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[Xekstrin]

So, for my super long Storm Hawks fiction, I got a few... interesting reviews for the chapter when I finally kill off one of the major canon characters.

Scariest. Shit. Ever.

Dotskip317 2008-05-13 . chapter 24
I should kill you now.

You have done your part.

You have nothing left to live for.

But I won't.

The Dragons told me not to.

Thank them.

They're the only reason you're still alive.

ss
\__/)

:/

Then again I *did* get called "Goddess" "Master" and "Insane" on a regular basis so it's all cool. They even out.

CraneLee 2008-05-12 . chapter 24
Yay! Everyone died!
Uh, I mean, oh no... :/

Best Reviewer Ever. He'd always leave reviews like that...

And then I get crap like THIS...

claireXstork 2008-09-23 . chapter 29
omg
i jave no questions this time just praise that was so awesome and there is so much emotion and i cant possibly comment on everything its just great and so sad but great all the same and im glad this is not the last chapter update real soon i cant wait to read more !

...This was on the LAST CHAPTER, people. The "complete" tag was there. I SAID it. in the Author's note...

Sigh...

 

[Dartz_IRL]

How many people ask for updates on a one shot?

I've lost count.

 

[Lord Raa]

Just had a review for Can't Believe.

I guess Im just missing the humor but this story hasn't really been funny so far. It seems that all there is just the humor of a uncle who is a pornstar.
Meh I guess I'm just upset about the way he is acting.
I really wish he was more a "pervert" or at least a normal teenage boy, you have him acting to much like a normal shinji.

Anyways its a nice update regardless

One source of comedy in this fic is the fact that Shinji feels that his behaviour is normal.

Having him act like a pevert or how many of the readers would act would mean that he's not Shinji Ikari, he's some OC with that name.

 

[Cornuthaum]

NECRO! AHAHAHA!

The most epic fail review I have ever received (out of the 20 total <>)

(

 

[A Curious Stranger]

NECRO! AHAHAHA!

The most epic fail review I have ever received (out of the 20 total <>)

What I read

BAWW PEOPLE DON'T SHARE MY OPINIONS ON FICTIONAL CHARACTERS

 

[Thrythlind]

Don't have the actual comments since they were on email back when I was on the Slayers Fanfiction Mailing List and just starting out with fanfiction.

But I did a oneshot fic called "Original Sin" in which Amelia and Xellos were a couple (someone challenged me to do lemon story, not sure who anymore) and, during lovemaking, Amelia slits her wrists to force Xellos to make her mazoku.

As soon as I posted the story, I started getting freaked out because I was deluged with "Oh, that's so sweet", "That's a cute story" or similar statements.

My brother to this day insists he will never read the story because he claims it is something like the Lovecraftian novel in the movie "Mouth of Madness."

I later found out that people were skipping past the sex parts because they assumed there was nothing story-important in it.

 

[PCHeintz72]

Not a review exactly, but something odd...

I just got notification I've been placed on someones author alert list.

I realize many authors would be glad... However, the one issue with that is in my entire time as a member on FF.NET, I have never posted even one story, chapter, or update.

 

[Dartz_IRL]

FFN is weird that way.

People have story alerted my one-shots...

 

[goldenarms]

FFN is weird that way.

People have story alerted my one-shots...

Do not feel bad. I have a oneshot that was understood to be just a oneshot.

Someone puts an Alert on it.

Hmm... fun going over the reviews left to me... though I dearly wished I had managed to save the review that forced some guy to not only dump the story, but gank his Beta Reade Profile and the like. Which a good thing since he "couldn't be bothered to put real effort into writing a fic; I'm saving my good writing for poetry." Almost exactly what he said.

Anyway, a few that I liked.:

sgb3
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
It doesn't really work. It feels like we're joining a story in progress. Since there's no build-up to the major focus of the story, there's no emotional weight to the events or characters. The ensuing events read more like a summary than a story, and it's hard to care about what happens. One-shots can still be excellent stories, but you need SOME storytelling in there. Kasumi's pregnant, everyone reacts badly, they get married and live happily ever after. The End. It just doesn't work in such a short format.

Definitely informative, not beating around the bush, and I replied that he was absolutely correct about his prognosis.

Innortal
2008-05-06 . chapter 1
Nice work.

This one makes me feel like I hit the big time. Name people, shaking my hand and pats on the back! Though my style doesn't really draw huge crowds, it's always nice to feel like you've done something right.

