Ranma ½ Rosario + Ranma
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As always Richard was gold. The dialog between inner and outer moka was great. The only thing that
didn't feel smooth was the fight scene but that might just be my religious school upbringing
be turned on it's ear.
Reading JC's attacks I did expect some reference to carpentry rather than just basic punch, kick, beam stuff. Glad you didn't go with the holy hand grenade though too obvious.
didn't feel smooth was the fight scene but that might just be my religious school upbringing
be turned on it's ear.
Reading JC's attacks I did expect some reference to carpentry rather than just basic punch, kick, beam stuff. Glad you didn't go with the holy hand grenade though too obvious.
I thought about that, but it doesn't fit the intent of the statement, since the assumption is still that someone doesn't want to get attacked.
What I like best about that usage is that it fits the intent literally.
Well, since the fight focused more on silly, melodramatic action-hero lines and less on actual action, that may be inevitable, but if you have something specific to point out I may be able to remedy it.
You would have seen some carpentry references if it were an extended battle rather than a glorified religious gag. I had a lot of ideas that I ended up discarding because I didn't want the fight to be too long.
Don't be silly.
Jesus IS the <a href='http://1d4chan.org/wiki/Emperor' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Emperor</a>.
Good idea. Altered for second draft.
What I like best about that usage is that it fits the intent literally.
Well, since the fight focused more on silly, melodramatic action-hero lines and less on actual action, that may be inevitable, but if you have something specific to point out I may be able to remedy it.
You would have seen some carpentry references if it were an extended battle rather than a glorified religious gag. I had a lot of ideas that I ended up discarding because I didn't want the fight to be too long.
Don't be silly.
Jesus IS the <a href='http://1d4chan.org/wiki/Emperor' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Emperor</a>.
Good idea. Altered for second draft.
Well, I have to admit that the stone line was probably the best I could do. Jesus quote don't lend themselves to ironic fist fights.
SEE? SEE WHAT DAMAGE YOUR SPOILERS HAVE WROUGHT?
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No.
For the... (checks ff.net PM box) EIGHTH time, I'm not going to just copy Richard's LFG gags for this story (except in his first appearance, obviously). It's hard enough to not base every damn scene around him without having to literally bend the rest of story to accommodate the proper references.
SEE? SEE WHAT DAMAGE YOUR SPOILERS HAVE WROUGHT?
WALLOW IN REGRET!
No.
For the... (checks ff.net PM box) EIGHTH time, I'm not going to just copy Richard's LFG gags for this story (except in his first appearance, obviously). It's hard enough to not base every damn scene around him without having to literally bend the rest of story to accommodate the proper references.
Some old dude who died a long time ago. And then he came back. I think. He's definitely dead now, though. Probably.
Some guys wrote a book about him, but it was pretty weird.
That doesn't mesh at all with what I know of the Bible's stories (obviously Rome didn't accept him as their ruler, and it's pretty clear he didn't "order" them executed) but I can't claim any expertise on the subject.
Besides, that kind of what rulers did back in the day. And not all of them gave a conquered people a choice, if you know what I mean. At worst, it makes Jesus a normal king.
Some guys wrote a book about him, but it was pretty weird.
That doesn't mesh at all with what I know of the Bible's stories (obviously Rome didn't accept him as their ruler, and it's pretty clear he didn't "order" them executed) but I can't claim any expertise on the subject.
Besides, that kind of what rulers did back in the day. And not all of them gave a conquered people a choice, if you know what I mean. At worst, it makes Jesus a normal king.