knight504 said:
- Kushina's called a "former kunoichi from the Land of Eddies" which makes it sounds like she was already a ninja.
Also, the revelation that the Uchiha possess the Sage's spiritual energy and chakra fits with how Orochimaru got screwed over when he tried to transplant his soul.
- It mentions that the Sharingan's power is what reminds Kurama of Madara. I wonder if the sinister chakra he referred to was actually within Sasuke's eyes...
- The Great Toad Sage's is able to see the future in visions because of his enormous amounts of chakra. And I'm reminded that one of his visions (which are 100% accurate) was that Naruto would fight a young man with powerful eyes. So Naruto vs Sasuke should still be on the horizon.
Also, the young man might well be Obito. Its been mentioned before that from the perspective of the GTS, Obito would be young. Heck, even Madara would be young, if Fukasaku is 800 and the GTS is probably a lot older.
- Orochimaru wasn't interested in a Uchiha body as his dream vessel until Itachi kicked his ass. Interesting. I thought he'd already decided and tried it with Itachi.
- Danzo surfaces after Naruto returns. What was he doing before?
Though thats probably a way to try and justify Danzo not even being a candidate for Hokageship after Sarutobi died and so on. I guess you could invent a reason. Maybe he was studying how to perform Izanagi or somesuch.
- Yugito became a jinchuuriki at age two. Despite being a target of disdain by training hard through sheer will Yugito gained mastery over her Tailed Beast.
- Fukasaku's over eight hundred years old.
- The Uchiha are described as having “enormous chakra†which is slightly different.
-Toads are pretty damn numerous and have various species. I wonder how it is for the slugs and snakes.
-For the Kamui’s page, “the Mangekyou Sharingan can cause blindness if used continuously†which supports the idea that you can avoid it by not overdoing it. Silly Sasuke.
Obito is almost certainly protected from that blindness by Senju DNA. As for Kakashi, its possible he is actually going blind. Then again its also possible that the blindness only affects Uchiha, and that Kakashi is ironically safe due to being a non-Uchiha.
- Yamato’s waterfall jutsu creates water from nothing; I thought he used an underground river.
knight504 said:
His improvement was alright, just poorly portrayed and not as good as people wanted. Rather than being shown how much Naruto progressed, were shown that he hadn't progressed enough e.g. he couldn't get the bells of Kakashi, couldn't break Itachi's genjutsu, can't use the Rasengan one-handed etc. Not helped by him being overshadowed by Sakura and Sasuke despite being the main character and not showing anything new other than an unnecessary variation of the Rasengan. Whilst not perfect, One Piece was better in showing the progress of all the main characters after a time skip.
- The lack of utterly obvious improvements such as new techniques, one handed rasengans and such.
- The fact he keeps getting his ass handed to him repeatedly. Yes, there are reasons (Itachi for example is insanely good at genjutsu), but Naruto constantly failing at things just makes him look bad.
- The way Sasuke dominates their meeting so utterly, both physically and then entering Narutos mind to suppress Kurama. Again, if you look at everything analytically, Sasukes feats are not truly immense there, but it just makes Naruto look bad and Sasuke and Sasukes growth look massive in comparison.
- The revelation of clone training, and the speed at which Naruto later improves with FRS, SM and later KCM/BM.
- The constant reliance on Kurama, despite the fact that everyone makes it clear how dangerous it is makes it look like thats the only thing Naruto has.
How would it have worked better?
I would have had Naruto capable of using rasengans one handed now. I would also have had Naruto clearly win a couple of battles, even if I had to invent new opponents. I would have had Naruto well on the way to mastering wind (and have him know couple new techniques) (and avoid the whole clone learning thing), and possibly well on his way to studying SM aswell.
I might also have tried to arrange things so that he came off looking more equal to Sasuke in their first meeting.
I might also have had him study fuuinjutsu. Thats a bit debatable. Not sure its really Narutos style. On the other hand, there are several connections written later (Uzumaki, Minato, Jiraiya himself, etc) that would justify Naruto learning sealing.