Evangelion [Evangelion] Recomended Fanfiction

Datvris

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Vagris said:
hackEVA: Catharsis an interesting, one of a kind EVA/.hack crossover.
This one is definitely a winner, combining the heavy psychological elements from both Evangelion and .hack//. A warning for anyone else who wants to read this: you might be lost without at least cursory knowledge of all of .hack// (games, anime, books [in particular, AI Buster and its related sidestories]). AlfheimWanderer also lays the Fate/stay night and Tengen Toppa Gurren-Lagann references thick, especially in later chapters. Incomplete and still active, with fairly frequent updates.
 

nairit

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My Own Personal Revolution updated. For those who haven't read it, do so naow. It features a completely believable Awesome!Shinji and exceptional writing. The way the author writes really is quite ..different. As an example, here's some quotes:

After a few partings words and a whispered apology from Kensuke we head our separate ways. When we get to our room I drag myself into the shower while Kazu tries to finish unpacking. I masturbate with the new shampoo I bought and imagine Misato bent over in front of me, begging for more. I feel a little guilty as I'm toweling off but exhaustion takes over and I hit the bed around midnight. Before sleep takes me, I try and remember what I thought I would feel like, my first day as a freshman, and I find myself strangely disappointed that I've lived up to my own expectations.

I try and convince myself tomorrow will better and it doesn't work. I'm not a very good liar.
I feel as though IÆve stumbled upon something profound and ugly in the same moment; an exonerating truth that perhaps the only other to share some of my most deeply personal experiences, perhaps she too was dealing with this fear as best she could. And no matter how weÆve ridiculed one another, the epiphany leaves me feeling deeply, totally sorry. And bitter that even I had been tricked into that fucking know-it-all faþade that none of her experiences in Eva, bad or good, had afflicted her the way they did for me. Is that why she hated me afterwardsùthat even I could be tricked by that farce, her last little AT Field which was really desperately crying ôhold me, donÆt leave me!ö

Gomen ne, Asuka.
 

PCHeintz72

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nairit said:
My Own Personal Revolution updated. For those who haven't read it, do so naow. It features a completely believable Awesome!Shinji and exceptional writing. The way the author writes really is quite ..different. As an example, here's some quotes:

After a few partings words and a whispered apology from Kensuke we head our separate ways. When we get to our room I drag myself into the shower while Kazu tries to finish unpacking. I masturbate with the new shampoo I bought and imagine Misato bent over in front of me, begging for more. I feel a little guilty as I'm toweling off but exhaustion takes over and I hit the bed around midnight. Before sleep takes me, I try and remember what I thought I would feel like, my first day as a freshman, and I find myself strangely disappointed that I've lived up to my own expectations.

I try and convince myself tomorrow will better and it doesn't work. I'm not a very good liar.
I feel as though IÆve stumbled upon something profound and ugly in the same moment; an exonerating truth that perhaps the only other to share some of my most deeply personal experiences, perhaps she too was dealing with this fear as best she could. And no matter how weÆve ridiculed one another, the epiphany leaves me feeling deeply, totally sorry. And bitter that even I had been tricked into that fucking know-it-all faþade that none of her experiences in Eva, bad or good, had afflicted her the way they did for me. Is that why she hated me afterwardsùthat even I could be tricked by that farce, her last little AT Field which was really desperately crying ôhold me, donÆt leave me!ö

Gomen ne, Asuka.
Hmmm... tried reading that at one point... I was turned off by the first couple chapters... I did see that it updated last night, and was thinking of rereading it.

However... that first quote does not inspire me to want to. I'll think on it.
 

darthturtle

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Drunk Shinji said:
ôWhatthefugwhereÆdthemusicgoletÆsdancebitches!ö
Probably the best line in that fic I've seen so far.

Edit: Upon reading this fic further in than the first few chapters, this is turning out to be some seriously trippy shit.

Someone dies. Then someone else. And by the fifteenth chapter, it's clear that pretty much anyone and everyone is potentially fair game. And the only question is, who the fuck is doing this?

I wouldn't actually call Shinji awesome here. He's anything but. Sometimes he's not even likable, and this is written in first person. This fic completely runs on the author's ability to sell the story itself, which is pretty top notch.

It's a fic like this that makes me honestly wish the Eva fanfic awards were still being ran. Because 'wins' alone doesn't do this thing justice. It deserves to win something.
 

nairit

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Shinji is awesome because he is utterly human here, with all the failings we know of in canon and then some, but still remains enjoyable. Even though there are some scenes you dislike him, overall you do root for him.

