_BF

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mickl3 - glad your enjoyed it... Yes Tsubame is suppose to be a little annoying by her nature. She the Star but the way Zazie is training it seems like the Junior high girl is suppose to be her understudy/replacement.

I wanted to have some fun with the shadows, give them some personality. You'll find out their nature in time and perhaps you'll eventually get to hear their dialouge... as of now only Zazie, Sayo, and likely Mana can hear them.

Fixed those lines as well thanks.

~NGD OMEGA~ - You want more eh? *points below*

Chapter 3

The sun rose casting its morning light over the Mahora campus. Far before most girls would even think of waking Asuna was already jogging through the streets, satchel full of newspaper over her arm. It was a routine ingrained into her for years and without even looking she tosses papers right and left each one hitting their mark. Her steps felt lighter then they had for the last few days, her long chat with Konoka did much for lessening her burden. Though silver eyes still weighed heavy in her dreams.

As for you.. Mei-chan... The Page of Wands represents a young man with power... a fiery will and strength of spirit that is close to you. The Tower represents a calamity that has befallen the two of you... one that could spell the end of your bondà

The papergirl did her best to rub away the Goosebumps on her arm as they appeared. Her misadventure yesterday had left he much to think about... and to explain as to why she was dressed up like a high schooler. A small sweatdrop creased her forehead at remembrance of her friendÆs pouting face. More annoyed that she had not been invited then anything. It's not I had planned on it... releasing a sigh she tried to focus on the task at hand.

Negi

Things couldn't go on like this. Despite the incident and who witnessed it the more she looked back on it the less she could really blame the boy. There was another factor in this as well but she refused to consciously acknowledge it. It was just because it was her first kiss... that was all. Nothing else to it. Nope.

if you think things through... the Wheel of Fate may present an opportunity for you to set things right once more

There was a clang as the next paper she threw bounced off the mailbox instead of going in the slot. she trotted back and placed it in there with a sigh.

"I really need to end this stupid fight..." she muttered before focusing herself to finish the rest of the run.

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"Gah?!" Thud...

Zazie passed a curious look to the boy, who was once again on the floor covering his eyes. His frame was shaking and his face bright red once more, wiping the sleep from her eyes she scooted to the edge of the bed.

"Shirt?"

"Y-yes..." she allowed herself a small sigh, it seemed that he was somewhat uncomfortable sleeping in the same bed despite his curious habit. It was such a waste to dress before cleaning up for the day. The acrobat slid to her feet and glided over to her closet picking out one of her larger shirts covering to just below her rear. She turned to the boy who continued to be 'gentlemanly' and not look. She silently strode over and crouched down behind him. He didn't seem to be aware of her presence, giving into her urge she leaned forward close to his ear.

"Boo." It was soft and had no inflection but the boy still jumped and fell forwards. Zazie allowed a ghost of a smile as the boy looked her way with the cute, puzzled look.

"Rainyday-san..." he muttered with a slight whine.

"Sorry." she replied but the lack of inflection left the meaning dubious. He sighed as they both stood, she was dressed... sort of. He did his best to keep his eyes up as that shirt only did so much. She gathered her supplies and looked to him. "Bath?"

"I'm okay Rainyday-san." He lied with a smile getting a nod in return. She started out and seemed to pause as if she had remembered something. She bore a curious expression as she turned and strode toward him. Leaning in he had to repress a blush as she gave a few light sniffs, nose crinkling a little.

"Stinky."

"Eh?"

"Bath." this time it was a statement and not a question. He looked up to argue his side of things but her eyes held a note of firmness that made him swallow and give a reluctant nod.

"B-but what about the others?" he ventured with a last ditch to weasel out.

"Early." was all he got in reply but that was hardly comforting... anytime he'd entered that bath it started out deserted and would end full. She held his gaze for a moment as they headed for the hall before she broke away. Though she hadn't said a word he felt somehow comforted in a weird way... but it wasn't making him anymore thrilled about taking a bath.

