Recomended Fanfiction
alansg said:
PCHeintz72 said:
In any case...
Anyone know if Christmas Together by kira862 is any good?? Been tempted to read it...
Is very good. Makes me remember those old S/A fics by Rakna and Ryoma.
Well... 2 chapters into it (out of 6, it just updated with 2 more chapters today)
Its not bad, in fact reasonably good compared to most christmas fanfiction I've seen in last couple years... But a few scenes so far do not make much sense to me as they are laid out... at least when examining them against other statements.
Example... It is mentioned they try to keep costs down. Fine, but then they:
1. have to get a real tree each year not a put together one. Ok, some love the appeal of a live one, but I'm uncertain how popular live pine trees are in a post 3rd impact Japan. Maybe it is a tribute to Kado Matsu, which is a bit of a tradition over there.
2. If they have a small Honda... physically transporting a tree is of concern, yet it was not even mentioned that it might be an issue.
3. If they have a tree each year why would they need new ornaments and/or lights when most people save theirs from year to year... and only replace as needed.
4. Why would they waste the time looking for a tree, then not get it.. what if it is gone the next day?
5. They entered the apartment, and were hit by a blast of hot air... if they have their own climate controls, I would have expected them to turn it down somewhat to save on costs of heating while they are not present.