A summary to forget...

[AoMythology]

Just found this little gem.

naruto master of the force  by Dragonlord0

3 months after the invasion of taboo the republic deicers a new planet not knowing if the planet is inhabited or not the republic send Jedi Mace Wendu Obi Wan Kenobi Anakin Skywalker Shaak ti Yoda and a representative of the republic to this new world unknown to them theres more to this planet then it seems.
Crossover - Star Wars & Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 18 - Words: 82,902 - Reviews: 43 - Favs: 61 - Follows: 46 - Updated: Dec 31, 2015 - Published: Sep 25, 2015 - Anakin Skywalker, Naruto U., OC

And what a gem it is. Invasion of taboo! :jawdrop:

Does 'deicers' mean 'discovers', though? This part is hard to translate. :sweat:

 

[grant]

Caught these two over the last couple days or so with the RSS/ATOM feeds on FanFiction.NET.

Rock's need for speed
Author: BloodyFalcon187
Black Lagoon
English, Rated: M
Crime/Romance
Characters: Rock, Revy
Chapters: 3, Words: 6,601, Reviews: 59, Rated: M, In-Progress
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Rock feels out of place in Roanapur, one night while smoking outside, he overhears two men talking. Rock begins street racing on the roads of Roanapur, his attitude changes and begins earning respect from various people, including Revy. RockxRevy (Please use constructive critisism and not insulting) [NO LONGER ON HIATUS]

Why do people insist on desecrating the corpse of Black Lagoon? Bad enough it'll never be completed.

 

[da_fox2279]

Caught these two over the last couple days or so with the RSS/ATOM feeds on FanFiction.NET.

Rock's need for speed
Author: BloodyFalcon187
Black Lagoon
English, Rated: M
Crime/Romance
Characters: Rock, Revy
Chapters: 3, Words: 6,601, Reviews: 59, Rated: M, In-Progress
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Rock feels out of place in Roanapur, one night while smoking outside, he overhears two men talking. Rock begins street racing on the roads of Roanapur, his attitude changes and begins earning respect from various people, including Revy. RockxRevy (Please use constructive critisism and not insulting) [NO LONGER ON HIATUS]

Why do people insist on desecrating the corpse of Black Lagoon? Bad enough it'll never be completed.

Do you mean the manga? I thought the manga-ka had started it up again. Did he just up and quit for good this time?

If you mean the anime, then yes. That was one of the better series I had watched/bought in the last few years. Most series, I do a few eps at a time; BL, I binged half of it in one day and finished it the next. Then I did the OVA.

Damn, that's one fine bit of animation. And the English dub was pretty good, too.

 

[grant]

Caught these two over the last couple days or so with the RSS/ATOM feeds on FanFiction.NET.

Rock's need for speed
Author: BloodyFalcon187
Black Lagoon
English, Rated: M
Crime/Romance
Characters: Rock, Revy
Chapters: 3, Words: 6,601, Reviews: 59, Rated: M, In-Progress
________________________________________
Rock feels out of place in Roanapur, one night while smoking outside, he overhears two men talking. Rock begins street racing on the roads of Roanapur, his attitude changes and begins earning respect from various people, including Revy. RockxRevy (Please use constructive critisism and not insulting) [NO LONGER ON HIATUS]

Why do people insist on desecrating the corpse of Black Lagoon? Bad enough it'll never be completed.

Do you mean the manga? I thought the manga-ka had started it up again. Did he just up and quit for good this time?

If you mean the anime, then yes. That was one of the better series I had watched/bought in the last few years. Most series, I do a few eps at a time; BL, I binged half of it in one day and finished it the next. Then I did the OVA.

Damn, that's one fine bit of animation. And the English dub was pretty good, too.

I haven't seen anything about the series since 2014, and I suspect the only reason it got those last few chapters out was to fill one last tank before going into 'hiatus' like HOTD.

