Bleach Veiled Moon Chapter 4 WIP

Muramasa

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Garahs said:
This is just my theory, but I suspect the sekirei plan's purpose is to introduce the sekirei to the world and neatly control the fights for dominance that happened the last time. Figured I'd leave that here.
The Jinki would have solved that problem real quick. Just place limiters to the point the Sekirei are no stronger than ordinary humans.
 

nick012000

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Hehehe. Makes me wonder how the Bleach girls will react when they find out about it. Go, Orihime, go! You've still got a chance to join Ichigo's harem! :p

Also, the latest Bleach chapter makes me wonder if Tsukishima's going to turn up. He'd be an absolute nightmare for any Ashakibi. Just one stab on a Sekirei and suddenly she no longer even remembers you, because she was his all along.
 

Seed00

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nick012000 said:
Hehehe. Makes me wonder how the Bleach girls will react when they find out about it. Go, Orihime, go! You've still got a chance to join Ichigo's harem! :p

Also, the latest Bleach chapter makes me wonder if Tsukishima's going to turn up. He'd be an absolute nightmare for any Ashakibi. Just one stab on a Sekirei and suddenly she no longer even remembers you, because she was his all along.
Which is probbaly why Wheeljack will ignore that part. However, the sekirei are telepathically (though Minor) linked to their ashikabi. There's still that link that Tsukishima wouldn't be able to affect.

I doubt Ichigo would be content (or accepting) of putting Orihime in his harem. Tatsuki would probably join just to make sure Ichigo doesn't hurt Orihime's feelings, and Chizuru would want to follow her beloved Orihime.

Yoruichi would just watch from the sidelines and laugh at everything going on.
 

nick012000

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Seed00 said:
nick012000 said:
Hehehe. Makes me wonder how the Bleach girls will react when they find out about it. Go, Orihime, go! You've still got a chance to join Ichigo's harem!? :p

Also, the latest Bleach chapter makes me wonder if Tsukishima's going to turn up. He'd be an absolute nightmare for any Ashakibi. Just one stab on a Sekirei and suddenly she no longer even remembers you, because she was his all along.
Which is probbaly why Wheeljack will ignore that part. However, the sekirei are telepathically (though Minor) linked to their ashikabi. There's still that link that Tsukishima wouldn't be able to affect.
Maybe, but he could put himself into their history in such a fashion that they never formed that link in the first place.

I doubt Ichigo would be content (or accepting) of putting Orihime in his harem. Tatsuki would probably join just to make sure Ichigo doesn't hurt Orihime's feelings, and Chizuru would want to follow her beloved Orihime.

Yoruichi would just watch from the sidelines and laugh at everything going on.
I don't think Chizuru would have a chance; didn't she say that she was going to go to some university in the graduation sequence a few chapters ago? I doubt Tatsuki would join Ichigo's harem, either; she'd just encourage Orihime to go for it. Ichigo is one of her oldest friends, after all; she trusts him.

Yoruichi would almost definitely be laughing at the whole situation, though. :lol:
 

Coelacanth

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The new chapter is up on ff.net and it looks like it's been edited well. Great job guys.
 
nick012000 said:
Seed00 said:
nick012000 said:
Hehehe. Makes me wonder how the Bleach girls will react when they find out about it. Go, Orihime, go! You've still got a chance to join Ichigo's harem!á :p

Also, the latest Bleach chapter makes me wonder if Tsukishima's going to turn up. He'd be an absolute nightmare for any Ashakibi. Just one stab on a Sekirei and suddenly she no longer even remembers you, because she was his all along.
Which is probbaly why Wheeljack will ignore that part. However, the sekirei are telepathically (though Minor) linked to their ashikabi. There's still that link that Tsukishima wouldn't be able to affect.
Maybe, but he could put himself into their history in such a fashion that they never formed that link in the first place.
True.
Though his Fullbring doesn't seem to effect the individual's emotions. Orihime's still in love with Ichigo, she just can't remember that fact at present.

Unless those were protected by her powers of Rejection.
 

Muramasa

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I think I caught a small (very technical) error.

