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Lord Raa · Nov 11, 2009

Nanya said:

Eh heh heh... I... Wow, this is some serious flattery here...

*Chuckles* Guess I can't just drop "Day in the Life" now, huh?

Not that I was, I like writing on it.

Sure you can.

Nanya · Nov 11, 2009

Lord Raa said:

Nanya said:

Sure you can.

I'm not Dark Phoneix, Lord Raa.

Aranfan · Nov 11, 2009

I've been interested in reading your Nanoha series, but I can't seem to find an order to read them in.

Edit: I have a thing about reading stuff in the right order.

Nanya · Nov 11, 2009

Aranfan said:

Ah. Simple enough.

Heart to Heart Not exactly a part of the "Relationships" series, but this is partly used for the Teana and Subaru situation in "Day in the Life".

In order...

Relationships
Family
Concession

Those three can be read in any order. I just posted the links in the order that we wrote them.

Pregnancy

That one is set after the first three and probably should have been in the main story Day in the Life

You can find unedited chapters (before they go up on FF.Net) on the TFF here. (Just check my profile.)

Lord Raa · Nov 11, 2009

From: Starfire99 about the latest chapter of Grotesque Puppetry

So I'm only an average author?

PCHeintz72 · Nov 12, 2009

Lord Raa said:

Hmmm... I have to wonder... it could be a compliment, sort of. After all, for a long time you've called yourself a few different things, which can be taken as lower than average.

Lord Raa · Nov 12, 2009

PCHeintz72 said:

Average is fine.

I guess.

Though it does mean that I should be cranking shit out more often....

Saying that though, Grotesque Puppetry could be finishing up in a couple of chapters, with a minuscule chance of a smutty epilogue.

But perhaps I've said too much....

Dartz_IRL · Nov 12, 2009

I don't get reviews anymore.

Nanya · Nov 24, 2009

Just got one... Had to delete it, to avoid flame wars, of course, but...

At least the reviewer got their name right, they are "nothing".

Nanya · Dec 28, 2009

Here's another one I had to delete.

Boy, I seem to get them a lot, huh?

Makes me wonder if the KoTTF is still alive out there.

Nanya,

A new review/comment has been submitted to your story.

Story: Day in the Life
Chapter: 1. Day in the Life

From: zeto ()
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with all you're respect this fic is completly crap, sorry but you're writinig
a novel of bitche's? or a fic

the characters are out of the cannon, nanoha and fate never would sleep with
a library guy, loser as yuuno. he's a ferret, he's ugly (iukk) so...he even
likes women, he's homosexual, gay.

nanofate4ever
yuri4ever

you're fic is crap, garbage. you know waht is thad?
well i guess you are a coward and going to delete my reviw
because you don't like the real opinion and love the pore crap anotherr
people get you here

look the number of reviws...you don't have even 120 reviws, look? the numbers
of the chapter of you're repulsive fic and compare...is simple, you get
nothing, nobody who knows and respect nanoha would make something like "this".
maybe you must read another nanofates here,they have so many reviws, more that
you on? you're live would ge it. the reviws say you that your shitt is no
wellcome in this place.
delete the fic
or write this history with another anime
byee coward

LightGuard · Dec 28, 2009

Nanya said:

Here's another one I had to delete.

Boy, I seem to get them a lot, huh?

Makes me wonder if the KoTTF is still alive out there.

Nanya,

A new review/comment has been submitted to your story.

Story: Day in the Life
Chapter: 1. Day in the Life

From: zeto ()
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with all you're respect this fic is completly crap, sorry but you're writinig
a novel of bitche's? or a fic

the characters are out of the cannon, nanoha and fate never would sleep with
a library guy, loser as yuuno. he's a ferret, he's ugly (iukk) so...he even
likes women, he's homosexual, gay.

nanofate4ever
yuri4ever

you're fic is crap, garbage. you know waht is thad?
well i guess you are a coward and going to delete my reviw
because you don't like the real opinion and love the pore crap anotherr
people get you here

look the number of reviws...you don't have even 120 reviws, looká the numbers
of the chapter of you're repulsive fic and compare...is simple, you get
nothing, nobody who knows and respect nanoha would make something like "this".
maybe you must read another nanofates here,they have so many reviws, more that
you oná you're live would ge it. the reviws say you that your shitt is no
wellcome in this place.
delete the fic
or write this history with another anime
byee coward

Wow. I...I just...wow. All I've got to say for that reviewer is "Congratulations! You've failed 8th Grade English! How does that feel?"

