Akamatsuverse Mahou Iinazuke Negima!

#52
I think I read this section a while back but forgot to comment... great idea Al, I've read the other two parts posted, and this is great already.

Come to think of it... I'll enjoy Negi's wtf!? reaction when he realizes he's engaged to a robot... and the subsequent emotional interaction when he assures a sad Chachamaru that he was just suprised, not really bothered... :wub:
 

armedlord

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#53
ttestagr said:
Fatuous One said:
.........
Yes, botmaster is back.
I fear for all fiction in here becoming dead after he responds. (It has happened before of course)

And a fricken thread necromancy to boot. :headbanger:

Great, now I sound like I'm making this a 'you fail' post at 007.
 

Alzrius

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#55
There are two other scenes set further along in this fic in the Negima sub-section of the Lemon Fanfic area. One is "It's Body Time!" and the other is "Sexy Machine." Beyond that, I need to actually write some more.
 

TenguPhule

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#56
Alzrius said:
There are two other scenes set further along in this fic in the Negima sub-section of the Lemon Fanfic area. One is "It's Body Time!" and the other is "Sexy Machine." Beyond that, I need to actually write some more.
:flameon:

Yes, you do.
 

kitsuneb

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#57
For those who are wondering. Admiral Ambrant's "Child of Mine" does a sorta guess of Chao's ancestary. Hermann comes back, and petrifies Asuna, Ku Fei Setsuna and Kaede (I think,) Negi marries Nodoka but are unable to have children, near a century later Konoka's powers unfreeze everyone who was pertrified. Negi marries Ku Fei, they have a daughter. Daid daughter marries a male ancestor of Satsuki(the cook) Chao is born on Mars due to the lwsser magical concentration. War between the Mundanes and Magi errupts. Negi and Ku are taken to concentration camps, Ku dies of exsughstion and Negi dies cursing the day he was born. Chao makes up her mind to reveal magic to the mundanes earlier than what happened in her time.
 

thezorch

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#59
I miss the Brigadier, the way the Doctor always confounded him was hilarious.

Anywho, I whole heartedly approve of this fan fic concept and demand MOAR!

Aims Macross main gun at author.

I'm asking nicely. :evil2:
 

ttestagr

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#60
People are not going to like you for this. I don't care, but just letting you know.
 

zeebee1

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#64
This section is dead in the same way the One Piece threads aren't popular. It's hard to improve on something this good, so most people don't try.

Now that I think about it, why didn't anyone attack Shizuna? She was the bearer of bad news and felt no remorse that they had no rights nor that she was responsible for the termination of their previous relationships. After all, it's not like the Japanese government would know who Misa was dating unless someone, like Shizuna, told them.
 

thezorch

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#65
zeebee1 said:
This section is dead in the same way the One Piece threads aren't popular. It's hard to improve on something this good, so most people don't try.

Now that I think about it, why didn't anyone attack Shizuna? She was the bearer of bad news and felt no remorse that they had no rights nor that she was responsible for the termination of their previous relationships. After all, it's not like the Japanese government would know who Misa was dating unless someone, like Shizuna, told them.
Not sure, probably because she's so well liked, and the girls were all in shock at the time not really thinking straight. Well, that's Asuna's natural state. LOL

If I recall, isn't the whole government program to get people married from another anime? I seem to recall one with this exact premise, but I can't remember the name.
 

Antimatter

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#66
thezorch said:
zeebee1 said:
This section is dead in the same way the One Piece threads aren't popular. It's hard to improve on something this good, so most people don't try.

Now that I think about it, why didn't anyone attack Shizuna? She was the bearer of bad news and felt no remorse that they had no rights nor that she was responsible for the termination of their previous relationships. After all, it's not like the Japanese government would know who Misa was dating unless someone, like Shizuna, told them.
Not sure, probably because she's so well liked, and the girls were all in shock at the time not really thinking straight. Well, that's Asuna's natural state. LOL

If I recall, isn't the whole government program to get people married from another anime? I seem to recall one with this exact premise, but I can't remember the name.
My problem with negima fanfiction is well, i'm not reading Fansubs, only the official releases, so i'm over a year behind. Trying to avoid spoilers.
 

thezorch

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#67
Antimatter, your avatar looks like Onsakumaru (Ninja Nonsense) cosplaying as Gordon Freeman. :lol:

I like both seasons of "Negima!?". They're both fundamentally different, story-wise, and artistically.
 
#68
And then Evangeline nukes Tokyo via Chachamaru-proxy.

Nothing of value is lost.
 

zeebee1

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#69
The problem with this idea is that it's crap. It's really that simple. If you come in with a bad idea good writing will only hide the fact that the idea is bad for a while.
 

Chuckg

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#70
Yeah. 'Why the hell is the government of Japan arranging marriages? Especially like this?' is a giant elephant in the room, that the fic did not even try to answer -- and oh Lord, did it need answering.

Pity. The premise had great potential for laughter. But if you're gonna do a big stretch, you need to properly limber up...
 

thezorch

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#71
Hmmm, you could take a page from the good book of "Maburaho". Say Negi being a wizard isn't a secret. The other girls in the class aren't wizards because they don't have any magical talents, except for Eva but that's because she's a vampire. The families and/or legal guardians of the girls discovers who their new teacher is, what his lineage is, and well you do the math.

Might not be a much better suggestion than the original but at least it gives the girls better motivations to want to be engaged to him.
 

zeebee1

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#72
Evangaline is a mage, and that isn't because she's a vampire. Also, several people in the class, including Yuna and Makie have some level of magic potential.
 
#73
zeebee1 said:
Evangaline is a mage, and that isn't because she's a vampire. Also, several people in the class, including Yuna and Makie have some level of magic potential.
There's also Konoka, who is a potential mage herself, Setsuna who is a demon, Zazie who is probably a demon, Chachamaru's a robot, Sayo is a ghost...
 

EspyLacopa

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#74
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
zeebee1 said:
Evangaline is a mage, and that isn't because she's a vampire. Also, several people in the class, including Yuna and Makie have some level of magic potential.
There's also Konoka, who is a potential mage herself, Setsuna who is a demon, Zazie who is probably a demon, Chachamaru's a robot, Sayo is a ghost...
And let's not even think about what Asuna is (or might be o_O)
 
#75
EspyLacopa said:
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
zeebee1 said:
Evangaline is a mage, and that isn't because she's a vampire. Also, several people in the class, including Yuna and Makie have some level of magic potential.
There's also Konoka, who is a potential mage herself, Setsuna who is a demon, Zazie who is probably a demon, Chachamaru's a robot, Sayo is a ghost...
And let's not even think about what Asuna is (or might be o_O)
Mana is off limits and Chao is his descendant.

There is no way in hell forcibly engaging a ten year old boy to that bunch could be received well by anyone. The story breaks in American media by the next day and suddenly Britain and Japan are being LIBERATED IN THE NAME OF FREEDOM. (Remember that Negima takes place in 2004-05.)
 
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