Bleach You as a Shinigami

warai_kitsune

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#26
Personally, I'd choose to be a Quincy over Shinigami (though I'd refuse to wear a cape of any sort, and avoid white as much as possible). Though if it has to be a Shinigami...

Name: Matsuhara Kyoya
Gender: Male
Division and Rank: 2nd division, 9th seat (he wanted to join the 8th division, but due to the particulars and peculiarities of his fighting style, Soi Fon had him drafted.
Zanpakuto: Kyoutsubasa (Echo Wing). Kyoya's sword doesn't look like a normal zanpakuto, even when sealed. Rather than a katana, his sword is a jian, the chinese-style straight sword with relatively sedate mountings and a black tassel attached to the ring-shaped pommel.
Shikai: With the command of "warau," (Laugh), he sheathes his sword and presses it as hard as he can between his hands, one on the pommel, the other on the tip of the scabbard. It splits, and reforms into a 7-foot longbow (not shaped anything like a normal bow; more decorative than anything else). He fires arrows formed using kidou; usually binding or paralysis. He can fire a personally-developed kidou known as Kyouha (echo shot) without a chant; it typically packs about the same amount of power as a regular sword blow.
Bankai: Kyoya hasn't achieved Bankai, and has no intention of even trying to do so. However, for the sake of argument, I'm going to make one up.

Mokuda Kyoutsubasa (Silent Echo Wing)

His bankai isn't large in the typical sense. Rather, it's long; his reiatsu concentrates itself into a single invisible cylindrical line, less than three centimeters thick and nearly five kilometers long; a conduit and binding kidou in one. He has three different ways to use it at that point. His first option is simply to latch the line onto a target that far away; once attached, it's all but impossible to evade the shot conducted through it. Second option is to simply send the cable through as many targets as he can bend it to fit, then fire a single arrow through all of his stunned targets. His third, and most dangerous use is to attach the line to an opponent, then bend and twist it again and again until it goes through them typically hundreds of times. Not only does it enhance the binding effect dramatically, it means that when he fires a VERY highly charged arrow, the single shot will get bounced around and through the target several hundred times.

I would like to repeat, he CANNOT use bankai. But if he could, that's what it would be.

Appearance: Tall and lanky for the most part; his skin is usually darkly tanned and a little on the rough side, particularly his hands. His face is long and sharply featured; not good-looking per se, but memorable. He wears his brown hair shaggy; either as a mop on his head or tied back in a ponytail that resembles the back-end of a squirrel (depending on how successfully his division-mates have managed to harangue him into getting a haircut). He's also usually stubbly; he shaves weekly, and generally needs to have done so quite a bit more often than that. Lastly, he usually disdains his uniform. He prefers to wear a gray kimono. Even on duty, he'll usually just throw on the top of his uniform over it.
Personality: Not quite lazy...more apathetic. He's old enough to have seen the Quincies, and he was always fascinated by them. More than that, he admired their professionalism in a fight (he secretly wonders why no one has ever had an archery-based zanpakuto before him). He joined the Gotei 13 simply because he hated hollows, and discovered that there was a certain degree of...well, satisfaction in killing them. He wanted to join the 8th division; he respected Kyorauk-taicho, and more importantly, realized that he'd have a relatively easy time of it. Instead, he ended up in the 5th division for a while (5th tended to specialize in the kidou-users, and he DID use that as his main fighting style) until one of Soi Fon's subordinates noticed his habits of killing hollows long before they were close enough to be dangerous was...well, useful. She agreed to have him transferred (he's still plotting to kill the subordinate in question for putting him under the command of the workaholic), and keeps him around mainly for support and rescue missions, as well as the occaissional judicious assassination. Well, that and he's one of the few shinigami under her command who doesn't audibly complain about the paperwork.
Fighting Method: As you might expect, Kyoya's zanjutsu is all but non-existent. He was good enough in the academy to graduate, though his skills lay more in kidou than swordwork. After his transfer into the 2nd, he started learning Hakuda, finding that being able to knock a hollow out of the way long enough to shoot it was simpler than constantly re-transforming his zanpakuto from one form to the other. He's much better at that than sword work.
His biggest areas of skill are kidou and shunpo; he's no master, but he can use it with incredible precision, and use it repeatedly. Despite his kidou focus, he never bothered to learn too many; he focuses largely on refining the binding and killing kidou forms of Kyoutsubasa's kyouha.
 
#27
I was bouncing around the net today when I happened upon this little gem of a site called Weapon Masters and seeing as it was full of sharp and shiny things I had a look and found THIS which is exactly what me as a shinigami would have for a shinkai.
 

warai_kitsune

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#28
sanotova said:
I was bouncing around the net today when I happened upon this little gem of a site called Weapon Masters and seeing as it was full of sharp and shiny things I had a look and found THIS which is exactly what me as a shinigami would have for a shinkai.
Not bad, but if you want something REALLY over the top, I'd recommend this.



This is literally the biggest, longest sword in japan. I doubt it ever saw the battlefield, but still. For pure intimidation, I don't think ANYTHING could beat this monster.

For all the info, and to prove that it IS a sword and not just a random chunk of metal, here's the link.

Japantrip
 

ssaijin3

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#29
Figured I throw my little self in the mix:

Name: Yaru Ito
Gender: Male
Division and Rank: 11nd division, 20th seat
Zanpakuto: Itamiaikouka (Lit. Painlover).female
Shikai: With the command of "Fuzei chishio!" (Taste blood!), his sword changes into a 16" long blade with 3 oblong holes in the blade itself, with a "W" shaped guard. The center part of the guard is of coursed joined with the main blade and the outer part of the guard composed of blades on both sides. The handle is definately not the normal handle of a shinigami. The handle is basically an opened fanged skull with a total of 6 spikes; 3 spikes jutting out from the top of the skull as well as one near the handle, and a spike sticking out from the chin bone and a long tongue with a spike on the tip sticking out of the mouth. (The better for Itamiaikouka to taste blood)Overall the sword's length is 26" from tip to handle here is a picture of the sword Itamiaikouka in Shikai form
Bankai: Yaru hasn't achieved Bankai, and knows that he has no chance in hell of even trying to do so yet. However, for the sake of argument, I'm going to make one up.

Teiku Jinsei ken Reikon (Take Life and Soul)

His bankai isn't large in the typical sense. Rather, it's long; overall length is 57", and the blade length is 37". The beginning of the blade is normal albiet double sided until about anywhere from 6" to 12" away from the tip on one side there is an area on one side that is serrated only 3 - 6" long (the better to tear flesh). after about 12-18" there is a groove on the face of the blade (for blood) which is about 12-14" inches long. This form of Yaru's zanpakuto doesn't have a guard per say just a skull with a sort of helmet with lightning bolts on either side then the grip/handle with a dragon's head on the pommel.Here's a picture of it [/URL]Itamiakako in Bankai form

I would like to repeat, he CANNOT use bankai. But if he could, that's what it would be.

Appearance: About average height and kind of stocky for the most part 5'8" 200lbs (mostly muscle); his skin is usually darkly tanned and a little on the rough side, particularly his hands. His face is kinda roundish with the only odd features is eyes; his left eye is a lazy eye that appears to be looking towards his left side ; not good-looking per se, but memorable. He wears his brown hair short. He's also usually stubbly; he shaves weekly, and generally needs to have done so quite a bit more often than that. Lastly, he can't be bothered about his uniform. He prefers to wear a red kimono. Even on duty, he'll usually just throw it on regardless.

Personality: Not what you can classify easily he's lazy, but also hard working. Yaru's the type to get up very early in the morning do his work then go back to sleep or just laze about until something comes up then he takes care of it right away. He joined the Gotei 13 because he hates hollows, and discovered that there was a certain degree of... enjoyment in killing them. In regards to anything else he pretty much keeps his cool until he gets pushed to the edge (hollows will do it faster than anything else) then he's a... Well, psycopath for all intents and purposes killing the source of his ire.

Fighting Method: As you might expect, Yaru's zanjutsu is very high. Even though he is in the 11th division he likes to be more well rounded so besides swordwork and hakuda he also pratices Kidou which makes him looked at with scorn from his fellow members but he doesn't care. He figures better to learn all the ways to kick some ass than limiting yourself for some preconceived notion of bravura.
 
#30
bored and should be studying for finals, but am easily distracted so..


Name: Kau Kayaku

Specializes in kido, low swordsmanship, hand-to-hand, above average footwork.

Gender: Male

Division/Seat: 13th Division, unseated

Zanpakuto: Madoushi (mage, or something), a short sword.

Shikai: "Dazzle!" Only recently unlocked, it transforms into a glove that boosts kido abilities, but he loses the sword, and becomes more of a long-range fighter.

Will likely become a seated officer as he improves his shikai.

No bankai, nor likely to ever uncover it.

Short and easily excitable, Kayaku often finds himself the butt of jokes, but rolls with the punches. Not a prankster himself, he is rather studious and hopes to become a seated officer, and hopefully a vice-captain someday. Has an enormous respect for Ukitake, who is his idol.
 

zerohour

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#31
Name: Kurai Youkai

Gender: Male

Division: 6th

Rank: 5th Seat


Bio: Kurai has been a member of almost every division at some point. His poor social abilities as well as a lack of respect for his captains and vice captains has led to him being the most transferred of shinigami. The only divisions he has not been a member of are the 1st, 2nd, and 12th division. Of his commanders, only Souske Aizen, Shunsui Kyoraku and Byakuya Kuchiki have tolerated him. Of those three, only Byakuya has earned his respect, leading to him becoming a permanent member of his division.
Once Renji achieved Bankai, Kurai has put a massive amount of effort into reaching his. He is still a long way off from his goal, but he has made significant strides towards it.
Kurai is attracted to Nemu, the Vice Captain of the 12th division Unfortunately, Mayuri knows of this, and said that if he wanted to steal her away, he would have to beat Mayuri first. Kurai has yet to challenge him, but spends large amounts of time studying what information he has on the captain.


Shikai: Kaihou, Kage no Seiki (Open, Gate of Shadows)
After release, Kage no Seiki turns completely black. While it does not gain any special abilities, Kurai is able to open portals, effectively allowing him to teleport. While this ability is mocked as being a bastard form of shunpo, it possesses many different applications. One of his favorite defensive techniques is forming a spherical portal, with him inside. Any attacks simply pass throught the portal, emerging on the other side.


Bankai: Kage no Kokudo (Realm of Shadows)
Should Kurai ever achieve bankai, it will be a formidable weapon. Bankai allows the portals to manifest in their true form, gates to a miniature dimension. In addition to the original ability from Shikai form, Kage no Kokudo can alter its dimension, creating chains or shields.

An interesting note about the Bankai is that if the portals are closed, time ceases to flow in the pocket dimension. It remains frozen until another portal is opened. Effectively, this means that by sacrificing his ability to use Shikai or Bankai, Kurai could effectively ækillÆ an opponent within seconds. While he is still able to use both Bankai and Shikai, the ability to manipulate the dimension are nto present in Shikai, expelling the rpisoner, and in Bankai, it takes several seconds for it to rach full power, giving the prisoner time to break their bindings and escape.
 

warai_kitsune

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#32
I already posted a 'me as a shinigami' idea, so I suppose that technically this is an OC, not a self-insert. Though arguably, that could be better.