I really wish I had the previous summary, it so eye-catching. Went something like this: "I prayed to god that a hammer may strike you out of my head, I can't think with you in it.'
 

darthturtle

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nairit said:
Shinji is awesome because he is utterly human here, with all the failings we know of in canon and then some, but still remains enjoyable. Even though there are some scenes you dislike him, overall you do root for him.

I really wish I had the previous summary, it so eye-catching. Went something like this: "I prayed to god that a hammer may strike you out of my head, I can't think with you in it.'
Don't know what you were reading here, but that would fall under the realm of believable, not awesome. Which this Shinji is neither.

The first few chapters have him go through a nearly tax-free powerup sequence, and he gets the girl without even trying. He forms a super-secret underground club and the entire concept completely reeks of cliches and bad writing.

The first death sends this perfect little world off on a tangent. The subsequent ones, along with introducing the entire paranoia line of thought, show the reader that there's too much going on behind the scenes for us to take any of the characters at face value.

Shinji's crazy, and has been for a while now. Personally, I'd say he's the leading suspect in all of the killings, except that would just be so easy to point fingers at him, and holy shit, if you rule him out, then the list of suspects just gets longer and longer.
 

bdavi

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Just going through my favorites on FF.net today and thought I would try to breathe a little life into this thread.

If I double-tapped anything then I apologize, that wasn't my intent. I did my best to go through the thread and remove any duplicates from my list but, like Bones says, "I'm a doctor, Jim, not a librarian!"

Here goes:

Chain of Command

An excellent "post-EVA" fanfiction by Random1377 that introduces some OC's that manage to blend into the existing cast very well.

Easy For You To Say

A "one-shot" story by Jintsu featuring Shinji and Asuka and a very cranky Dr. Akagi that uses an interesting mechanism to get the pair together.

Little Sister

A more romantically focused fanfic by DigiFruit featuring Shinji, Asuka and Mari (Touji's younger sibling). Definitely leans more toward the lighter side than other EVA fics.

True Love Waits

Another fantastically written yet utterly depressing fic from Adam Kadmon. Definitely worth reading, however.

Oblivion

An interesting EVA crossover/one-shot by Boy of Enders featuring Buffy Summers of BtVS fame. Hold the groans, please, because I know what you're thinking. Slayer shows up, somehow defeats all the Angels, saves all of NERV and fixes all of Tokyo-3 and the worlds problems. Please give it a read because if you think that then you are in for a shock!

BD
 

biigoh

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Gendo awoke with a start, something was terribly wrong. He felt no
pain and could no longer feel his injuries, but the world seemed . . .
off.

He blue a lock of blue hair out of his eyes . . . wait, since when did
he have blue hair? Nervously, Gendo reached down to give himself a
quick 'hands on' inspection and was more then a bit surprised to find
bits missing that should have been there and protrusions on his chest
that he was fairly sure hadn't been there before.

A girlish scream echoed through the halls of the NERV medical wing.
:wacko: :eek: :D :snigger:

Dr. Strange Love 02 parts 01 - 02
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/CaerAzkaban/message/78060
 

darthturtle

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If you've never read Taking Sights before, do so.

Taking Sights

It's like crack. Serious crack. The latest chapter made me go O_O.
 

Terdwilicker

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PCHeintz72 said:
NGE 'Empty World' by CrimsonHowls - [Status=Not Complete] - [Last Dld=02/18/2009] - [Size=359kb]
That one started good by focusing on Ritsuko, a rather unexplored character imho, but then the author turned her into a bodybuilder and threw in some monsters and well, it went to crap. A pity.

I wonder if there are any good Ritsuko Re-do stories, ones which focus on her character development. Of all the characters in Eva, Ritsuko seems the most realistic and least charicatured. She's an angry, cynical nihilist with a penchant for bondage and self destruction. I really like her response to gendo, her last words. She deserves more than being a simple twisted bunny boiler gf role.
 

PCHeintz72

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Terdwilicker said:
PCHeintz72 said:
NGE 'Empty World' by CrimsonHowls - [Status=Not Complete] - [Last Dld=02/18/2009] - [Size=359kb]
That one started good by focusing on Ritsuko, a rather unexplored character imho, but then the author turned her into a bodybuilder and threw in some monsters and well, it went to crap. A pity.

I wonder if there are any good Ritsuko Re-do stories, ones which focus on her character development. Of all the characters in Eva, Ritsuko seems the most realistic and least charicatured. She's an angry, cynical nihilist with a penchant for bondage and self destruction. I really like her response to gendo, her last words. She deserves more than being a simple twisted bunny boiler gf role.
That one is still focused on her for the most part, but while I had little issue initially with the changes, the fact they keep changing and her going more and more primal can only have this end badly for her... In effect, if true, it would not be a true redemption story, but a last ditch effort to do good before death.