Nanaha was laid down first in the room and Ikki was brought in later. The door is placed perpendicular to the two futons that were brought out. It would make sense for Ikki's futon to be placed closer to the door otherwise you'd have to carry her body around Nanaha (or over her if the room is smaller). Ikki tripped on Nanaha indicating her bed was in the back of the room.
 

Wheeljack

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Muramasa said:
I think I caught a small (very technical) error.

Nanaha was laid down first in the room and Ikki was brought in later.? The door is placed perpendicular to the two futons that were brought out.? It would make sense for Ikki's futon to be placed closer to the door otherwise you'd have to carry her body around Nanaha (or over her if the room is smaller).? Ikki tripped on Nanaha indicating her bed was in the back of the room.
Ack...:sweat:

Thinking about that, you are correct. We had talked about Ikki's winging being accidental once we agreed that she would be one of Ichigo's sekirei (when we were throwing out ideas, Ikki originally came with the idea that she'd jump him, reacting to him based on sight). When we decided on how it would be the idea of her stumbling and Ichigo catching her, but we needed Nanaha as an obsticle.

The idea of how they'd be placed in order they were brought in actually skipped my mind when I outlined it. :wacko:
 

Muramasa

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Well, it's a very obscure detail so that's understandable. :sweat:


Damn... I feel bad for pointing that out now. -_-
 

Ghostface

Lazy Bastard...
Musical futons were played in-between scenes. That's my excuse and I'm sticking with it.
 

Ghostface

Lazy Bastard...
Guess what time it is?

It's OMAKE TIME~!

Enjoy...

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"Oh? Thank you Tessai," Isshin said in surprise as Tessai took his coat.

Tessai grunted in acknowledgement and raised an arm for the direction that Isshin should go in.

Nodding, Isshin walked to the room where Urahara and no doubt Yoruichi would be at. Coming to and sliding the door open he peered his head in and saw both sitting at his short table waiting for him.

"Hoh, you've finally arrived, Kurosaki-kun. Yoruichi-san and I have been waiting for some time."

Indeed it seemed they had, as both Urahara and Yoruichi, in her human form and wearing her black jumpsuit sans jacket were treating themselves to tea and several miscellaneous sweets. "Sorry, sorry," Isshin mock grumbled as he made his way to the table and sat down, crossing his legs before settling.

"Would you like to try the cookies?" Urahara asked. "Tessai really outdid himself this time."

"Don't mind if I do," Isshin replied as he took the offered snack. "So I hear my boy brought Uzume-chan here," Isshin started off, nibbling on the treat.

Urahara let out a small whistle at the honorific, "Oh, Uzume-'chan'? Like her that much already?"

"What's not to like?" he grinned. "She's easy on the eyes, made my boy finally find his hormones, and has him wrapped around her little finger even if he's too slow to realize it! She's everything I could want in a daughter-in-law!"

Urahara chucked, "Sounds a lot like his father if you ask me."

"Please!" Isshin snorted. "I knew I was whipped with Masaki. I just acted that was because she found it funny."

Yoruichi looked at him deadpan. "I seem to recall one night of you bawling your eyes out at the front door because she kicked you outta the house for...what was that again...," she asked and turned her head around and looked up to the ceiling with a finger on her chin.

"It was a joke, Yoruichi! A joke!" Isshin retorted. "You know how she was with her crazy sense of humor!"

-SNAP-

Both looked at Urahara who had snapped his fan open and began to lightly fan himself and cover his face at the same time, hiding all but his amused eyes. "Hoh~? I remember that night, you ended up crawling all the way over here-"

"HAHAHAHAHA!" Isshin laughed, eyes roving distractedly. "That's my Masaki! Always a kidder! It's why I love her!"

"So you say, Kurosaki-kun. So you say," Urahara trailed off for a moment before he looked into Isshin's eyes. "Still, at least Masaki was fully human."

Isshin grunted as he took another cookie. "So you noticed that too, eh," he asked before taking a bite, the crunch loud enough to hear.

"Come now, Kurosaki-kun, surely you give us more credit than that."