Anyway, my attempt to flesh out an idea I mentioned in the White Room thread. This is NOT...I repeat, NOT intended to be taken seriously.

Harada Kintaro (he's still searching for the perfect stage name)
Division: none (see below)
Rank: none (also see below)
Zanpakuto: Satsujinkou (Killer Queen)
Shikai: ROCK THE FUCK OUT, SATSUJINKOU! (Must be screamed at the top of the lungs for full effect).
Bankai: Satsunjinkou no Senka (Thousand Songs of the Killer Queen)

Bio: Hailed as a genius, a prodigy that came along once in a blue moon, Kintaro would prove himself to be a colossal, incredible, uncanny, once-in-a-lifetime...flop. While he had reiatsu that could easily rival a vice-captain's at the time of his enrollment into the Soul Reaper academy, that was all he had going for him. He never bothered to learn a single kido, his zanjutsu could only be called mediocre when once was feeling complimentary...he learned enough hakuda to not get himself killed during sparring, but that was just about it. Rather than learn anything, he spent his time getting drunk, playing for various parties, and gazing longingly at Rangiku's cleavage whenever she happened to pass within eyeshot. In the end, he was kicked out with a nameless zanpakuto, having never even TRIED to draw it out.
He wandered through Rukongai for several centuries, with nothing but a guitar and his nameless sword.

Then, shortly after one of his successful gigs (and the ensuing chance for some grade-A nookie from a newly acquired-groupie), he discovered that he couldn't always outrun the idiot/assholes who didn't like pretty-boy rockstars. In desperation (more for the nookie than the beating; I forgot to mention that it was discovered in the academy that he had insane regeneration and durability), he tried to fight.

He met Satsujinkou, and discovered just how PAINFUL music can be when you want it to be.

The rest, as they say, is history.

(Oh, and he impressed the girl so much that she remains a groupie to this day; everytime he visits fourth district west, he does so with the assurance that good booze, a soft bed, and a softer girl to warm it is waiting for him). :yay:

Zanpakuto: Satusjinkou's initial state was a standard zanpakuto. However, shortly after awakening her, he took a page from Urahara and Yamamoto, and started storing it in something a bit more...well, inconspicuous. Or at least something that isn't obviously a sword; he keeps it in the neck of his guitar. Awakened, Satsujinkou is a HUGE battle-axe; nearly five feet long, with two viciously pronged heads that extend nearly a foot beyond the end of the haft. The butt of the axe is strangely enlarged, though even stranger is the fact that six strings and perfectly tuned frets line the length of the haft.
Satusjinkou's true form is that of a seemingly teenaged girl with dyed blue hair and typically scanty clothing (yes, he's slept with her in his mind). Personality-wise, she doesn't really like fighting, and usually goes off in a huff if he ever uses the blades of her axe-form to actually cut anything.
Thankfully, Satsujinkou's main use is for kido.
Kintaro doesn't have to chant to use her one-of-a-kind kido, he just has to strum the right way; not even the right song, just the right way. He has the following.
Power Chord: The most basic attack, he simply releases a massive wave of reiatsu in one of two forms, either as an omni-directional 'bomb,' or as a directional blast (roughly equivalent in impact to being hit by a car).
Riff: Causes a spherical barrier of concentrated reiatsu that releases a continuous stream of low-powered blasts while protecting him. The barrier won't stop everything; truth be told it usually just slows down even regular attacks. Still, it's enough for him to get the hell out of the way...most of the time.
Power Slide: A revised version of Shunpo, he throws himself forward onto his knees as he starts strumming furiously; anything in the path of his shunpo gets hit with a weak, disorienting wave of reiatsu. He likes to finish it by ending the shunpo right behind his opponent and hitting them with a Power Chord at point-blank range.
Whammy Bar: Modified Power Chord; generates a severely disorienting wave of reiatsu design to induce the spiritual equivalent of dizziness/vertigo.

Bankai: Not too different from the regular attacks, Kintaro's bankai creates hundreds of copies of himself, spread out over a wide area, who simply start blasting away en masse. And considering that they're ALL immune to Satsujinkou's attacks, they don't need to be too terribly accurate; just flood the place with Riffs, Power Chords, and Whammy Bars. It works.
 

immolo

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#33
warai_kitsune said:
I already posted a 'me as a shinigami' idea, so I suppose that technically this is an OC, not a self-insert. Though arguably, that could be better.

Anyway, my attempt to flesh out an idea I mentioned in the White Room thread. This is NOT...I repeat, NOT intended to be taken seriously.

Harada Kintaro (he's still searching for the perfect stage name)
Division: none (see below)
Rank: none (also see below)
Zanpakuto: Satsujinkou (Killer Queen)
Shikai: ROCK THE FUCK OUT, SATSUJINKOU! (Must be screamed at the top of the lungs for full effect).
Bankai: Satsunjinkou no Senka (Thousand Songs of the Killer Queen)

Bio: Hailed as a genius, a prodigy that came along once in a blue moon, Kintaro would prove himself to be a colossal, incredible, uncanny, once-in-a-lifetime...flop. While he had reiatsu that could easily rival a vice-captain's at the time of his enrollment into the Soul Reaper academy, that was all he had going for him. He never bothered to learn a single kido, his zanjutsu could only be called mediocre when once was feeling complimentary...he learned enough hakuda to not get himself killed during sparring, but that was just about it. Rather than learn anything, he spent his time getting drunk, playing for various parties, and gazing longingly at Rangiku's cleavage whenever she happened to pass within eyeshot. In the end, he was kicked out with a nameless zanpakuto, having never even TRIED to draw it out.
He wandered through Rukongai for several centuries, with nothing but a guitar and his nameless sword.