The walk down the hall was quiet, the occasional buzz of a girl waking. But for the most part it seemed like the girls were still sound asleep. Zazie opened the door to expansive bath and the boy couldn't help but gasp again... it was such an impressive sight. Much more like a resort pool then a dorm bath. The performer's eyes turned to the pool, floating over the steam was student number 1 out of her odd uniform, apparently waiting for something. Making no move to disturb her classmate she turned to her teacher.

"Get ready." she instructed pointed to the dividers getting a blush from the boy.

"B-but Rainyday-san, it's indecent..."

Zazie blinked looking out tot the water and then back to her roommate. "It's a bath." the statement was simple and hard to argue. Though Negi made an attempt it seemed the girl had no qualms about the nudity involved... Asuna had always made a big stink about them so he never had to argue this side of the reasoning before. He swallowed as she started to shimmy off her shirt revealing she was indeed bare under it.

"A-Aren't you going to wear a bathing suit?" he managed to get out with a small squeak. Zazie cocked her head to the side with a puzzled frown.

"Then how could I wash?"

"I... well..." The teacher sighed and lowered his head in defeat. This wasn't how the argument was supposed to go.

"Strip."

"O-okay..." he swallowed and slipped behind the divider coming out a few moments later dressed in only in his swim trunks. Zazie turned abruptly to the empty pool with a curious look. "Rainyday-san?"

"She ran..."

"Huh?" the boy blinked, unsure just who Zazie was referring to. The girl didn't bother explaining things further turning to face him one more forcing him to immediately avert his gaze, cheeks burning.

"Shower?"

"R-right." he squeaked stiffly moving to the showers to clean up. he felt far out of his element right now. The girl seemed so uncaring of being seen unlike most girls but at the same time she wasn't trying to flaunt or molest him like the others. It was just a part of the day to her... putting Zazie once again in her own special category. He tired to focus on cleaning himself and not on the shower next to him. This whole situation was just too unreal he almost wished he was still sleeping... in his sleeping bag if possible.

"Let me wash your back."

This girl was going to be the death of him...

end snippet

We start off with another stressful morning in the life of negi... it's hard to be an english gentleman sometimes. Sayo makes a breif appearance but flees when she finally notices a boy in the girls baths... though it's not like he can see here or anything 6-_- . Also a little note with asuna building up to the classroom. of did I forget to mention.

This is the love potion chapter :)
 

Mev852

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A bath scene. YAY! :yay:

I knew he was going to start stinking sooner or later. I just hope some zaniness gets to occur, since he had such a relatively quiet evening the day before (in terms of being molested by the 3-A girls).
 

mickl3

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lulz that was awesome. b._.b

Need moar zazie interaction! Great chapter.

Anything with zazie is good... mainly cause there isn't enough of her usually :<
I wonder what's going to happen now? We KNOW that the girls will pop up :p just time to see how this all works out. That and I can't wait to see the potion goes differently this time XD

just one thing

"she tired to focus on cleaning himself and not on the shower next to him"
I believe that it should be 'He,' for the final draft.
 

~NGD OMEGA~

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:yay:

Not sure about what Sayo was waiting for, but very interesting for the start of the chapter. And I wonder what zaniness will result when the love potion part comes in. Plus things seem to be coming along nicely from Asuna's side too. Very nicely done.
 

Ikari666

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Whew, chapter two readability check complete, thing's twice as long as the first. Check your PM box.

Story's going well, can't wait to see more.
 

Ryogas_BF

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Thank you so much Ikari, your hard work is appreciated.
 