 

[MastaofBitches]

Since this was the closest thing to a "Fic I want to Destroy" general thread:

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]A King's Return[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Kaosreaper4208[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]reviews[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]One year before attending Beacon Jaune Arc ends up getting wounded from a strange shadow beast killing him. but with his death another takes his place. RWBYxFate crossover. yes its a harem story again.
RWBY - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 23,330 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 101 - Follows: 124 - Updated: Jun 22 - Published:May 29 - Ozpin, Jaune Arc, Qrow Branwen[/font]

ProtoSaber takes over Jaune's body, and nobody notices the difference! On top of that, Jaune's listed as a main character, despite being effectivley dead and even if he came back, he'd be coming back to a life he won't even recognise, while simultaniously pissing off the "Harem" for killing of their man.

Also it's not in the proper crossover section because it'll get more views in the regular section.

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Jaune's Music Room[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]thehp93[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]reviews[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Jaune arc was never a popular kid. Just an average person at Beacon High. Jaune was a member of the Music Appreciation club, a club for students who love to listen to music. Most students sign up for it and never come in. For Jaune the club and the room became his escape from his high school life.
RWBY - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 22 - Words: 63,499 - Reviews: 272 - Favs: 387 - Follows: 538 - Updated: Feb 16 - Published: Nov 3, 2015 - Jaune Arc[/font]

90% of the word count for this fic, is copy pasted song lyrics. There is absolutely no effort whatsoever to properly integrate the lyrics into the narrative. On top of that, it's written like a more angsty version of High School Musical.

Actually, I'm kinda surprised it's not listed as a crossover...

 

[AoMythology]

Bruja
By: sakurademonalchemist
Being a cat is easy. Eat, Sleep and be better than everyone because you're a cat. But what happens when the cat happens to be a witch stuck in a feline body, and runs into the one man on the planet with major anger management issues that cause wide-scale destruction? Meet Bruja, the Hulk's pet kitty...and a bigger troll than Loki could hope to be.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11781666/1/Bruja

Lel.

 

[Oni_Rinku]

This one's not that bad of a summary, but still...

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Legend of the Ultimate[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]AlphaDelta1001[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]There is a point in time where a hero discovers his true potential. One hero in particular, has already discovered it. Watch as Gohan grows and discovers his ture power! COMPLETE
Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 34 - Words: 154,712 - Reviews: 176 - Favs: 314 - Follows: 122 - Updated: Mar 3, 2007 - Published: Nov 30, 2006 - Gohan, Videl - Complete[/font]

...what is this ture power? Is it a power so unique and awesome that it can't even be spelled right?

And then we have...

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]She Is Not Your Mate[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]PAS-15[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]What happens when Videl is too late to confess she loves Gohan? That someone else has alreadys stole his heart literally! Gohan is under the control of a deciving mistress. Please Read not as bad as it sounds. T for language and some aldut content.
Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 69,051 - Reviews: 79 - Favs: 54 - Follows: 40 - Updated: Apr 2, 2012 - Published: Dec 23, 2011 - Gohan, Videl - Complete[/font]

...any story that you have to ask someone to read it in the summary is an automatic NO in my book, let alone one with multiple spelling errors.

And last but not least...

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]The BodyGuard[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Hardharry[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]When a strange army of supper human soldiers terrorize the Satan family Mrs Satan takes it upon her self to hire Gohan to protect her family and find these mysterious enemies, but how will Videl and her father handle the idea and can Gohan survive
Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 74,898 - Reviews: 142 - Favs: 198 - Follows: 97 - Updated: Mar 4, 2012 - Published: Sep 12, 2011 - Gohan, Videl - Complete[/font]

...I remember reading this a while back and thinking it was an okay read, but I'm still waiting to see these Supper-Human Soldiers dang it!

 

[Oni_Rinku]

Sorry for the double post, but I found some more!

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Naruto: The Legend of Aang - Book of Water 1[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Czar Joseph[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]reviews[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]This is the Second and Re-write of Legend of Aang: When team 7 is sent backwards through time since the Shinobi World never born and discover that Naruto is the new Avatar since Third Hokage knew he was the New Avatar, they must help him with mastering the four elements. And together with Aang and his companions, they must face the Fire Nation. Read and Review. NaruxSaku Soon.
Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 12 - Words: 77,711 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 87 - Follows: 87 - Updated: Sep 1, 2014 - Published: Apr 24, 2014 - Naruto U., Aang[/font]

Not sure what to think about this next one...

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Elemental Justu Master[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]MommaMakoto[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]reviews[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Team Avatar has a new member named Nari, she is the Avatar's apprentice, she knows all bending styles except for lighting and blood, and when an injury causes her to stay with iroh from trip to the beifongs, she comes incontact with naruto, kiba, shikamaru, sakura and neji on a mission to find her? Find out what happens to the powerful new shadow jinjuriki the 12 tailed dragon!
Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 31 - Words: 81,550 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 17 - Updated: Nov 7, 2012 - Published: Jul 9, 2012- Naruto U., Aang - Complete[/font]

...but why do people feel that they need to make an OC who just so happens to be the "jinjuriki" (WTF!?!) of the twelve tailed dragon?

 

[AoMythology]

Twelve-tailed dragon.... :headbanger:  :flameon:

 

[jpfmh]

Books - Harry Potter
The Majestical Potato Marines Of Zanzibar Have A Beer With The Queen
By: thefaultinourpotato
Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato
Rated: Fiction K - English - Angst/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 61,152 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 4 - Updated: Jul 29, 2014 - Published: Jul 17, 2014 - id: 10540789


Would probably be worst summary ever.....except this...fanfiction...is really just the word potato 61,152 times

 

[AoMythology]

Seriously?

 

[jpfmh]

Seriously?

Yes, seriously. I just can't get my head around why it still exists on ff.net

 

[Oni_Rinku]

And this one is a sweet mess...

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Legendary Bloodlines[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Jay3000[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]reviews[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]naruto was attack by Itachi after he killed is family and leaving him to die. now because of him naruto gain a powerful bloodline and awaken a his own bloodline. naruto x lot of women, WARNING lots of lemon and violence completed. Part 1.5 is out it tittles 'Legendary Bloodline Naruto of the Mist
Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 191,596 - Reviews: 613 - Favs: 1,960 - Follows: 1,287 - Updated: Mar 15, 2013 - Published: Feb 4, 2012 - [Naruto U., Ayame, Mei T., Temari] - Complete[/font]

 

[jpfmh]

And this one is a sweet mess...

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Legendary Bloodlines[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Jay3000[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]reviews[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]naruto was attack by Itachi after he killed is family and leaving him to die. now because of him naruto gain a powerful bloodline and awaken a his own bloodline. naruto x lot of women, WARNING lots of lemon and violence completed. Part 1.5 is out it tittles 'Legendary Bloodline Naruto of the Mist
Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 191,596 - Reviews: 613 - Favs: 1,960 - Follows: 1,287 - Updated: Mar 15, 2013 - Published: Feb 4, 2012 - [Naruto U., Ayame, Mei T., Temari] - Complete[/font]

That grammar is an abomination. It burns my eyes

 

[MastaofBitches]

And this one is a sweet mess...

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Legendary Bloodlines[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Jay3000[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]reviews[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]naruto was attack by Itachi after he killed is family and leaving him to die. now because of him naruto gain a powerful bloodline and awaken a his own bloodline. naruto x lot of women, WARNING lots of lemon and violence completed. Part 1.5 is out it tittles 'Legendary Bloodline Naruto of the Mist
Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 191,596 - Reviews: 613 - Favs: 1,960 - Follows: 1,287 - Updated: Mar 15, 2013 - Published: Feb 4, 2012 - [Naruto U., Ayame, Mei T., Temari] - Complete[/font]

That grammar is an abomination. It burns my eyes

Just so you know, Naruto has it's own "Bad Fanfiction" thread here, and you're more likely to get a discussion going there.