Then, shortly after one of his successful gigs (and the ensuing chance for some grade-A nookie from a newly acquired-groupie), he discovered that he couldn't always outrun the idiot/assholes who didn't like pretty-boy rockstars. In desperation (more for the nookie than the beating; I forgot to mention that it was discovered in the academy that he had insane regeneration and durability), he tried to fight.

He met Satsujinkou, and discovered just how PAINFUL music can be when you want it to be.

The rest, as they say, is history.

(Oh, and he impressed the girl so much that she remains a groupie to this day; everytime he visits fourth district west, he does so with the assurance that good booze, a soft bed, and a softer girl to warm it is waiting for him). :yay:

Zanpakuto: Satusjinkou's initial state was a standard zanpakuto. However, shortly after awakening her, he took a page from Urahara and Yamamoto, and started storing it in something a bit more...well, inconspicuous. Or at least something that isn't obviously a sword; he keeps it in the neck of his guitar. Awakened, Satsujinkou is a HUGE battle-axe; nearly five feet long, with two viciously pronged heads that extend nearly a foot beyond the end of the haft. The butt of the axe is strangely enlarged, though even stranger is the fact that six strings and perfectly tuned frets line the length of the haft.
Satusjinkou's true form is that of a seemingly teenaged girl with dyed blue hair and typically scanty clothing (yes, he's slept with her in his mind). Personality-wise, she doesn't really like fighting, and usually goes off in a huff if he ever uses the blades of her axe-form to actually cut anything.
Thankfully, Satsujinkou's main use is for kido.
Kintaro doesn't have to chant to use her one-of-a-kind kido, he just has to strum the right way; not even the right song, just the right way. He has the following.
Power Chord: The most basic attack, he simply releases a massive wave of reiatsu in one of two forms, either as an omni-directional 'bomb,' or as a directional blast (roughly equivalent in impact to being hit by a car).
Riff: Causes a spherical barrier of concentrated reiatsu that releases a continuous stream of low-powered blasts while protecting him. The barrier won't stop everything; truth be told it usually just slows down even regular attacks. Still, it's enough for him to get the hell out of the way...most of the time.
Power Slide: A revised version of Shunpo, he throws himself forward onto his knees as he starts strumming furiously; anything in the path of his shunpo gets hit with a weak, disorienting wave of reiatsu. He likes to finish it by ending the shunpo right behind his opponent and hitting them with a Power Chord at point-blank range.
Whammy Bar: Modified Power Chord; generates a severely disorienting wave of reiatsu design to induce the spiritual equivalent of dizziness/vertigo.

Bankai: Not too different from the regular attacks, Kintaro's bankai creates hundreds of copies of himself, spread out over a wide area, who simply start blasting away en masse. And considering that they're ALL immune to Satsujinkou's attacks, they don't need to be too terribly accurate; just flood the place with Riffs, Power Chords, and Whammy Bars. It works.
Your idea gave me a very interesting question. You said Kintaro slept with his Zanppaktou in his his mind so has Urahara slept with Benhime in his mind? Come to think of it that would probably be the most awesome pairing on the face of the earth if done right and you asked Fosfor to use his idea for the Crimson Princess's personality.
 

shakeval

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#34
eh, i'll give it a crack......got this crazy idea after playing GTA Vice City and then surfing jokes and stuff on the net.


Name: Shakeval Car'ton (AKA idiot, wanker, pervert, dumbshit, etc)

Division: kinda got kicked out of 11th

Rank: he held second seat before getting kicked out a long time ago

Zanpakuto:chikara no gomu sei bou (Rubber rod of power)
when sealed it looks like a very weird and rather large tanto.....with a sheath like no other. long and flesh coloured.....with a rounded end :ph43r:

Shikai:"mesu ken jiyuu ni shi nasai" (unleash you bitch)
changes from tanto size to a massive 2metre abomination of all dildos, trully the king of dildos.........who can live down saying they got beat up by some weirdo with long spiky white hair weilding a giant dildo?

Bankai: "kumo oyobi kiri de motte ki nasai" (bring on the clouds and mist)
..........:blink: can anyone say tentacles?

Bio: General all around pervert a tall and powerful frame, exudes power, but hs no interest in being a shinigami what-so-ever......nope women interest him more.

got kicked out of 11th after Zaracki Kenpachi came along and reshuffled the whole of 11th division, kicked out for having a stupid Zanpakuto and for trying to pervert small pink haired lolis with crazy ideas and lewd comments.

Since then hasn't looked back, safe in the knowledge that his student Ranma is continuing his life's work and that here in SS there are plenty of women who don't know of his reputation and are more then willing to share a bed with a strapping big man who knows how to please.
 
#35
Name: Jon Cook

Position: 4th Div. 4th seat

Zanpakuto: (lit."Flower of rose color") Rose Blossom

When sealed, the sword appears to be a normal iaito, the tsukaito (cloth grip) is red and matches the saego (cord loop). The tsuba is circular and has a 'Star of David' embossed on it. The saya (scabbard) is laquered black with a silver floral inlay down the length.

Shikai: "A leaf on the wind" (lit. "Leaf of wind")

Unsealed, the sword is straight, 5ft long and 6in wide. The tip is rounded, and fans out to 12in wide. The blade continues with a floral motif down the flat of the blade.

Unsealing the blade allows him to move at speeds rivaling Yoruichi's shunpo, when she was at her best. When sword is unsealed, he cannot use kido or shunpo, as reiatsu will be continually be drained by Rose Blossom. When opponent is struck by Rose Blossom, it will drain an amount of reiatsu from opponent, instead of wielder.

Bankai: Not seen. Claims that it affects him more than his opponent.

Physical description: 6'2" tall, 220-230 lbs. brown hair, brown eyes, oval shaped eyeglasses

Personality: Quiet, reserved, hard to excite. You can talk smack about him, you can talk smack about his firends, but you do not talk smack about the 4th around him.

Combat: Avoids violence, seeing it as a last resort. If needed, prefers to use zanpakuto, then HtH, followed by kido, in order of preference. Usually lets' his opponent make first move, striking only when opponent has comitted to attack and cannot change motion. Thinks using kido in combat is 'cheap' and 'dishonest'

EDIT: took out Japanese letters, added combat section, and altered shikai abilities.
 

zeebee1

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#36
You might want to get rid of your Japanese letters. They don't show up, so we don't know your zanpakuto's name.
 

immolo

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#37
zeebee1 said:
You might want to get rid of your Japanese letters. They don't show up, so we don't know your zanpakuto's name.
It is Rose Blossom. It says that right next to it in plain english.
 

zeebee1

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#38
Yes, that's the translation. But That's like calling Naruto ramen topping. The zanpakuto's name is in Japanese. We should be told how to pronounce it in Japanese.
 

Dark_Plague

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#40
Name: Zamieru Takata.

Position: 8th Division, 4th Seat.

Zanpakuto: Der Freisch?tz (The Magic Bullet) (An old German legend.)

When Sealed: An ornate looking dagger. The blade is slightly curved, and bares an old German inscription on it which translates to "Beasts of the forest, beasts of the pasture. Those that race the skies. The cry of victory will be mine, Oh hunting horn, reverberate throughout the forests."

Shikai: Jagd mit mir (Hunt with me), Der Freisch?tz.

When Unsealed: Still a short blade, the end now curves apart at its end, to form an almost 'V' like tip. The blade carries a luminescent reddish purple color, and the runes now glow a dim white.

Shikai's Ability: Der Freisch?tz: Coming from the gap in between the two edges, a small wave-like blade of reiatsu can be fired at his foes. The blast is by no means powerful, but it will never cease to exist until it is either destroyed, or hits its target. (Hellsing people should catch on right about now)

Bankai: Not yet acquired.

Physical description: 6" tall, 205 lbs. Blond hair, blue eyes.

Personality: A very calm personality, but can sometimes be up to mischief. It's quite obvious that he thinks things through well, but can sometimes be awkward in social situations nonetheless. His calm demeanor and the rarity of him changing his facial expression tend to creep out those who don't know him.

Combat: Since his Shikai's power is extremely limited, Zamieru has made it a goal to become extremely well versed in the Demon Arts (Kidou). He can confidently use Hadou into the mid 50s, and Bakudou in the low 30s, and makes it a certainty that in battle, he is always moving. Despite not being excellent at Shunpo, he is more than agile enough to outmaneuver most Hollow or Shinigami opponents, but his lack of mastery has kept him from being seated higher than 4th for years. There is still much room to grow however, as he is still rather young and timid.
 

immolo

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#41
NanuNanu14 said:
Is the shikai ok? I didn't want it to be too powerful.
Yah it is a bit over powered but in other ways it is kinda stupid. I don't think anyone has ever had to stop to change direction in a shunpo.
 

zeebee1

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#42
The weakness of his shikai means that if you can survive the first couple of attack you will probably win. It's not all that useful when going against powerful opponents.
 
#43
Ya know what. here goes nothing. since the thread has already been revived, i thought i'd give it a go. i have nothing better to do right now...

Name: Jubaku Wiriamusu

Division/Seat: 12th Seat, 3rd Division


Zanpakutou: Shan no Soragoto (Beautiful Lie/Falsehood)
Release Phrase: "Let us dance to our own tune, Shan no Soragoto."
Normal: Standard katana. only real difference is a small red tassal at the end of the hilt.
Shikai: The sword itself dissappears and is replaced with a metal fan. one inch blades prorude from the ends of the spines that keep the fan estended, the tassal is still attached, and elonates into a small rope that wraps around his wrist, allowing him to spin it around at high speeds should he choose to do so, ther is one major outstanding featrue on the fact other than the tassal, a Yin/Yang symbol on a red background. his Shikai's ability is NOT, In fact, Control of wind. It grants him a greater ability to convince others that he is telling the truth completely. he calls it the Beautiful Lie (Ratkin ftw!). he can say one thing, and everyone that hears him will completely beleive he is telling the truth for an amount of time depending on how much reiatsu he puts into it. he generally doesn't use this for anything big, mostly the lies no one will question. He can fight, but he mostly perfers to lie his way out of situations.
Bankai: no.

Personality: he's a greasy little bastard. he hates telling the whole truth, his ultimate fear is that someone will eventualy figure out who he is deep down, so he puts on a performance of being happy and funny, seemingly only aiming to amuse, which is why he remains in the lower half of the rankings, but he doesn't mind.... when Gin defected, he was outwardly distressed and depressed that his "Dear Taicho betrayed Seireitei." However inwardly, he was calmly thinking of how to get around this mess and advance himself. he hasn't done anything out of respect for the needs of Seireitei so far, but he is currently planning. He doesn't like anyone knowing that his Zanpakutou let's him tell a perfect lie, and usually passes his ability to spin his fan off as his Shikai ability, i mean it gives him a bit of range and some good style, doesn't it?

