Harry Potter The HP Fic Recommendation Thread

voidseeker

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Death, in Glory

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3697031/1/Death_In_Glory

Crossover with 300: The Movie. AU Time is a fragile dimension, and mixing magic with it has severe repercussions more often than not. What does the future hold for Harry, raised in ancient Sparta, then thrust back into the Future? Eventual Honks


good shit dood, on par with his other story
 

BakaNeko

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With the recent updates I've got a theme for today's recommendations.

I have seen some of the weirdest OOC (Out of Character) changes for the flimsiest of reasons.

But some of the worst stories I've read were classed as Evil Harry, !DarkHarry, and whatever the writers want to call their own fic where it's not OOC but character reversal.

"Oh and by the way Harry? everything has been a lie" and etc. Almost ALL the bad ones use a plot that can be summed up in that sentence. Using that they introduce any idea they can get their hands on and make things cool. But then even after that its not Harry Potter anymore or a Harry Potter with a new outlook or motives in life but a self insert and a "What would I do?" character named Harry Potter.

I loathe DLP (DarkLordPotter.net) for the above reasons. The only truly !EvilHarry original fic I remember from there was Oedipus Flower (which can be found in our Lemon section)


I'd like to think that if Harry turned dark he'd still have a moral compass. Not emulate Hitler or Voldemort or become a psychopathic butt-buddy to Lucius Malfoy.

Like a Noir-action hero, he'd get the job done while skirting the line between Good and Evil not the Ass-backwards Wizarding World's definition of Light and Dark.


Today's fics are what I'd class dark by Harry's actions, compass and or orientation and falls under the category of Harry doing the great things as Ollivander suggested.


The first two fics are updates of stories been named earlier and the rest might've been named when this thread was started by NDF-san.


Harry as been doing "great things" and has helped cause alot of ruckus. *Snicker*
The Wizard of Gotham
Summary:After failing to cheat Bruce Wayne on a deal for drills, Vernon Dursley takes his frustrations out on Harry Potter, by abandoning him in Gotham City.
Harry Potter and the Shell of the God King
Summary The aptly named Department of Mysteries is home to a great many things that wizardkind does not yet understand. Luna releases one of them and forever alters the course of history. Branches off at OotP darker and independent Harry.

Even if he's evil. It's still the right thing to do.
Harry Potter and the Evil Summer Vacation by Meteoricshipyards
Summary: Harry's summer vacation isn't exactly as the Dursley's planned. There are a few repercussions.
Unless you play with matches in a forest.
Burn Baby Burn! by Dark-Syaoran
Summary: [Complete] Harry Potter loves to watch things burn. A series of oneshot ficlets. [Pyromaniac Harry] [2007 DLP Best AntiHero Award Winner]

And finally these last fic I think are !BadguyHarry or at the very least to the Wizarding World.
Ringmaster and Silencebringer are correct. I'm sorry for having put this here. Never post in a rush, especially if you're going to the airport in 30mins.
The Chimera: More Snake than Lion by Apocalypso-33
Summary:AU: It does not pay to underestimate Harry Potter. Illusions are shattered as a young Lord rises to power and casts off those that deter him. Independant!Political!Powerful!Dark!Harry, HarryChoTonks
Enjoy reading, everyone!
 
Do you really consider this
Harry Potter: The Dark Wraith by Hate's Fury
Summary:Harry is betrayed and killed by Dumbledore. Ron, jealous and filled with hate, helps Dumbledore. Harry returns as a wraith to seek his revenge. This will be a HHG fic later on.
a good story ?

So Harry being out of character you dislike, but Ron having no character at all and Dumbledore being fucked up beyound anything he could ever be is okay with you.

Because thats all there is to this story, I've only read the first chapter and there are so many clichÚes already and the characterisation of Ron and Dumbledore is so bad, that I'll never read another story of this author again.

That doesn't mean that there aren't any good stories in which Harry gets betrayed by others, just look at Bungle in the Junge from jbern, who I might add is also at DLP, but I agree with you on this point, there are far too many stories in which Harry behaves totally out of character and many of them can be found at the Dark Lord Potter forum which is also why I do not often look there for any new fics.
 

