Naruto One Naruto fic I would like to write
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True, Hinata isn't a violent stalker. And she isn't that bad looking either. Still, I do prefer Sakura over her. Why? I don't know. I mean normally I would go for the less violent type (though traditional too since I like Motoko). I guess one thing about this manga compared to say Love Hina, since it isn't meant to be 'romantic', you don't get extreme scenes of Naruto constantly being beaten up by Sakura. And as annoying as Sakura's obsession with Sasuke was, reading Part II (which I know many of you don't like due to the powerups. Another thing I'm not that fond of either BTW) that obsession had all but disappeared.
And Hinata? Just not enough of the stalker in the manga IMO. I'd probably be more supportive of Naru/Hina, and be more supportive of her in turn since well, there would be more of her there. As it stands, she just lacks many major development once the Chuunin Exams ended. Since I haven't seen the anime past the end of the first Chuunin Exam (the written test), I don't take into account the anime. Not to mention the fact that, well, following the rule that the original is canon, I don't consider any of the anime as canon as well (so no fillers for me!).
And Hinata? Just not enough of the stalker in the manga IMO. I'd probably be more supportive of Naru/Hina, and be more supportive of her in turn since well, there would be more of her there. As it stands, she just lacks many major development once the Chuunin Exams ended. Since I haven't seen the anime past the end of the first Chuunin Exam (the written test), I don't take into account the anime. Not to mention the fact that, well, following the rule that the original is canon, I don't consider any of the anime as canon as well (so no fillers for me!).
Meh, Hinata, like so many other gtood potentials, was left by the wayside in the race to get the biggest baddest Sharingan, it's just like DBZ really, "Haha I now posses SUPER SHARINGAN 3!!! What will you do now?" "Ah but you underestimate me for I have obtained the almighty power of....SUPER SHARINGAN 4!!! Haha!" "What! But I thought it was only a myth, Super Sharingan 4 is legendary!" And that's pretty much a full twenty or so episodes in a nutshell, sigh.
Ha! :lol: I find it amusing that many people (at least, people in this forum) would be more supportive of her if she was MORE of a stalker!
Actually, speaking of the Byakagan-vision, I have (Yes, yes... you know...) a doujinshi that has Hinata spying on Naruto and peeking through his clothing. :lol:
Actually, speaking of the Byakagan-vision, I have (Yes, yes... you know...) a doujinshi that has Hinata spying on Naruto and peeking through his clothing. :lol:
Ehehe, and you wonder why we think you've got a doujin for pretty much everything :lol: . Oh and does it get any more interesting that that? Or is that the extent of it? If it does go further than I might want a link for that one. 
Oh and we all love stalkers here because we all wish we had one, heh. *runs before everyone else lynches him*
Oh and we all love stalkers here because we all wish we had one, heh.
*runs before everyone else lynches him*It was a pretty random doujinshi. Hinata liked his flaccid penis more then his erect one (she thinks itÆs kawaii). It also includes Anko and Tsunade (both of whom have sex with faceless partners). It doesnÆt actually contain any Naruto/Hinataà Like I said, it was a weird doujinshi, and because I canÆt read Japanese well enough, it was even more random.
And as I've said before, I don't have a doujin for everything. I just usually mention it when a situation reminds me of one I have.
And as I've said before, I don't have a doujin for everything.
I just usually mention it when a situation reminds me of one I have.Hehe, only Hinata, only Hinata.
Yes it seems the only thing that the men have to contribute to hentai is their penis, the rest doesn't really matter which is why you get those ones where they're just faceless males.
And because you do it then seems like you have a doujinshi for everything , face it, you're the biggest perv of us all. *bows down* All hail our great lord and master...Pervert-Sama!!! (Like in Hawk's Kei/Su fic where Su's Mom is referred to as 'Slut-sama' )
Oh and I like the new signature, did you notice the new quote I added into mine, contributed by everybody's favorite bastard king.
Yes it seems the only thing that the men have to contribute to hentai is their penis, the rest doesn't really matter which is why you get those ones where they're just faceless males.
And because you do it then seems like you have a doujinshi for everything
, face it, you're the biggest perv of us all. *bows down* All hail our great lord and master...Pervert-Sama!!! (Like in Hawk's Kei/Su fic where Su's Mom is referred to as 'Slut-sama' )Oh and I like the new signature, did you notice the new quote I added into mine, contributed by everybody's favorite bastard king.
I didn't expect this thread to come back to life. At least not untill I had the prologue done.
Not going to happen. But having Naruto training so hard he is tired enough to sleep though any classes he doesn't like and having a poor performance in the more physical classes (like taijutsu) is something I considered before. Also, I said I would make him a bit smarter, but not much, and I wouldn't want to make him a genius.
