while that's all well and good I honestly think you should seriously play up other half of what your talking about there. The adults and men not being effective or even being able to help?
That's unfortunate but I also think that needs to be the focus, perhaps have one teen-age male as a focus to give the more male readers a perspective they can appreciate. If nothing else I would dearly love to see one selfish BOY who might even need to be messed up in the head somehow figure out a way for him at least to join the fight and in doing so be responsible for turning the tide in the conflict that's been a stalemate for so long.
Maybe the main reason these mascots don't ever pick male at all has something to do with power output. Or maybe its because that a man's power is far too dense to work into anything like the spells magical girls use. You try fighting people with guns with only your bare fists and tell me how that turns out realistically, usually.
for this idea I've kinda got the kid's personality in my head already. Have ya'll seen Hunter x Hunter? Gon and Killua, those two boys if they were one kid with aspects of both well I somehow doubt they would loose in that gunfight scenario I just mentioned.
Whatever the case may be, this boy would be responsible for turning the tide. He's not ordinary, hell maybe he's not even "cute" to the magical girls he's now working with, but his force of will, battle-mania, and sheer BALLS pulls him through were lesser men and most women would cut and run.
As a plot point later on maybe the dark champion actually falls for him, age ain't nuthin and she's be like, what 10 years older than him? I'd want that to be somewhat controversial. So you get the classic "love conquers all" theme offset by social taboo by both audience and cast alike.
Just remember adolescence is a 20th century idea.
That's unfortunate but I also think that needs to be the focus, perhaps have one teen-age male as a focus to give the more male readers a perspective they can appreciate. If nothing else I would dearly love to see one selfish BOY who might even need to be messed up in the head somehow figure out a way for him at least to join the fight and in doing so be responsible for turning the tide in the conflict that's been a stalemate for so long.
Maybe the main reason these mascots don't ever pick male at all has something to do with power output. Or maybe its because that a man's power is far too dense to work into anything like the spells magical girls use. You try fighting people with guns with only your bare fists and tell me how that turns out realistically, usually.
for this idea I've kinda got the kid's personality in my head already. Have ya'll seen Hunter x Hunter? Gon and Killua, those two boys if they were one kid with aspects of both well I somehow doubt they would loose in that gunfight scenario I just mentioned.
Whatever the case may be, this boy would be responsible for turning the tide. He's not ordinary, hell maybe he's not even "cute" to the magical girls he's now working with, but his force of will, battle-mania, and sheer BALLS pulls him through were lesser men and most women would cut and run.
As a plot point later on maybe the dark champion actually falls for him, age ain't nuthin and she's be like, what 10 years older than him? I'd want that to be somewhat controversial. So you get the classic "love conquers all" theme offset by social taboo by both audience and cast alike.
Just remember adolescence is a 20th century idea.