Unless you've done something horribly wrong, in which case, people will flock over you like birds. Coincidentally, that was the most comments I ever had on the FFML for any of my works.

Kitsune6
2007-09-15 . chapter 7
Wow. This was nearly good enough to get on my favorites list, and I guard that well. Another chapter of fluff would have clinched it.

The characterizations were perfect, except Kasumi, but of course that was intentional. The thoughts and feelings felt real, and the dialog seemed right. You also had enough adversity in there.

Excellent job. =)

:evil2: Sneaking into super-guarded Favorites lists. I feel like Lupin. Mm hmm mmmmm...

And last, this one...

NeeChan92
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
Lmfao, that was utterly amazing. xD
I lost it at "Bitchslap no Jutsu."

I put this one here because I was largely worried about the yaoi fangirls' reaction (dealing with such yaoi fangirls who goes by names like Sasuke's Penis Is Angry isn't exactly fun, since they tend to threadjack anti M/M pairings about how much fun SasuNaru is). Surprisingly, it seemed to have went over very well, since a number of reviewers and faving people are yaoi fangirls. Thank God for humor, and the ability to laugh at yourself.

 

[Dartz_IRL]

Wow.... somebody just told me I got tvtroped... on the evangelion fanfic recommendations page. -> <a href='http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/NeonGenesisEvangelion]http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanf...nesisEvangelion[/url]

New Perspective Evangelion by Dartz-IRL

? ? * Recommended by Looney Toons, Shay Guy, Willbyr
? ? * Status: Ongoing
? ? * Synopsis: A young Irishman finds himself forceably inserted into the Evangelion world ù by being forceably inserted into the brain and body of Noriko Nagato, a 14-year-old Japanese girl who has "miraculously" survived a plane crash, only to discover she is now the Fourth Child. But how did he get there? What did that weird dream with Kaoru Nagisa mean? Why are the real Noriko's memories coming back? And just what is up with the delusional girl in school who thinks she's Haruhi Suzumiya?
? ? * Comments: An interesting and realistic look at an insert, starting with language (the protagonist speaks only English and Gratuitous Japanese ù both with a Gaelic accent ù at the start of the story) and moving on from there. Although "Noriko" discovers she enjoys piloting, the male mind within the girl starts adapting too well; as the real Noriko's memories begin filtering back, he starts worrying about fading away into her returning personality. Although there are some amusing parts, this is not a comedy. In fact, it's very serious, almost borderline dark. Incomplete at this point but worth a read.
? ? ? ? ? o Shay Guy: The only criticism I have is that the references can get a little too blatant. Aside from the name "Noriko Nagato," the plane crash was an Oceanic Airlines flight, and the airline is apparently run by one John Locke. Slightly excessive.
? ? ? ? ? o Looney Toons: Well, we do appear to be still fairly early in the plot ù the "Nagato" name clearly is intended to tie into things with the pseudo-Haruhi, although just what importance that holds for the story overall is unclear as of yet.
? ? ? ? ? o Nerdorama: And let's be fair to the author. There were only so many warships in the Imperial Japanese Navy during World War II.

I'm not quite sure how to respond to this.... or even whther I should

 

[Yumeko-chan]

I wish I would get TVTrope'd

 

[Dartz_IRL]

There isn't a BGCrisis fanfic recommendations page..... yet

 

[Cyblade Silver]

I always find it strange how people have Alerts on my one shots and completed stories. I mean, I'm sorta flattered, but it's not like I'm going to go back to those stories again. :wacko:

 

[Lord Raa]

I always find it strange how people have Alerts on my one shots and completed stories. I mean, I'm sorta flattered, but it's not like I'm going to go back to those stories again. :wacko:

Are you sure that they just haven't forgotten to take your completed fic off their alert list?

 

[A_T_Sigma]

Well I certainly got some interesting reviews over the years for my fics.

From the amusing to the down right odd.

Though this one in particular while saddens me a little amuses me greatly, especially since nothing has been set in stone in my story. LOL

? OnGuard
2009-06-30 . chapter 6
well, sorry, i've been with this one for awhile but, i'm a big naru/hina fan. i am done with this story.

 

[Ray]

This is realy interesting and i didn't see anything wrong in
your FF like most I have read. Since this is the first FF that involes (I'm
not too good at spelling) Ayako and Shirou
in killing a person infront of a normal person and what is the book that his
dad refuse to get?

p.s. although i'm sure you know what FF is but it dont hurt to make sure, it
mean fan fiction and try not to make the mistake of spelling 'the' as 'he' and
lastly ME WANT MORE PLZ but don't stress your self and take breaks time to
time, it's not good to overwork your self too much.