Ringmaster

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Silencebringer said:
Do you really consider this
Harry Potter: The Dark Wraith by Hate's Fury
Summary:Harry is betrayed and killed by Dumbledore. Ron, jealous and filled with hate, helps Dumbledore. Harry returns as a wraith to seek his revenge. This will be a HHG fic later on.
a good story ?

So Harry being out of character you dislike, but Ron having no character at all and Dumbledore being fucked up beyound anything he could ever be is okay with you.

Because thats all there is to this story, I've only read the first chapter and there are so many clichÚes already and the characterisation of Ron and Dumbledore is so bad, that I'll never read another story of this author again.

That doesn't mean that there aren't any good stories in which Harry gets betrayed by others, just look at Bungle in the Junge from jbern, who I might add is also at DLP, but I agree with you on this point, there are far too many stories in which Harry behaves totally out of character and many of them can be found at the Dark Lord Potter forum which is also why I do not often look there for any new fics.
Agreed. After about two paragraphs I stopped reading and started skimming.

Instant Love? Check.

Bad punctuation? Rampant.

Author deciding to alter everyone's characters with no reason/backstory whatsoever? Double check.

No-discernable-plot no jutsu? Check.

Here are some quotes!

ô You best be afraid Weasley, HermioneÆs honor is at stake here and I will defend it.ö
/gag

ô Yes, but I am in love with someone.ö
ô Really? With who?ö Harry asked apprehensively. He hoped he was right about what she was going to say. Please let it be...\
ô You.ö She whispered.\
ô Me?ö
ô You.ö Hermione said again. ô Ever since the end of third year.ö
ô I love you too Mione.ö
ô Since when?ö
ô End of first year.ö HermioneÆs eyes widened at this.
ô Poor Harry.ö She said sympathetically. ô You loved me long before I loved you, IÆm sorry.ö
ô ItÆs ok.ö Harry smiled. ô At least we both know now right?ö
ô Yes Harry.ö
/choke

ô LetÆs see.ö Harry said flopping down on his cold hard bed.

Chapter One: Forms of immortality

There are many forms of immortality, but few are directly related to the dark side of magic. The most well known forms of dark magic immortality are The Horcruxes, Soul absorption, and Wraith transformation.

The Horcruxes are items that an extremely powerful dark wizard or witch uses to contain pieces of his or her own soul. The advantages of this method are that the witch or wizard becomes very hard to destroy and their power increases by hundreds of times. However, the drawbacks to this method are that the witch or wizard go insane from the power flowing through them. This method is completely unreliable and I do not recommend it.

The method of Soul Absorption is slightly better than the method of using Horcruxes. The soul is not split apart, but is joined by however many souls a witch or wizard devour. It would not change a personÆs appearance, but would give their eyes a noticeable twinkle.


Harry finished reading the last sentence and thought back to DumbledorÆs eyes. They twinkled every time he saw him. Could he possibly be eating souls? Like a dementor! That would explain why Dumbledor had stuck around after the battle at the department of mysteries. He had devoured the souls of the fallen death eaters. Dumbledor was the leader of the light side though. How could he lead light when he is consumed in darkness. Harry turned his attention back to the book.

This form is completely undetectable by dark detecting magic and is only seeable if the wielder wills it. This form is again unreliable, because a witch or wizard more powerful than the soul absorber could simply hold off until the Wielder becomes weak. Then they could easily destroy all the souls in the wielderÆs body.

The most misunderstood form of the whole bunch is the Wraith form. Most people believe wraiths to be dark spirits from the underworld. While this is in fact true, it is also a form of dark immortality. This form is not affiliated with either good or evil. It is a form commonly based on two things. Death and revenge. The death must be either violent or melancholy. It can not be natural or happy (pain potions, love potions, Imperious curse, etc.). There must be a sense of betrayal, from friends, family, lovers, mentors etc. A new wraith must establish contact with an important person in the human world or else it will return to the afterlife. This form is the most effective form of immortality, but the wraith can become human if its power is drained. The witch or wizard who becomes a wraith, must conserve its power and remember not to over use it.

The other forms of immortality are discussed in later chapters. As you read though this book, I hope you gather a true understanding of the dark arts, not as evil or malicious magic, but as a valuable and resourceful form of magic that can increase your power or give you immortality, should you be brave enough to try.
Deus ex machina, anyone?