Physical appearence: 6'1" long dark hair, eyes that cange depending on the phase of the moon it seems like (AKA: Randomly) between green, grey, and blue.
Fighing style: Focuses mostly on Kido, but it's a mix of Zanjutsu, Kido, and Hadou. Hand-to-hand isn't really his thing, kicking however is my speciality, so Hakudo is out of the question. His personal favorite Kido is White Lightning as it's rather simple and efffective. Shunpo isn't as high as it could be, but it's pretty good. he likes the ability to move that fast, but he perfers his explosions and his fan. When using his Shikai, he spins his fan at high speeds and whips it about at random almost, it can cut up quite a bit really, and fighting to him seems more like dancing. unfortunately, this offers almost no defensive ability, but great offensive ability... so he's often well the hell away from the melee range...

Zanpakutou personality: His Zanpakutou is obsessed with survival. It will gladly jump into battle, but a battle they have at least a chance of winning. if she were to face Aize, she would much perfer to lie her way out of the situation, in this she and her weilder are in complete agreement.
She beleives that the truth is a precious thing, and so it must be constantly surrounded by a bodyguard of lies.

Well. here goes my pride i guess... (Presses add post button) :ph43r:
 

zerohour

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#44
Not a new Shinigami, but I didn't want to create a new thread for zanpaktos only...

Name: Nemesis

Shikai Release Phrase: Reveal their weaknesses...

Abilities: Nemesis has no standard abilities. Instead, it adapts itself to exploit the weaknesses and cancel the strengths of its enemy. While this ability is powerful, it wielder has to adapt himself to Nemesis' form, in order to take advantage of this feature. In addition, Nemesis can only be keyed to one opponent at a time, and suffers when fighting multiple opponents.

Using Nemesis against a vastly superior opponent often results in an increased speed or defensive ability, as escape is the only viable option, and any other form would be detrimental.

Bankai: N/A
 

Rapestove

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#45
Shen Yao

2nd Division, 3rd Seat

Zanpakut: Mashokku - Time Weaver

Height: 5' 11"

Appearance: Shen's most defining attribute is the fact that he is covered from head to toe in ritualistic black tattoos, which were given to him at birth to restrain and direct his completely unnatural stores of Reiatsu in a way which is more constructive than tearing his fleshy body apart. They make him amongst the most easily identifiable of all Shinigami below Captain rank - them and his inexplicably pale hair, which proves to contrast starkly with the network of black sigils which obscure his skin.

Combat style:
A close-quarters melee combatant at heart, Shen focuses on swordplay and specialized kido for use in trying battle situations - spells which deliver the most damage for the least amount of time-investment (chanting). Mashokku's abilities simply turn the tide in his favor - so far, in fact, that they are the reason he is in the Second Division: they are perfect for subduing the unruly, no matter how powerful they may be.

Zanpakut:
Mashokku is, in appearance, your average Zanpakuto - a simple katana with a square guard carried in a black scabbard; its Shikai form, however, destroys any and all similarities it holds with the average Zanpakuto. With a murmured "Clutch the threads, Mashokku" this simple katana transforms into an intricate jigsaw of glimmering silver, thousands of tiny pieces and miniscule, whirring gears interlocking to form a most bizarre blade. A shimmering, sapphire orb hovers between the handle and this puzzle of a sword, some unseen force conjoining these three parts together - a force which, at it's users will, allows the blade to settle anywhere above the surface of the sphere.

As one might surmise, Mashokku's abilities are that of Time Manipulation - as one might also guess, these abilities are very limited.

The first of these abilities is "Kireme" or "Pause" - what it does is more than a little complicated, but in essence stops causality within a predetermined spherical radius for a period of about 12 seconds; for all intents and purposes, stopping Time. Shen can use these few moments to move out of the line of fire from a heavy-hitting attack, sneak up behind his opponent, or even escape; he cannot, however, interact with his opponent, as when Time is stopped no change can happen.

The second is "Hayaokuri" or "Fast Forward" - By accelerating the chemical processes in his body and the cognitive abilities of his brain, as well as the motion-capture ability of his eyes (as well as a great deal of other things), Shen can very well triple his reaction speed, physical agility, and thinking ability. This can be maintained for lengthy periods of time, but doing so can prove absolutely disastrous to his health. If Mashokku's abilities are stressed to their limits, the enhancement factor can reach the double-digits - allowing for truly ridiculous feats as well as horrifying consequences (such as dying of dehydration in a matter of minutes instead of hours)

The third and final ability is one born of absolute desperation, called "Majishin" or "Time Quake" - by expending all of his considerable reiatsu and more for this single technique, pushing Mashokku's abilities well past their normal limitations, Shen can eradicate a single person's existence with a single strike. Not only is the cost great, the repercussions can be truly disastrous - a single ripple can change everything. He has never actually used this technique, considering it far too dangerous; it could, conceivably, be possible to use it on Arrancar, however.

Personality:
Almost abnormally serious or formal outside of combat, Shen is respectful to his superiors and goes by the book as closely as he can whenever circumstances allow. However, in the heat of battle his attitude does a complete 180 - trash-talking, joking, facial expressions, adrenalin and overwhelming excitement bring it all out. As such, Shen is a very simple person overall.



Blegh.
 

~NGD OMEGA~

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#46
Name: Lea

Division: 11th

Rank: 6th seat

Bio: A firey member of the 11th squad, often hotheaded and get's into fights very easily. In short he's an average member of the 11th. Not well liked among his squad due to the fact that he has an unusual fighting style among them, often using energy based attacks as opposed to just his weapon in it's usual form. Normally that would make someone else go to a different squad, but his hot headed nature makes him feel he belongs nowhere else, since he's among kindred spirits. However he does manage to gain their respect since he'll freaking roast anyone who messes with him for taking full advantage of his Zanpakuto's ability.

Also good friends with the 7th seat of the 11th squad, both of them sharing a brotherly relationship. Though neither has achieved bankai, they started a race to see who could reach it first. So far neither has made it, though they have gotten close to it over the years.

