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ascote said:
Its just Josh Temples usual stuff. Shinjis personality rewrite is quite forced and crude. Where has all of his anger and self hate gone?
Here is my bad quote:
Shinju took her place next to Rei. "That's why it's so important that Oneechan and I do our best?"
I stopped reading at this point when it became clear that I couldnt take anymore bad characterization.
I'm pretty sure that Russian 'Naval Infantry' are actually Spetsnaz after that crack about hitting the target while doing backflips off a trampoline.
As for Shinju's calm, other than one breakdown scene during rifle training, I think there are two possible excuses.
One, during the Jet Alone presentation Ritsuko notes that Misato (who was downloaded into an older clone Rei body) didn't react to her father's name being mentioned and that 'it looked like the dosage was right'. Which makes me wonder if the Reis (as well as Misato and Shinju in this case) emotional flatness is chemically enhanced?
Also everyone focused on what Shinji has lost, but what has Shinju gained? Possibly due to the gender shift and/or the age reduction Misato and Ritsuko are more emotionatively supportive, rather than 'get in the EVA, aren't you a boy?' of canon. Shijnu has a family, friends at school rather than getting the shit beat out of him for injuring Toji's sister in his disasterous first battle, uncles in her Spetsnaz bodyguard and even distant approval of her father. Even her EVA battles are different. She never went berserk against the Third Angel (nuked by Azrael), did slightly better againts the Fourth Angel, and through Gendo's manipulations was the one that suggested the winning strategy for defeating the Fifth Angel. Shinji was unwanted, unloved, and thought everyone considered him a failure. Shinju has everything (or quite a bit) that Shinji wanted, how much is human contact and affection worth?