Professional Cynic · Jan 6, 2010

Recent one for my Armored Core/Naruto crossover. The reviewer is a pretty cool guy to talk to over PM. This is the kind of review I enjoy second only to constructive criticism. It's nice to have a reviewer genuinely interested in the world you've crafted for your fanfic.

ranma4u20 · Jan 8, 2010

Here's my contribution. The reviewer could have avoided the embarrassment if only they'd waited till they were sober:

Story: The Best Laid Plans
Chapter: 25. Plans Hatched

From: Noooooo! ()
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I haven't read the last chapter yet but since it is the last chapter(25) and
this story doesn't seem close to being over and it's been almost 2 years since
an update I doubt I'll have any reason to check tomorrow. I'm pretty sure that
wasn't a complete sentence but I've been drinking beer and readinf your
fucking awesome story for almost 5 hours now so I;m a little drunk and can
hopefully be excuseed for some gramatical and spellinf errors.
I like your style and plot so far. No-one is a supergod-ninja and thats cool.
I like the way the characters have grown. I think Saskue probably should have
freaked oput a bit more last chapter but maybe he's smarter than the story
seems. Or I'm too drunk. anyhoo, kakashi shouuld totally kill the other bijuu
becuase they are a threat to national security and I like your story and hope
you have the time to update soon cause few naruto styories make it this far
and still be cool and interestging andf i'm drunk and i have to pee. so may
the muses or something inspire you so i can sit and read more about a cool
naruto and not a whiny bitch saskue. i hate spelling.

Nanya · Jan 10, 2010

I'm starting to get really, REALLY annoyed by anonymous reviewers on FF.Net

Nanya,

A new review/comment has been submitted to your story.

Story: Day in the Life
Chapter: 35. Omake Special 2

From: karura ()
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please stop your story, you are hurting people, nobody care about you're
ficc. just a few readers.

just sotp it please, look it as a favor for the fandom, don't be selfish.
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goldenarms · Jan 10, 2010

Nanya said:

I'm pretty certain it's the same guy. Which is why I nuked the Anonymous function. If you want to be a dick, at least don't be afraid to use your SN; otherwise, I couldn't give a fuck about someone whining.

foesjoe · Mar 15, 2010

I got this review:

from the user Lord Sia.

I don't know how to feel about it.

A_T_Sigma · Mar 22, 2010

xxBloodredxx
2010-03-21 . chapter 10
Hello! You can call me... Blood~! Konnichiwaa deso! Watashi wa no Blood! I love--absolutely love--Your story! So please update! Oh, and a hint of advice: You lines are like a challenging writers, however your grammar is mixed up. I find this irritating, like Kid and his symmetry. Everytime you need a... hyphen or semi colon, it's a coma. *Insert angry vein mark~* AND IT'S DAMN STRAIGHT ANNOYING! But anyways, thats not the point. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE! I'M SO INSPIRED BY YOU! OH PLEASE! ONEGAI KAMI-SAMA! ONEGAI!

.... :hmm: please be a little more clear if you are going to point out to me my minimal grammar mistakes plz... <_<

but other than this, i just :snigger:

SEG-CISR · Mar 23, 2010

Tsundere reviewer is Tsundere. :huh:

Serxeid · Mar 23, 2010

SEG-CISR said:

And probably can't spell tsundere either, if the rest of their Japanese is anything to go by. -_-

Lord Raa · Apr 24, 2010

Is Kasumi out of character fore Snake?

I mean, sure we all used to assume that she's some kind of saint, but I recall someone recently posting on TFF that we're confusing politeness towards guests with genuine unlimited kindness that makes the heavens weep with joy.

Which is a point, after all Kasumi did pile those cats on Ranma after they learned about his phobia.

Not only that, Kasumi is considered to have passed her "sell-by date" in Japanese culture.

The realisation that you're going to spend your days alone and unloved can make you bitter and hate-filled.

goldenarms · May 18, 2010

Golden Arms,

A new review/comment has been submitted to your story.

Story: A Death in the Life of Sasuke Uchiha
Chapter: 3

From: Jariel ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/809663/ )

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First of all a compliment as the rest of the review will no doubt be the
focus. You've got my favorite sort of writing style down: only writing scenes
that have a purpose. Superfluous details and scenes that bod the story down
ruin the enjoyment of a story for me. And well done on keeping a time loop
character as still the same personality in cannon.

Secondly, the plot. I was horrified. I'm not one for the nitty gritty sort of
thing so that probably had something to do with it. Unfortunately I can
totally see the various things that happen to Sasuke here happening in a real
ninja village eg Interrogation not being wimpified for the eyes of little kids
and powerful ninja *gasp* being hard for the main character to defeat(now I
can't unsee it).