Also... I really hate the light way Misatos actions are being handled. With all she has done, she truly has yet to prove to me she is not a threat to them.

There are a few that have her turning around... most have her do it before 3rd impact though.

EDIT: For a bit of a current story with a Ritsuko redemption attempt, how about also:

NGE 'Superwomen of Eva Treacherous Web' by orionpax09 - [Status=Not Complete] - [Last Dld=02/11/2009] - [Size=233kb]One of the only multichapter stories of this series to catch my eye.
 

decibels

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Just found this story a couple of hours ago....


The badassery and win in this story is epic. Though I do admit that the story is not for everyone considering we have a genderbent shinji who despite still being an emotional wreck possibly WORSE than in the series doesn't seem all that well.... disturbed by it.

But seriously who the hell needs a spine when you have a body guard of, if I'm reading this right, a whole company of Russian Marines/Naval Infantry to turn them into bonafide soldiers and generally insane ones at that. Seriously, Shinji- ahem scuse me Shnju becomes the first to perform a HANO(high altitude no opening) paradrop on our certain friend the usually requires a positron rifle.

there's much more in the story I could expound upon but there's so much awesomeness in it like the NHIS standoff with the sarcastic Russian director of the project who developed the nuke that allowed them to vaporize the first angel, also the cause of Misato(now Misako) and shunji getting new bodies.

Seriously, who DOESN'T like the thought of dropping 200 megatons worth of nuclear, not n2 actual nuclear weapons, on something.

link before i forget to the first chapter:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4673040/1/And_If_That_Dont_Work

I'll leave you with a few of my favorite quotes of the story to give you a little bit of the idea of the amount of win I believe will be in this story:

"Come on we're gonna be late!" Shirane whined as they cut through the thick crowds.

"You're the one that wants to see this movie," Horaki grumbled, looking ahead. At least the Ayanamis' friends made sure that they were not slowed.

"You don't like this movie?"

"Do I really look like I'd want to see a movie about the Battle of Incheon?"

"Then why are you here?" Rei asked.

Horaki sighed. "I lost a bet. Leave it to Miss-Fan girl over here to actually start talking with her crush."

"I was just asking what he thought about the last battle, and anyway, he recommended this movie." Shirane gave a private little smirk.

Just in sight of the cinema, Horaki stopped. "Now you wouldn't be taking advantage of a certain friendship would you?"

"Of course not! And keep walking! We're gonna miss it!"

Horaki sighed. "Only the previews."

"That's good, I can't even bring you guys into the Geo Front," Shinju reminded.
"Next time I'll make the bet over whether you ask him out on a date." Horaki frowned as they resumed their walk. "So why are you here Rei? I mean... you guys actually do this stuff."

"Shinju is here."

Horaki rolled her eyes. "Well yes, but that's because she's deathly afraid of saying no."

Shinju blushed. "The movie might be good."

"Of course it will be." Shirane assured.

"So, how are those books you got?" Horaki asked.

Rei kept walking. "They are informative."

"I didn't think they were your kind of book," Shirane noted.

Tilting her head Rei turned to look at the younger girl. "Fiction is... new to me."

"Right." Shirane then confidently walked up to the ticket window. "Yeah the current showing of Eve of Incheon, we'll need... Oh, Lieutenant Khariton how many of your men will be going in?"

The clerk raised an eyebrow. "That's R-15. Are you girls even thirteen?"

Showing more fluid speed than one would expect from such a large man, Igor placed himself at Shirane's side. "Is problem?" he asked, his accent thickening.

The theater clerk looked up... and up. It was only after a few moments of staring at insanely focused eyes and immense fists that he noticed the man was carrying an automatic rifle, and had well over a dozen, similarly dressed, if a bit smaller, men behind him.

"Er... I'm sorry, Sir, but the movie is restricted. No one under fifteen allowed," the clerk stammered. He had heard the stories about these new Russians...

Igor sniffed. "Little man. You recognize these girls?"

Looking where the giant Russian was pointing, the clerk froze.

"Yes, they Pilots. Your movie will not scare them."

"Of course," the clerk swallowed.

"Movie is important. Relaxation important for soldier. Yes?"

"Right you are..." He looked around, hoping for a manager to push it off onto. At least when Nerv leaned, they were not so... overt. "So... how many tickets do you want?"

"That was a mean trick," Horaki said after they bought the tickets and entered the theater.

"Oh?"

"You wanted to see this movie, but you were too young. So you had Shinju come."

Shirane turned to face her friend. "Like you've never asked Kodama to get you something on a 'special deal'. Anyway, we've still got to hurry, otherwise we'll miss it."

