Akamatsuverse Idea Time!

knight_of_ni

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Even so, his fear is of females. Confronting your fear works and all, I have heard of that, but they are the wrong people to go to in order to deal with that. Save Shinobu and Mitsumi, they all have low opinions of males and more specifically him, even if they get screwed over due to rising rent, and other such problems, I don't think they would really care.

After all, they treated him much the same when they thought he was in Todai, slightly better but still.

Oh and before anyone says anything, Kitsune does count, cause even when the lie still stood, she used him to get her kicks by making everyone else believe he was trying to take advantage of her.
 

Lord Raine

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knight_of_ni said:
Even so, his fear is of females. Confronting your fear works and all, I have heard of that, but they are the wrong people to go to in order to deal with that. Save Shinobu and Mitsumi, they all have low opinions of males and more specifically him, even if they get screwed over due to rising rent, and other such problems, I don't think they would really care.

After all, they treated him much the same when they thought he was in Todai, slightly better but still.

Oh and before anyone says anything, Kitsune does count, cause even when the lie still stood, she used him to get her kicks by making everyone else believe he was trying to take advantage of her.
You forgot Kanoko. While she is genuinely creepy at times, she does care
about him. And outside of trying to be with him, I can't remember her
ever doing anything to him.

Other than that, I agree for the most part. But I do think that the threat
of being evicted would cause at least some of them to come to their
senses. Especially if this is late in the series, and he's had some of the
bonding story arcs under his belt to help with relations.

Motoko can be reasonable if you get past the 'All men are perverts' thing.
I could see her being ashamed after some self-reflection and being chewed
out by Haruka. If she's truely a samauri, then she has a strict code of honor.
And harming the innocent goes against nearly every teneat of Samauri Bushido.

Naru? Meh. She wasn't even apologetic when she hospitalized Keitaro, so I'll
give you her as a point. She wouldn't even bat an eye if she heard she had
made Keitaro afraid of all women. She would most likely snort and say good
riddance, happy in the knowledge that put the fear of God into a perverted
man.

Shinobu would be a nervous wreck when she found out, I guarantee it. And
if she found out it was the other's fault that she may never get a chance
with Sempai? Oh shit. Those shy girls? They tend to be the scariest. All that
repressed emotion, channeled into anger? At the very best she would be
very short with them. At worst? She'll side with Kanoko and start a damn war.

Su is too innocent and young to know about most of what's going on, or realize
that her actions were actually hurting Keitaro in a perminant way, so I'll leave her
out of this. She's an innocent young girl. A genius of the highest calibur to be sure,
but still a little girl.

Mitsune? I could see her going either way, honestly. It all depends on if you want
her concience to give her a wake up call or not. But that's the authors decision.
I personally think that she might act, especially if you take into account the
subconcious resentment of Naru. Remember, Mitusne has had her eyes on a lot
of men in the past, but she always stepped aside for Naru. And seeing how Naru
isn't with anyone at the moment, it's obvious that she probably stepped aside for
nothing. Seta was the worst case of this, but not the only case, or so we're told.
So I see Mitsune as being on the fence, but leaning somewhat toward's the 'Help
Keitaro' side. Especially if it was Naru who acted as 'the final straw' so to speak.

Haruka has always acted (or at least tried to act) in Keitaros best interest. So wether
she's in the 'Keitaro is better off far away' camp or the 'Keitaro HAS to come back. It's
what's best for us all' camp rests solely on the attitudes of the other girls. If she thinks
he'll get a warm welcome, she'll be all for it. If not? Then she won't. But I see her
supporting any decision Keitaro makes regardless, so her attitude also depends somewhat
on him.

Mutsumi? Truely in love with Keitaro, IMO. She'll try to get him to come back. And if she
can't, she'll follow him where ever he goes, in her own clumsy way.


And that's all I've got for now. It's my opinion, so take it with liberal amounts of salt. And
some antacid's if you tend to get indigestion.
 

Lord Raa

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A new crackfic idea that probably won't work as anything more


What if Keitaro was instead of cheerfully optimistic, he was antagonistic?

HeÆs the sort of person that enjoys winding people up by taking things the wrong way and saying the wrong thing at the wrong time, like suggesting that the reason why Naru doesn't want men around is because she's a man-hating lesbian who intends to seduce the other residents. His aunt included!

He could come off as a bit Self Inserty, but in the hands of a talented author (unlike this poster), it could prove amusing.

There could also be pranks, but that would depend on the author.

Thoughts?
 

Legacy|iB

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Meh.

With a talented author, it may work out fine so long as they remember what they're supposed to be writing (crackfic material, I would suppose) and make it a witty sort of comedy. But given what I've seen in regards to fics that sounds close to this idea, as well as with certain authors from FFN and how they may see it, it's more than likely to turn into an extremely derivative bashing fic.

Again, it depends on the author, but the majority may turn it into such and if so, it isn't fun to read. There is a potential for some rather clever humour, but it's beyond this author and a majority of others from FFN.
 

division-six

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It would probably help if his "antagonism" wan't intentional.

For example, Motoko declares that she hates men.