Also your interrogation scene with Kaskashi and Ibiki at various points have
definitely put me off reading any fanfics that have rose colored view of
shinobi. I just can't see Kakashi being ready to defy the Hokage to keep
Sasuke alive should he return form Sound (as the cliche goes) especially after
he dumped Sasuke in the hands of Ibiki. That's not really the best thing to
tell an author, `you've just put me off the random you wrote for with the
content of your story'. However congratulations on writing a story that has
profoundly affected one of your readers. In the five years of fandom I've only
found three other stories that really affected me.?

p.s please have something nice happen or at least let him figure out the time
loops so he can have fun Sasuke style. I feel really sorry for the guy.

p.p.s horrified, absolutely horrified.

I have to admit, I haven't worked on that story because it's a hard-to-write story for me, given what it contains. Reviews like this make me want to step up on it a little more.

ellf · Jun 4, 2010

My Review:

I really can't believe I clicked this. At all. You seem to know next to nothing about Ranma, and I can't say anything about Winx because I don't know much about that... nor do I really care.

Your writing is painful to read. Absolutely painful, I'm sorry. I'm not going to say you should stop writing, but I will say this, learn the damn source material. Learn to show, not tell. And learn to keep people in character.

And learn to use dialogue properly. Stop using fanon damnit.

The Reply:

ranma is a human. everyone will get mad sooner or later. ranma 1/2 last two
years. all that punishment from akane would have drive anyone mad. at the end
of the manga the stick would snapped very soon. even if akane was not a
fictional i doubt the greatest martail artist could not and i highily doubt it
that he/she would be able to put up with it. did you know there was another
page after the main story ended? it was a special released in Japan. it state
all the characters feels. i had trouble finding it. in this special ranma does
admmit his feelings for akane to his mother. quote: "I love her, but she is
out of control. what i felt is disappearing." it was a specail edition of
manga #38 you can only find it online. so ranma will get tired and then do
something.

What is it with me and weird review repliers?

Megaolix · Jun 18, 2010

An anonymous review I got...

Is it wrong to be glad that this is anonymous so I don't have to point out everything that is wrong about this?

At least he got the decency to post another review to state his opinion of the story... in 5 words. <_<

ellf · Jun 21, 2010

Deleted this one a while back, had to fish it out of my e-mail:

From: A Reader ()
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I have been a fan since the first version of this story. Now as I reread this
story and the Wheel of Time books in preparation of the 12th book coming out
next year I realized despite you answer to a review saying that things will
diverge but not to much in later books the way that it is I don't see that
happening. I also think that you should rewrite the story to fix certain
things which just don't work for the story.

I will tell you what they are. First off the kitsune would never let Ranma
and Akane go. Second Happi would not have used a ter'angreal to meet the
Kitsune. Three You also have the Two Rivers folk pretty much ignoring Ranma
and Akane which is something that would not happen they are too unusual and
different to be ignored in such a way.

Now some of the changes that I think are needed are changing how Ranma and
Akane end up in randland. First off why not make there age the previous sixth
or seventh age and when the kitsune tried to take Ranma and akane Ranma's
Tavern nature and all the magical artifacts he had on his person sent them to
Randland and change the magical artifacts into ter'angreal. I can even tell
you about the magical items turned ter'angreal that Ranma has. First he has
both fire and ice stave's (I will call them this because it is easier than
trying to remember their names) both will still be turned into swords created
with both halve of the one power though the male halve is stronger in the fire
sword the female halve stronger in the ice sword and since both water and fire
have a purifying aspect by drawing saiden through them gives Ranma pure clean
saiden but with one he still has to deal with the taint. The remains of the
naban mirror might have also affected there transport and was repaired and
turned ter'angreal equal amount of both halves lost the ability to time travel
but can still travel space. It can open gateways for traveling skimming or
entering the dreamworld. It can also enter and exit the ways without using
waygates and even enter other worlds like portal stones can. It can be used by
non channelers but that weakens Its power. Though Its full potential can be
awakened? with channelers. I will leave the others to you. You could still
have Nabiki or someone else give them the knowledge of the language. Maybe you
could also have Ranma Channel both halves just like in the original version of
this story if it is not already like that.

But other then that you should integrate Ranma and Akane into the story more.
Bring in more divergence early on more attention to them from the two rivers
folk. not just doing practically commentary while you rewrite the series which
is what seem to be happening so far. Oh I think Ranma would be more serous
because of the situation and why not think up a different match up then
Ranma/Akane how about Ranma/OC. Well thats all before I try to tell you how to
wright everything.

Dartz_IRL · Jun 21, 2010

Some of those... I dunno... Somethings like that you just wanna say write your own damn fanfic.

Anyway... I'm still figuring this one out.

SadKeanu?

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