"Fine. fine," Horaki's sigh was cutoff when they entered the theater. The image of an Evangelion being dropped from an immense flying wing dominated the screen.

As they walked further into the theater, Shinju stared at the giant screen. She watched as her Evangelion fell towards the earth. The footage was not new to her, she had seen it many times during the debriefings, but the voiceover was.

"In a daring air-attack, Ayanami Shinju pilots Eva Unit 01 right into the enemy. Despite taking heavy fire she stays the course," a booming, confident voiceover actress intones. "The enemy's defenses defeated, Azazel is now able to provide fire support."

Shinju looked over to see Shirane's eyes gleefully wide as the girl watched N2 missiles explode inside the Angel.

"However the work of our brave Pilots is not done. Pilot Ayanami Rei arrives in the newly repaired Unit 00. Under heavy fire she scales the Angel itself and starts helping her sister finish off the foul invader," the deep contralto, authoritarian voiceover continued.

"The enemy, unable to withstand humanity's might, crumbles, destroyed by the pinnacle of human science and skill. By harnessing the power of robotics, biological engineering and the atom humanity will win this war."

The screen shifted from the Evangelions striding out of the crumbling carcass of Ramiel to an aerial shot of an airbase. Various fighter aircraft, bombers, and transports are arrayed parked in presentation ranks. In the back, Dominating the scene is the black flying wing of an Evangelion transport. "Special Duty Organization Azazel was created to provide aerial support for the war effort. It is in only the most dire circumstances that they are to unleash the terrible power at their disposal."

"I thought they were setup to nuke the Angels," Shirane said as they sat down in some, generously vacated seats.

"Is this what you had us hurry up to see?" Horaki whispered.

"The technological prowess is only part of the story. Both the Evangelion and the Angel Buster missile would be useless without their pilots," the voiceover shifted as the screen transitioned to the dinner event where Zel'dovich lifted up Shinju.

"Captain Andrei Zel'dovich, an Ace pilot who scored seven kills in the brief Russo-Sino war following the Second Impact, recently added two more kills." The screen changed to show Zel'dovich giving a sheepish grin as a second halo was added to his Su-33.

Now the cinema showed a plug-suited Shinju watching as another kill mark was stenciled onto Unit 01. "Not to be outdone, Pilot Ayanami Shinju achieved her second kill in the same battle. However the credit is shared, with the cost of defeat so total all of humanity must rise together to destroy this foe. Also qualifying for kills are Ayanami Rei and Captians Yakov and Borisovich who were critical in killing the enemy.

"The question on everyone's lips is: who will be the first Angel Ace?" the voiceover almost sounded amused at the question.

Noticing Shinju's squirming and blushing, Shirane leaned over. "Don't worry. I'm sure you'll get it."

The screen now showed a several black and white photos of a giant, but stubby looking gun. "The latest weapon to be deployed is the 914 mm Little David G-mod. This heavy mortar is the largest gun ever built. It out-sizes the German Dora and even Atomic Annie herself. The excessive weight meant the piece was restricted to being an experimental test bed. Eventually it was put into storage, in case its immense power was ever needed.

"The foresight of the US Army paid off. In the hands of Evangelion the Little David's weight became a triviality and with Azazel's support the gun can take on a new role." Now Unit 01 shouldered a modified version of the mortar and fired it like some type of short heavy gun.

"This weapon gives Evangelion the ability to fire a shell weighing over a ton directly at the enemy. The footage you're seeing is merely with training rounds. However it shows the pinpoint accuracy the Little David is capable of, in the right hands. Let's see what happens when Shinju demonstrates the power of a real warhead."

The footage cut to show, once again, Unit 01 shouldering the weapon. The giant explosion at the muzzle and knockback of the immense war-machine were the same, but the difference came when the warhead hit downrange.

Its target was an immense concrete and steel structure. Scoured and chipped from the Angel Buster that had detonated nearby, the bunker was still firmly rooted into the stone of the ridgeline.

A sharp shockwave shot out, carrying tens of thousands of small fragments. This was obscured by the return implosion and the buoyancy driven mushroom cloud. Impassively, the Evangelion withstood the blast-wave and waited for the fires and smoke to clear.

Not only was the bunker gone, but the entire hillside had been shattered and cut through and through by what looked like a giant fist. The warhead had hit the bunker, shattered the concrete and rock and then gone on to blow out the other side. The cavity bisected the ridgeline in a gaping wound. "With this Nerv has the firepower to knock down the enemy, allowing them to close in for the kill."

As the patriotic music swelled - the girls looked at Shinju who practically glowed pink in embarrassment at the eyes looking at her. "I think they noticed you," Horaki whispered to Shinju.