"Well considering it's my boy we're talking about here, I feared him with a woman could've distracted you too much," Isshin answered with a simple shrug. "So what do you make of her?"

"While she's definitely not human, she not altogether alien, from what I could tell," Yoruichi mentioned, a hand on her chin and her eyes unfocused as she was lost in thought. "I could sense the bond he mentioned, along with minute traces of Ichigo's reiatsu in her own aura. It's odd, but I could swear I've felt something similar before."

"Ichigo's reiatsu?" Isshin asked.

"Don't play coy," Yoruichi looked at him, not quite glaring yet. "I know you've at least felt that one small shard he still has left. Extremely weak, so faint you'd need to concentrate hard for several minutes just to get a bead on it." 'Still... I don't know if I'm imagining things but it felt almost... larger when I saw him earlier than when I saw him last,' She thought to herself.

"That's the point," Isshin retorted. "How is it that she has any bit of Ichigo's reiatsu in her in the first place? That shard is so damn small, if it did leave him, he should be back to square one."

"Your son did mention that she was bonded to him, and that there were others like her finding other humans, presumably non-spiritually aware, and bonding to them as well. Apparently this bond helps them to use their capabilities to their furthest extent. Whether or not they absorb their partner's strength is a mystery, unless we manage to find one and examine them."

"Let's put that aside for the moment," Isshin grunted as he turned back to Urahara. "How your little project coming along?"

A sigh greeted him as Urahara reached up to palm his cap and tip it a bit lower as he brought his own head down slightly. "Well, good news is there was some progress. Kuchiki-san's reiatsu was absorbed easily, however there are still some issues on how much it will absorb until it cuts itself off."

"What happened?"

"The blade began to absorb too quickly and too much, almost different to when I initially allowed it to absorb mine." He put a hand under his chin and looked slightly upwards and began mumbling to himself. "It could be related to wavelength, as if knowing the contributors and their strength would be different, hmm..."

"Is Rukia-chan all right?" Isshin asked.

"She looked like hell when she saw the boy off," Yoruichi remarked.

Urahara had the grace to wince under his hat at Yoruichi's comment. "Thankfully, she'll make a full recovery, and if what I think happened it shouldn't take too long to correct, however..." he trailed off as he looked to the side in thought.

"However what?" Isshin pressed.

His eyes flickered to Isshin, serious. "Are you certain you still want to pursue this, Kurosaki-san? Your son has his chance at a normal life. Do you really want to drag him back into Soul Society politics when he has this chance in front of him?"

"I want the option there for him, should he wish for it," Isshin answered. "Rest assured, if he wants nothing more than a life of peace he's earned that for three lifetimes. But I know what my son is. And should such a need for his gifts arise again..."

"True enough. Though, for once Soul Society's politics are in his favor. I had visited a month ago with my progress report to the Commander-General, and although he was persistent in moving our experiment along, he was adamant that no action be taken without his consent."

Yoruichi snorted with a rueful smile. "Even with that, its easy to tell that he's changed a bit. Ichigo is one special kid, Isshin."

"I know he is," Isshin smiled. "He's my son after all."

After a moment Urahara continued. "Still, I will admit to disappointment. I had hoped to be finished in time for his graduation. Kuchiki-san was most insistent on it and not having it ready galls me more than I care to admit."

"Kisuke, I told you already. Don't beat yourself over it, you had your hands full with the Asagiri Incident".

"It took me only a week and a half to help solve that", he mentioned.

"The Commander-General had you working along with Kurotsuchi, and I don't doubt that it was also finished that quickly because Mayuri wanted you out. Not to mention the reports you had to do", Yoruichi pointed out.

Isshin chucked a bit, "Never would have thought you would do anything for the Soul Society again after all you went through."

"Oh you know me," Urahara smiled at Isshin. "I would work with the devil himself if the price was right."

"True enough." Isshin nodded. "Still, this might be for the best. With my new daughter in the picture, there's no need for her to get entangled with the affairs of Soul Society. Besides, if something goes down that doesn't affect the balance of life and death here, the old man might just deny us the use of that sword." After a moment he sighed, standing up and stretching his back slightly. and grinned "Whelp, I think it's about time for me to get going home."

