Bleach Reflection

#51
Well, since no one is commenting, I'll just have to write more.

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"GAH! SHIT!"

Slamming into a hard, stone floor was not Makoto's idea of a good time. He doubt it was anyone's, really. Slowly he got up, and adjusted his glasses. His eyes widened.

Everything around him was white... Except for the black crescent-shaped scythe bearing down on him.

"YEOW!" He shouted, barely dodging the blow. The wielder of the weapon leered at him with his abnormally large mouth, single visible eye narrowed.

"You flinched, runt," the tall Arrancar leered, his spoon-shaped hood glowing slightly in the ambient light all around. Makoto gulped.

"I have brought the boy, Lord Aizen," Ulquiorra spoke , standing on the floor and looking indifferent as usual. Makoto followed his gaze, and his blood turned to ice. He'd been too confused to really feel the spiritual pressure in the area, but now that he was here, now that he was looking...

That charmingly uncaring smile, the cold eyes, the Super-man like hair...

"Welcome, Kikanuma Makoto," He spoke, and Makoto could hear it clearly as though the man were right in front of him. Not perched on an ivory throne so far away.

But, the man was a master of illusions, right?

"Did he resist, Ulquiorra?" Aizen asked.

"Yes. He generated a limited illusion while I was delivering your order to them, in order to finish the full incantation of a level 33 kidou. I blocked it with a cero." Ulquiorra reported in his usual dull monotone. Aizen looked down at Makoto, who fidgeted under the gaze. His sword spirit looking just like him was one thing-Actually meeting him...

"Impressive."

"Most impressive," Makoto found himself mumbling. Aizen's smile never faltered.

"And the girl?"

"She took the bracelet. She will report to me in 24 hours or we will destroy her friends," Ulquiorra spoke. Aizen nodded.

"Then inform our forces in the Real World that their mission is complete."

"Yes, Lord Aizen," Ulquiorra said, before vanishing into a garganta. Aizen turned his gaze back onto Makoto, who was once again nervously drumming his fingers on his sword hilt.

"So, what do we do with this shithead, Lord Aizen?" The tall Espada asked with a leer. "He doesn't seem worth the trouble." He snorted.

"Can't even defend himself when he's being insulted! What are you, you little shit? Some kind of pussy?"

Makoto continued to tap his fingers on his sword. Aizen's smile grew.

"Whatever are you thinking, Makoto?"

"..."

"'Can my zanpakuto's ability work on Aizen? If I can get past this Espada, how many more are there? Even if I could, how would I return home?'" Aizen asked. Makoto coughed.

"... You forgot, 'How do I save Orihime,'" he said in a quiet, but reasonably defiant voice. Aizen chuckled.

"I see... Ever thinking, ever planning, trying to work out how best to defeat your opponent and achieve your goals. A tad reckless, given your admirable attempt to defeat Ulquiorra... But we are much alike, Makoto."

"Genetically maybe, or however the hell that works... But nothing else!" Makoto snarled, anger pushing his courage to action.

"But you cannot deny the need to control and push the events around you," Aizen countered gently. "The power it gives you. You can make fantasy into reality, bend perception to your will. The world is your stage, and you are the director, the master of the theater, and one of the actors all at the same time."

"'All the world's a stage, and all the men and women merely players: They have their exits and their entrances; And one man in his time plays many parts?' Something like that?" Makoto asked flatly.

"Precisely. We all have our parts. Even now, you are in the role you have coveted."

"And what's that?" Makoto asked.

"The plucky hero, captured, deep in the castle of his enemies," Aizen spoke, "facing the villain and learning that they are not so different after-"

"Shut up," Makoto growled out. Aizen's smile never faltered.

"Excuse me?"

"Look, you can dress up... You can dress up your words and talk like the villain all you like. Thing is, I'm not Cloud Strife, and you're not girly enough to be Sephiroth! So either throw me into a cell, or tell me why the hell you brought me here! And if it's to turn me against my friends, then you've got another thing coming, Clark Kent!"

Silence. Aizen chuckled again, and Makoto had to resist the urge to jump up and stab him in the face.

"You are fascinating, aren't you? Very well..." He looked to the shadows.

"Halibel."

"Sir," spoke a formal female voice behind him, and Makoto jumped. He turned around and gawked at the blond, well built Espada woman with a high collar and equally high top.

"Take our guest to a room. I will speak with him again later."

"As you wish, my Lord," Halilbel spoke. She glanced at Makoto. "Follow."

"Um... Sure...?"

"Nice assets on her, huh punk?" Nnoitra leered. Halibel ignored him and walked away, Makoto following. He shot a glare back at Aizen, but the bastard merely continued to smile, leaning his face lazily against his hand.