"Uh, the movie's about to start." Shinju looked up and noticed that the short had finished. A movie preview was starting, but the audience's attention was... elsewhere.

"It's the Eva Pilots!" a young male a few rows behind them shouted.
"Arc it over your head in a smooth motion." Igor said as he held Shinju's arm by the wrist. "That's right, extend it back and just bring it down," the soldier explained letting go.

Shinju gave a nod and continued moving the entrenching tool in an exaggerated chopping motion. The Sharpened blade went rose and fell in a steady motion. "Is this right?"

"Yes, very good." Igor peered down the impromptu range at the target, which was a stout log mounted on a lashed tripod so the circular cut faced them. Behind it was a concrete wall of their apartment block. "You see log?"

Shinju stopped the motion and nodded.

Pyotr motioned for Rei to stop their sparring. He looked over the sweating, gasping girl. "Good." He flexed his arm and suppressed a wince, the girl had a knack for finding ways to lever her opponent's joints. "You value hard work, results. Rest fluff. Systema suits you."

Her expression neutral, Rei inclined her head.

Pyotr nodded and turned to his colleague and his charge.

"When elbow is extended, blade is here..." Igor guided Shinju's arm to the proper position, a bit shallower than a forty-five degree incline. "Let go. Should slip out of hand."

Biting her lip, Shinju looked down. She made sure her foot was at the seven pace marker. She drew her arm back, swung it forward, and at the right moment released her grip. The entrenching tool slipped out of her hand and tumbled forward. After rotating twice, the blade hit the wood, but it was at an oblique angle and it bounced off clattering to the ground.

Shinju frowned.

"Not bad!" Igor assured. "You hit target!" He lumbered over to the wooden blocks and picked up the entrenching tool. "Release not smooth, blade wobble too much. Watch." The large man walked back, stopped, and with practiced ease drew his arm back. He then flipped the blade forward and launched it. The spade still rotated twice, but this time its flight was true and it sunk halfway into the wood.

Shinju and Rei both passively watched the display.

"Blade cutting best, but spade heavy, so hitting what counts," Igor said as he, once again, retrieved the entrenching tool.

Taking the blade Shinju took a few more practice swings. This time she could feel how the weight shifted when she moved it past the top of her head.

"Remember follow through with release. Basics right now," Igor advised, making sure to stay out of the weapon's arc.

Shinju nodded and staring at the target took a couple more practice swings. Then she drew back, and this time let her grip slacken. She winced as she felt the blade tumble out of her grip. End over end it flipped and the tip of the blade caught the face of the log. Lightly penetrating, it hung upright for a few seconds and then slipped out.

"Very good!" Igor cheered.

Shinju turned and looked up at the man. "But it fell out."

"Meat much softer than wood," Igor explained as he retrieved the spade and handed it back to Shinju.

"Oh? Why aren't we training on meat?"

Looking into at those big seemingly innocent eyes, Igor had to laugh. Being behind the purple tint of her safety glasses reduced the oddness. "Same reason you shoot more paper and on computer. Cheaper. Besides, harder to get into wood than human skull." He paused, seeing the girl's almost disappointed look. "No worries, we can buy a pig. Would be good to teach you proper knife work too."

Shinju gave a little nod.

"That's a good girl," Igor smiled. "Now you go teach your sister."

Her smile growing, Shinju beckoned Rei, who was putting on her own protective glasses. Unlike her sister, she preferred red tinting to her lenses.

Igor and Pyotr stepped aside and the thinner man pulled out a cigarette packet.

"No thanks," Igor declined the offered smokes. "What do you think?" he asked in Russian.

Pyotr watched as the two girls took turns throwing their spades. The younger nearly... bounced as she whipped the sharpened shovel. Given the long hair, ribbons, and simple glee, she looked surprisingly wholesome. Rei had more control on her release but her overall motion was not quite as fluid.

After half a minute of silence, Pyotr had composed his thoughts into an acceptable format. "They're something else."

"Soon they'll be throwing spades while back-flipping off trampolines."

Watching the girls practice, Pyotr concentrated on his smoking. "Good."

"It is." Igor nodded. "We need them."

"They're good soldiers."

"Then we shall make sure we are worthy of them." Igor gave one of his manic grins and walked back to the girls.

Pyotr observed his large comrade teach. "And they worthy of us," he muttered before dropping his cigarette to the ground and crushing it with his heel.
"Walk ahead slowly, move right foot ahead." Shiro said just as his orders were repeated and the robot took a lurching step forward. Holding his hands behind his back, Shiro grinned as his technicians prepared to move the left foot. His elation grew as Jet Alone took a third step and then another and another.