He saw a flash of green light strike right next to him. He turned and saw that Ron had cast the spell.

ô You wonÆt leave this place alive Potter,ö

ôExpellidermus!ö RonÆs wand flew out of his hand and down the steps.
Expellidermus? :huh:


...this is not a story that should be recommended.
 

BakaNeko

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My bad, looking back I can see that I put the story here to match what I was talking about. I started to read that story fairly early in my foray into Harry Potter, and only reread the latest chapter in it.

Sorry for letting that slip by. Really I'm hating myself a little more over this. Thanks for looking out.

To apologize I offer a up a story that was just updated today.

Time, Intterupted by Madm05
Summary: After she is murdered, Hermione's soul is sent back in time in order to prevent Harry from becoming the next Dark Lord, but quickly learns her task is not as easy as she thought it would be. A second chance story, with a twist. Eventual HHr
I haven't reread it yet, I remember the glimpses of Harry the Dark Lord were very memorable.
 

Jadedmagus

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While I would say recommending a fic you haven't reread is profoundly unwise, Time, Interupted is ok, but not great. Considering how far it backsteps, I just don't really care that much about who does what to whom, in preschool.

Eventual HHr my ass, that will be creepy as all hell, he is her brother for all purposes. While "Incest is best, put your sister to the test" might be the rule of thumb on the board, I personally feel that it only applies to the exceptionally hot girls...

Though brief and rare, the Dark Harry scenes are of pretty high quality.
 

BakaNeko

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Another lesson I've also learned is to NOT be on a sugar high.

Yea, those scenes stick out, I can actually recall them almost vividly. I remember in author notes that it was to be a trilogy. Part one, Hermione is sent back, Part two was going to be about the rise of Dark Lord Harry, and Part three was where the "goodHarry" fights the "badHarry. Who knows if the author's plans are still the same. I'll be waiting for Part two.

Theres a thread in the Love Hina section on the topic of Kanako (little sister), her circumstances and whether she should be attracted to Keitaro. Someone brought up a wiki page on a doctor who studied how children brought up together are wired so that they don't find each other sexually (physically) attracted to each other.

In Time, Interupted I'm pretty sure the author IS going for the creep factor. At least Harry's obsession with all things now Hermione.
 

Ringmaster

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Meh, we're all guilty of posting too fast sometimes, just slow down a little. We won't haunt you in your sleep if you don't post NOW NOW NOW!!

Besides, it's not your fault. Just look at my signature, and all will become clear to you...
 

BakaNeko

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Ooo, Update that reminded me about a very dark story. From the guy who brought you the porn with plot, Sword of Gryffindor comes a series of one shots. Affectionately called Screams, feel pity for the Harry Potter's enemies.

Screams
Summary:After the war ends, Neville is visited by a friend he thought dead. An experiment in a darker style of writing by the author. Feedback appreciated. One shot. DARK FIC! DARK EVIL HERMIONE! MAJOR CHARACTER DEATHS!

The Smiling Man
Summary: Continuation of ôScreamsö. Fugitives Draco and Ginny try to find a place to hide from their pursuers. Post HBP DARK FIC Features Dark!Harry and Insane!Hermione

Reunion
Summary: ôScreamö Universe. Harry is separated from Hermione. SociopathHarry! Violence and Gore.

Cause and Effect
Summary: What happened to Hermione while Harry was unconscious in the story ôReunionö? DarkEvil HHr. Fourth part of the ôScreams Universe.ö
 

Ringmaster

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BakaNeko said:
Ooo, Update that reminded me about a very dark story. From the guy who brought you the porn with plot, Sword of Gryffindor comes a series of one shots. Affectionately called Screams, feel pity for the Harry Potter's enemies.

Screams
Summary:After the war ends, Neville is visited by a friend he thought dead. An experiment in a darker style of writing by the author. Feedback appreciated. One shot. DARK FIC! DARK EVIL HERMIONE! MAJOR CHARACTER DEATHS!

The Smiling Man
Summary: Continuation of ôScreamsö. Fugitives Draco and Ginny try to find a place to hide from their pursuers. Post HBP DARK FIC Features Dark!Harry and Insane!Hermione

Reunion
Summary: ôScreamö Universe. Harry is separated from Hermione. SociopathHarry! Violence and Gore.