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Shaderic

Well-Known Member
#52
Heh, I actually like this one more than the last one.
also...
Thing is, I'm not Cloud Strife, and you're not girly enough to be Sephiroth!
Quoted for Truth.
the nerdiness shines through, making him more unique and different from Aizen. Also, it's an awesome line. Fits really well too.
 
#53
Shaderic said:
Heh, I actually like this one more than the last one.
also...
Thing is, I'm not Cloud Strife, and you're not girly enough to be Sephiroth!
Quoted for Truth.
the nerdiness shines through, making him more unique and different from Aizen. Also, it's an awesome line. Fits really well too.
Oh? Why did you like it more than the last one?

And heh: That line just came to me.
 

trevelyan1983

Well-Known Member
#54
Fucking epic. I especially liked Aizen getting right into Makoto's head with that "What are you thinking?" scene.
 
#55
This is turning out to be quite interesting and entertaining.
 
#56
I really should be in class right now, but I can't.

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The room was simple, austere even. No bars on the windows, Makoto couldn't help but notice.

Halibel had left him there, and Makoto had sighed and sat down on the couch. He snorted as he looked at his sword. She'd let him keep it.

Does he expect me to try to escape, and just wants to see if I could? Or does he think I wouldn't?

He knew his illusions worked on Espada. Even a partial one deceived Ulquiorra long enough for him to get a full-powered Skatsui ready. And Aizen would only trust a powerful Arrancar to gather him and Orihime. Why, he had no idea.

Bait maybe? Lure Ichigo and his friends in, and see if Soul Society reinforces them? That would be a good plan. It was something he'd done in online strategy games-Threaten an enemy asset, pull off enough of their forces to open a path to their main base. Textbook strategy.

That, and Soul Society would probably see this as meaning we were both traitors, Makoto thought morbidly.

"You see how it is, then," Kyougetsu spoke, materializing before him in the form of Aizen, pre-betrayal. Makoto snorted.

"First hand, and hearing from Ichigo and Rukia? Yeah, Soul Society has some major issues..." He shook his head. "Doesn't mean it should all be burned to the ground, and innocent people killed."

"Yet when one has the knowledge to become God, the means, does not one take it?" Kyougetsu asked. "Would you not take that path yourself if you could make the world the way you wanted it to be?"

"It's not up to me!" Makoto argued. "I don't have the right to remake the world how I want it to! I can barely manage my own life, how am I supposed to manage other people's? Let alone six billion of them and who knows how many souls in Soul Society!"

"So, you lack the confidence to use your gifts for the potential betterment of mankind?" Kyougetsu asked, looking amused. Makoto snorted again.

"Betterment? Sure. But I'm not leading anything. Besides... People make for really lousy gods," Makoto huffed. Kyougetsu nodded.

"An interesting argument... Preferring freedom to a responsibility that could lead to nothing but misery..."

"Look, I'm not really in the mood for this bullshit, since I'm probably going to get the same crap from Aizen whenever he summons me again," Makoto sighed. Kyougetsu sighed.

"That is precisely why I am bringing up this 'bullshit', as you call it."

Makoto looked at his sword's spirit curiously. Kyougetsu shrugged.

"You have a window into his mind... And your own is not entirely wasted on digital entertainment," Kyougetsu said.

"Bite me," Makoto retorted. Kyougetsu shrugged.

"But... What can you tell me about his actions? What have you discerned?"

Makoto frowned and thought about it. He then grimaced.

"Damnit... He wants to try and turn me to the Darkside, doesn't he?"

"When captors treat their prisoners like guests, that is the usual goal," Kyougetsu noted. "He gives you the option, dare I say it, illusion of freedom. In order to try and twist you into trusting him back. From there, he can use whatever means he deems necessary to groom you into his own."

"Well, I'm not a whiny little bitch Jedi," Makoto declared. "I'm not falling for it!"

"Consider, however," Kyougetsu said, "that he will most likely use the same approach with Inoue."

Silence. Makoto groaned.

"Oh son of a...!"

The door opened, and Makoto stood up as his sword's spirit vanished. A female Arrancar with a long-sleeved shirt, long green hair, and three green dots under her right eye appeared, carrying a bag. She dropped it on the floor.

"I am Sun Sun, a Fraccion of Halibel. You will change into this clothing," she said. Makoto glanced down at his Shinigami robes, and back at the Arrancar. She raised an eyebrow.

"You may retain your zanpakuto."

"Uh... No. I'm good with what I'm wearing," he stated. No way in hell was he giving up his robes and dressing like the enemy. Removing anything that could give you a concrete, physical reminder of where you came from was a good way to try and manipulate your prisoner.