"It's walking. Is that worth being proud of?" Misako asked as she peered through a set of binoculars.

Rapt, Shiro looked down. "What do you think now... Director?"

Beria slowly turned to look back at Shiro. "That is worst-designed machine I have ever had astounding displeasure of observing. It cannot have any purpose other than assure first-year engineering students that there no such thing as standards. No matter their failure, they will find employment."

"What?" Shiro stepped back as the other people turned from watching Jet Alone to watching Beria.

"You're excited it can take step? You test at all?" Beria hissed.

Captain Sakharov chuckled.

Shiro stared.

"No obviously you did not. Otherwise you would realize the horrible fallacy of having external control rods. Did it not occur to you that fifteen meter long cantilevered rods might get damaged? If one of those things broke off what then?"

"There are safeguards in place..."

"I've seen better reactor designs in Pripyat! Either those things are decorative, in which case you are even more incompetently wasteful than Nerv, or they are critical, in which case you are treasonously incompetent and if there were any justice in the world you would be summarily shot."

"Be reasonable..."

"Reasonable would be sending Su-33's in to put this impotent thing out of its misery. Feh, a man with an RPG could do it. This you boast? This fully functional?"

Shiro clenched his teeth. "Director, the demonstration has only started."

Beria bowed his head in mock acquiescence. 'Then continue."

"Fine we'll move straight to the weapons test. The reactor you so deride provides more power than an Evangelion can supply, and unlike a sixty-year-old single shot artillery piece, it can continuously fire. Ready the Induction Cannon!"

Jet Alone jerked down the test range and walked up to a relatively long, lumpy building. The roof retracted and Jet Alone picked up a grey tubular weapon by rolling one of its ribbon-like arms around the canon.

"Clearance to fire at target seven?" Shiro asked.

"The range is clear," one of the technicians replied.

"Sound the siren." Shiro grinned wolfishly. "Fire!"

A pure white lance shot out and bored into a squat concrete block. The beam pulverized its way through and ground through the dirt.

"Change to target twelve." Shiro smirked as the shearing beam was raked across the desolate remains of Old Tokyo. "You see the power?" He turned to a technician and ordered the weapon shut off.

Beria chuckled. "Weak if functional weapon. I'll recommend that Nerv contact subcontractor, export version Evangelion portable. They can compare to their own particle cannon."

"I never figured you for a Nerv stooge," Shiro sneered.

"Your political skill is on par with engineering." Beria chuckled. "I loath Nerv. They waste funding. They lack strategic thought. They lack rigor. I rejoice at the shackles the UN has put them under. However, they are not failures. They can kill Angel. I say before: you cannot make the same claim."

"You are in no position to challenge Jet Alone."

"Yes, between Jet Alone and Azazel, there is no contest."

Shiro glared. "Even though you hate Nerv, you're still go against us?"

"I will recommend against further evaluation. Too many systematic design flaws. Too little potential as a weapon. Better to drop now."

"It sounds like you're afraid." Shiro laughed. "The induction canon is just one of the weapons we can power. We can give superior air defense and more precise, longer running attacks. Is that why you're sticking for Nerv? Are you afraid of becoming even more marginalized?"

Beria set his jaw, he would have liked to cut apart that ridiculous "superior air defense fallacy", but it was time. "I will recommend Azazel decline any testing."

"Azazel is nothing special. Anyone can use obsolete planes to shoot nuclear weapons. But if you're set on standing in the way of Nerv's true replacement..." Shiro turned to the other observers. "It's a shame they're too afraid to test Jet Alone. They know what'll happen."

Grinning broadly, Ritsuko stepped forward. "Excellent, excellent. General Yubari regretted being unable to attend, but he was able to extend an invitation to the Mount Takanosu Testing Range."

"Pardon?"

"You're quite correct. The JSSDF is quite interested in the Jet Alone project. Especially as a more cost effective and flexible alternative to Evangelion. Naturally, they're eager to set up a series of wargames."

"Well of course," Shiro's leg started to tingle. This sounded like good news but why was the blonde women smiling?

"Regrettably, Azazel has refused to participate. Therefore Red Team duties will fall upon the other Special Duty Organization the JSSDF supervises."

Working it out, Shiro's eyes widened. "You expect Jet Alone to fight an Evangelion?"

Noticing Misako look at her cell phone, Beria looked at his watch

"Now, it won't be a fully accurate test. Jet Alone has no AT field. So we'll just have our Evas not use theirs."

"No AT fields?"

