Ranma ½ I just saw this fic and I hate this about it!

Dumbledork

Well-Known Member
Story makes Hulk angry. Hulk smash puny author.

Unfortunately, MadHat886 has created another monstrosity. I really liked Suikoden One Half at first until it turned into complete shit. Since then all his fics have always been crappy and his latest Ranma crossover doesn't stop the trend.

The Monster Lord » by MadHat886 reviews
Thanks to Akane sending him to a land of monsters. Ranma ends up becoming the new Monster Lord. The question is if he can return home and if he will survive that long. Crossover with Monster Girl Quest and Violated Hero, Harem fic
Crossover - Ranma & Game X-overs - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 13,279 - Reviews: 61 - Favs: 111 - Follows: 97 - Updated: 7-14-13 - Published: 6-25-13
Like all his other fics lately and especially 'Overlord Ranma' this story is about Ranma becoming lord of an incredibly large harem and doing nothing all day but fuck every girl in the world. The plot like always is almost non existing and it's quite obvious that he doesn't use a spellchecker or at least reread the crap he's written.

The plot is rather simplistic (or should I say non existent)? Monster girls turn Ranma into a sex monster with a ridiculously huge dick and unending stamina (as well as the ability to produce gallons of semen without pause) and keep him prisoner in the castle so that they can fuck him all day.

What really gets me is how many people actually LIKE his crappy works.
 
I'm taking that down.That was actually my first story I have a beta now but, I gave up on that story long ago
 

Dumbledork

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This one's definitely for the trash can.

Forever Stuck with you
Author: ranmaxxxryougalover PM
ATTENTION! This story is not like the other Ranma/Ryoga pairing... If you don't want what you read... just close the story and find another Ranma/Ryoga pairing... The SUMMaRY IS INSIDE!
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction T - English - Romance - Ranma & Ryoga - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,353 - Published: 10-04-13 - id: 9737676
:headbanger: :headbanger:

Here's the COMPLETE (!!!) first chapter for your enjoyment... or not.

Summary:
Ranko is a new scholar student at Furinkan Highschool. With her bestfriends who attend to that school, They're going to have happiness, sadness, anger, and of course LOVE. She is going to meet her greatest enemy which they are going to be together in the end. RANKO/RYOGA PAIRING

CHARACTERS:

Ranko Kinomiya:
She is not the half of Ranma. Yes she has the red hair and blue eyes but in this story, she wears thick eyeglasses and her hair is messy. She is 17 years old and her birthday is July 25.

Ryoga Hibiki:
If he was so sweet and shy on the episode, in this story he is a very rude and cold guy. He is one of the hottest guys in the school. He doesn't also lost easily. He is the Captain of Soccer. He is 18 years old and his birthday is May 25.

Friends of Ranko:

Akane Tendo:
Bestfriend of Ranko. She is the tomboy one of the group. She had her original short navy blue hair. She is 17 years old and her birthday is on August 04.

Xiam Pu(Shampoo):
She had long purple hair. Her accent and grammar is a bit wrong but she can speak english. She is 18 years old and her birthday is on Oct. 08.

Nabiki Tendo:
Sister of Akane. She is called the Ice Queen of Furinkan High. She is 19 years old and her birthday is on June 06.

Friends of Ryoga:

Ranma Saotome:
He is one of the hottest guy on school. He is the Playboy of the four. Like the anime, he had the pigtail on. He looks like Ranko only he has black hair. He is the Captain of Basketball Club. He is 17 years old and his birthday is on July 25 making them looks like a twin.

Mu Su (Mousse):
Hottest Guy on school. He is a Chinese but he was born in Japan. He had a long hair that just like in the anime. He is the Captain of Badminton Club. He is 18 years old and his birthday is on April 01.

Tatewaki Kuno:
His father was the principal of the school. He is also the Captain of Kendo Club. He is 19 years old and his birthday is on February 19.

Antagonist:

Akari Unryu:
She is one of the princess in the school. She is sweet, beautiful but when it comes to enemy, she could be a complete bitch. But she is a complete sweetheart with her friends. She was inlove with Ryoga. She is the Captain of Cheerleading. She is 18 years old and her birthday is on May 30.

Kodachi Kuno:
Little sister of Tatewaki. She is a friend of Akari and also known to school. She is the Captain of Gymnastic Team. She is 17 years old and her birthday is on August 19.

Ukyo Kuonji:
Friend of Akari. She is a girl that is a playgirl. TEMPORARY GF of Ranma. She is a slut + mean = bitch. She is the Captain of Swimming. She is 17 years old and her birthday is on December 08.

That's all

AUTHORS NOTE:
I'm so sorry for the wrong grammar and also if your expecting to be a real Ranma/Ryoga that have fights, fiancée or anything like that. And I'm very sorry for the fans of Ukyo. I don't to be rude but... ^_^V. PEACE!

PLEASE REVIEW!
Please, anyone, for the love of God, kill the author or at least confiscate his computer.
 

Li Qin

Well-Known Member
Tatewaki Kuno:
His father was the principal of the school. He is also the Captain of Kendo Club. He is 19 years old and his birthday is on February 19.
So Kuno's gonna be at least 20 when he finishes high school? Man this crowd is full of complete dumbarses. I wonder if they're all in their last year or have they been stuck in the same grades as in the manga.
 

Dumbledork

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This one's really horrible (as you can already imagine by reading the summary and by looking at the name of the author, of course):

True Suffering » by kellym01 reviews
Title may or may not change, Ranma suffered greatly on the training journey, locked in her cursed form and having lost more than her fair share, how will this change Ranma and her impact on Nerima I don't own Ranma 1/2 plz R&R, no flames on why Ranma was in China early Rated T because I'm Paranoid
Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,341 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 10-9-13 - Published: 10-2-13
Ranma and Genma have been to Jusenkyo 10 years earlier and the story starts with their arrival in Nerima.

The first sentence is enough to figure out what type of story this will be

A red haired girl with a broken spirit
Introduction goes differently as the curses are explained before Akane asks Ranma to spar with her (and offer her friendship).

Immediately after the engagement is mentioned Akane lets out her obnoxious personality (even before the engagement is forced on her)

Great one of us are going to be engaged to a sex changing pervert
But it's the following part (conversation between Ranma and psycho bitch Akane) that's pretty much killed the story for me (although I've finished the chapter to find out what other crap the author has come up with)

"HOW DARE YOU ACCUSE ME OF BEING A PERVERT YOU BITCH" Ranma roared, everyone flinched when they heard the pure hatred in Ranma's voice, everyone slide back, even Akane leaned back slightly taken aback by their 'guest's' reaction.

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN HOW DARE I YOU'RE A BOY AND ALL BOYS ARE PERVERTS AND YOU'RE WORSE THAN THE ONES AT SCHOOL YOU TURN INTO A GIRL AND FEEL YOUSELF UP AND USE TO SPY ON GIRLS IN THE CHANGING ROOM" Akane roared at Ranma, who just smirked in response.

"And why would I do that I've had enough sexual contact to last me a thousand life times" Ranma responded with false calm, everyone could see the rage that lay within Ranma's eyes.

"You see you admit it you're a PERVERT" Akane roared in response which only served to raise Ranma's anger, she even began to give off a red battle aura that consumed to dojo and beyond like a towering inferno.

"Oh so I'm a pervert just because I was raped and sold for sex on several occasions" Ranma responded in false calm, it took everyone a few moments to process what Ranma had just said silence filling the air.
:lonegunman::headbanger::flameon:

Ladies and gentlemen, Psycho bitch Akane has landed.

Okay, not really all that unexpected, since that's rather common on fanfics. Akane doesn't know Ranma at all, has had no bad experiences (bath scene) and insults him without any kind of provocation.

One thing I've been wondering about, why is Ranma smirking when Akane starts insulting him? Doesn't make sense, but then what does in this fic?

Thne, good old saintly Kasumi asks for more information, which Ranma gladly gives

"Pop sold me for sex every time he got hungry, he even sold me for food even as a baby before stealing me back, he even arranged for me to be in the wrong place at the wrong time so I'd be raped and he'd catch the thug in the act and have them pay him not to tell anyone what they'd done to me, his 'precious helpless daughter'" Ranma replied using a girly helpless tone with the last part "And in my experience boys weren't the biggest perverts I've been sold to girls so many times I lost track and each of them liked it kinky" Ranma added.
Genma doesn't deny the accusations and is not even a little ashamed of himself.

There we have it, ladiesn and gentlemen. A father sells a child not even in puberty into sexual slavery, has him raped repeatedly for money by pedophiles and the police hasn't done a single thing. What has the world come to.

Then we learn that the Amazons locked his curse out of spite because a 10-year-old-boy (!!!) refused to marry their champion. Yeah, right.

Because when I was ten we had a run in with some amazons, I beat one of them and I refused to marry her so one of the elders locked my curse, best of it is I'd just learned to forms at will, the Amazon I'm supposed to marry is still hunting us and only when I marry her will my curse be unlocked" Ranma responded.
Okay, so Shampoo has been hunting Ranma for 6 (!!!!) years? Really persistent. But even stranger is that Bastard!Genma hasn't thought about capturing Shampoo too and sell her into slavery as well. Doesn't make sense at all.

But what really floored me is Soun's reaction to these revelations:
:headbanger: :headbanger:

"Well your situation isn't so bad this is Kasumi age 19 that's Nabiki age 17 and Akane age 16, choose one and that one will be your bride" Soun said as he introduced Ranma to his daughters, Ranma's expression turned back to ice so cold that Nabiki's didn't even hold a candle to it.
Okay, now my rage-meter has reached OVER 9,000!!!!!

Soun has just learned that his potential son-in-law is locked in female form, has been raped and sold for money since he was a little child, and what's the first time that comes to his mind? "Well, your situation isn't so bad?"
:crazy::crazy:

Okay, so if the same had happened to his daughters it wouldn't be so bad. He'll definitely win the father of the year award.

Ranma's reaction is strangely accurate. Probably the first reaction that makes sense in this story.

If I didn't marry an Amazon what makes you think I'll marry a girl I've only just met?" Ranma asked sarcastically
And Soun's answer...:jawdrop::spank::spank:

"Because it's a matter of honour" Soun responded
The first one who can tell me what about all of this is honorable gets a cookie.

And if that hadn't been enough we learn that Ranma wants to die and hopes that he'll find someone in Nerima willing to kill him.

Well, that one's easy. He just needs to annoy the psycho bitch and she'll do the job.
 
Yes.

Of course, as an author if I cannot look back at my old work and find something wrong, I am not trying to improve enough.
 

PCHeintz72

The Sentient Fanfic Search Engine mk II
Actually, I always hated that Soun was able to et away with that line not only in canon, but in 99% of fanfics that have it...

What the hell would he know about it not being bad... I don't see him in most stories with a transformational curse not under his control.
 

ijp92

Well-Known Member
the following fics summary.

Spring of Restless Goddess by dalton.mills.92 reviews
The characters in this story are not meant to be exact replicas of the ones from the animes. So if they act differently that's how I wanted them to act.
Crossover - Ranma & Oh My Goddess! - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,893 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 55 - Published: Nov 30, 2013
I've read plenty of fics with OOC characters. Both advertised as such and not. But I can't believe an author would just say "screw it" when it comes to characterization in a fic.
 

shiki

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ijp92 said:
the following fics summary.

Spring of Restless Goddess by dalton.mills.92 reviews
The characters in this story are not meant to be exact replicas of the ones from the animes. So if they act differently that's how I wanted them to act.
Crossover - Ranma & Oh My Goddess! - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,893 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 55 - Published: Nov 30, 2013
I've read plenty of fics with OOC characters. Both advertised as such and not. But I can't believe an author would just say "screw it" when it comes to characterization in a fic.
Hate to tell you this but it happens all the time. That is why 99% of fics aren't worth looking at while the !% can either trick you into believing that their OOC character is believable via development or they distract you with lots of action and/or shiny things so you don't care too much about characterization due to the awesome explosions.
 

Dumbledork

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Thread hasn't updated in a while, but this fic... honestly, what has the author been thinking? I haven't read it, but I can't imagine how this strange mix of characters is supposed to work... or who'd want to read something like that.

One Piece Adventures î – by ranma71016reviews
When Dragon kills a Devil Fruit user with an interesting ability, it brings Ranma and Ryoga from Ranma 1/2, Jen and Kira from the Dark Crystal, Dipper, Mabel, and Stan from Gravity Falls, Peter Griffin from Family Guy, and a Charizard from Pokemon into the One Piece world. They must now join the Straw hats if they are ever to return to their respective homes.
Crossover - Ranma & One Piece - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,318 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 4h ago - Published: Feb 1 - Ranma, Ryoga, Luffy, Zoro
 
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