"Lady Halibel was told by Lord Aizen that you would wear what he has sent," she stated, still perfectly composed. Makoto stared back, focusing on the bridge of her nose as her eyes were a bit intimidating. Still, it made it look like he was looking her in the eyes.

"Well then, please tell Lord Aizen that I am disinclined to acquiesce to your request," Makoto said dryly. Sure, kind of weird quoting a woman, but it fit the context. Sun Sun raised her hand, and her fist charged. Makoto's eyes widened.

"Hey, what are you-?!" He flashstepped out of the way of the small energy blast, but Sun Sun reappeared in front of him, her hand pressing onto his chest before he could draw his sword.

"You-!"

POOMPH! Another energy blast left her hand, but rather than being vaporized, Makoto's robes were blasted apart. Blushing furiously, he covered himself as the female Arrancar looked at him impassively.

"It wasn't a request. It is either wear what is in the bag... Or what you have 'on' now," she stated. Makoto grimaced.

"... Okay..." He barely managed to preserve his modesty, walking carefully over to the bag and grabbing it. He sighed, and turned to look at her.

"Hey... Do you mind?"

"If you are concerned for your modesty, don't bother. I am not impressed," she said simply. Makoto winced.

"Ouch..."

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More on Orihime next time, I promise.
 

MC80a Liberty

Well-Known Member
#57
Andrew Joshua Talon said:
"If you are concerned for your modesty, don't bother. I am not impressed," she said simply. Makoto winced.

"Ouch..."
*Critical hit*

Makoto takes crippling damage to male pride.
 

Ghostface

Lazy Bastard...
#58
Enjoyable bit, although I'm intrested in more Aizen/Makoto interaction.

"If you are concerned for your modesty, don't bother. I am not impressed," she said simply. Makoto winced.

"Ouch..."
That's cooold, baby.
 

grant

Well-Known Member
#59
Exactly how much sex would an Arrancar have anyway?
 

Shaderic

Well-Known Member
#60
Andrew Joshua Talon said:
Shaderic said:
Heh, I actually like this one more than the last one.
also...
Thing is, I'm not Cloud Strife, and you're not girly enough to be Sephiroth!
Quoted for Truth.
the nerdiness shines through, making him more unique and different from Aizen. Also, it's an awesome line. Fits really well too.
Oh? Why did you like it more than the last one?

And heh: That line just came to me.
No offense to Watashiwa, but I liked you snippet of what was basically the same scene more. his truth zanpakuto was neat, true, but I'm not really all that sure that the scene could unfold like that. I mean, it's possible, but he seems too... gar. That's the only way I can think of putting it. whereas yours somehow fits better.

And is certainly more logical than unsheathing your zanpakuto in a room of arrancar to attack their leader.

Also hoping we don't end up with GOGO as the zanpakuto's name. Mimicry is kind of neat, but the illusion ability fits better with Makoto. On the subject of bankai, I think I'm going to recoment: Nothing. Bankai is having total dominance over the spirit of your sword, as well as manifestation. For those of you who point out that Ichigo pulled it off fast, I'd like to point out that like Makoto isn't Aizen, he certainly isn't Ichigo. Kurosaki grows at a borderline exponential rate, and while Makoto certainly os proceeding in leaps and bounds, I wouldn't put him anywhere near Ichigo yet.

Plus, Ichigo technicaly cheated using Urahara's Bankai in Three Days ? doll thing. And that was with a singular purpose in mind. Makoto has drive, which is good, but he doesn't have shonen hero level focus at this point.
 
#61
@grant: I don't know. It would be up to the writer to determine if Makoto was the right person to find out. ;)

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The clothing could have been worse, Makoto reflected, as he looked at himself in a mirror. One of the most annoying things about shinigami hakama, he'd found, was the lack of pockets. These hakama did. The overcoat looked uncomfortably similar to Aizen's, which he suspected was the point. At least he didn't have to go around bare-chested: The black undershirt he was provided was appreciated... Sort of.

"... I look like a bleached pimp, minus the hat and cane," he muttered. Sun Sun was perfectly composed, staring at him in the mirror. He turned around and raised an eyebrow.

"So, how do I look?"

"Are you seeking a compliment to boost your ego?" Sun Sun asked. Makoto shrugged, sticking his hands in his pockets.

"No, just curious."

"You blend in better," Sun Sun deadpanned. Makoto smiled humorlessly.

"Cute. Very cute. I can totally see why he sent you." He sighed and walked over to the window, looking up at the moon.

"Is that thing real?"

"Does it matter?" Sun Sun asked.