There's no reason to change the fact most gilrs like Sasuke.
Chouji and Shikamaru being his best friends is something I considered from the beggining. Just because he isn't hated doesn't mean he has dozens of good friends. Take a look at Iruka's childhood.
The first option is out, I need Naruto to seek anyone who is willing to teach him anything. With Iruka as a father figure, I don't think it would work. Maybe a favorite student as a fellow orphan of Kyuubi?
Having Naruto being the Fourth's son. the Third feels he owes the Fourth at least some time with his son.
I forgot about her, thanks for reminding me. IF she were to still have enough of her crush to follow him around, she should be able to learn the tree climbing and water walking he will be doing still in the academy using her byakugan, and possibly become far stronger than she is in canon. But, should I do it?
I have been thinking about it. Suggestions for a C rank mission? It has to be somewhat short, because they will go later than in canon and have less time before the chuunin exam. And before anyone asks, yes, I will have the rookie nine again in the chuunin exam.
Thanks. All input is appreciated, whether I use it or not.
I just can't see Naruto without Kage Bunshin, I even worked out an obvious way to make them explode with lightning instead of fire and being easy enough for Naruto to learn on his own. The problem is finding someone to teach him, or a way to have him learn it.
One question. I can easily picture Naruto meeting Gai and Lee, probably when they're running laps around Konoha. Should it be done? I can easily see Lee and Naruto as friends. Also, failing every other idea I had, Gai probably knows Kage Bunshin, both because it seem to be a rather common for a kinjutsu, and because it would be a good techinique to be used with taijutsu, IF the user has enough chakra.
Is it me or some of you are wondering what will be the main pairing for this fic?
I like Naru/Ino, but I don't intend to have any pairings in this.
If anyone wants to know, I started writing the prologue about two weeks ago, but I'm very, very slow at writing. I'm still at the first scene
Not going to happen. But having Naruto training so hard he is tired enough to sleep though any classes he doesn't like and having a poor performance in the more physical classes (like taijutsu) is something I considered before. Also, I said I would make him a bit smarter, but not much, and I wouldn't want to make him a genius.
There's no reason to change the fact most gilrs like Sasuke.
Chouji and Shikamaru being his best friends is something I considered from the beggining. Just because he isn't hated doesn't mean he has dozens of good friends. Take a look at Iruka's childhood.
The first option is out, I need Naruto to seek anyone who is willing to teach him anything. With Iruka as a father figure, I don't think it would work. Maybe a favorite student as a fellow orphan of Kyuubi?
Having Naruto being the Fourth's son. the Third feels he owes the Fourth at least some time with his son.
I forgot about her, thanks for reminding me. IF she were to still have enough of her crush to follow him around, she should be able to learn the tree climbing and water walking he will be doing still in the academy using her byakugan, and possibly become far stronger than she is in canon. But, should I do it?
I have been thinking about it. Suggestions for a C rank mission? It has to be somewhat short, because they will go later than in canon and have less time before the chuunin exam. And before anyone asks, yes, I will have the rookie nine again in the chuunin exam.
Thanks. All input is appreciated, whether I use it or not.
I just can't see Naruto without Kage Bunshin, I even worked out an obvious way to make them explode with lightning instead of fire and being easy enough for Naruto to learn on his own. The problem is finding someone to teach him, or a way to have him learn it.
One question. I can easily picture Naruto meeting Gai and Lee, probably when they're running laps around Konoha. Should it be done? I can easily see Lee and Naruto as friends. Also, failing every other idea I had, Gai probably knows Kage Bunshin, both because it seem to be a rather common for a kinjutsu, and because it would be a good techinique to be used with taijutsu, IF the user has enough chakra.
Is it me or some of you are wondering what will be the main pairing for this fic?
I like Naru/Ino, but I don't intend to have any pairings in this.
If anyone wants to know, I started writing the prologue about two weeks ago, but I'm very, very slow at writing. I'm still at the first scene
And because you do it then seems like you have a doujinshi for everything , face it, you're the biggest perv of us all. *bows down* All hail our great lord and master...Pervert-Sama!!! (Like in Hawk's Kei/Su fic where Su's Mom is referred to as 'Slut-sama' )
, face it, you're the biggest perv of us all. *bows down* All hail our great lord and master...Pervert-Sama!!! (Like in Hawk's Kei/Su fic where Su's Mom is referred to as 'Slut-sama' )
Thanks, I find Kohaku and Hisui's dancing to be... hypnotizing at times.
And yes, I did notice your new quote. Very nice, a fitting quote from the Bastard King.Not all fics should have pairings, some are better off without romance in them, and often times can be ruined by poorly placed pairings.