"Don't worry, the testing will be fair. JSSDF will be overseeing the entire operation." Ritsuko took a sip of tea. "Now seeing as you've proven the offensive capabilities of Jet Alone, all that's left is actual combat testing," she lied. There was more, much more to getting a practical weapon, but if he agreed, that would show his ignorance.

"Yes, well fortunately the weapons systems are functional. NHIS is eager to prove its worth." Shiro swallowed and clasped his hands behind his back again. This was what he wanted. JSSDF would see the logic of Jet Alone....

"Wonderful. Is tomorrow good? How about next week?"

"Everyone here, why not airdrop Eva right now?" Beria asked.

"Well, I'm willing to do it, but I don't think that Eva can get here in time."

"Go," Misako stated into her phone. Nearly fifteen seconds later, a giant purple figure dropped out of the sky. With deliberate slowness the Evangelion rose from its shallow landing crater. It was ready for battle.

Attached to the shoulder pylons were a set of double-size, double capacity external power packs. Mounted horizontally on the Evangelion's lower back was a giant entrenching tool. An ammunition satchel was on the left hip and cradled in Unit 01's hands was the gleaming steel of Little David.

Painted on the side of the... thing's head were two halos and on its upper left arm was a "shoulder sleeve" insignia. A tilted golden wing with upswept feathers sat on a pale blue field and was topped by a black bar. Too late, Shiro realized that this was not just some prepubescent girl but a veteran, specifically a veteran paratrooper. One belonging to a very exclusive club. Recalling the terminology from a previous project, the NHIS manager came up with an acceptable acronym. HANO: High-Altitude No Opening.

He was looking at the only paratrooper that did not need a parachute.

"Don't worry about the five minute limitation. Shinju can run for twenty-five minutes before needing more juice," Misako assured.

Shiro's lip quivered. He looked down to see the NHIS board members and executives. They seemed to be simultaneously enraged and terrified. They had seen the battle footage; they had seen the short videos Nerv Public Relations had released. "Is that armed.... " Looking up at the looming purple monstrosity, he tried to find his voice. "N2 warheads?"

"Oh no, this is just a war game, she's only got practice rounds," Misako assured.

"I see..." Shiro licked his lips. "Well we have to wait for the JSSDF to arrive. They are observing right?'

"Of course," Misako happily agreed, before dialing a new number on her phone. "Shinju, take a break. We'll send you the new coordinates once we get the games started."

The sound of several VTOL craft landing cut into the command center. "They're late," Ritsuko noted.

Misako turned to Shiro, her eyes locking onto his. "Once the Generals arrive we can get started. Unless you're not ready that is?"
 

ascote

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Its just Josh Temples usual stuff. Shinjis personality rewrite is quite forced and crude. Where has all of his anger and self hate gone?

Here is my bad quote:

Shinju took her place next to Rei. "That's why it's so important that Oneechan and I do our best?"

I stopped reading at this point when it became clear that I couldnt take anymore bad characterization.
 
#93
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I pretty much turned off the brain and read it as an OC pilot. Amusing enough because I liked the concept of 'Nuke'em till it glows'. Always wondered why they didn't simply drop a bunch of N2 mines on an Angel, it's proven that one can hurt one so..... drop more, lots more.
 

Lagrange

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Yeah, I pretty much ignore that Shinji and Misato are technically still in the story. The story wins because of the Russian military influence. It's definitely not a character study piece.

If you read it for the fights and the political maneuvering and ignore the rest, you'll find a good fic.
 

Mercsenary

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ascote said:
Its just Josh Temples usual stuff. Shinjis personality rewrite is quite forced and crude. Where has all of his anger and self hate gone?

Here is my bad quote:

Shinju took her place next to Rei. "That's why it's so important that Oneechan and I do our best?"

I stopped reading at this point when it became clear that I couldnt take anymore bad characterization.
Its not shinji unless theres a little bit, but not too much, of angst and a good helping of pent up anger that will be released at Targets of Opportunity. Preferably Angels.


DX
 

ascote

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#96
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Deus Ex Machina with a pair of tits isnt a good substitute for pent up anger and abuse in a bottle. At least in my opinion.
 

Lord Raa

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decibels said:
Just found this story a couple of hours ago....


The badassery and win in this story is epic. Though I do admit that the story is not for everyone considering we have a genderbent shinji who despite still being an emotional wreck possibly WORSE than in the series doesn't seem all that well.... disturbed by it.

But seriously who the hell needs a spine when you have a body guard of, if I'm reading this right, a whole company of Russian Marines/Naval Infantry to turn them into bonafide soldiers and generally insane ones at that. Seriously, Shinji- ahem scuse me Shnju becomes the first to perform a HANO(high altitude no opening) paradrop on our certain friend the usually requires a positron rifle.

there's much more in the story I could expound upon but there's so much awesomeness in it like the NHIS standoff with the sarcastic Russian director of the project who developed the nuke that allowed them to vaporize the first angel, also the cause of Misato(now Misako) and shunji getting new bodies.