 

[PCHeintz72]

Just caught this in the High School DxD crossover section on FanFiction.NET

Highschool ConsxDevils
By: SilverXScythe66
Just when his victory slipped away, something unexpected happen the Megatron along with two of his most loyalist men. The three got transported to another world and were now humans. Will they continue their goal of conquering or will they find something more meaningful than power?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Adventure - Megatron, Shockwave, Soundwave - Words: 3,876 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 6 - Published: 6h ago - id: 12099741

From his notes inside the chapter:

I always wanted to do a human Decepticon story, but I couldn't pick which one to choose. So I decided to go with my three favorite Cons; Megatron, Soundwave, and Shockwave. All three of them are from the Prime series. Each of one of them will have their own harem. This is the list so far. More will be added later.

Megatron(Tron): Rias, Kalawarner, Tiamat

Soundwave(Don): Akeno, Koneko, Kuroka

Shockwave(Stark): Sona, Tsubaki, Momo

i checked... he had 4 reviews... all positive.

 

[Yorae Rasante]

So... they became Pretenders, like the woman in the second Transformers movie?
Or did they take over someone's body, like Starscream can do?
Or the third, crossover-y option, they developed human-like bodies when a devil resurrected their Spark not knowing of their evil personalities?

Becoming human for no reason is too stupid-- that's exactly what happened, isn't it?

And why those names? Since I gave myself three acceptable (kind of) explanations for them being humans, they became the stupider part of this in my head.
Oh wait, giving the villains an harem of girls that would much more likely to be their enemies takes over, but it is a good second place.

 

[Oni_Rinku]

no, No, NO!!! This is inconceivable!

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]FairyTail's Akatsuki[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Jay3000[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]4 years ago Mira and Reen(Not an Oc) was always fight over him and but he told them he couldn't decide between them so they continue to fight until he told them if they want to be with him they would have to share him. But both of them refuse so he left the guild on a mission and he hasn't return as yet
Rated: M - English - Chapters: 21 - Words: 147,792 - Reviews: 311 - Favs: 764 - Follows: 794 - Updated: Aug 19 - Published:Aug 19, 2013 - [Naruto U., Mirajane S., Bisca M., Evergreen][/font]

 

[Yorae Rasante]

no, No, NO!!! This is inconceivable!

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]FairyTail's Akatsuki[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Jay3000[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]4 years ago Mira and Reen(Not an Oc) was always fight over him and but he told them he couldn't decide between them so they continue to fight until he told them if they want to be with him they would have to share him. But both of them refuse so he left the guild on a mission and he hasn't return as yet
Rated: M - English - Chapters: 21 - Words: 147,792 - Reviews: 311 - Favs: 764 - Follows: 794 - Updated: Aug 19 - Published:Aug 19, 2013 - [Naruto U., Mirajane S., Bisca M., Evergreen][/font]

From the characters tagged, I'd imagine Reen is an utterly idiotic abreviation of Evergreen. I imagine that the "him" is Naruto?
From what I can gather the author is using Akatsuki to mean "Naruto Hunters" or something like that, because else the name makes no sense.

But I'll never find out unless someone here tells me. Typical power fantasy, not worth a read in my opinion.

 

[AoMythology]

no, No, NO!!! This is inconceivable!

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]FairyTail's Akatsuki[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Jay3000[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]4 years ago Mira and Reen(Not an Oc) was always fight over him and but he told them he couldn't decide between them so they continue to fight until he told them if they want to be with him they would have to share him. But both of them refuse so he left the guild on a mission and he hasn't return as yet
Rated: M - English - Chapters: 21 - Words: 147,792 - Reviews: 311 - Favs: 764 - Follows: 794 - Updated: Aug 19 - Published:Aug 19, 2013 - [Naruto U., Mirajane S., Bisca M., Evergreen][/font]

From the characters tagged, I'd imagine Reen is an utterly idiotic abreviation of Evergreen. I imagine that the "him" is Naruto?
From what I can gather the author is using Akatsuki to mean "Naruto Hunters" or something like that, because else the name makes no sense.

But I'll never find out unless someone here tells me. Typical power fantasy, not worth a read in my opinion.

Yeah, not touching that with a ten-foot pole.

 

[Oni_Rinku]

This one is just plain wrong...