Zanpakuto: Hienjin-Blazing Ring. A normal Zanpakuto with a Spiked red wheel shaped crossguard, and a similar little charm of the same size is connected to string tied to the bottom of his hilt.

Shikai: Lea throws his zanpakuto up into the air, letting it fall blade down upon his head while he holds his hands out and says the release phrase "Burn Hienjin." This causes the blade and the hilt to ignite, consuming both wheel charms, and the flames spiral around his arms, concentrating in front of them, forming two red and white Chakram.

When Released, Hienjin can aid in summoning hot flames, and are easily bathed in fire to add to it's attack power. Also capable of being thrown, where Lea will Shunpo in the direction he throws it in order to catch it on the other end. He is also able to mildly manipulate the path of the wheels as he attacks by heating the air around them, making it seem like a yoyo in comparison as it instantly comes back to his hands when thrown a short distance. By saying the phrase "Blaze Hienjin" when it is already released, he can use even more impressive fire attacks, though these are limited.

Bankai: Not yet attained, though Lea is close to it. Will be called "Ryouken Hienjin"-Dragon Blade Blazing Ring. Charging the Chakram with fire, he levitates them above his head, and manages to duplicate them, making four flaming wheels. He then connects them with fire. When the flames die down, he is left with two swords, the hilt's made of two of the wheels, and the blades are two wheels as well, a piece of metal connecting them. The two swords are capable of Rotating the wheels on the top or bottom, making something similar to a chainsaw. Easily able to be infused with fire, these make deadly weapons. His control over flames and the number of attacks he can do are increased, though it's no where near the level of Yamamoto's Shikai (Which can turn lesser souls to ashes for being too close). Appearance of the blades are roughly this:



Lea's Appearance:






Yes, Axel is awesome.
 

zerohour

Well-Known Member
#47
Another Zanpakto

Release Phrase: Bring forth the Apocalypse

Name: Last Testament

Shikai abilities: Drains spiritual energy from the environment, which is used to weaken the opponent. Prolonged use can eventually kill a person, though it generally takes several minutes for an average shinigami to die, and hours or even days for captains and higher.
 
#48
Not exactly an SI, but an OC that I created some time ago when I first thought about making a Bleach fic. ...I guess it could be an SI, though.


Name: Date Rizo

Rank: 8th Division, 7th Seat

Age: Looks to be about 20

Bio: A thin, lanky boy with exceptional flexibility. Is generally good-natured, but absolutely can't stand not being the center of attention. He joined Division 8 because he admired Captain Shunsui's flamboyant appearance and laid back attitude. He initially had a crush on Vice-captain Nanao until she scared him shitless by removing her glasses in front of him.

He has a firm belief that if he's fighting with an audience present, appearing cooler and more exciting than his opponent is more important than actually winning the match. For that reason, he's prone to a lot of unnecessary show-boating, taunting, and extra-flashy attacks to ensure that the focus remains on him. This causes him to lose a lot of fights that he might have otherwise won if he had fought seriously (which he only does in life-and-death situations, or when he thinks no one else but his opponent is watching). Captain Shunsui is one of the only people still alive to see Rizo fight seriously, hence the reason he gave him his 7th seat rank despite his otherwise low performance record. He finds humor in Rizo's antics, while Vice-captain Nanao (and a lot of other Division 8 members) thinks he's an embarrassment.

Aspirations: Wants to be known throughout Soul Society as 'The Coolest Shinigami in Existence', and wants to find out the secret behind Vice-captain Nanao's glasses.

Zanpakuto: Kaiwanketsu (Amazing Excellence), a typical katana with a shorter-than-average hilt.

Shikai: Holding the hilt of the blade in both hands, Rizo grandiosely shouts, "Shuumoku Oira! (All eyes on us!)" The katana then splits into a long-bladed silver sabre, Kaiwan (Amazing), and a diamond-shaped silver buckler, Ketsu (Excellence).

After released, Kaiwan increases Rizo's own natural agility and flexibility, allowing him to dodge and strike at various angles, while Ketsu can deflect low-level projectile-type kidou and can create a bright flash of light to temporarily blind his opponent. Since Ketsu isn't very large and Kaiwan is very light and easily breakable, neither weapon is very ideal for defending against physical attacks, leaving Rizo more suited to using his agility to dodge them instead.

Bankai: Unattained and quite likely far from being, as Rizo has only recently mastered his Shikai form. If he ever does reach it, it will be called Junsuiketsu (True Excellence). It's appearance and abilities are yet unknown (Read: I haven't thought them up yet)

Kidou: Rarely uses any because he's not good at remembering the incantations and isn't skilled enough to perform any without them yet.
 

Ike

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#49
Name: Ike

Rank: 11th Division, 6th-8th Seat (doesn't really matter)

Age: Physically 20-22

Stats/Bio: While I could see myself in several divisions (4th/8th come to mind first) before I could see myself in the 11th... I would join the 11th (or aim for it, whatever) simply because Kenpachi is the most compelling leader out of the captains. Personality would be a (severely) toned down Ikkaku, mainly. Likes fighting, but not to the extent as the main 11th divisioners do, not as eccentric as Ikkaku, and certainly doesn't hold as much back.

I don't care bout politics, or any of that other shit of the whys of what Soul Society does... I would follow the 11th and fight because it needs to be done. And its easiest done there, I suppose.


Zanpakuto: It's name is Entoropimaru. Look at the name again... Yeah, the Japanese word for 'Entropy' is 'Entoropi'. I've mentioned it around a few times, but Entropy is pretty much the coolest bit of chemistry ever.