With that said, if while you are writing, a romance strikes you as appropriate for the fic, then do so, whatever it may be.
'Just one or two gigs' he says. Because that is such a miniscule inconsequential amount, I don't even have any hentai on my PC besides what you send me in PM and that isn't even technically on my PC, I just go online to find my stuff. The only that I did keep on here was that Eva hentai video the 'reinsertion project' or something like that and that was lost when my old PC crashed so I'm still trying to find that again, if anyone has a link to somewhere where I could get it would be most appreciated, just put it up in my link section in the lemon forums.
Oh they're supposed to move? On my screen they are still, maybe I need to adjust my settings or something.
And now, I, for the first time ever wiil get this back on topic *le gasp!!!* and talk about the Naruto fic.
And I agree with F-One, I would really prefer this not to have a pairing, I just don't see one fitting in here, if you're gonna write a romance then have a pairing, if it's not a romance then, most of the time, it shouldn't have a pairing, in my oppinion anyway.
Oh they're supposed to move? On my screen they are still, maybe I need to adjust my settings or something.
And now, I, for the first time ever wiil get this back on topic *le gasp!!!* and talk about the Naruto fic.
And I agree with F-One, I would really prefer this not to have a pairing, I just don't see one fitting in here, if you're gonna write a romance then have a pairing, if it's not a romance then, most of the time, it shouldn't have a pairing, in my oppinion anyway.
Considering that I have something like 10 GBs worth of pictures on my PC, while it's not a miniscule amount, I know that some people have a lot more. Hell, Lokasenna said that he had around 60GBs worth of hentai on his computer, :lol: and I know several other people that have double that easily.
Yup, they are supposed to be doing a jig. Quite amusing looking really.
That's up for debate really. Some fics are better with a bit a romance thrown in, but others are better off without such things. It really depends on the fic really, and I haven't read it yet, so I wouldn't be able to say for sure.
Hell, Lokasenna said that he had around 60GBs worth of hentai on his computer, :lol: and I know several other people that have double that easily.Yup, they are supposed to be doing a jig. Quite amusing looking really.
That's up for debate really. Some fics are better with a bit a romance thrown in, but others are better off without such things. It really depends on the fic really, and I haven't read it yet, so I wouldn't be able to say for sure.
Wow, I just can't see how anyone could possibly need that much hentai, I mean I knwo it's great and all but there is a line somewhere and well...60GB's?!?! Geez, i think I'm just gonna' up and buy it if anyone tells me they have a Terrabyte (1000GBs) of hentai.
Meh, on most of the 'fighting based' naruto fics I prefer no romance, because really the way i see it there's three kinds of Naruto fics, 'Fighting' ones (that entail training, learning of new techniques, getting stonger, and all those other things), romance fics, and yoai (DIE!!!).
Meh, on most of the 'fighting based' naruto fics I prefer no romance, because really the way i see it there's three kinds of Naruto fics, 'Fighting' ones (that entail training, learning of new techniques, getting stonger, and all those other things), romance fics, and yoai (DIE!!!).
While I haven't heard of anything like that, I'm sure there is. Someone with a whole server full of hentai.
Ehh, I think you're being a bit narrow on that. Naruto like all the other fandoms has a width of genres. I can think of two fics off the top of my head that are very good dramas of Naruto, without almost any fighting or romance (and no yaoi) in them, or at least not centered on it.
One being Trial and Error by Sangelide
The other being Goggles by Uozumi
Granted, these types of fics are rare, as Naruto IS a shouen manga. However, as shown, they can be done.
Ehh, I think you're being a bit narrow on that. Naruto like all the other fandoms has a width of genres. I can think of two fics off the top of my head that are very good dramas of Naruto, without almost any fighting or romance (and no yaoi) in them, or at least not centered on it.
One being Trial and Error by Sangelide
The other being Goggles by Uozumi
Granted, these types of fics are rare, as Naruto IS a shouen manga. However, as shown, they can be done.
Yes, but making a sweeping generalization like that isn't accurate either.
Yes, but unless well constructed, it can get extremely jarring to the rest of the fic. S'why I said some fics are left better off without it. It all depends on both the story and the authorÆs ability to write it out well enough.
Yes, but unless well constructed, it can get extremely jarring to the rest of the fic. S'why I said some fics are left better off without it. It all depends on both the story and the authorÆs ability to write it out well enough.
No, when I say pairing I mean two people romantically involved, and the 'fighting' type can have pairings too it's just not the 'main' focus of the story, and generally not with the main character. Gah I didn't want to get into a big debate over this anyway, I was just making a quick generalization, I wasn't establishing an entire manifesto or anything.