Urahara looked up from beneath the brim of his hat. "Hoh? Why so soon, Kurosaki-san? You only just got here."

Isshin turned to him, his grin even bigger. "I gotta go find out what kind of trap the boy laid out for me." He then laughed. "Though I can't believe he actually told me about it before hand! I better go find out before its too late and it somehow trips the girls up."

"Kurosaki-kun, I'm afraid its already much, much too late to worry about that," Urahara ominously replied, his eyes now being hid by the brim of his cap as he tilted his head down. Though he too couldn't see, it wasn't hard to miss the confusion on his friend's face as he stood there with his hand in the grip slot.

"Something else we need to talk about, Kisuke?" Isshin replied confused.

"It seems you've been a naughty boy, Kurosaki-san," Urahara said as he picked up his closed hand fan. "A very, very naughty boy," he finished before snapping the fan open and raised his other hand palm up slowly.

Isshin blinked in confusion at Kisuke's words, "I don't get-"

"Bakudo #63, Sajou Sabaku," he nearly whispered and Isshin's eyes snapped wide open as Urahara's hand snapped shut.

"KISU-UGH!!" Isshin got out as a thick, almost chain shaped glowing golden rope raced forward to entwine Isshin tight, pinning his arms to his body and causing him to teeter over dangerously, causing Isshin to hop around several times throwing his upper body in the opposite direction to keep from falling over several times.

"KI-KISUKE! WHAT THE HELL, MAN? YORUICHI!" he suddenly shouted as the Goddess of Flash suddenly appeared behind him from where she was sitting just an instant before. "YORUI-EAAGHHH!!!!" he screamed as she grabbed his cheeks and started pulling. "YOUUIIIEEeeeEEEE! WWHAAAARRRROOOOoooIIIINNGAAAAAAAGGHHHHHHHHH!" he screeched as she tightened further.

Giving him a brilliant smile her words were just the opposite of just how happy she appeared. "You. Have. Been. A. Baaaaaaaaaaaaa~d boy, Isshin. Tessai! Ururu! Jinta!"

"HA!" a loud grunt came as the shouji door suddenly slid open with a loud bang and there stood Tessai center with Ururu to his left looking embarrassed while carrying some sort of strange contraption while Jinta stood on his right carrying the same thing with an evil grin on his face.

"Finally!" Jinta shouted. "I've been waiting all day to use this!"

"KI-KISUKE!?" Isshin shouted as best he could when Yoruichi released his cheeks. About to shout again he gave a surprised yelp as Tessai lifted him up on his shoulders as if he were a live battering ram. "KISUKE!"

"Oh, Kurosaki-kun, Kurosaki-kun," Urahara said already at the front of the door. Tessai turned so Isshin would be facing him and Isshin screamed at his head nearly hitting a few things as he whirled around.

Seeing Kisuke in front of him, he belted out, "Kisuke, what the hell is this?!"

"Hoh? You don't know? Quite simply put, an eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth."

"What!?" Isshin squawked.

Urahara leaned and cupped his face with his open fan as if to whisper a secret. "That was very, very mean of you Kurosaki-kun... to play and twist Uzume-san and Kurosaki-san's feelings like that."

"Oh dad!?"

Isshin's already widened eyes opened further.

"So imagine my shock at his story when he told me," Urahara said before smiling, "and imagine his smile as I told him that I have new hollow fighting equipment that needs testing! All I needed was a live guinea pig and Kurosaki-kun gave me a wonderful one."

"Enjoy tonight," Ichigo said before turning forward and walking through the turnstile with Uzume following a second later.

"Ki-Kisuke," Isshin whispered, sweat poring from his forehead.

"Don't worry, you should come out fine. You may walk funny for a few days but I'd say that's a fair trade of pain," Urahara said while turning around, his haori fluttering as he did so.

"Kisukeeeee", Isshin whined as Tessai started forward as he followed Urahara.

"Complaints," Urahara said turning slightly, snapping the fan shut with an audible snap and lowered his voice, "are useless."

Isshin's cries went unheard of as a grinning Yoruichi opened and hopped down into his secret training grounds while the others quickly followed after her.
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Betcha thought we forgot Isshin didn't ya?

Edit: few things, this Omake is cannon to the story, but just didn't fit in the general flow of the story. This it the first of hopefully more Omakes for this story, be they cannon or non-cannon from us. Heck I even have a few What If? scenarios for Ichigo's sekirei thought out.

Also, we dooooo have the prologue for ch. 5 almost done. Would you like a preview? We accept votes of yay or nay, and bribes of $$$ and cat girls. B)
 

NeoSeether

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Add one supporter for: 'Yea' on the preview. Keep it ambiguous if possible, just to rile up the readers.

On recent developments: Sorry, Isshin (not!); but you really had that coming.

Surprised that Karin isn't nearby to take pictures (or even participate in the 'testing'), but leaving Yuzu alone for the immediate future ain't a good idea, on consideration.

And so, that particular option was always in the works, but never got immediate priority, likely due to Ginjo Kugou and Xcution never appearing on the scene.

OTOH, given an appropriate impetus (namely, multiple life-or-death situations where Ichigo is at the forefront, and no one between him and a sufficiently lethal Sekirei...)

Well, he's got multiple options available, now. He just doesn't know of them just yet. And regardless, he must endure. Regardless of pain, or cost.

<s>Addendum: I know the manga explicitly states that that sword absorbed the 'reiatsu' (spiritual pressure) of the various captains/lieutenants/other shinigami, but shouldn't the more accurate/appropriate term actually be 'reiryoku' (spiritual power/energy)?</s>

Never mind, the wiki gave a partial explanation, even if I'm not entirely convinced.
 

Seed00

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Isshin's comeuppance? Hell yeah. and a Yea for the preview. I still belive someone will have to hand Ichigo the aspirin.
 

DhampyrX2

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I vote yes for a preview. Also I get the feeling that if Ichigo feels he's up against the wall with his Sekirei he might pull Zangetsu or Hichigo without whatever Urahara and Rukia have cooked up.

Of course, that might upset the midget. After all it would be just like the Strawberry-head to go and get his powers back on his own after all the trouble she went through to help him. And for some harem of strange woman, no less. Then again, Ichigo's life would be boring without at least one woman that's in love with him upset at his behavior in some way.
 

Ghostface

Lazy Bastard...
And now for something different...


Veiled Moon Bios:
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Sekirei #19
Ikki
"The Idiot Genki Heroine"
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Japanese Name :á ??
Gender:á á á á á á á áá Female
Voiced by (Per authors wishes, as none listed for official): Ai Nonaka (Japanese), Kristi Bingham (English)
Ashikabi:á á á á á á á á á Ichigo Kurosaki
Norito:á á á á á á á áá N/A
B:á á á á á á á á á á á á 91
W:á á á á á á á á á á á á 58
H:á á á á á á á á á á á á 89
Height:á á á á á á á áá 5'3"
Weight:á á á á á á á áá 44kg
Hobbies:á á á á á á á á Training, watching TV
Favorite food:á á á á á Sashimi
Most valuable:á Ichigo Kurosaki, Nanaha
Hates the most:áá Karasuba, Betrayal

"Underestimate my strength, huh?á You're dumber than you look!"


Sekirei Number Nineteen: Ikki, is the second member of Ichigo's developing Sekirei harem.á

When she awoke, she quickly befriended her fellow Sekirei Nanaha and Narashino.á They shared the same tuner and as they adjusted to human cultures and norms Ikki quickly declared herself the elder sister of the trio and made an oath to become as strong as she could become in order to be able to protect her little sisters.

When they were eventually released she made a vow to ensure that she and her sisters would all be winged by the same Ashikabi.á A few months after their release however Narashino reacted to and was winged by Tsudanuma Osamu, and the sisterly trio was made a duo.á Though happy for her sister Sekirei Ikki was emotionally shaken by this event, seeing it as a failure of herself and her words.á To help soothe herself, she outwardly called it a betrayal of their bonds, despite the fact she doesn't mean it.á Nanaha however sees right through it for what it is and lets her believe it, knowing its only to soothe her.á As such Ikki is determined to ensure that she and her sister Nanaha are eventually winged by the same Ashikabi.