In this case, in its shikai form, Entoropimaru passively increases the Entropy of the surrounding area, at a controllable (by me) rate. Essentially, me being around with my released Zanpakuto increases the 'disorder' or 'chaos' of my surroundings. This makes the 11th division the easiest one for me to be in, because one of the main effects is that people end up getting into a lot of fights because of it. The more entropy it creates, the more absurd outcomes occur (things that involve chance get screwed over tons) from anything going on AT THE TIME. It won't change the past so that, say, the letter you got in the mail suddenly changes... But if you are in the process of writing a letter, you might find yourself writing things you wouldn't have written before.

Why is all this a good thing? Because in the equation where entropy is increasing, and the 'bond energy' and 'temperature' aren't taken into consideration (and therefore considered constant), I am the receptacle of the 'Delta G', or 'Gibbs free energy'. The increased Entropy makes me stronger for a short period of time, something that works similar to how Kenpachi uses his reishi/reiatsu in a fight. I can't blast it out or anything... But I get faster/stronger/more spiritual energy for a duration that equals the amount of 'free energy' I would have gained from the increase in entropy.




Bankai- Haven't achieved it yet, so I don't know (as in, I can't think of one right now).


But, with my Shikai causing chaos and fights, I'm a welcome member of the 11th... Especially for training purposes against other divisions.
 
#50
Name: Ryota Takahiro

Division: 10th

Rank: 6th

Age: Appears around Mid 20's.

Appearence: He dosen't think he stands out all that much at 5'11, his dark brown hair combed back save for several strands that fan onto his forehead. He has no alterations to his shingami attire, though he thinks it dosen't look too bad on his broad shouldered, solidly muscled body. Like any good shingami, he has his fair share of scars, but he prefers to keep them to himself. While Ryota does have a faint paunch from all the partying he tends to do, he will just toy with his oval glasses briefly and say that he makes it look good.

Bio:
Ryota is a very relaxed and laid back shingami, usually doing his work with a toothpick or a piece of grass in the corner of his mouth. Why? Because he it looks rather dashing. He's a former member of the 11th, though he uses kid and the like too much to really fit in among their group. Ryota tries to keep in touch with his old friends there, including the chances for some fun spars or drinking binges while he escapes from doing parts of his paperwork. When asked, he can easily knuckle down and become very serious, though he would much prefer not having to do anything like that.

He knows he could be a higher rank if he tried, but he likes where he is, since the workload isn't God-awful, and that's just too much authority for his preference. When it comes to fighting, his zanjutsu is quite good, and he has higher then average marks in terms of kid, allowing him close to mid-range combat capabilities. When it comes of fighting hollows, he'll use his zanpakut's ability to end the fight quickly, usually with a barrage of had or quick sword strikes.

Zanpakut: Kemuriryoshi (Smoke Hunter)
Its has the same shape as a normal zanpakut, though the hilt is circular with lines along the tsuba that spiraled around and lead to the center.
Activation Phrase: "Stalk through the black, Kemuriryoushi!"

Zanpakut Personality: While most zanpakut take the form of humans, Keumuriryoshi much prefers the shape of a 20+ ft long shark with a white underbelly and dark blue skin. What stands out even more about this creature are the steel gray bull-like horns that jut from its head. Kemuri likes fighting, but he enjoys bringing down an opponent even more. As long as his wielder is in a place where he can fight enough, he'll allow Ryota the honor of wielding him.

Shikai: Here is what the released form looks like. When released, his zanpakut can let loose a massive surge of dark grey smoke, obscuring himself from view and dampening the ability to sense his reiatsu or hear his movements. The only person unaffected is Squall, who can see through the smoke like it was a semi-transparent haze.

While it is difficult to detect his presence, someone with a even a 4th Seat's sensory abilities should be able to pick out some of his presence amidst the smoke. He can dampen his presence further by sheathing and redrawing his blade in the smoke screen, but he has to increase the amount of reiatsu he puts into the technique. Otherwise, when the smoke is dispersed, all he needs to do his sweep his blade in a wide arc, grey smoke bleeding out from the sword and into the air again.

Another drawback is that his smoke, while very difficult to see through, can be dispelled with a sharp spike of reiatsu. Of course, by the time his opponent tries that, they can see just in time to see him about to strike with either a point blank had or a strike with his sword.

Bankai:
He hasn't beaten 'that bastard shark' yet, but he intends to very soon. And when he does, this is what he will earn for his work:

"Ruler of the darkness, Kemuriryoshi!"

This time, the smoke that comes from his shattering sword is utterly black, making even sunlight impossible to pierce it as it spreads out even further then before. Where before reiatsu sense and sound were dampened, this time they are completely cut off. The last thing most would see of this bankai is the pair of falcata that replaced his previous sword. The inward curving blades are 26 inches long with 5 inch handles comprised of polished brass. The hilt has a wide oval hand guard with gives long spikes, designed to let Ryota leave a VERY memorable punch if he needs to.

It can still be dispersed by spikes of reiatsu, but all Ryota needs to do his barely move his sword to let loose even more smoke. The problem with this smoke is that it actually absorbs reiatsu from those that are inside it, including Ryota, though he dosen't feel it as much as his opponent does. When reaching a certain amount, as indicated when his falcata blades turn completely black, he awakens the second skill of his bankai.

Kemuri-enjin. (Smoke Ring)

He is able to create circular saw blades are 20 inches long out of the very smoke itself, which can act as either projectiles or shields for Ryota. The weapons themselves are white, though they can only be seen in the smoke when they're within several feet of their target. As long as he is holding both swords, he can control up to 6 at once with his thoughts, though the number decreases to 3 if he holds only one. Once the Kemuri-enjin are released, Takahiro is no longer under the drain effect of his smoke, though his opponent lose even more reiatsu.

((Edit: Dude, 400th post for moi! :yay:))
 
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