...

I know that this is supposed to be a "good" review, but the assault on my brain is so brutal it makes my head spin and makes me wonder if it's not just a deviously clever reverse flame.

 

[A_T_Sigma]

Review
Starfire99
2009-08-13 . chapter 7
Alright, you have 5 chapters in just under 2 YEARS. And the last two were pathetically short. Before you begin a story, you need to make sure you put in a proper effort into ALL the chapters, and most importantly...FINISH THE STORY!

Most any author on this site can put out chapters like the last two you put out in under a month. All I ask from an author is to put out a decent length chapter once a month. If you cannot do that and finish a story, you shouldn't start one then. Because there's nothing that pisses me off more than when I get into a story and the author just abandons it. You just wasted my time and it pisses me off to have my time wasted.

I guess this person has never heard of losing interest in a show for some years, writer's block, oh and the fact that I even put in the EFFORT to even continue this after so many years on top of you know IRL issues.

When you can write a story and finish it then you can complain to me about no damn effort. :no:


I dunno what's more annoying getting reviews like this or getting reviews that tell you who you should pair who with.

I swear to god if I get one more damn person demanding I pair naruto with hinata I'm going to scream! (people read my BIO...it will tell you in short how i feel about naruhina and narusaku). Or the ones that ask me to put a whole slew of girls into a naruharem story that will just be unbelievably ridiculous.

now I don't even feel like writing this out of spite. But then I wouldn't get such nice reviews like this one.

? Glennis
2009-08-03 . chapter 7
I only just found this story of yours so im quite glad you started to do it again and very glad that i wasn't around to have to wait for you to start it again.
I think this story has something that other fictions generally don't. That is most authors set their story so there will only ever be one real pairing throughout their Naruto time line. While it's not necessarily a bad thing its just how many times in real life is it the first person you become interested in the only person your involved with? I like how Naruto tries to be the ever self-sacrificing person that you make him out to be while he's still going through his own pain (i am curious in what exact details Sakura actually did to him), i do hope however that one of the girls that's with Naruto eventually helps him through his issue's rather then er forcing (can you really force a guy...) themselves onto him to help their own pain. (To be honest it looks to be Moegi who could best help Naruto emotionally since she seems the most innocent/pure and less jaded to the world which seems to be what would help him the most atm.
Anyway this story is quite beautifully (masterly take your pick) written i applaud your work and hope you can continue it
Good luck and give us a PM if you ever need an honest opinion

though this is just one of many for my soul eater fic

soulxmakaxmonkeyxbearman
2009-06-13 . chapter 7
*taps foot impatiently* Kill Alex already and skip to the make up sex! lol. Alex is a witchy woman, by the eagles. But can they make up soon? It's starting to ** me off. And kill Alex please.

the enthusiaism just makes me laugh.

fjsalk
2009-08-10 . chapter 3
OMFG I LOVE THIS STORY. MORE THAN A WOMAN LOVES A MAN THAT WILL LISTEN. THIS IS FREAKIN AWESOME

and this last one just makes me go wha?? :unsure: :huh: ....um I haven't gotten too far in this other naruto story...(without thinking of chaning it again) but thanks??

 

[Nanya]

Well, I finally got some flames on my fics. Whee! Does that mean I made it as an author?

langrisser

Honestly, the threesome idea is very appalling, I don't why some people find this kind of situation a win/win for all the shipping faction, when it's more like a lose/lose situation that some pervert looser find like it's the solution at all the shipping wars.

I don't ship in any way, but I can't help to find the idea of a mÚnÔge Ó trois as disgusting as incest.

In fact I think the shipper of all the sides concerned would be more frustrated by this kind of story than happy, people prefer the person they ship to be with the other they ship only, and not seeing them share with the rival who they hate.

Threesome relationships sucks, and are a pseudo-cheap idea more akin to pornographic movies that some stupid shippers seems to think is the best idea ever, when it is absolutely not.

In the end, your jokes were not really funny either.

PS: I like your other stories, but this one, I hate it, it's a really bad one, of the level of a very bad writer, and you'll only generate flames with this kind of story.
So please, try to make a better story next time, I know you can do it wihtout any problem, because you're a very good author.

Whee! One of the few flames I actually have.

Well, on my fics on FF.Net.

*Laughs* I'm just amused by it, that's all.