Keitaro responds to this outburst by asking if she likes women instead, and asks (more or less innocently) if she has her eye on the other girls.

Shinobu steps in at that point of their exchange and runs from the room, shouting warnings to the other residents about how motoko was secretly planning to force herself on the other residents.

Following incidences of Motoko tripping (usually over Keitaro) and landing on the other girls in a manner similar to Keitaro call constantly call her preferences back into question.



Also, Kitsune's kind of a hard character due mostly to the fact that she has both a mean, manipulative streak and a kind, supportive streak.

As a general rule, she'll relentlessly tease people when everything is going their way, but is willing to lend an ear and support to those who are down on their luck, kinda like the big sister that she sees herself as.
 

knight_of_ni

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I think division six has a good general outline of how things would go.

Motoko, is she tripping because Keitaro is "helping her?" or is it an actual accident?

Kitsune would be easy to antagonize over money issues, however, innocently, it would be hard. It could be possible to say something about her teasing, or the fact that Naru was going for her breasts when Keitaro first met Naru.

Actually, this personality seems like a cross between Su and Sarah.
 

toraneko

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Reading that idea, after having watched a certain recent anime...

I got the mental image of Keitaro, having just failed the exam for the second time, snapping. His normally-upbeat personality does a one-eighty, and he becomes extremely negative - even to the point of attempting suicide.

And he can't ever succeed at that. Perhaps he actually wants to live, or perhaps he just fails that hard. Or maybe it's because of his immortality. Whatever.

Kicked out of his home for failing the second time (actually for the fact that his vocally negative persona drives the customers away), Keitaro suddenly receives a phone call from Granny Hina, inviting him to return to Hinata-sou.

He thinks to himself, "I remember that place. It was a beautiful place to go. Many pleasant childhood memories... Yeah, that would be a good place to die."

ZETSUBOUSHITAAA~!

Cue the Hinata gang trying to save him, only to find him pissed off that he was denied a pleasant end.

Thoughts?
 

Prince Charon

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knight_of_ni said:
Kitsune would be easy to antagonize over money issues, however, innocently, it would be hard. It could be possible to say something about her teasing, or the fact that Naru was going for her breasts when Keitaro first met Naru.
Given where her hand ended up, I'm not sure that she was going for Kitsune's breasts.
 

knight_of_ni

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Didn't she go for Keitaro's chest first and then his crotch?

Anyway, even though I know it shouldn't be taken lightly but I just have this image of everything going wrong every time he tries to commit suicide, but never even getting harmed, followed by him yelling "dammit" following each attempt.
 

Prince Charon

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knight_of_ni said:
Anyway, even though I know it shouldn't be taken lightly but I just have this image of everything going wrong every time he tries to commit suicide, but never even getting harmed, followed by him yelling "dammit" following each attempt.
Well, that will certainly change how they treat him. If he still has his various accidents, they may think he's trying to get them to kill him, since he's to incompetent to do it himself. Might also result in Keitaro getting laid sooner, as they try to give him a reason to live.
 

Lord Raa

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New crackfic idea.

What if TsurukoÆs husband wasnÆt all that ôheö seemed to be?

Since a certain martial artist is legally male, what if due to some issue (possibly a clerical error) Tsuruko is put forward for an omiai with Ukyo Kuonji?

Yes, the man that took Aneue away from Motoko isnÆt actually a man û that would also explain why Tsuruko was supportive of Motoko and Keitaro being engaged?

At least in that way, there was a chance of children.

Why would the families agree to continue such a bad idea, you ask, well, if it wasnÆt discovered until it was too late i.e. after the wedding, then theyÆd lose face.

I dread to think what sort of abuse theyÆd get if it came out that the reason for their daughterÆs annulment/divorce was because the husband is a woman.
 

Zenithos

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...Tsuruko makes it her life's goal to find the spring of drowned man...? :p

There is the promise of much injustice in this one. Zeni approves! :snigger: :rofl:
 

PCHeintz72

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Zenithos said:
...Tsuruko makes it her life's goal to find the spring of drowned man...? :p

There is the promise of much injustice in this one. Zeni approves! :snigger: :rofl:
For herself? Or for Ukyo?
 

alansg

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PCHeintz72 said:
Zenithos said:
...Tsuruko makes it her life's goal to find the spring of drowned man...?? :p

There is the promise of much injustice in this one. Zeni approves!? :snigger:? :rofl:
For herself? Or for Ukyo?
And that is the reason of why Motoko is afraid of Tsuruko (and men).
 

runestar

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And that is the reason of why Motoko is afraid of Tsuruko (and men).
If that was the case, you would think that the first thing she does before talking to a male is to physically check if he indeed is a guy to start with... :p
 

PCHeintz72

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runestar said:
And that is the reason of why Motoko is afraid of Tsuruko (and men).
If that was the case, you would think that the first thing she does before talking to a male is to physically check if he indeed is a guy to start with... :p
Now *that*, could lead to some interesting deviations from canon.

I do remember a Ranma story like that with Kodachi becoming sane due to a shock to the system learning of curses in general, but then absolutely paranoid as she was freaking out that anything around her could be a cursed individual. She carried either water balloons or squirt guns everwhere and was soaking people in attempts to determine what was what. I think it was a chapter of 'Possibilities' by Brian-kun-Taramoor.
 

Lord Raa

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New idea.

What if Haruka had a vision/DEM device to return to the past after seeing how poorly treated Keitaro would be when married to Naru and decided that she needed to act.

Now, I know that it has potential for Naru bashing, but if HarukaÆs vision/return to her time is early enough, then thereÆs a chance that she could take Naru to one side and explain things to her.

Of course, having seen how unhappy Kei would be with Naru, Haruka might try to set him up with another of the girls. I was thinking either Kitsune or Mutsumi.

Things donÆt go to plan and Haruka ends up falling for the ronin.

After that, I donÆt know, other than potential for smut.

Thoughts?
 

PCHeintz72

The Sentient Fanfic Search Engine mk II
Lord Raa said:
New idea.

What if Haruka had a vision/DEM device to return to the past after seeing how poorly treated Keitaro would be when married to Naru and decided that she needed to act.

Now, I know that it has potential for Naru bashing, but if HarukaÆs vision/return to her time is early enough, then thereÆs a chance that she could take Naru to one side and explain things to her.

Of course, having seen how unhappy Kei would be with Naru, Haruka might try to set him up with another of the girls. I was thinking either Kitsune or Mutsumi.

Things donÆt go to plan and Haruka ends up falling for the ronin.

After that, I donÆt know, other than potential for smut.

Thoughts?
I've seen variations of this idea in th LH universe play out both with Granny Hina, and Motoko, but not Haruka.

That would be intersting to read.

A note though, the idea of Haruka taking Naru under her wing, and giving so to speak, a fair warning, has been done in Ranma fanfiction, it rarely works out. 'Unfair Warning' by Brian Randall, comes to mind (very well written, but not for Akane fans).
 

Prince Charon

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Lord Raa said:
New idea.

What if Haruka had a vision/DEM device to return to the past after seeing how poorly treated Keitaro would be when married to Naru and decided that she needed to act.

Now, I know that it has potential for Naru bashing, but if HarukaÆs vision/return to her time is early enough, then thereÆs a chance that she could take Naru to one side and explain things to her.

Of course, having seen how unhappy Kei would be with Naru, Haruka might try to set him up with another of the girls. I was thinking either Kitsune or Mutsumi.

Things donÆt go to plan and Haruka ends up falling for the ronin.

After that, I donÆt know, other than potential for smut.

Thoughts?
Interesting thought. Had an idea like this with Naru going back, after either accidentally killing Keitaro, or just destroying their relationship, but I never got any detail on it.

The problem with trying to set Kei up with Kitsune or Mutsumi is that either one is quite likely to step aside for Naru, as they did in canon. Kanako wouldn't, but has her own special set of problems.

Still, you are one of the few writers who could make this work well.
 

division-six

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Mmm...Kei/Kitsu/Mutsu/Haru/Kana

*looks left*

*looks right*

...all we need to do now is figure out how to work in Tsuroko.
 

Lord Raa

Exporter of Juice Tins
New ideas, kinda inspired by PCHeintz72's comments in another thread.


1) What if instead of Seta, Keitaro learned from another wise master? The wise master in this twisted fic?

One Rokku Haado.


2) What if Tsuruko's husband decided that while Tsuruko's skills are exceptional in almost all areas, there's one that she's distinctly lacking in.

Unfortunately, Aneue is crap in the sack. To rectify this, she needs to learn the advanced marital arts from someone who knows these things.

And, since this is an anime/manga world, one can only learn these things from an experienced pervert.

Good news is that she knows where one is, thanks to her sister's letters.

The bad news is, it's Keitaro.


3) The above ideas are combined and Tsuruko is used as a final test for Keitaro to see if he's a suitable heir/replacement for Uncle Rocco.



Thoughts?
 
*Space Marine voice*

Your injustice has improved, My Lord. If you somehow manage to include Mutsumi (perhaps as a Teacher Aide to Keitaro, or perhaps even, someone to teach Tsuruko the art of making love to a woman, if you were so inclined), I shall praise you to the very heavens themselves!
 

Shikaze

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I said it once to you, Raa, and I'll say it again : Keitaro's gonna get killed/maimed/burned/mutilated/etc.... upon 2 days after this is known.
 

PCHeintz72

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New ideas, kinda inspired by PCHeintz72's comments in another thread.
Even, me, the black hole for comedic humor, can occasionally inspire someone.

As for the idea, I think it could even work as a serious work, not just a crack fic. It might be even more interesting if not just not good in sack, she is actually a prude (now if that is not a change from fannon portrails).

How about this, she reads the letters, discusses with husband and convinces husband to let her approach Keitaro on training. She goes to hinata, convinces Keitaro to teach her, slowly begins to fall for him, but not too much happens at first outside the training (which is very embarassing to even her), even if no one else believes them (re Motoko/Naru). Husband hears of this from Motoko, and wants nothing more to do with her, making her stay with Keitaro.
 
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