Cause and Effect
Summary: What happened to Hermione while Harry was unconscious in the story ôReunionö? DarkEvil HHr. Fourth part of the ôScreams Universe.ö
Creepy, but cool.
 

ttestagr

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Love Has No Age by Easysurfing
Harry is told that he has the power of Love, but what does this mean? With the
help of a Gabrielle, Ginny and some others he learns exactly what this means and the
benefits that come with it! Post -OOTP


One of the few good fics on ficwad that's being updated regularly. Harem looks like its going to be Gabrielle, Ginny, Luna, and Susan so far. Which is made of win. Its also a NC-17 fic, so no direct link.
 

Trunkyboy

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ttestagr said:
Love Has No Age by Easysurfing
Harry is told that he has the power of Love, but what does this mean? With the
help of a Gabrielle, Ginny and some others he learns exactly what this means and the
benefits that come with it! Post -OOTP


One of the few good fics on ficwad that's being updated regularly. Harem looks like its going to be Gabrielle, Ginny, Luna, and Susan so far. Which is made of win. Its also a NC-17 fic, so no direct link.
Wow, thanks for pointing it out. It's rated zero so it would have never shown up on my ficwad searches.
 

Lufio

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Take Independent!-,
Cunning!Harry fics. Chop up
The good bits. Stir. Serve.


Makes use of the ideas proposed by various fics where Harry is more independent, more cunning, more intelligent, blah-blah-blah, but doesn't get too over-the-top about it. No angst-fests. No bash-happy character assassinations. Just think of the completed (!) one-shot as rewriting the seven Harry Potter "children" books into one coherent story meant for young adults.

I was quite amused by how some characters in the later books popped up during the first year of school because of the schemes of some people unraveled or had their timetable moved up. Ever wondered what would happen if Quirrell/Voldemort, Umbridge, and Lockhart were all at Hogwarts at the same time? Though there were moments of deux ex machina (e.g. Burn, Dark Artifact! Burn!, the ubiquitous Magesight, the stuttering as a tell), I could live with them.


DisobedienceWriter's Harry Potter's Life Lessons
AU of PSSS. The Dursleys have done one good thing for Harry Potters continued safety: their neglect has made him suspicious, sneaky, and cruel. A brief explanation of how things might have gone differently. Includes DH spoilers. Amoral!Harry.
 

BakaNeko

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Bobmin's part four in the Wizard's Fall meta series is just out, thank god for RSS feeds.
Wizards Fall: The Truth is Out There
Summary: Sometimes there is no denying the inevitable. A series of actions in the Wizarding World trigger a fateful decision and in doing so, unite the three people most capable of destroying them.
 

Souffle

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Furries, in MY Wizarding world? It's more likely than I thought...
 

OniGanon

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ttestagr said:
Love Has No Age by Easysurfing
Harry is told that he has the power of Love, but what does this mean? With the
help of a Gabrielle, Ginny and some others he learns exactly what this means and the
benefits that come with it! Post -OOTP


One of the few good fics on ficwad that's being updated regularly.? Harem looks like its going to be Gabrielle, Ginny, Luna, and Susan so far.? Which is made of win.? Its also a NC-17 fic, so no direct link.
Hm, but the author apparently suffers the dreaded Defiant Disease, known to compel the unfortunate afflicted to think all characters are constantly out to defy someone or something.


Honestly, why the hell do people make this mistake? I want to find one of them offline and ask them to pronounce 'definitely' for me. I want to see if they really do mangle it so horrifically that they would think to spell it 'defiantly.' It's ridiculous. I almost quit reading it partway through the first chapter because seeing that error again made me want to claw my eyes out.
 
I also see that error all too frequently. It is annoying.
 

zeebee1

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He said furries, not furies. Though if you're tallking about catgirls then that doesn't count. Veela don't either. They don't look all that human when they put on their feathers.

*zeebee1 has furies shoot their cannon at voidseeker.*
 

BakaNeko

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Souffle said:
Furries, in MY Wizarding world? It's more likely than I thought...
Ah, thats a dig at me. I said part fur instead of part four.
 
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