"Yeah, kind of," he said flatly. "Because if it's real, then that's good. If it's not real, it's an illusion and it's a very cruel one."

"Which is more likely?" Sun Sun asked.

"... Okay, nevermind. Forget I asked," Makoto said. He looked over at the Arrancar. "So... Like your job?"

"Liking my job is irrelevant. It is what I do," Sun Sun replied.

"Yeah, but do you like to do it? Is it fulfilling?" Makoto pressed. Sun Sun stared at him.

"Were I not here, I would still be a mindless Hollow, ever consumed by feelings of hunger and emptiness," Sun Sun replied.

"Yes, yes, but is this different than that existence? In a truly meaningful way? Do you have meaning? ... You know?" He tried. "And would you stop staring at me like that? It really bugs me!"

Sun Sun raised both eyebrows. "You are attempting to manipulate me."

"What? No. No, if I was trying to do that, I'd just use my sword," Makoto said. She kept staring at him, and he fidgeted.

"Look, I just... I kind of... I'm not comfortable with silence, okay? I need noise. Everything is dead here... No offense," he said quickly. "So, can't you just make some conversation or something?"

"To relieve your anxiety?" Sun Sun asked. Makoto shrugged.

"Yes... And my curiosity."

"What are you curious about?"

"You. Your motivations. Your history. Likes, dislikes, whatever."

"Why?" Sun Sun asked. Makoto sighed, pacing back and forth.

"Because, again, I'm anxious, and bored, and curious because I... I need to know stuff. I dunno... It's something to talk about?" He tried.

Sun Sun stared at him. Makoto scowled.

"I thought I told you to stop that."

"You are our prisoner. You cannot give orders to me."

"Sure I can, you just don't have to obey them," Makoto said back. Sun Sun actually blinked.

"... You are strange."

"This from the girl with a hole in her... Ah..." Makoto waved his hand around a bit. Sun Sun was silent.

"... Gut? Chest? Shoulder?"

"..."

"... Lower back? Leg? ... Am I getting warm?"

"... Lord Aizen will see you tomorrow. I suggest you sleep," Sun Sun said, turning and walking out the door. It shut behind her, and Makoto sighed, smacking his palm into his forehead.

"'Am I getting warm', yeah... Freaking brilliant."

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Makoto somehow managed to get to sleep on the simple but reasonably comfortable bed. The next morning, he slowly woke up, opening his eyes and blearily blinking.

A large, green blob greeted his vision, and he jumped back, startled.

"GYAHHHH!"

THUD!

"OW! Fuck...!" Makoto groaned on the floor, and looked up to see Sun Sun staring down at him. Her eyebrows were both raised.

"Didn't I tell you to not do that?" Makoto demanded. Sun Sun was unmoved.

"Lord Aizen is expecting us," she stated.

"Okay, but first... Breakfast. You guys eat, right?" Makoto asked, slowly getting off the floor.

"We are capable of eating. It does not mean we need to."

"Okay, well, I kind of, um... Need to, badly," Makoto stated. He grimaced and rubbed his stomach. Sun Sun stared at him.

"You are to meet with Lord Aizen. I do not know if breakfast will be provided," she said. Makoto sighed and pulled on his glasses. He waved his hand out.

"All right then... Shall we?"

Sun Sun turned and lead him out, Makoto following with his hands in his pockets. Down the hallways they went, all of which looked the same. Boredly, he began whistling a tune, apparently loud enough that Sun Sun turned and looked at him. He stopped.

"What?"

"That song... What is it?" Sun Sun asked. Makoto gave her a deadpan look.

"You want to know what song that is? Why?"

"I am curious," she said, and Makoto almost though there was a hint of smugness in her tone. The shinigami blinked, then mentally shrugged. What the hell, so long as he was here, he may as well have some fun, right? Well, as much as he could get away with.

He was going to make it absolutely, positively clear he was not Aizen, and he wasn't going to become a Mini-Me any time soon. So... He began to consider... And then he smiled brightly.

"It's a very old song... And there are some accompanying movements to it you absolutely, positively have to do."

"Why?"

"Because it's tradition. And the song sounds better that way..."

A number of minutes later, even Aizen had to quirk an eyebrow as Sun Sun and Makoto skipped into the Espada meeting room, arm in arm, singing "We're Off to See the Wizard". Makoto singing as cheerfully as he possibly could, and Sun Sun singing in a slightly less dull tone than usual.

"Hey Aizen! What's up?" Makoto asked cheerfully. Aizen smiled, and merely sipped his tea.

"Just meeting for today's breakfast... You missed the arrival of Inoue Orihime last night, but I felt it better for you to rest."