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Harry Potter Pokemon master Diamond Pearl and Platinum[/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial] by [/font][font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Hero of Neutrality[/font]

[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]Lily divorces james after he tries to force her to give up harry in favor of Charles potter the boy who lived. She remarries again and is living a happy life. Harry begins his pokemon journey at age eleven instead of going to hogwarts. Warning Dumbles bashing, weasley bashing and minor potter bashing. smart ash
Crossover - Pokémon & Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 36 - Words: 120,833 - Reviews: 91 - Favs: 207 - Follows: 164 - Updated: Apr 28 - Published: May 9, 2015 - Harry P., Hermione G., OC, Daphne G. - Complete[/font]

 

[Yorae Rasante]

Wait, is Harry Ash then, which means Lily is Delia? Who was she married to if Ash's father never appeared then?

 

[Oni_Rinku]

Wow, it's been over a year sense anyone's posted here...well might as well see if anyone comes back!

This summary isn't as bad as some of the ones I've found in the past, but it's still one that makes you cringe on the inside; if just a little bit.

The Second Rikodou Sennin by essentilas reviews
Naruto leaves Konoha, feeling betrayed by Sakura. Letting Itachi be the Hokage, Naruto leaves Konoha to train with all the tailed beast. 3 and a half years later when Naruto returns, stronger then ever he realizes that some things never changes. Upon returning, new turmoil and hardships shows up. Will Narusaku survive? Genre: Romance, Humor, Action and Adventure.
Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 67,784 - Reviews: 134 - Favs: 156 - Follows: 155 - Updated: May 30, 2014 - Published: May 19, 2012 - Naruto U., Sakura H.

NinjaEdit: I found this one and it contradicts itself. His village thought he was dead, but the villagers were out for his head?

The Lonely Fox by Morak120 reviews
It has been 2 and a half years since Naruto left his home. His village thought he was dead, Sakura has become even more confusing than before, and the villagers are out for his head. Yep.. Things seem to just keep getting worst. Warning slight Lemon/Lime very late in the story. DISCONTINUED
Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 57 - Words: 206,715 - Reviews: 363 - Favs: 364 - Follows: 366 - Updated: Jun 28, 2015 - Published: Apr 10, 2012 - Naruto U., Sakura H. - Complete

Edit 1-22-18: While looking for something to read I found a summary so bad, that I wanted to share it with the world.

Naruto Is a Girl's Name Too by Jaja-gal reviews
Yami has a great idea, Twist The Naruto Plotline! Naruto is a girl! Greatest Fuuinjutsu ever! But not god-likey stuff. Eh heh, did I mention me? I'm living a great ninja life! Yeah, and a twisted plotline, Yami is bored of the same ole stuff. Ya know, so (Evil chuckles). Beware! Watch your reading! There might end up being an epic war! Oh and... Naruto is a girl's Name TOO!
Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 12 - Words: 101,838 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 53 - Updated: Sep 30, 2017 - Published: Jul 26, 2017 - Kakashi H., Naruto U., Naruko U.

I'm not sure what the author was trying to say in the summary to be quite honest, and I'm not even going to try to read the story proper.

 

[AoMythology]

Does anyone hate the name 'Hadrian' as much as I do in HP fanfics? Anything with that word in the summary is summarily disregarded.

 

[Oni_Rinku]

Does anyone hate the name 'Hadrian' as much as I do in HP fanfics? Anything with that word in the summary is summarily disregarded.

I hate it as well. And on to another summary that looks like vomit...

Fairy Worlds by Adam the Pirate Assassin King reviews
Ayato Usagi Kaze, a Sixteen year old boy In a world unlike his, where Mages Shinobi and pirates roam. Meeting strange people, he Is told to have powers that no one had seen In many years, with these powers he Is trained and Is meant to fight a battle, one that will shape the fate of two worlds, Including his. AyaLucy (OcxLucy), NaruSaku, LuNa, IchiHime, GotenxBulla, NatsuxErza etc.
Crossover - Naruto & Fairy Tail - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 7 - Words: 52,749 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 7 - Updated: Jan 17 - Published: Oct 18, 2018 - [OC, Lucy H.] [Naruto U., Sakura H.]

...I'm not sure why all of the "I's" are capitalized. His sentence structure is awful as well...