Ikari666

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You're welcome, and it's nice to see that you used part of my idea.
 

l3fty

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Great story. What with the lack of Zazie-chan in manga these last few months this is really refreshing for me. Negi is atracting to flirtatious and posesive girls wherever he goes :D. I wonder how will Asuna come back into the fold, and Chamo, we can't have pactios without Chamo. Although Eva has to do her thing before that. Kazumi-chan is getting into the action sooner as well. Who will you echange library trio with? Or will you still write them as they were in canon? Then there Sayo-chan, and the circus girls. Anyway this is awesome to read :yay:
 

Ryogas_BF

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Snippet

Negi was shamed to admit that this was kind of nice... Bathing alongside Asuna was always a rough experience as she made damn sure he was clean every time, and the other girls. Well, though often starting out nice it usually turned into several girls groping him. All Zazie was doing was washing his back like she'd offered. Nothing more and nothing less. Keeping his mind focused on the wall ahead of him her could even ignore that fact that she was naked... mostly. Though he did managed to lower the red in his face a few shades.

"Hair?"

"Ah, I did that Rainyday-san." He could feel a hand go through his hair, checking his workmanship. It felt nice, though he doubted that was her intention. She was merely making sure he had washed his hair properly; she must have heard that he tended to avoid such things. In this case he had, but he did almost wish he hadn't... he had a feeling that she'd use a much gentler touch then he was used to.

The performer nodded in approval before moving away. He strained to hear her light footfalls moving away. She was such a quiet person in everything she did. He tired to busy himself with cleaning. After all the longer he stayed the more likely someone would show...

Zazie watched her young teacher from the pools edge. He had made a point not to look her way the whole time, something about being a gentleman. It was somewhat disappointing... the few time he did look it seemed to fill her with a thrill, much more potent then his normal gaze. It seemed that it caused him undo stress and that was not her intention. Perhaps he did not receive the same thrill she got? The acrobat looked down to her hands. She'd washed her roommate as Konoka had suggested, leaving her of two minds about the experience... Touchy feely was not normally her thing. She acknowledged a persons personal space and believed she deserved that same respect but with Negi. She frowned slightly, mulling over situation. It was just different.

Eyes turned to the door as her sharp ears caught the light chatter she'd long associated with her classmates. Negi seemed to be too focused on his washing to catch their arrival... Hadn't he been worried about the other girls showing up? "Ah..." she stood and headed back over in time to see the door open.

"Oh my god is that Negi-kun?"

The young teacher froze for a moment. He tried valiantly not to move at all but on reflex he looked up. It was only a few girls from his class. Makie and her roommate Ako were up along front, the latter seeming more uncomfortable pulling her towel closer. Along with them was the rather skittish Nodoka Miyazaki, who looked slightly more mortified them himself, flanked on either side were her roommates Yue and Haruna. It seemed a couple more girls were filed behind this group but he couldn't get a good look at the moment.

"S-Sensei and Rainyday-san..." the Liberian muttered looking bit past him.

"Morning." how she could sound so casual in such a situation he would never know. Zazie Rainyday was indeed a strong person.

"Ho ho, taking advantage of the benefits I see," the manga artist smirked. "You should learn to share a bit with your fellow classmates."

"Hm?" It was a puzzled sound he'd grown used to over the last few days. He didn't have to turn to know the look she likely had... he didn't dare in her state of undress. At least the group in front wore towels.

"S-Share?" Nodoka squeaked.

"You!" Now it was dangerous, Ayaka had pushed her way through the crowd up front pointing, likely to Zazie. "What do you think you were doing to Negi-sensei?" her tone was demanding and somewhat jealous.

"...Cleaning, he was dirty." her blunt honest sent a flushed to his face.

"Rainyday-san, was that necessary?" he whispered. With trepidation he glanced back a little to at least she her face but ended up with bonus sight of her slim figure.

"Hee hee, Negi's a dirty boy." Makie covered her mouth as she giggled. "I'll help clean him up."

"That will not be necessary." The speed at which his roommate replied was surprising.

"R-Right I was just finishing up." He turned back to the assembled, who had moved on closer the last two girls entering the bathes. Ayaka's roommates Chizuru and Nasumi pulling up the rear. The gymnast giggled and came right up to him.

"In that case why don't you soak with us?" She already started to pull him along to the pool. This was bad.

"Makie-san I-I really shouldn't be staying in h-here." he struggled but the athletic baka pink had little trouble moving him along. "I'm an English gentleman."