Wow... I had to delete this one...

damn delusional ferret **
you're worst than animesuki **
just GTFO of my and if you like threesomes so much go fap to some gang rape
hentai

I honestly don't care if someone dislikes one of my stories or hates it. But insulting me? No thank you. I don't put up with that in real life, why should I put up with it on the internet?

 

[goldenarms]

Well, I finally got some flames on my fics.? Whee!? Does that mean I made it as an author?

Why yes, yes you have. You have incited passion unparalleled in a human being, to twist their love into a powerful potion known as hatred.

You have officially graduated, and can have all the bagels you want. And cream cheese if you managed to pull this stunt completely by accident.

langrisser

Honestly, the threesome idea is very appalling, I don't why some people find this kind of situation a win/win for all the shipping faction, when it's more like a lose/lose situation that some pervert looser find like it's the solution at all the shipping wars.

I don't ship in any way, but I can't help to find the idea of a mÚnÔge Ó trois as disgusting as incest.

In fact I think the shipper of all the sides concerned would be more frustrated by this kind of story than happy, people prefer the person they ship to be with the other they ship only, and not seeing them share with the rival who they hate.

Threesome relationships sucks, and are a pseudo-cheap idea more akin to pornographic movies that some stupid shippers seems to think is the best idea ever, when it is absolutely not.

In the end, your jokes were not really funny either.

PS: I like your other stories, but this one, I hate it, it's a really bad one, of the level of a very bad writer, and you'll only generate flames with this kind of story.
So please, try to make a better story next time, I know you can do it wihtout any problem, because you're a very good author.

This one just strikes me as someone that's foisting their own preference onto the writer, which is something I hate. It's exactly like being told who you should ship who with. I'd just write another threesome situation and have it work out, sort of like in School Days. Just to, you know, spite them. :evil2:

 

[twin blade]

Hmm...Yeah, I don't really recall School Days having a threesome relationship that worked out. I'm pretty sure that it developed a very NICE BOAT.

 

[Nanya]

Well, I finally got some flames on my fics.á Whee!á Does that mean I made it as an author?

Why yes, yes you have. You have incited passion unparalleled in a human being, to twist their love into a powerful potion known as hatred.

You have officially graduated, and can have all the bagels you want. And cream cheese if you managed to pull this stunt completely by accident.

langrisser

Honestly, the threesome idea is very appalling, I don't why some people find this kind of situation a win/win for all the shipping faction, when it's more like a lose/lose situation that some pervert looser find like it's the solution at all the shipping wars.

I don't ship in any way, but I can't help to find the idea of a mÚnÔge Ó trois as disgusting as incest.

In fact I think the shipper of all the sides concerned would be more frustrated by this kind of story than happy, people prefer the person they ship to be with the other they ship only, and not seeing them share with the rival who they hate.

Threesome relationships sucks, and are a pseudo-cheap idea more akin to pornographic movies that some stupid shippers seems to think is the best idea ever, when it is absolutely not.

In the end, your jokes were not really funny either.

PS: I like your other stories, but this one, I hate it, it's a really bad one, of the level of a very bad writer, and you'll only generate flames with this kind of story.
So please, try to make a better story next time, I know you can do it wihtout any problem, because you're a very good author.

This one just strikes me as someone that's foisting their own preference onto the writer, which is something I hate. It's exactly like being told who you should ship who with. I'd just write another threesome situation and have it work out, sort of like in School Days. Just to, you know, spite them. :evil2:

Yay! Bagels!

And, I did. I did write a sequel to the first one. :evil2:

 

[Ryo-Wolf]

I'm not sure if its been mentioned in here yet, but one of the weirdest reviewers I've ever come across is Jerry Unipeg, who seems to review every fic, ever, with 'NICE START!' Seriously, I've never seen him use anything else. Even for fics with multiple chapters.

as for reviews I've gotten, the one that I can remember the best was from Fayte angel, cause I'm pretty sure I made them cry, which I found hilarious.