Ikki's style of speech seem to indicate that she is arrogant, a little devil-may-care and very cocksure of herself.á She is also prone to inserting her foot into her mouth to a point where Nanaha has to violently put her in line.á Ikki has a lot of pride in her strength, to the point of overconfidence at times.áá Although she is dense, Ikki is adept at learning from her mistakes in a fight and can fix them before or during the next encounter.

Ikki lacks experience in social situations, leading her to speak and act on her mind without inhibition often. This lack of social grace leads many people, even Nanaha sometimes, to believe her to be less considerate than she truly is.á She can also be lackadaisical at times, much to her sister's exasperation.á However Ikki is quite emotional, more often than not due to following her heart rather than her head.

Still, she is loving and loyal to those she cares for, and is willing to lay down her life for those she loves if necessary.á Ikki never uses trickery and fights fairly with all her power, never holding back, all the while expecting her opponents to follow the same conduct.á She fights with two kodachi blades, and has a slight wind affinity.á The blades serve as a medium to bring out her elemental abilities.á


Words From Wheeljack:

Our third Sekirei, this one from Ghost, to have been proposed to be one of Ichigo's Sekirei. She managed to last long enough to make the cut - but just barely. Her current incarnation is quite different from what we had initially thought she would be. If not for Ghostface's idea later on for Nanaha, and a sort of odd ball duo to form between the two she may have fallen through the cracks.

She was always to be Ichigo's second Sekirei to be winged, but the manner of which is a bit different, but the idea was altered, split and reused for her scene on the roof in chapter 5 and later on with Karasuba (though the fight with Karasuba came later).
We'll be doing these after every winging for Ichigo to better flesh out these girls. And as for the N/A in her norito, that will be gone once revealed. Enjoy...
 

Muramasa

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Words From Wheeljack:

Our third Sekirei, this one from Ghost, to have been proposed to be one of Ichigo's Sekirei. She managed to last long enough to make the cut - but just barely. Her current incarnation is quite different from what we had initially thought she would be. If not for Ghostface's idea later on for Nanaha, and a sort of odd ball duo to form between the two she may have fallen through the cracks.

She was always to be Ichigo's second Sekirei to be winged, but the manner of which is a bit different, but the idea was altered, split and reused for her scene on the roof in chapter 5 and later on with Karasuba (though the fight with Karasuba came later).
Ikki already looks like a fun character. Looking forward to seeing more of her in the next chapters.
 

Ghostface

Lazy Bastard...
<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7488090/1/Veiled_Moon_Omakes' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>I'ma just gonna plop this here...</a>

Also got a poll on my profile for possible sekirei for Ichigo to wing. I already know his final party, and heck some are in the poll. But for those who aren't I might be influence to do a What-If scenario for them in the future depending on how they place in the poll.
 

Wheeljack

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Ghostface said:
<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7488090/1/Veiled_Moon_Omakes' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>I'ma just gonna plop this here...</a>

Also got a poll on my profile for possible sekirei for Ichigo to wing.? I already know his final party, and heck some are in the poll.? But for those who aren't I might be influence to do a What-If scenario for them in the future depending on how they place in the poll.
I can no haz Benitsubasa?

Or Mitsuha?
 

DhampyrX2

Well-Known Member
Wheeljack said:
Ghostface said:
<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7488090/1/Veiled_Moon_Omakes' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>I'ma just gonna plop this here...</a>

Also got a poll on my profile for possible sekirei for Ichigo to wing.á I already know his final party, and heck some are in the poll.á But for those who aren't I might be influence to do a What-If scenario for them in the future depending on how they place in the poll.
I can no haz Benitsubasa?

Or Mitsuha?
You're welcome to Sakura MkII.
 

Ghostface

Lazy Bastard...
Wheeljack said:
I can no haz Benitsubasa?

Or Mitsuha?
You can do that yourself, I told you so.

Or is she next? :ph43r:

I C WHAT U DID THAR U BASTARD.
 
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