"Well then it's not very gentlemanly to turn down the offer of a lady." Ayaka seemed to slide in teaming up with Makie for 'the greater good' that could come of this. Desperate he looked back to his roommate who bore a puzzled frown. Though before he could do any other signal he found himself tossed bodily into the hot spring bath.

Zazie caught the look, recalling where she had spotted such a look before. In these situations Asuna would muscle in and drag the boy out from the other girl's grasps... She gave a small nod to herself and started forward.

"Rainyday-san." the performer glanced back to see one of the more mature girls of 2-A.

"Naba-san?"

"I just wanted to say you've been doing a good job lately taking care of Negi-sensei." Chizuru said with an easy smile. "I was admittedly worried at first but he seems to be going along much better."

"Ah... Thank you." her reply was a little unsure. "I believe Sensei requires my assistance."

"Um yeah... it looks like MakieÆs trying to get his shorts off." Nasumi gave a slightly nervous chuckle... some of her classmates were very aggressive.

"Don't let us hold you up." Zazie nodded and rushed to the pools edge she jumped airborne twisting wildly through the air before smoothly entering the water a little ways past her classmates much to the surprise and awe of the girls watching.

"My my... she's quite limber." Chizuru's noted first to recover from the spectacle.

"Amazing, with that small a start too." her smaller roommate's tone held much more envy. Of course it was another exotic, amazing person... Why did she have to be so ordinary?

Zazie popped free from the water, a small spray going up in all directions. She stood, expression blank not a foot away from Ayaka and Makie. Both girls were staring openly at the impressive if needless feat of acrobatics. She put out a hand and offered her performer's smile.

"Sensei and I need to prepare for class."

"Um sure..." the blond gave a slight nod, Makie as well letting go allowing the child teacher to scramble free and retighten his swim trunks. Off to the side the library exploration club watched on.

"She is far more formidable then I suspected. So casual after such a feat and naked no less. A bold woman she is. A dangerous smile too..."

"Maybe she's not interested." Yue noted hoping to stem her friendÆs overactive mind. "She doesn't seem phased at all."

"No she may be good at hiding it but my nose doesn't lie." Haruna gave a firm nod. "But this isn't over yet."

"P-please really. Don't make such a fuss of this." Nodoka had taken a hidden position behind her friends ever since being spotted by her sensei. She peeked out as the odd foreigner lead a relieved Negi to their things.

"Nodoka, you can't just step aside once the competition arrives. You have to fight!" Paru placed a firm hand on her shoulder along with a thumbs up. "Don't worry I'll get to work on a fool proof plan." The artist pointedly ignored the sigh and groan of her companions. This was for her friend's benefit, she'd thank her when it was all said and done.

Back by the door Zazie dried off and slipped the large shirt back on, much to Negi's relief. Her face was blank once more bringing question to how true that smile really was. But that could be put aside for now, he was just glad to be on his own two feet again.

"Thank you Rainyday-san." he passed her a small smile getting a small nod in return, the girl seemingly focused on gathering her things. There was still a lot that he didn't know of his roommate but it was plain enough to see that she was a good, reliable person. They strolled over to the door and opened it.

"Ah..."

"Oh no." ahead of them was a veritable gauntlet as the twenty odd remaining students of 2-A stood, towel clad and ready to clean for morning classes.

"Is that Negi-bozu?"

"Such a perv he must have been waiting for us."

"Well letÆs not keep him waiting."

"Negi-sensei!"

"Negi-kun!"

The life of a junior high teacher was fraught with peril...

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Bath... madness... Zazie saves the day and one of the characters in this scene will be seeing a lot more screentime then canon... can you guess which? :)
 

mickl3

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#69
It's Always the Quiet Ones

lol nice one, two thumbs up b._.b

More bath madness, that's always good. I really can't wait to see where all of this goes, cause while I love the interaction, it's making me itch thinking about what you're planning to occur.

Negi seems to get into these situations no matter what he does though... lucky guy :/
 

Lumias

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#70
It's Always the Quiet Ones

Nice chapter, I like Zazie's personality in this, it seems very realistic for someone who has isolated herself.

I like the lack of inner monologue as well, it makes you have to connect to the character more to understand what she's feeling, which in turn draws you into the story more.
 

marthf1

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#71
It's Always the Quiet Ones

Very enjoyable. I suppose Negi will have less stress with Zazie as opposed to Asuna, though with Konoka as Zazie's counsel, I wonder if Konoka will "twist" some facts or suggestions around.

Since Zazie will be under more scrutiny, I suppose she will end up showing her abilities more frequently, like in saving Negi.
 

Spaz

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#72
It's Always the Quiet Ones

"Um yeah... it looks like MakieÆs trying to get his shorts off." Nasumi gave a slightly nervous chuckle... some of her classmates were very aggressive.
Four things wrong with that sentence: Nasumi should be Natsumi, the second is nearly all of her classmates are(third thing) aggressive, and the fourth is that the word aggressive is the understatement of the year.

It's always a good read to see through the eyes the Circus Performer. :D
 

Ryogas_BF

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#73
It's Always the Quiet Ones

It returns!

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It took some time but eventually Zazie and Negi had managed to get back and dress for class. Due to the hold up they headed out at the same time, jogging in silence among the crowd of girls. Now this was not unusual, nor was the fact that he was easily outpacing the older, taller girls. But Zazie, aside from breathing a little hard, was keeping up... he'd offered to slow down but she seemed insistent on going fast. The way her eyes keep views on all of the girls the reasoning became more obvious. She didn't feel comfortable in the huge crowd of girls. Then how does she get in? after all she's not always early... does she take a different way in? Though that would go par for the course.

Zazie Rainyday always walked a path different from the other girls.

Zazie let out a slight sigh of relief as they came into class. Ignoring a few glares from the chief Negi fans, she headed to her desk and took a seat. The attention was a little less intense then it had been yesterday, they had tried to grill her in the bath that morning but got little information. The Acrobat had clammed up soon after they converged, a shame she suffered quietly as she could practically hear her classmates thinking of a new way to get information from her. The gazes she was starting to get used to but one had a different feel to it. She scanned the class to see Kazumi up in front leaning back and looking right at her... in a way that made her distinctly uncomfortable in a whole new way. The other girls all wanted to know about Negi but Asakura seemed focused directly on her.

She was saved at the ring of the bell and negi going through home room, is was brief and he was replaced by the math teacher, english scheduled last class of the day. Now 2-A was hardly a group of scholars and Zazie was well aware that without the baka rangers she was the lowest score in class. Every student had their bad classes and Zazie was no exception... the chief of which was math though history wasn;t much better. Unable to focus her mind wandered as time passed, her thoughts went back to the evening before and her current situation...

Practice had started to wind down, Prosopeio had told everyone to go through cooling down exercises. "Hoshiko, Tsubame... Would you be so kind as to keep Zazie's guest entertained? I have things i need to discuss with Zazie... and Hoshiko, do make sure Tsubame doesn't suffocate our celebrity with too much affection, hmm?" Chuckling softly, the masked performer placed a hand on Zazie's shoulder before leading her out of the Gymnasium towards an office. "Since you no doubt wish to join your guest later, my dear, we will use the Gym Office for privacy... though I do expect a visit later on." Zazie allowed herself a small glance back as her sempai made their way over to the boy. At the touch she turned to look up to the ringmaster giving a small nod, she made no flinch at the touch like she tended to with many people and easily followed across the gym, face blank.

Once inside the Gym Office, the ringmaster made sure to lock the door before motioning for Zazie to take a seat. "Would you like some tea dear?" Prosopeio asked, the firm, businesslike tone of the ringmaster's voice suddenly taking on a more parental ring. "It has, after all, been two weeks since our last meeting... and I have missed you my dear." Taking a seat across from Zazie, the masked performer placed a hand over the bottom part of the large mask. With a soft clicking sound, the bottom half of the mask pulled away, revealing the lower part of Prosopeio's face, which set itself in a warm smile. Zazie followed and stood at attention until being motioned. She smoothly crossed the room and took a seat, eyes following Prosopeio about the room. At the offer she gave a steady nod. At the second her eyes turned downward slightly a little ashamed.

"Mm... I apologize."

Giving a slight shake of the head, Prosopeio simply chuckled... the tone not unlike bells ringing since the mask no longer slightly muffled the voice.

"I could do without the apologies, dear one... a visit and perhaps some new news would be all that I require." Giving a wave of the hand, a small cloud of smoke briefly covered the table... and upon clearing, a platter containing a complete tea set lay before them. "Orange Tea... Sweet, as you like it my dear, as well as freshly baked biscuits with orange marmalade, also as you like it." Smiling brightly, Prosopeio poured the two of them tea. Zazie nodded a little and brought a slight smile at the offered goodies. Prosopeio always had the right treats. She took a wiff of the tea enjoying the citrusy aroma before sipping.

"Mm... Thank you Ozu'laji." she said softly, the name seeming to twist of her tongue in an unatural way, the foriegn word sticking out amongst the smoother Japanese. The ringmaster sat back looking to Zazie's face.

"No need for thanks I am always glad to provide. So tell me dear... what has happened recently? I hear your class has been in quite a stir since the young man became Takamichi-kun's replacement." She place her cup on the saucer and gained a thoughtful expression allowing a small nod.

"Ah, it gets very loud sometimes." giving an almost pout at the thought, the squeals were too much sometimes. "Negi-Sensei works hard though..." Prosopeio's head tilted slightly to one side as the masked performer looked at Zazie thoughtfully.

"Odd... you were never one to care one way or another about your teachers... This Negi-sensei must be quite spectacular for you to bring him to our practice."Zazie paused half bitten into a biscet, hesitating a moment beofre she finished the bite and swallowed, a little of the sticky orange on her nose from the slip. She seemed consider her answer, as she wiped the jam away.

"Negi-sensei... is not a great teacher." she began. "But... he's learning. He works very hard to get better. Though... he is a very strange boy..." she finished looking a little puzzled herself. More then any other person Negi seemed to confuse her. "Very powerful too." she gave a firm nod at the addition as she took another bite of the snack. Letting out a soft. thoughtful hum, Prosopeio took a soft sip of tea, before picking up a biscuit. Considering the orange marmalade on top for a moment, the ringmaster looked towards Zazie curiously.

"Something has your attention on him.... strange? Powerful? Zazie-chan, mayhaps you should start from the beginning and tell me everything, hmm? Even as we were practicing, you seemed to be more energetic and thoughtful than usual when you performed as he watched. Are you perhaps.. close.. with the boy?"

"Close?" Zazie gave a small nod, "Mm, Negi-sensei is my roommate." she replied calmly not catching the subtle nudge. "Three days ago, Shizuna-sensei asked me to accept him, Asuna Kagurazaka got into an argument with sensei and kicked him out." she explained calmly taking a sip of tea. "He has shared my room since yesterday."

"Ahh.. I see.. so Negi-sensei is your roommate.... hmm..." Taking a moment to sip the tea, Prosopeio nodded. There was a small, nagging little thought in the Ringmaster's mind, but Prosopeio merely put it off. "How do you feel about this arrangement? I trust your 'friends' are keeping themselves hidden in the young teacher's presence?" Zazie's mouth twisted a little and her eyebrows lowered.

"I... I am not used to someone in my room..." she admited softly. "It is not.. unpleasent, just strange." she sighed slightly, fiddling with the tea cup. "He does many odd things, many times I don't understand what he is doing... he's very... strange." it seemed like she was searching for another word but had to settle with strange. She took a sip to relax a little and nodded. "Mm, They behave... mostly."