"Aw, just for me? Thanks!" Makoto said sarcastically. He gave an awkward bow to Sun Sun, and then ambled over to the table, sitting down and putting his feet up. Gin Ichimaru just kept smiling, and Tousen watched him with an unreadable expression. Then again, since he was blind, he wasn't sure the former-captain would really care about them.

"So, what's up? Again?" Makoto asked. Aizen sipped his tea as a few other Arrancar brought out some plates of food. Makoto's stomach growled, and he grimaced in embarrassment. He moved his feet and began digging into his food the moment the Arrancar left it, eating quickly.

"So, why isn't Orihime joinin' us? She decline to acquiesce your request?" Makoto asked after chugging down a glass of juice another Arrancar set down. Aizen merely chuckled.

"No, Makoto. Orihime is eating alone in her quarters. You, however, I have things to discuss with you."

"Such as?" Makoto asked, careful to put down his drink when he heard the answer. He was not doing a spittake for anyone's amusement... Though maybe he should give it a try at a later date.

"Why... For your training of course," Aizen said. "With Gin."

"Won't involve a lotta singin' and dancin'," the silver-haired traitor said, with a slightly bigger smile. Makoto smiled weakly back.

"Gee... Can't wait..."

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Ghostface

Lazy Bastard...
#62
Traning... with Gin.

I'm scarred for Makoto for some reason.
 
#63
Ghostface said:
Traning... with Gin.

I'm scarred for Makoto for some reason.
That's because Gin's idea of training is "Don't Get Your Ass Killed for Ten Minutes, and tomorrow, if you're still alive, we go for fifteen!"
 

nick012000

Well-Known Member
#64
Andrew Joshua Talon said:
A number of minutes later, even Aizen had to quirk an eyebrow as Sun Sun and Makoto skipped into the Espada meeting room, arm in arm, singing "We're Off to See the Wizard". Makoto singing as cheerfully as he possibly could, and Sun Sun singing in a slightly less dull tone than usual.
Lulz. Heck, Makoto's diologue in general is pretty lulzy. Good job.
 

Epsilon

Well-Known Member
#65
It'll be cool if Makoto could turn Aizen's Arrancar army into an army of Otakus...
 

Ike

Well-Known Member
#66
Epsilon said:
It'll be cool if Makoto could turn Aizen's Arrancar army into an army of Otakus...
That would just make them infinitely more evil.

Hilarious, sure, but the kind of hilarious that inevitably leads to bad puns and terrible impersonations.
 
#67
Ike said:
Epsilon said:
It'll be cool if Makoto could turn Aizen's Arrancar army into an army of Otakus...
That would just make them infinitely more evil.

Hilarious, sure, but the kind of hilarious that inevitably leads to bad puns and terrible impersonations.
Every con on the planet would be in grave danger.
 
#68
Ike said:
Epsilon said:
It'll be cool if Makoto could turn Aizen's Arrancar army into an army of Otakus...
That would just make them infinitely more evil.

Hilarious, sure, but the kind of hilarious that inevitably leads to bad puns and terrible impersonations.
I just got a horryifying image of Gin and the espada doing the Can Can...... :ph43r:
 
#69
RockLeeTheAwesome said:
Ike said:
Epsilon said:
It'll be cool if Makoto could turn Aizen's Arrancar army into an army of Otakus...
That would just make them infinitely more evil.

Hilarious, sure, but the kind of hilarious that inevitably leads to bad puns and terrible impersonations.
I just got a horryifying image of Gin and the espada doing the Can Can...... :ph43r:
Hey! Welcome back, Rock. I thought you were going to be gone for two weeks.
 
#70
Hewlett Packard fixes fast. We still probably need a new wireless router though. We got the internal speakers back, and it's recognizing the network.
 
#71
RockLeeTheAwesome said:
Hewlett Packard fixes fast. We still probably need a new wireless router though. We got the internal speakers back, and it's recognizing the network.
Nice. Well, what do you think of this current storyline for this idea?
 
#73
Now don't sell yourself short, Rock. Just takes practice. A LOT of practice.

Next bit is taking some time, but it should be up today. In the meantime, feel free to speculate about Aizen's real plans for Makoto, and maybe suggest what Hinamori does in response to learning that her Captain and her would-be Captain are now together.
 

ceyx0991

Well-Known Member
#74
Andrew Joshua Talon said:
maybe suggest what Hinamori does in response to learning that her Captain and her would-be Captain are now together.
Starts dreaming of a threesome?
 

GhostElder

Well-Known Member
#75
Does anyone else sort of get the impression that Aizen might not have been evil if he'd had access to manga, anime, and videogames while reading these snippets??
 
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