ringlhach said:
You might want to look at the formatting for the mission orders section- the italicization (sp?) is kinda weird, and there's a couple extraneous formatting brackets- it turns off after AMAZING, and you see a end-italics bracket down near the end of the scene.
And on a side note, if I've got my Nanoha-verse rankings correct then Ensign Shirou Yagami is around a rank A-AAA. Possibly a AA-Mage.
I'll see if I can't bust out another one soon enough.