"Now i know something is odd... " Prosopeio said, setting his teacup down to lean forward, mouth turning to a slight smirk. "Tell me my dear.. what does he do that is so strange, hmm? You know you can tell your Ozu'laji anything... and you seem to have many questions." Zazie tinged red ever so slightly at her inability to properly describe her sensei hiding it with a long sip of tea until she could compose herself.

"Well... Sensei is..." she frowned lightly. "He smiles when he is sad... he always asks if I am well, watching me carefully... but... but he never comments if I act differently then my classmates." she fiddled with her cup. "He can be very strong... but also weak. He confuses me." she hesitated for several moments staring into the placid surface of her drink. "He has powerful eyes... Just a look and I feel strange. His smiles too, very powerful." her tone was serious as she nodded. By the time Zazie finished, a slight sniffling is heard from Prosopeio. With a hand over the revealed mouth, Zazie could easily see the slight tears flowing from behind the mask.

"Oh dear.... you have grown up so quickly my child..." Leaning back, Prosopeio pulled a handkerchief from one of the billowing sleeves of the Ringmaster Outfit and dabbed at the tears, staining the cloth by doing so. "My dear... it appears... that you are developing feelings for the young teacher... In fact... this may be your first crush." Getting up from the chair, the masked Ringmaster moved to kneel besides Zazie, wrapping both arms around the girl in a gentle embrace while placing an elegant chin right on her shoulder. Zazie blinked genuinely confused at the sudden turn in direction of this conversation.

"Crush?" she gained a more thoughtful look, she heard her classmate speak of such a thing in the past... if that was the case then. She blinked eyes widening slightly, the hint of a blush returning. She was silent as he started his embrace mind still wrapping around his words. "Are... Are you sure you are not mistaken?" her voice was calm though it bore a slight tremor to it.

"These confusing feelings will keep confusing you my dear.... I have no doubt that they will only feel weirder and weirder as time goes on... but beleive me when I say that all these feelings will become worth it." Placing a gentle kiss on Zazie's cheek, the masked performer smiled. She managed to stay relaxed somewhat due to the show of affection but mind was set a whirl.


The ringing of the bell caught her giving a slight jump, she looked around seeing the history teacher was on his way out. She zoned out through the whole class and all the way into and past the next... Shizuna-sensei would not be pleased if she found out. She may have to omit that part of her day for her session. She leaned her head on the desk, it felt cool. Her face must be burning, the reasons were obvious. ôCrush...ö It was a hard accusation to swallow but it was hard to dispute as she thought of it. Not one to openly swoon like many of the girls in her class did those pleasant bubbles and hops in her stomach from his look and touch.

ôDo the other girls feel like this?ö the question was but a whisper and went unanswered, even the unusually sharp ears of her desk mate could not pick up her musings as she left to pester Nodoka. So many questions but who could she ask? HOW could she ask? Maybe it was a case of thinking too much, working oneself up over nothing.

ôAll rise!ö Zazie looked over to see Negi entering the room, a familiar lightness from her stomach all the way to her head. Negi reached to podium looking much happier then usual, a warm smile on his face brightened up the room. The performer schooled her expression with years of practice, meeting his smile with a blank face as turned her way. To her right Haruna sniffed the air lightly raising an eyebrow as she turned to her desk mate and allowed a slight smirk.

ôIs that so...ö Zazie blinked looking to the artist meeting her gaze impassively but for some reason she felt a chill go down her spine.

end snippet

Showing a little of Zazie's personal life, the ringmaster obviously holding a big part in her life... the nickname she has for him is not in any language in existance so don't look it up. it's meaning will come up later as well as the language it is in. Mystery!
 

Reader458

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#74
It's Always the Quiet Ones

Very nice. I really like the conversation between Zazie and the Ringmaster, it gave much insight into both the characters and what happens around them.
 

dan27

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#75
It's Always the Quiet Ones

Reader458 said:
Very nice. I really like the conversation between Zazie and the Ringmaster, it gave much insight into both the characters and what happens around them.
although the title should be "its always the very quiet ones" because zazie rainyday speaks even less then honya chan
 
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