Seriously, who DOESN'T like the thought of dropping 200 megatons worth of nuclear, not n2 actual nuclear weapons, on something.

link before i forget to the first chapter:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4673040/1/And_If_That_Dont_Work
You did not warn me that this is the NGE equivalent of a Ranma-chan fic.

I am now trying to decide if it's worth my time trying to hate you to death.
 
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Can anyone recommend a fic where Shinji is just a normal teenager who: doesn't know martial arts, doesn't get a 5 billion sync rating first time he sets foot in his eva, doesn't get a harem, please? Preferably not a crossover. Just want to read a Eva fic that features a Shinji that isn't a faggot but also isn't an absolute god either.

cheers! :mmm:
 

spooky316

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Lord Raa said:
decibels said:
Just found this story a couple of hours ago....


The badassery and win in this story is epic. Though I do admit that the story is not for everyone considering we have a genderbent shinji who despite still being an emotional wreck possibly WORSE than in the series doesn't seem all that well.... disturbed by it.

But seriously who the hell needs a spine when you have a body guard of, if I'm reading this right, a whole company of Russian Marines/Naval Infantry to turn them into bonafide soldiers and generally insane ones at that. Seriously, Shinji- ahem scuse me Shnju becomes the first to perform a HANO(high altitude no opening) paradrop on our certain friend the usually requires a positron rifle.

there's much more in the story I could expound upon but there's so much awesomeness in it like the NHIS standoff with the sarcastic Russian director of the project who developed the nuke that allowed them to vaporize the first angel, also the cause of Misato(now Misako) and shunji getting new bodies.

Seriously, who DOESN'T like the thought of dropping 200 megatons worth of nuclear, not n2 actual nuclear weapons, on something.

link before i forget to the first chapter:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4673040/1/And_If_That_Dont_Work
You did not warn me that this is the NGE equivalent of a Ranma-chan fic.

I am now trying to decide if it's worth my time trying to hate you to death.
Actually, it seems like he did.
 

PCHeintz72

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GiantMonkeyMan said:
Can anyone recommend a fic where Shinji is just a normal teenager who: doesn't know martial arts, doesn't get a 5 billion sync rating first time he sets foot in his eva, doesn't get a harem, please? Preferably not a crossover. Just want to read a Eva fic that features a Shinji that isn't a faggot but also isn't an absolute god either.

cheers!á :mmm:
Hmmm... That still leaves a lot of room for types of stories... Post 3I, comedy, angst, not eva pilot at all, etc... all would fit. Here are some examples.

NGE 'A Day in the Life of' by Somewhere N of A - [Status=Complete] - [Last Dld=01/20/2006] - [Size=102kb]
NGE 'Beginnings And Endings' by Macavity the Mystery Cat - [Status=Not Complete] - [Last Dld=09/11/2008] - [Size=132kb]
NGE 'Different Beginnings - Original' by RampagingEvangelion - [Status=Not Complete] - [Last Dld=01/25/2008] - [Size=286kb]
NGE 'Everlasting Coda' by ArchangelUK - [Status=Not Complete] - [Last Dld=05/15/2005] - [Size=292kb]
NGE 'Mummy Misato' by Shekron Kaizar - [Status=Complete] - [Last Dld=03/23/2007] - [Size=207kb]
NGE 'Remember Me' by Chibi Fenrir - [Status=Not Complete] - [Last Dld=07/26/2008] - [Size=245kb]
NGE 'Sausages It was a Tuesday' by Lord Raa - [Status=Complete] - [Last Dld=02/11/2006] - [Size=266kb]
NGE 'Somewhere Just For Us' by Kalus - [Status=Complete] - [Last Dld=11/26/2002] - [Size=53kb]
NGE 'The Lifespan of a Love Affair' by Random1377 - [Status=Complete] - [Last Dld=07/07/2003] - [Size=448kb]
NGE 'The Way It Should Have Been' by Sumiko Kenchi Haimoto - [Status=Not Complete] - [Last Dld=06/03/2005] - [Size=75kb]
NGE 'True Love Waits' by Adam Kadmon - [Status=Complete] - [Last Dld=03/17/2006] - [Size=490kb]
NGE 'Uncommon Law' by Random1377 - [Status=Complete] - [Last Dld=11/29/2005] - [Size=130kb]

Hmmm... it actually requires more effort on my part to not give links than it does to give them... Oh well.
 
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