(T.T) (T.T) (T.T) (T.T) (T.T)
RYOGA-KUN!
WHA! RYOGA! RYOGA! RYOGA!
.:sniff:. wuai! that was really sweet...
but the whole body sheild was terrible!
well... i would done that too in my
situation... but still! that doesnt
make it anymore right!
PLS PLS PLS! MAKE SURE RYOGA-KUN IS LIVING!
PLS PLS PLS! UPDATE SOON!

and like Dartz, I've also found out I've been Troped recently, on the Ranma recommended fics page http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanf...tlegynukzwikxmd

Bishonen Senshi Sailor Moon by Ryo-Wolf

á á * Recommended by Cryptic Mirror
á á * Synopsis: 1000 years ago, Queen Serenity used the Ginzuishou to send the souls of the Senshi into the future to be reborn as normal girls. However, something went terribly wrong. For some reason, they were reborn as male martial artists instead. Yes, this time round Ranma is Sailor Moon (and he isn't happy about it at all).
á á * Comments: An affectionate parody of your standard Fuku Fic, sadly a Dead Fic but what there is is very good and worth a read.

Which kinda sucks, cause now I actually want to continue that fic, when I haven't touched it in two years...

 

[A_T_Sigma]

? Gosu
2009-08-23 . chapter 1
I need more of this immediately, it seems like some sort of beginning to a movie. Its hard to rate my feelings toward this all I have to say is that you better have one strong backbone because this story can crumble just as easy as it can meld. It looks semi- promising so far, just dont mess it up xD <3

...This.

I can only hope to achieve to make this story very fucking interesting (for as long as I work on it)...that is all.

This is a review for a recent new naruto story i'm trying my hand at.

anyway, I think it's about time i updated my harem story XD

 

[Shiakou]

Well, I finally got some flames on my fics.á Whee!á Does that mean I made it as an author?

Why yes, yes you have. You have incited passion unparalleled in a human being, to twist their love into a powerful potion known as hatred.

You have officially graduated, and can have all the bagels you want. And cream cheese if you managed to pull this stunt completely by accident.

langrisser

Honestly, the threesome idea is very appalling, I don't why some people find this kind of situation a win/win for all the shipping faction, when it's more like a lose/lose situation that some pervert looser find like it's the solution at all the shipping wars.

I don't ship in any way, but I can't help to find the idea of a mÚnÔge Ó trois as disgusting as incest.

In fact I think the shipper of all the sides concerned would be more frustrated by this kind of story than happy, people prefer the person they ship to be with the other they ship only, and not seeing them share with the rival who they hate.

Threesome relationships sucks, and are a pseudo-cheap idea more akin to pornographic movies that some stupid shippers seems to think is the best idea ever, when it is absolutely not.

In the end, your jokes were not really funny either.

PS: I like your other stories, but this one, I hate it, it's a really bad one, of the level of a very bad writer, and you'll only generate flames with this kind of story.
So please, try to make a better story next time, I know you can do it wihtout any problem, because you're a very good author.

This one just strikes me as someone that's foisting their own preference onto the writer, which is something I hate. It's exactly like being told who you should ship who with. I'd just write another threesome situation and have it work out, sort of like in School Days. Just to, you know, spite them. :evil2:

Yay! Bagels!

And, I did. I did write a sequel to the first one. :evil2:

Hey Nanya, get a load of this one.

Ilaria

2009-08-23 . chapter 1

I donÆt understand, why would someone want to write something like this? This is mean and makes me feel so bad for Nanoha and Fate... they were so happy together in their little family with their daughter Vivio, I was reading the new manga and it was so heartwarming that I felt like crying of happiness. It was the best reading I have had in a while, but then I came here and found that people donÆt like their beautiful relationship, and pair male characters with them... you even made Yuuno have sex with the two young mamas of the little Vivio... I donÆt have words to express how you made me feel with this. So Nanoha and Fate never really loved each other; they were just waiting for a male... because honest and true love between two persons of the same gender canÆt be something real, right? My heart hurts a little when I see how even fictional homosexual couples are treated like this.

Apparently writing stories about an alternative pairing makes you "Mean", and writing about a three-way relationship means you think homosexual relationships are shallow. :rofl: Pseudo-political strawmen aside, it's actually knd of funny.

Too bad the reviewer didn't leave a link. I'd like to introduce that person to a few CLAMP series, where true love is homosexual, heterosexual, pedophilic, and polygamous, often all in the same party. B)

Seriously though Nanya, IMO, I know I sometimes rant at you because you take characterization out on a limb, but in the end, I still still support your experiments.

 

[goldenarms]

Too bad the reviewer didn't leave a link. I'd like to introduce that person to a few CLAMP series, where true love is homosexual, heterosexual, pedophilic, and polygamous, often all in the same party.? B)

Seriously though Nanya, IMO, I know I sometimes rant at you because you take characterization out on a limb, but in the end, I still still support your experiments.

You forget objectum sexual. Robots need luv, too. :sisi: